高三英语第二轮复习写作训练.ppt

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1、高三英语,写作训练,Main contents,五种基本句型句子的种类写作要领写作指导,五种基本句型,1、主语+系动词+表语2、主语+不及物动词3、主语+及物动词+宾语4、主语+及物动词+间接宾语+直接宾语5、主语+及物动词+宾语+宾语补足语,主语+系动词+表语,1.Jack is a good boy.2.The park looks beautiful in spring.3.His leg got hurt just now.4.The speech is very exciting.5.His hobby is playing football.6.He is against our

2、plan.7.The truth is that he has never been abroad.,主语+不及物动词,1.My grandma is sleeping now.2.I will stay in Shanghai for a week.3.Jack is leaving for New York.4.It rained hard last night.5.Lucy arrived in Beijing yesterday.6.We have lived here for ten years.,主语+及物动词+宾语,1.My sister is writing a letter

3、at this moment.2.We should learn from him.3.Jack enjoys collecting stamps.4.Our teacher promised to see the movie with us.5.I dont know which school he is in.,主语+及物动词+间接宾语+直接宾语,1.His father bought him a computer.2.I sent a birthday gift to her yesterday.3.My mother taught me how to do it.4.She asked

4、 Lucy whose pen it was.,主语+及物动词+宾语+宾语补足语,1.We must keep the classroom clean.2.They consider Jack a brave boy.3.Let the fresh air in.4.What he said made me very angry.4.Lucy will make herself known.5.I saw the little girl dancing.,PracticeFill in the blanks,This afternoon some American students _(到达)

5、at our school for a visit.I will be their guide.First I will _(向他们介绍校史).,PracticeFill in the blanks,Then I will _(带他们参观)the lecture hall,the library and the playground.I _(觉得这个计划不错)and they will _(过得愉快)。,PracticeFill in the blanks,This afternoon some American students _(到达)at our school for a visit.

6、I will be their guide.First I will _(向他们介绍校史).,are arriving,tell them the history of our school,PracticeFill in the blanks,Then I will _(带他们参观)the lecture hall,the library and the playground.I _(觉得这个计划不错)and they will _(过得愉快)。,show them around,think this plan good,enjoy themselves,句子种类,简单句(Simple Se

7、ntences)并列句(Compound Sentences)复合句(Complex Sentences),Simple Sentences,1.He can speak German.2.Both Tom and Jack enjoy country music.3.We sang and danced yesterday evening.4.My brother and I go to school at 7:00 in the morning and come back home at 4:00 in the afternoon.,Compound Sentences,1.Work ha

8、rd,and you will make progress.2.I was tired,but I felt happy.3.It was cold outside,so we stayed at home.4.Hurry up,or youll be late for class.,Complex Sentences,1.It began to rain when we got home.2.Jack didnt go to school because he caught a cold.3.All of us know that we must study hard.4.When we a

9、re leaving has not been decided yet.5.The lady whom you talked to is our teacher.,Practice Make sentences with the given word,music/sports Simple SentencesJack likes music.His brother enjoys sports.,Practice Make sentences with the given words,music&sportsCompound Sentences Jack likes music,but his

10、brother enjoys sports.,Practice Make sentences with the given words,music&sportsComplex Sentences The little boy who likes music is good at sports.,PracticeJoin each pair of sentences into one sentence.,e.g.Tom often arrives late.His boss gets angry.Tom often arrives late,so his boss gets angry.Beca

11、use Tom often arrives late,his boss gets angry.,写作要领,抓住内容要点正确使用时态恰当选用过渡词语变化表达方式,抓住内容要点,(NMET1998)5月3日，你参观了一个农场。请根据下列图画用英语写一篇日记。注意：1、日记须包括所有图画的内容，可以适当增减细节，使日记连贯；2、词数100左右。,抓住内容要点,内容要点：1、集合出发2、到达3、参观4、野餐5、娱乐6、告别,抓住内容要点,内容要点：1、集合出发2、到达3、参观4、野餐5、娱乐6、告别,meet at the school gategive sb.a warm welcome show

12、sb.aroundhave a picnic lunchhave great funsay goodbye to sb.,I was born in March,1980.When I was two years old,Mother take me to Grandma home in Shanghai.I stay with Grandma for five years.,Please find the mistakes about tense in the following passage.,Please find the mistakes about tense in the fol

13、lowing passage.,Then I have to return to Beijing for school.At first,I did not enjoy school.Soon I become very fond of it,because I learn how to writer letters to Grandma.,Please find the mistakes about tense in the following passage.,I was born in March,1980.When I was two years old,Mother take me

14、to Grandma home in Shanghai.I stay with Grandma for five years.,_,_,took,stayed,Please find the mistakes about tense in the following passage.,Then I have to return to Beijing for school.At first,I did not enjoy school.Soon I become very fond of it,because I learn how to writer letters to Grandma.,_

15、,_,_,had,became,learnt,A passage without connectors,I had a bad cold last week.I had a running nose.I did not take it seriously.I began to cough.I had a fever and felt weak.I was sent to hospital and had to lie in bed for three days.,A passage with connectors,I had a bad cold last week.At first,I ha

16、d a running nose,but I did not take it seriously.Then I began to cough.After that,I had a fever and felt weak.Finally,I was sent to hospital and had to lie in bed for three days.,恰当选用过渡词语,时间顺序空间顺序并列关系转折关系因果关系条件关系让步关系递进关系概括性词语过渡性词语,过渡词语,时间顺序first,second,next,then,finally;at first,in the beginning;aft

17、er that,afterwards;at last,in the end;At first,I had a running nose.Then I began to cough.After that,I had a fever.,过渡词语,空间顺序on one side on the other side(of);in front of,at the back of;on the right/left side;next to,close to;On one side of the school is a lecture hall.On the other side is a library

18、.,过渡词语,递进关系whats more,besides;in fact;I dont want to go skating;besides,the ice is too thin.,过渡词语,概括性词语in short,in a word;generally speaking;In a word,it is important for us to learn English.,Practice Join each group of sentences into one passage.,She wanted to be successful.She worked day and night

19、.She worked for a famous advertising agency.She became the manager.,Practice Join each group of sentences into one passage.,She worked for a famous advertising agency.Because she wanted to be successful,she worked day and night.Finally,she became the manager.,变化表达方式,使用不同的词或词组使用不同的句式,使用不同的词或词组,1.Last

20、 Monday we visited a model high school.Last Monday we paid a visit to a model high school.,使用不同的词或词组,2.Tom likes pop music.Tom enjoys pop music.Tom is fond of pop music.,使用不同的词或词组,3.Our library was built two years ago.Our library was set up two years ago.,使用不同的句式,1.We will hold the party on Sunday.T

21、he party will be held on Sunday.,使用不同的句式,2.My father sat in the sofa.He was smoking and reading a newspaper.My father was smoking in a sofa with a newspaper in his hand.,使用不同的句式,3.There was a map of China on the wall.On the wall was a map of China.,使用不同的句式,4.There are many high buildings in the city

22、.High buildings can be seen here and there in the city.The city is full of high buildings.You can see high buildings everywhere in the city.,写作指导,情景作文开放作文,情景作文,问答提示作文文字提示作文表格提示作文图画提示作文,问答提示作文,1.Where did you go last Saturday?(the seaside,with some friends)2.How did you get there?(by bus),问答提示作文,3.Wh

23、at did you do there?(walk along the beach,see many fishing boats,go swimming,play ball games on the sand),问答提示作文,4.When did you have a picnic lunch by the sea?5.What did you do after lunch?6.How did you feel?,Writing suggestions,Answer each question with a complete sentence,including the questions w

24、ithout the given answers.Join all the sentences into a passage with the proper transitional words.Go over the whole passage.,文字提示作文,假如你叫Jack,你的朋友Tom生病多日，主要是因为工作太辛苦，又缺乏锻炼。请你写一封信给他，劝他每天至少要运动一个小时，并告诉他你本周日休息，将去看望他。字数：80左右,Writing suggestions,审题：确定文体，主体时态和人称；考虑篇章结构;确定要点，写出相关英语词语；根据所列词语，写出句子；连句成篇，恰当使用过渡词语

25、和适当增加细节。,认真审题,文体:私人书信主体时态:现在时主体人称:第一人称,篇章结构,Dear Tom,Im sorry to hear that With best wishes,Yours,Jack,确定要点,生病多日工作辛苦缺乏锻炼需要运动将去看望,假如你叫Jack,你的朋友Tom生病多日，主要是因为工作太辛苦，又缺乏锻炼。请你写一封信给他，劝他每天至少要运动一个小时，并告诉他你本周日休息，将去看望他。字数：80左右,英语词语,生病多日工作辛苦缺乏锻炼需要运动将去看望,be ill for dayswork so hard take so little exercisetake exe

26、rcisecome to see sb.,连词成句,be ill for days Im sorry to hear that you have been ill for days.,连词成句,work so hard You have been working so hard.,连词成句,take so little exercise You take so little exercise.,连词成句,take exercise I suggest you take at least one hours exercise every day.,连词成句,come to see sb.Ill

27、come to see you this Sunday.,连句成篇,Dear Tom,Im sorry to hear that you have been ill for days.You have been working so hard and take so little exercise.I suggest you take at least one hours exercise every day.This Sunday Ill come to see you.With best wishes,Yours,Jack,适当增加细节,Dear Tom,Im sorry to hear

28、that you have been ill for days and hope youve got better now.You have been working so hard and take so little exercise,which is very harmful to your health.,适当增加细节,I suggest you take at least one hours exercise every day.It will do you good.If you keep on taking exercise every day,you will certainl

29、y feel better.This Sunday Ill come to see you.With best wishes,Yours,Jack,表格提示作文,你于“五一”前夕4月28日上午9点钟，与全班同学一起到学校附近的公园参加了一次公益劳动（voluntary labour）。全班分成了三个组。你在第三组。请你用日记的形式写一篇短文。,表格提示作文,注意：1、短文必须写出提示及表格所列的 全部内容；2、词数100左右；3、参考词汇：果皮纸屑等废物 litter,Writing suggestions,审题：文体，主体时态和人称；考虑篇章结构;确定要点，写出相关英语词语；根据所列词语，写

30、出句子；连句成篇，恰当使用过渡词语和适当增加细节。,认真审题,文体:日记主体时态:一般过去时主体人称:第一人称,篇章结构,April 28th Saturday Fine点题句具体内容收尾句(感想、感叹、总结、希望等),确定要点,九点到达分成三组第一组种树、浇花第二组捡果皮纸屑、清洁座椅第三组擦拭儿童游乐场的设施,你于“五一”前夕4月28日上午9点钟，与全班同学一起到学校附近的公园参加了一次公益劳动（voluntary labour）。全班分成了三个组。你在第三组。请你用日记的形式写一篇短文。,英语词语,1.九点到达2.分成三组3.第一组种树 和浇花,get there at 9:00be d

31、ivided into 3 groups plant trees and water flowers,英语词语,4.第二组捡果皮 纸屑和清洁座 椅5.第三组擦拭儿 童游乐场的设 施,collect litter and clean bencheswipe all the equipment clean,图画提示作文,洪水淹没了李明的家和学校，请根据以下四幅图写篇短文，字数为100左右。参考词语：孤儿orphan 灾区the disaster area,Writing suggestions,审题：确定文体，主体时态和人称；考虑篇章结构;根据图画，确定要点；根据要点，写出英语词语；根据所列词语，

32、写出句子；连句成篇，恰当使用过渡词语和增加适当细节。,认真审题,体裁:记叙文主体时态:一般过去时主体人称:第三人称,篇章结构,事情起因或背景描述发展过程结果,确定要点,1、洪水淹没房 子和学校2、伤心3、得到捐助4、到帐篷学校 上课,英语词语,1、洪水淹没房 子和学校2、伤心3、得到捐助4、到帐篷学校 上课,hit Li Mings village be seriously damagedbe sadget lots of books and moneycome back to tent schools begin ones new term,开放作文,根据下面提供的情景，写一段接续文字。注意

33、：词数不少于30。You missed class this morning.Your classmate called you to find out why you were absent.You tell him what happened.,Writing suggestions,认真审题内容具体紧扣主题逻辑清晰新颖健康,认真审题,审语境：You missed class this morning.审人称：You tell him what happened.用第一人称审时态：You tell him what happened.用一般过去时,开放作文,One possible ver

34、sion：I broke my leg on my way to school this morning.It was foggy.I was riding my bike very fast.Suddenly a car drove towards me and knocked me off my bike.I was taken to the hospital immediately.The doctor examined me and found my left leg broken.I had to lie in bed for at least three weeks.,开放作文,A

35、nother possible version：This morning I was almost ready for school when the phone rang.It was my grandfather.He told me that my grandmother had fallen down and hurt her leg badly.My mother and I rushed to their house and then took my grandmother to the hospital.I was there all morning.Thankfully,she

36、 is okay now.,Summary,五种基本句型句子的种类写作要领写作指导,According to the survey,it can be seen that(as can be seen from the survey,)the number of the traffic accidents has been growing(increasing/rising)in recent years.(the tendency to have more accidents keeps going).At present,(currently)(now).The number of car

37、s in china makes(is/accounts for/constitutes/represents/)only 2%of that of the world.(China has only 2%of the total number of cars in the world).However,(whereas,)(while)the traffic accidents are much more with 22%of the world number.(the percentage of the traffic accidents in china has reached 22%o

38、f those of the world.Just take 2004 and 2005 as an example,in 2004,there were 570,000 traffic accidents,in which 109,000 people were killed(killing 109,000 people)(leading to the death of 109,0000 people)Whats worse,(compared with 2004,in 2005,just between Jan and Oct.566,000 traffic accidents happe

39、ned,resulting in the death of 95,600.(with the death of 95,600)(566,000 traffic accidents cost 95,600 peoples lives)(2005 witnessed/saw 95,6000 people killed in 566,000 traffic accidents.So it is evident/obvious/clear that something must be done to prevent it from getting worse,(before it gets worse)(it is high time that some effective(proper/stricter measures)should be taken to fight against it/improve it/combat it.my suggestions are as follows.(in my opinion,)first,.Second,more importantly,Only,can we,