基础写作4-活动安排.ppt

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1、基础写作话题4：活动安排,篇章结构(1)交待活动的背景、时间、地点、主题和参加者或主办方。(2)介绍活动的过程、步骤或安排(3)活动的注意事项(4)活动的感受或意义,1.“目的”的各种表达方式：(in order)to do sth;so as to do sth 不放句首aiming intending attempting to do sth;for with the purpose aim intention of doing sth;so that in order that(that+句子)designed to do;designed for(doing)aimed at sth,

2、2.sign up for;enter for 报名参加 3.participate in join in take part in attend 出席，参加 4.will be held(by)将被举行 will hold 将举行5.will be organized(by)将被组织 will organize 将组织6.player;runner;contestant;competitor;participant;参赛者，选手，参加者7.areis supposed to do sth应该;理应,8.Sb is warmly welcome to do sth热烈欢迎9.thanks fo

3、r your participation 谢谢你的参与10.hold an activity a contest a competition called concerning about.举行一个叫关于的活动比赛11.arousecultivatedevelopraise ones interest in 激发培养培养提升对的兴趣12.develop improve raise ones ability 培养促进提升的能力,13.increase ones knowledge about 增加对的了解14.promote carry forward develop spread circul

4、ate the campus culture 弘扬校园文化15.Sb isare encouraged inspired to do 被鼓励做17.know more details about 了解更多细节18.dont miss the deadline 别错过截止日期19.eyewitnesswitness the development of 见证的发展,相关句式1.Its a pity that you have to go back soon,so a farewell party for you will be held in Room 302 in the Sun Club a

5、t 6:00 pm this Saturday evening.你很快就要回去,所以我们将于本周六晚上六点在阳光俱乐部302房举行欢送会。2.Im writing to(do sth)我写信的目的是,3.If you are interested in.,please take part in.Contest.如果你对感兴趣,请参加比赛4.In the morning you can first visit.After that,you can go to.In the afternoon,I suggest you visit.where not only you can enjoy.but

6、 also you can.上午,你可以先参观然后,你可以去下午,我建议你参观在那里你不但可以欣赏而且你还可以,5.Our outdoor activity will last 3 hours,and well be back at about 11：00.我们的户外活动将持续3个小时,大约11点返回。6.If you are interested,please sign up at the office before 5:00 pm next Thursday so that we will make necessary arrangements.如果你有兴趣,请在下周四下午五点前到办公室报

7、名,以便我们作必要的安排。7.All are welcome.欢迎大家参加。,1.活动安排的写作一般使用将来时,文章结构以总分为主,第一句往往要清楚说明活动举办的意义和内容。2.活动安排的写作基本都涉及到地点和时间的安排,考生应该注意表达时间和地点的介词使用。3.活动安排的应用文多属于通知类,其给出的中文提示往往隐藏主语,考生可以考虑使用祈使句或者被动语态。,(2009年深圳二模)为迎接6月5日“世界环境日”，学校学生会准备举行一次以环保为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下内容写一个书面通知,欢迎大家积极参与。写作内容,例题导写 认真审题活动安排属于应用文范畴,写作的时候一般使用将来时或者祈使句

8、。这一类应用文最重要的是把活动的目的、时间、地点、报名方式等信息清楚地传达给大家,并且最后呼吁大家参加活动。,信息重组1.为迎接6月5日“世界环境日”，学校学生会准备举行主题为“保护环境,节约能源”英语演讲比赛，目的是增长环保知识和提高英语口语。2 演讲比赛将在6月5日星期五下午4:00-5：30,教学楼五楼演讲大厅举办。3.参赛者需要在5月25日前在 studentcenter 上报名。4.比赛将评选出一等奖3名,二等奖6名,三等奖12名。5.希望大家积极参与比赛。,词语翻译 翻译或完成下例短语。句子1：(1)增长环保知识：_(2)保护环境：_(3)节约能源：_(4)表示目的的短语：_,pr

9、otect our environment,save energy,increase raise broaden our environmental knowledge,句2：(5)在6月5日星期五下午4:00-5:30：_ 4:00 p.m._5:30 p.m.,_ Friday June 5th(6)教学楼：_(7)在五楼：_ the 5th floor(8)演讲大厅：_ 句3：(9)参加比赛的人：_,on,from,teaching/classroom building,to,on,the lecture hall,the participants,those who want to p

10、articipate in the lecture,(10)在5月25日前：_ May 25th(11)在上：(12)报名：_,sign up for/enter for,before,at,句4：(13)三个一等奖：_ 句5：(14)欢迎参加：_,three first prizes,长难句翻译句1：(1)为迎接6月5日“世界环境日”，学校学生会准备举行主题为“保护环境,节约能源”英语演讲比赛，目的是增长环保知识和提高英语口语；(1)In celebration of the World Environment Day on 5th,June,the Students Union is go

11、ing to organize an English-speaking contest,whose theme is“Protect the environment and save energy”to increase our knowledge about the environment and improve our spoken English.,In celebration of the World Environment Day on 5th and to increase our knowledge about the environment and improve our sp

12、oken English,the Students Union is going to organize an English-speaking contest,the theme of which/whose theme is:“Protect our environment and save our energy”(定语从句),Notice With World Environment Day approaching,the Students Union is going to organize an English-speaking contest,the theme of which/

13、whose theme is:“Protect our environment and save our energy”to increase our knowledge about the environment and improve our spoken English.The contest will be held in the Lecture Hall on the 5th floor in the teaching building from 4:00 p.m.to 5:30 p.m.,on Friday June 5th.Those who want to participat

14、e in the contest are supposed to sign up at studentcenter before May 25th.Lots of prizes will be delivered for the contest,including three first prizes,six second and twelve third ones.Dear fellow schoolmates,you are warmly welcome to be there and thanks for your participation.The students Union,能力提

15、高1.为了提高我们的环保意识,我们将会邀请中山大学的李教授于本周六给我们开展一个关于环境问题的讲座,届时他将会给我们讲述近年来广州的环境污染问题。,In order to raise our awareness of environmental protection/With the purpose of raising our awareness of environmental protection,we will invite Dr.Li from Zhongshan University to give us a wonderful lecture about the environm

16、ent problem and/where he will also tell us something about the pollution of environment in recent years in Guangzhou.,2.我们很荣幸请来了何教授在本周五下午4:00-5:00给我们讲述关于中西方文化差异的讲座,讲座将会在学校体育馆开展。,2.We have the great honor to have invited Professor He to give us a wonderful lecture about the differences between easter

17、n and western cultures this Friday afternoon,which will be held in the school stadium between 4:00 p.m.and 5:00 p.m.,3.请大家做好笔记,这次讲座将会帮助我们为下周的演讲比赛做好充分的准备。,Everyone should make full notes,because this lecture can help us make good preparations for the coming speech competition next week./Everyone shou

18、ld make full notes in this lecture,which can fully prepare us for the coming speech competition next week./Everyone should make full notes in this lecture so that he can be fully prepared for the coming speech competition next week.,4.所有的学生将要在本周六早上8：30在学校门口集合。,4.All the students should gather at the

19、 gate of our school at 8:30 a.m.,你们学校将要组织所有高三学生在本周末参加一次郊游活动。假设你是这个活动的组织者,请你根据以下内容写一个书面通知。,参考词汇：黄埔古港 Ancient port Whampoa黄埔军校 Whampoa Military Academy作文点评：体裁：应用文时态：一般将来时人称：第一人称关键短语：放松心情 relax(oneself ones mood);for relaxation;get relaxed;relieve ones pressure;relievefree sb of pressure;,了解:knowlearn

20、sth about;get more knowledge about;have a better understanding of 参观、观光:pay a visit to sbsp;visit sbsp;show sb around sp;tour(around)sp;go sightseeing in sp;go on a trip to sp（短途）travel to sp（泛指）go for an outing to 感受、体验、见证feel experience witnesseyewitness 以防万一in case(of that),存在问题：1 Aiming to relax

21、ing and knowing more about,our school will organize an activity.2 we will concentrate at 3 by buses 4 having finished,we will 5 What should be paid attention is,Aiming to makehelp the Ss relaxed and know,concentrate 专注,(注意力)集中 meet get together 碰头,会面,by bus(方式状语)；take a bus take buses(谓语),having(bee

22、n)done sth 用于过去式,What should be paid attention to is that,6 the weather forecast saidpredicted 7 表“将来”的各种方式8 活动的流程顺序,According to the weather forecastreport,It is reported that,will do sth;be going to do sth;be to do sth;主、被动语态的转换,这篇通知的重点在于把活动的流程讲述清楚,所以考生在写作过程中注意时间的用法,以及时间过渡的一些连词,如first,and then.,ne

23、xt,later.,after lunch,after that,.等。,注意事项,考生在翻译的过程中,要避免完全按照字面翻译,如表达“放松心情”时,考生若按照字面翻译为relax our mood就是中式英语,因此可以用get relaxed来表达。还有“集中”，翻译做“concentrate”。以及把“天气预报说”直译过来，犯了中式英语的错误等。,另外“感受广州的变迁”也比较难翻译,考生可以采取迂回方法，把这个意思改为“黄埔古港和博物馆见证了广州的发展”,那就可以用witness the development of Guangzhou这个短语清楚地把意思表达出来。名师提示：考生要意识到一

24、个事实,并不是每个中文或短语都能直接翻译成英文,也不是每个英文或短语都能直接翻译成中文。因此,在翻译的过程中,一定要注意灵活性。,参考范文 To help us get relaxed as well as know(ing)more about the history and culture of Guangzhou,our school is going to organize a trip for all the Senior Three students.We should gather at the school gate at 8:00 a.m.this Saturday,Apri

25、l 2nd,and then take a bus to Ancient port Whampoa.After that,we are going to have a visit to the ancient port and the museum,which have witnessed the development of Guangzhou.Later,we will pay a visit to Whampoa Military Academy after lunch and then go back to school at 5:00 p.m.It is forecasted in the weather report that it is going to rain that day,so please take umbrellas with you in case.,Thank you!,