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1、初中英语书面表达写作技巧指导,城北中学 杨萼,1、根据图示或表格写出简单的文字或操作说明；2、从文章中获取主要信息并能摘录要点；3、根据提示写出简短的文章描叙人物或事件；4、写简单的应用文，如书信、电子邮件、告示、海报。,考标对写作技能的要求,2014年长沙中考书面表达评分标准：,A档（10-9分）能够围绕话题进行表述，语言基本无误，行文连贯表述，表达清楚。B档（8-7分）能够围绕话题进行表述，语言有少量错误，表达基本连贯，清楚。C档（6-5分）能够基本围绕话题进行表述，语言表达有些错误，行文很不连贯，但不影响句意理解。D档（4-3分）尚能围绕话题进行表述，语言错误较多，影响意思表达。E档（2

2、-0分）只能写出与话题相关的一些单词或一两个句子，只有个别句子可懂。,我来写写,1、（主+谓+宾）我热爱我的老师。他学习了中国历史。2、（主+谓+双宾）小红给我一本故事书。3、（主+谓+宾+宾补）妈妈要我去买一些鲜花。4、（主+系+表）那听起来很不错。5、There be 句型 我们班有五十个学生。6、（主+谓）我城北学习三年了。,I love my teacher.,He learned Chinese history.,Xiao hong gave me a story book./Xiao hong gave a story book to me.,My mother asks me t

3、o buy some flowers.,That sounds good.,There are fifty students in our class.,I have studied in Cheng Bei middle school for 3 years.,Free talk,Colorfulschool life,We study.,We listen to the musicevery day,The teachers teach us some knowledge,We will miss our middle school life,We play computer games

4、for long,Our teacher asks us to run every day,There are so much homework every day,We are busy but happy.,以My colorful school life 为话题写一篇文章,初露锋芒,小组合作互批评分标准 满分10分：(1)找“亮点”。找出好词好句，适当加1-3分；（2）正确使用过渡词和过渡语，加1分；（3）词数不够扣1分；（4）单词拼写错3个扣1分；（5）名词单复数不一致扣0.5-1分；（6）时态用错扣1分；（7）主谓不一致扣1分；（8）惯用语、句型用法不当扣1分；（9）书写不规范，卷面

5、不整洁扣2分；（10）文章结构不合理或体裁用错扣3分；,健康很重要。在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的今天，会休息的人才会有健康的身体。人们是如何度过假期的呢？国际健康组织对此作了一次调查，右图是他们此次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息，请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告,并提倡大家进行假日休闲。,审,travel,stay at home,visit friends or parents,work,列:(文章结构框架),写作第二步,分几段，以及每段大体内容；,A lot of people travel.Some people stay at home.Some other people visit

6、 friends or parents.A few people work.,How do people spend their vacations?We made a survey and here is our survey report.,Come and enjoy your vacation.People who relax well work well.,a nice head,a nice tail,a nice body,写（在提纲上使用关联词连接要点）,恰当运用关联词句，使得文章层次清晰，各个部分衔接自然。,写作第三步：,1.表示并列或递进:and,as well as(也）

7、,bothand,not onlybut also,neithernor 2.表示选择:or,eitheror3.表示转折:but,however,though,after all4.表示因果:because,because of,so5.表示条件:if 6.表示解释:for example,for instance（举例）,such as（比如，诸如）7.表示顺序:firstly,first(of all),second,next,later,finally,in the end,then8.表示强调:also,besides,whats more,in fact9.表示结论:in a wo

8、rd,我来搜集,常用关联词,Lets play the game.,_ I am tired,I keep on working till midnight.He didnt go to movies,he went to the concert _.We like doing kinds of sports _ swimming,running and hiking._,he stood up.Then he got out._,he went back._,he smiled.,Though/Although,instead,such as,At first,Next,At last,复查

9、,2遍1遍看查拼写、语法、标点等问题；2遍不出声读查，靠语感检查语句是否通顺、连贯等；,写作第四步：,写作第五步,不允许做任何的更改。,誊抄,范文欣赏,How do people spend their vacations？We made a survey and here is our survey report.A lot of people travel.They spend some money and time traveling.But some people stay at home.They just want to relax.However,a few people cho

10、ose to work.How hard-working they are！And others visittheir friends or parents.Come and enjoy your vacation.People who relax well work well.,写作步骤：1 审题：2 列提纲（文章结构框架）：3 写作：4 复查：5 誊抄：,审清作文体裁（类型）时态、人称等细节；,分几段，以及每段大体内容；,在提纲的基础上加上关联词补充要点；,2遍1遍看查拼写、语法、标点等问题；2遍不出声读查，靠语感检查语句是否通顺、连贯等；,不允许做任何的更改。,写作技巧,三审：体裁、时态

11、、人称；三思：词汇短语句式；三查：要点、拼写和语法、连贯。,中考英语作文话题:构建平安校园 集体生活人人要遵纪守规，建设平安校园，安全你我他。谈谈你是如何做的？写作要求：（1）条理清晰，用词准确,书写规范。（2）适当发挥，80词左右。参考词汇：obey遵守,chase追赶，fight打架，keep away from远离，pay attention to the traffic注意交通安全。,例文：School is our home,we are all live and study here.In order to make ourselves safe,we should obey th

12、e school rules.First of all,we should go to school on time and be never late.Meanwhile,we must pay attention to the traffic，obey the traffic rules on the way to school.In the school,we shouldnt chase（追）each other in the hallway or fight with others;We shouldnt climb the windows,either.Whats more,whe

13、n you have troubles,you may ask the teachersforhelp.Especially,when you meet someone ask for money,youd better report to the teacher or call 110/120.In a word,I hope we have a good time everyday!,Homework:书面表达（2013.青海）某英文报社以:“My dream,the China dream”为题开展征文活动，请根据以下提示和要求用英文写一篇短文投稿。提示：1、谈谈你的梦想，并说明如何才能实现你的梦想；2、只要每个人为自己的梦想去努力，中国梦就能得到实现。要求：1、短文要包含提示中的要点，但可以适当表达自己的观点；2、短文不少于80词；3、短文开头已经给出，不计入总词数。My dream,the China dream Everyone has a dream.Dream is regarded as the goal of ones life.。,Thank you!,