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1、About Composition in CET-4/6,具体内容请参考邮箱里的文字课件。This file is generalized by Laura Lv Qingxia,ZUFE.,英语写作测试，其实主要还是要考查学生组织英语语言的能力，和用英语表达思想的能力，体裁不外乎议论文，说明文和应用文，主题也是在大学生熟知话题基础上的翻新或扩展。综观历年的四级作文真题，变化趋势是从三段论的议论文向实用性更强的应用文体，尤其是书信写作方面倾斜。,【评分标准】本题满分为15分，篇幅要求120字左右。阅卷人员就总的印象，从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评判，给出奖励分(Reward Scores

2、)。具体评分标准可以参考以下要求：白卷、作文与题目毫不相关，或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想，则给0分；达不到字数要求的，要酌情扣1-3分；,具体内容请参考邮箱里的文字课件。This file is generalized by Laura Lv Qingxia,ZUFE.,另外请参照以下要求与对应分数，在评卷时视实际情况加减：2分条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎。一塌糊涂5分基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。糊里糊涂8分基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中一些是严重错误。马马虎虎11分切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有

3、少量语言错误。清清爽爽14分切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性好。无语言错误。漂漂亮亮,具体内容请参考邮箱里的文字课件。This file is generalized by Laura Lv Qingxia,ZUFE.,高分作文标志,四级150-180字；六级180200字；是否长短句交叉；句型是否有变化；用词是否恰当，准确，形象，尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词；关键词是否换用，切勿老用重复词；结构条理是否合理清晰；人称不做太多变化；时态不来回变化；请注意不管是什么类型的作文（命题、给定提纲、图表）简单明了地写三段，一般都不会有错；最好每一段都有主题句和过渡句。卷面整洁，书写规范。,

4、具体内容请参考邮箱里的文字课件。This file is generalized by Laura Lv Qingxia,ZUFE.,最稳当的作文结构,三段；按提纲顺序写；总（点题）分（分析/阐述）总（结论/呼应开头）；,具体内容请参考邮箱里的文字课件。This file is generalized by Laura Lv Qingxia,ZUFE.,四级作文长度要求不少于120个词，按考生作文句子的平均长度11个词估算，一般需要1012 个句子。在四级作文评分标准里，对于句子长度虽然没有具体描述和量化给分，但是阅卷老师一般都会给文章里使用正确的长句子加上印象分，也会给错落有致的句式变化以奖

5、励分数，如果考生能够在作文中恰当地使用一定难度的复杂句子，则更能起到锦上添花的作用。在写作训练中，考生其实可以欣赏范文，摘录名句，改装结构，模仿使用，直到熟练运用。可以通过下面的几个措施来提高作文水平。,（1）欣赏范文，但不要囫囵吞枣式地整篇背诵。准备一个写作专用的笔记本，从范文欣赏中摘抄自己喜欢的、老师讲评的、值得推荐的句式结构。比如：I love you not because who you are,but because who I am when I am with you.（我爱你，并不是因为你是谁，而是因为我跟你在一起时的感觉。）Few People today,if any a

6、t all,would risk their lives swimming across the river dominated by flesh-eating crocodiles.（今天已经很少有人，如果还有的话，愿意冒生命危险游过那条鳄鱼出没的河流。）,If you fail to plan,you plan to fail.（如果你没能做计划，你就是计划着去失败。）,（2）模仿名句，但不要生搬硬套。准备足够的草稿纸，把自己摘抄来的名句，（如有不懂，应当向明白人求教）拆卸八块，然后重新组合，如是反复数次，直到熟练，甚至于可以自如组装，灵活运用。比如：上面的句子学生就可以在熟练掌握的基础上

7、分别演绎出：I suggest that you choose English as your major not because it is easier to learn,but because it is promising when you take better prospect of employment into account.（我建议你选择英语专业，并不是因为她学起来更容易，而是因为她更有前景，如果你考虑到更好的就业机会。）；Most of the students,if not all,are likely to be absorbed in PC games such a

8、s counterstrike,which is more frequently known as CS（大多数学生，如果不是所有的学生，很可能被诸如反击这样的电脑游戏所吸引，这种游戏经常被更多的人叫做CS。）.,（3）巧用心思，套用经典句型。鼓起勇气，说出自己想说的话，如果是母语，可能还好办，换成英语，大家最怕的是出错，出错扣分当然不好。但是利用经典句型组装一些长句子、靓句子和复杂句子对作文高分非常有帮助。比如作文开头常用句型：It is undoubted that;there is no doubt that;undoubtedly,there is;It is beyond doubt

9、 that.,具体的一些技巧,1.适当用被动代替主动，这样能更客观的反映事实,句子开头不要总是用we/I。,eg.We should pay attention to this problem.,Attention should be paid to this problem.,Youd better say,具体内容请参考邮箱里的文字课件。This file is generalized by Laura Lv Qingxia,ZUFE.,所以，我们应该采取一些有效的手段。这样，我们才能增强服务行业的竞争能力。,Now you try,具体内容请参考邮箱里的文字课件。This file is

10、 generalized by Laura Lv Qingxia,ZUFE.,So we should adopt some effective ways and in this way we can enhance the competitiveness of the service industry.,It is,therefore,high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry.Thus,its competitive edge will be sharpened eff

11、ectively in the wake of the enhancement.,Youd better say,具体内容请参考邮箱里的文字课件。This file is generalized by Laura Lv Qingxia,ZUFE.,2.善于使用插入语，比如说把副词、连接词等，作插入语放在中间，一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。,例如：however/therefore/for example/I believe 做插入语放在中间，一般放在动词，助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。,eg.Other individuals,however,take the attitud

12、e that,具体内容请参考邮箱里的文字课件。This file is generalized by Laura Lv Qingxia,ZUFE.,3.一定要学会换词，换形象，具体的代替太宽泛的。（考试中一般不要出现good,bad,many,thing,think,people,opinion 等等）,eg.Many people think we should study hard.,A vast majority of college students take it for granted that study should be taken seriously.,Youd bette

13、r say,具体内容请参考邮箱里的文字课件。This file is generalized by Laura Lv Qingxia,ZUFE.,I never forget the very exciting day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present,which attracted me a lot,so I searched a lot of useful information I had expected,and enjoyed many wonderful classic music.That night

14、I was sleepless,feeling that the whole world belonged to me.,我从来没有忘记令人激动的那天，我母亲给我买来电脑作为我的生日礼物。我深深地被它所吸引，于是搜索大量我想要的有用信息，听了好多古典音乐。那晚，我一夜无眠，感觉整个世界属于我了。,Now you try,具体内容请参考邮箱里的文字课件。This file is generalized by Laura Lv Qingxia,ZUFE.,I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a

15、computer as birthday present,which exerted a tremendous fascination on me,so that I indulged myself in googling an army of useful information I had expected,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music.That night I was sleepless,feeling that the whole world belonged to me.,Youd better say,具体内容请参考邮箱里的文

16、字课件。This file is generalized by Laura Lv Qingxia,ZUFE.,新世纪的到来使计算机越来越流行。随着科学技术的发展，计算机进入当今社会，已成为一种时尚，并且吸引着越来越多的人。毫不夸张地说，我们已经大规模地被这股潮流所淹没。,Now you try,具体内容请参考邮箱里的文字课件。This file is generalized by Laura Lv Qingxia,ZUFE.,Youd better say,The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity(more

17、and more popular)of computers.Coincident with(with)the advancement(development)of science and technology,computers pouring into/flood into/swarm into(enter into)the current(now)society as a fashion are appealing to(attracting)growing individuals(more and more people).It is no exaggeration to say we

18、have been submerged by them,in large measure!,具体内容请参考邮箱里的文字课件。This file is generalized by Laura Lv Qingxia,ZUFE.,For a start（To begin with),we can,freely,search desired information at any moment.Little by little,our knowledge will be well enriched,and our horizons will be greatly broadened.Additiona

19、lly,we can get huge recreations online by chatting,playing games,or delivering(send)email.,具体内容请参考邮箱里的文字课件。This file is generalized by Laura Lv Qingxia,ZUFE.,There is no denying that,however,computers can function in the disservice of(do harm to)human beings,in a way,especially the growing violence,

20、porn pictures,AV-films emerging(appearing)on the screen,which leads quite a few(相当多的)net citizens to copying.,具体内容请参考邮箱里的文字课件。This file is generalized by Laura Lv Qingxia,ZUFE.,As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds(Every coin has two sides).Computers do play a positive(important/good

21、)role in the development of people lives,despite a slice of(a part of)unfavorable(bad)impacts(effects/influences).We should,therefore,take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet(aspect).,具体内容请参考邮箱里的文字课件。This file is generalized by Laura Lv Qingxia,ZUFE.,individuals,characters,folks,pos

22、itive,favorable,rosy，promising，perfect,pleasurable,excellent,outstanding,(people,persons),good,dreadful,unfavorable,poor,adverse(有害的),bad,如果bad做表语，则用 be less impressive,具体内容请参考邮箱里的文字课件。This file is generalized by Laura Lv Qingxia,ZUFE.,eg.An army of college students indulge themselves in playing gam

23、es,enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms.When it approaches to graduation,as a result,they find their academic records are less impressive.,具体内容请参考邮箱里的文字课件。This file is generalized by Laura Lv Qingxia,ZUFE.,an army of;an ocean of;a sea of;a multitude of;a great nu

24、mber of;many a;a vast/great majority of;lots of/plenty of;many,if not most;,many,a slice of;quite a few;several,some,harbor the idea that;take the attitude that;hold the view that;it is widely shared that;it is universally acknowledged that;,think,具体内容请参考邮箱里的文字课件。This file is generalized by Laura Lv

25、 Qingxia,ZUFE.,用many,if not most 一定要小心，many后一定要有词。,eg.Many individuals,if not most,harbor the idea that.同理用most,if not all,代替most.,具体内容请参考邮箱里的文字课件。This file is generalized by Laura Lv Qingxia,ZUFE.,affair;business;matter,thing,shared,common,reap huge fruits,get much benefit,for my part;from my own p

26、erspective;as far as I am concerned;as for me;from my point of view;personally speaking;in my opinion;my point is,I think,具体内容请参考邮箱里的文字课件。This file is generalized by Laura Lv Qingxia,ZUFE.,exceedingly;extremely;considerably;remarkably;dramatically;,very,hardly unnecessary;hardly inevitable.,necessar

27、y;evitable,capture ones attention,attract ones attention,give rise to;lead to;result in;trigger,cause,具体内容请参考邮箱里的文字课件。This file is generalized by Laura Lv Qingxia,ZUFE.,pour attention into,pay attention to,bear/keep in mind that,remember,frown on sth.,be against,disagree with sth.,to name only a few

28、;as an example,for example,next to/virtually impossible,nearly impossible,具体内容请参考邮箱里的文字课件。This file is generalized by Laura Lv Qingxia,ZUFE.,代替so表示因此，所以等,as a result,consequently,therefore,Whats more,furthermore,besides,on the other hand,and表示此外，还有,Generally speaking,on the whole,in generalIn a word,in conclusion,in short,to sum up,用来归纳、概括，表达“总的来说，总体上”之意用来总结，下结论，表达“总之，总而言之”的意思,However,nonetheless,nevertheless,代替but,while等连词转折,具体内容请参考邮箱里的文字课件。This file is generalized by Laura Lv Qingxia,ZUFE.,