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1、书面表达复习,北京二中 王岱,书面表达复习,一书面表达的能力要求二书面表达的复习策略三书面表达的课堂指导四书面表达的批改方法,书面表达复习,一书面表达的能力要求二书面表达的复习策略三书面表达的课堂指导四书面表达的批改方法,一书面表达的能力要求,1新课程标准7级要求2新课程标准8级要求3新课程标准9级要求4英语教学大纲要求5高考书面表达要求6情景和开放作文的对比7写作评分要求,1新课程标准7级要求,能用文字及图表提供的信息进行简单描述；能写出常见体裁的短文，如报告或信函；能描述人物或事件，并表达自己的见解；能填写有关个人情况的表格，如申请表、求职表；能做简单的书面翻译。,2新课程标准8级要求,能

2、写出连贯且结构完整的短文，叙述事情或表达观点和态度；能根据课文写摘要；能在写作中做到文体规范、语句通顺；能根据用文字及图表提供的信息写短文或报告。,3新课程标准9级要求,能用英文书写摘要、报告、通知、公务信函等；能比较详细和生动地用英语描述情景、态度或感情；能阐述自己的观点、评述他人的观点，文体恰当、用词准确；能在写作中恰当地处理引用的资料及他人的原话；能填写各种表格、写个人简历和申请书，用语基本正确、得当；能作非专业性的笔头翻译；在以上写作过程中做到文字通顺，格式正确。,4英语教学大纲要求,高中学生应“能就已学课文的内容作简单的改写。能在日常生活中，写简单的书信、便条和通知等，能填写简单的个

3、人履历表等。书写格式，行文及常用词语等无严重错误；能根据提示，在30分钟内写80100个词的短文，意思表达清楚，无严重语言错误。”,5高考书面表达要求,测试考生的英语书面表达能力。共两小题，35分，其中第一小题20分，第二小题15分。书面表达提供必要的提示。提示包括目的、过程、对象、时间、地点、内容等；提示的形式有文字、图画、图表等。第一小题（情景作文）要求考生根据所给的情景用英语写一篇约100个单词的短文。第二小题（开放作文）要求考生根据简略提示，写一篇不少于50个单词的短文。,6情景作文和开放作文的对比,情景作文，写作内容有明确的规定，评分尺度相对统一，在一定的程度上减少主观性，对考生来说

4、，这类作文比较容易，根据题目要求，组织好所提供的材料，用明白通顺恰当的英语表达出来，基本完成了任务。开放作文，有一定的难度，要扣题，自主谋篇，创造性，逻辑性，交际要得体。,7写作评分要求,书面表达复习,一书面表达的能力要求二书面表达的复习策略三书面表达的课堂指导四书面表达的批改方法,二书面表达的复习策略,了解写作命题特点内容贴近生活，符合时代要求词汇句式丰富，数字有所变化1在使用中复习词汇2在使用中复习句型3在使用中复习语篇,1在使用中复习词汇,1-1在阅读课文中掌握重点词汇重点词汇，提示造句，连词造句，段落造句，语法造句1-2在听力训练中掌握不同表达法试题与原文的不同表达1-3在语篇中练习词

5、汇单句填空，框词填空，词性转换，段落填空，听后填空1-4在重复中巩固词汇及时听写，阶段测验1-5在口述中扩展词汇说词组,看图写话-举一反三,下列图画描述的是你的一段亲身经历，请据此为一家中学生英文报的故事专栏写一篇短文。,练习表示时间的词组,the other dayyesterday afternoonon Sunday morningseeing thatat that momentwhen I saw it hearing thatat once before we could say anything,练习表示动作的词组,went to the cinema by bicycle.wa

6、s riding with me sitting on the seat behindwent to the cinema by bike with me on the seat behindcross roads，was riding across the road,came up and stopped uswalk to us and asked us to stopfound you at long lastsaw you didnt know themdidnt know what they meant,pointing to a policeman not far awaypoin

7、ted to a police standing there explained to us thattold us try to findstopped make us catch the next offendercome onstand here.dont have to wait long,文字提示-举一反三,有些人以为某些数字，比如6，8，9等会带来好运。他们在选择车牌号，电话号码时不惜花费“择号费”要这些数字。而你本人却不相信这些。你认为成功和财富与所谓的吉祥数字无关，要靠自己艰苦的劳动和努力。请你根据以上内容写一篇文章，词数100。关键动词：believe，think,hold

8、the view,considerchoose,decide,like,preferspend money on,cost much money,pay much for,charge for depend on,have to work hard,lie in,result from,2在使用中复习句型,2-1掌握课文中的重点句型Unit 6重点句型Let me remind you what we are looking for.It looks as if it isnt clean enough to bathe here.It seems that there is a big wa

9、ste pipe coming down from the town.No matter how much you want to bathe,it just isnt safe.How can they get rid of waste water in this way?,重点句型,Other waste may be thrown into the sea,either 19 kilometers from land,or more than 40 kilometers from land,depending on the nature of the materials.It is th

10、erefore unlikely that the chemicals will be carried upwards into the water.The problem of dealing with waste has become so great that several international organizations have been set up to protect the world and to fight against pollution.They seek to reduce waste,protect the earth,the oceans and al

11、l forms of life in them.European countries are now making an active effort to reuse materials more than they used to.,2-2.练习课文中的句型转换,Unit 7 It may be necessary to put up a notice saying“Keep off”.To put up a notice which says“Keep off”is necessary.Piles of stones lie in a corner of the courtyard,wai

12、ting to be replaced.Piles of stones lie in a corner of the courtyard,which wait to be replaced.European countries are now making an active effort to reuse materials.European countries are trying their best to reuse materials.We call this recycling.This is called recycling.I happened to meet him on m

13、y way home.It happened that I met him on my way home.,2-3练习作文中的句子结构,enter You can enter the park by the main gate.You can enter it by the main gate when you see the Peoples Park.walk straightWalk straight until the end of the road.Walk straight until you come to the end of the road.When he saw that

14、he ran in a hurry,inviting the old lady to share the umbrella with him.Seeing that,he ran immediately to the old lady and shared the same umbrella.,3在使用中复习语篇,3-1介绍人物Madam Curie was born in a teachers family in Poland,on November 7th,1867.Madam Curie,a daughter of a teacher,was born in Poland,on Nove

15、mber 7th,1867.When she was young,she became interested inAs a young man.In 1903,in July 1903 After the war From then onToday she is remembered and admired as a scientist.But she is also remembered for her determination and courage,her willingness to share her knowledge,her interest in womens rights,

16、and her medical service during the war.,3-1介绍人物,Sun Shuwei,a world champion in diving,is now 28 years old from Guangdong in China.He loved swimming when he was a small boy and at the age of eight he became a member of the diving team in Guangdong Province.He studied hard at school and trained hard f

17、or five years before he came to the national team.A year later in 1990,he won a gold medal at the 11th Asian Games and became a world champion at the 6th World Swimming Championships early this year.He is popular with the Chinese people.,3-2讲述故事,A person of great determinationMany years ago I walked

18、 into a bookstore in Cincinnati in search of some books that I wanted.While I was there,a young boy of about twelve came in to ask whether they had any geography books for sale.We entered the fifth storeMany years later,I was sailing to Europe on a fine sailing ship across the Atlantic.The determina

19、tion that thirty years ago got you that geography book has today saved our lives.,3-3记述经历,A visit to Tokyo DisneylandLast week we went on a visit to Tokyo Disneyland.On the first day we went to the Magic Castle.On the second day of our trip,After lunch,we also visited Tomorrow Land,which was very at

20、tractive.We stayed there for a long time.At eight oclock in the evening,we left the Disneyland.We had a wonderful time.,3-4时间顺序,When we entered the roomThree days laterEarly in the morning In 1982One sunny afternoon As a young man In ones spare timeSeeing that On hearing it One dayFor twenty years,H

21、ardly had we got there,when.At 7 oclockIn July And then On November 8th,1992In ones childhoodAt the age of On ones arrival During my years in schoolAt this period,3-5比较对比,Classroom Behavior RulesThere are some similarities and differences in the classroom behavior rules between North America and my

22、county.First,there is the students right to speak.In the language class in North America students can ask the teacher questions.They even ask questions when the teacher is giving a lesson.Similarly,in my country students have the right to ask questions at the end of the class.Next,students respect t

23、heir teachers.In North America students look up to teachers and respect them.For example,when the teacher asks them to speak they must look into the teachers eyes to show respect.Likewise,in my country,students respect teachers;however,when a teacher asks us to speak we look down to show respect.We

24、do not look into their eyes.In conclusion,there are both similarities and differences in the way students behave their teachers in the classroom.,3-6介绍国家/城市,New YorkNew York is built on a group of islands on the east coast of the USA at a point where several rivers flow into the ocean.By 1820 the po

25、pulation of New York had grown to about 125,000,making it the largest city in the USA.The building of skyscrapers in New York began around the year 1900.New York never sleeps.,3-6介绍国家/城市,date back to,date from,be located in,stand,lie in has a population of,the population of the city cover an entire

26、continent,from north to south the distance is,in area it is about,has an area of The climate is different depending on the area.is an extremely rich country.is an important agricultural country with a small population.In size it is bigger than yet has a much smaller population.,3-7介绍场景,假设你是李华，你的英国笔友

27、Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华学校学中文，来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息，写信介绍住房情况，并告知住房面积20平米，月租550元。,3-7介绍场景,Dear Bob,Im so glad to learn that youre coming in September.Ive found a place for you.Its a small flat of 25 square meters,with a bedroom,a bathroom and a kitchen.In the bedroom there is a bed,a sofa,a desk and a

28、 chair.The rent is 500 yuan per month.The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street,which is not far from Jianxinhua Chinese School.Bus No.11 can take you straight to the school.In fact,its only one stop.Do you think youd like it?If not,I can try and find another place for you.Yours，Li Hua,3-8 看图指路,假定

29、你是李华，你和你的朋友约定星期天在人民公园野餐。你的英国朋友Peter 也应邀参加。请你根据下面的示意图，给他写封短信，告诉他进公园后如何找到你们。,3-8 看图指路,Dear Peter,Were so glad youre coming to join us on Sunday.Here is how you can find us.Well have our picnic in the Peoples Park.You know where that is,dont you?After you enter the park by the main gate,walk straight o

30、n till you come to a small river.Cross the river and turn right.After walking for a while youll come to a hill.Walk round the hill,youll see a lake.Well have our picnic there in the small woods by the lake.Im sure youll have no trouble finding us.Do come！Lihua,3-9说明程序,Experts believe that there are

31、about 40,000 different types of jobs in the world.Choosing the right one is difficult job in itself.First,it is important to recognize what kind of person you are and which special qualities make you different from everyone else.You may had notice something while you were doing this task.To examine

32、your skills and abilities still further,ask yourself this question:in the following three areas-skills with people,skills with information or skills with things-which are your best skills?After examining your skills,the next step is research.Finally,trust your own ideas and your own thinking!,3-10举例

33、说明,My brother is very selfish.He does not want to share things with other people.For example,when he buys a bar of chocolate,he puts it in a secret place.Then he eats it all by himself.He never helps anyone.He says he is busy.He does not care if something he does bothers other people.For instance,la

34、st night he played loud rock n roll music until 2 oclock in the morning.In conclusion,I think my brother is selfish,and will always be selfish.,3-11介绍事物,AdvertisingAdvertising is a highly developed twentieth century industry.What can you advertise?Advertising is now a scientific business.How are adv

35、ertisements made?What makes a good advertisement?There are other dangers.,3-11介绍事物,GymnasticsThe words“gymnastics”and“gym”come from the Greek language,for it was in Greece that Olympic competitions started.Dance is an important of training as it prepares you for the types of movements required in gy

36、mnastics.To become a top gymnast,it is important to start when very young.Boys develop physically later than girls and so Olympic gymnastics medals are usually won by men between the ages of nineteen and twenty-five.In competitions,gymnasts have to perform on different pieces of equipment.,3-12寻求帮助(

37、书信),Dear Marty,I have got a problem and as I dont know what to do.I thought Id write to you and ask for your adviceI have been working at a meat factory for about two months now.I have recently noticed that one of my workmates is stealing.What should I do?May be I should have told that.Or possibly I

38、 should have gone to the managerI think Im in a difficult position,Please tell me how I can solve this problem.Id like to hear your advice.Best wishes,John,3-13给与帮助（回信）,Dear John,Thank for your letter.I agree that it is a difficult situation.I think there is a possible problem if you tell the manage

39、r about the thief.There is no need to say to the other worker.But I advise you to check your bag every evening before going home.Best regards,Marty,3-13给与帮助（回信）,9 Ocean Road Freetown 9th April,2003 Dear Ken,Thank you for your letter.Im sorry that you are not happy yet in yournew school.It is wrong o

40、f the other children to make fun of you.First of all,dont worry about being short.It really doesnt matter.Lots ofpeople are short.You are fine just as you are.Have you considered looking for one special friend?I suggest you choosesomeone who you think is kind and friendly.So why dont you look forsom

41、e who might be a special friend?And dont spend too much time alone.Best wishes,Your friend,Amy,3-14推销产品（信件）,No.76 Zhichun Road Haidian District Beijing 100086 3rd August,2004-9-12Dear Ms.Zhang,I believe that you are a teacher of computer studies at your school.I am writing to you because we have a u

42、sed computer for sale and wonder if you would like to buy it.The model is ZY-2 and it is one year old.We would be happy to sell it to you for 3,500 yuan,that is 50%of the cost of a new one.If you are interested,please write to me at the above address.Could you also suggest a time when it would suit

43、you to visit us and try out the machine?Im looking forward to hearing from you.Yours sincerely,He Xiaohua,3-15索要资料（书信）,40964 Friendship Hotel Beijing,108314th January,2002SalesmanComputer Sales Dept.Founder Computer Corp.Dear Sir,I am a college student studying electrical engineering.I need a micro-

44、computer at home.Founder computers are my first choice,so I am writing to you for some information.I would be very happy if you could send me an introduction to your products and the prices of them.Please write to me at the above address.I look forward to hearing from you.Yours sincerely,John Jenkin

45、s,3-16口头通知,Attention please!Boys and girls.Less noise,please!Gather round and listen carefully.Ladies and gentlemen,may I have your attention please?I have something important to tell you.Thats all.Thank you.,3-17书面通知,About spoken-English Competition In order to develop students interests in learnin

46、g English and improve their spoken English,a spoken-English competition will be held by Students Union and English Office on November 2nd.Good luck!Student Union Friday,December 10,3-18日记,May 9th,Tuesday Sunny,3-19分析图表,A survey about choice of jobs has been done among 100 middle school students,whic

47、h shows that,3-20介绍喜好,My Most Favorite ProgramThere are a lot of TV programs I like but the one I like best is World Report broadcast by CCTV at ten every night.This program aims at keeping audiences informed about the international situation.There are several factors,which may account for my prefer

48、ence of this program.First,.Besides,.Finally,From the examples mentioned above,it can be easily understood why I like World Report.,写作的相关话题和词汇,灾害事故（火灾）书信、日记分析表格（就业选择）业余爱好（喜爱的节目）指明道路（去野餐的路）通知布告（广播晚会的通知）介绍人物（孙淑伟，老师）描述场景（描写学校变化）环境保护（城市的污染）讲述经历（参观农场）幽默故事（井盖和修路）好人好事（给老人让座）度假旅游（对比旅游方式）商店购物（退还衣物）学校生活（减负前后）

49、,书面表达复习,一书面表达的能力要求二书面表达的复习策略三书面表达的课堂指导四书面表达的批改方法,三书面表达的课堂指导,集中和分散相结合口头和笔头相结合分类和综合相结合记忆和发挥相结合,课堂指导作文,假设你是李华，在一所中学读书。最近收到美国朋友Smith先生的来信。他三年前参观过你校，听说现在变化很大，希望了解有关情况。参照下图，给他写一封回信介绍你校的变化。注意：回信须包括图画的主要内容，可以适当增减细节，使内容连贯；词数100左右。,练习表示方位的词组,on one side of the roadon the other sidein front of theoutside of ar

50、ound the schoolat the back of to the left of to the right of,练习表述内容的动词,have changedhave taken on a new lookhave taken placecan see great changesused to be there werebe located in lie in stand can see,学生作文,Dear Mr.Smith,Im very glad to have received your letter.As you know,our school has changed a lo