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1、用心积累 强化训练 巧妇有米可炊,2015年温州市“一模”短文改错和书面表达分析与复习对策 温州市第十五中学 郑颖颖,一、我校学生一模整体情况(共361人)二类学校,理科,文科,二、一模短文改错题分析,1、背景材料:一个名为Jim的中学生写了一封信。信中他说道自己非常乐意当一名志愿者去帮助老人院的老人和生病住院的孩子。,2、考查角度:,考查全面,设题巧妙。错误类型涉及词法、句法、行文逻辑等方面。,3、得分情况:平均分(5.60分),4、总体评价与分析,相对于笔试部分的其它题型,改错还算比较简单,但是我们学生的得分却不够理想。从抽样的30份学生答卷中,我们发现错误较多的是4.performanc
2、e改为performances;5.are改为is;以及最后一个句子10.by the mail改为by mail。这说明大部分学生还未熟练掌握以下知识点:“performance”表演为可数名词;“giving some performance with my friends”动名词做主语,其谓语动词用单数;用什么工具或方式,直接用by sth,中间不用加定冠词“the”.,同时我们也从学生的改错中发现了一些漏洞,如:1.I love children but Ill devote myself to taking good care of him.take 2.please get in
3、touch with me by phone or by mail.touching 去掉with3.I am willing be a volunteer to help others.other4.I would like to help those people whom need help.needs 这些错误的改法都反映了我们的学生英语基础知识比较薄弱,词性辨析、词组记忆、短语积累等方面还要进一步加强。,三、改错复习对策,(1)、考点分类指导,即从考查角度分类指导学生。如动词错误主要涉及主谓一致、动词时态及语态,非谓语动词的形式以及动词的误用等。(2)、每天一篇高考改错练习或10个句
4、子的改错训练或10个错误的段落改错。改错句子和改错段落由模块一到模块五的课本句子和段落改编而来。,例如:M1 Unit4 Earthquake,1.Before the earthquake farmers noticed there were deep cracks on some of the well walls.2.Mice ran out of the fields looked for some places to hide.3.People could hear the sound of planes outside city of Tangshan even when ther
5、e were no planes in the sky.4.Two-third of the people in Tangshan died or were injured during the earthquake.5.75%of its factories,buildings and 90%of its homes was gone.,M2U2 Olympic Games,1.He used to writing about the Olympic Games more than 2,000 years ago.2.Every fourth years,the Olympic Games
6、are held in the world.3.We have known that the next Olympic Games are to held in this city.4.Its still all about be able to run faster,jump higher and throw further.5.After Tom joined in the baseball club,he took part in many competitions.,M3 Unit 4 Astronomy:the science of the stars,After the“Big B
7、ang”,the earth was just a cloud of dust.It exploded loudly with fire and rock,that were in time to produce the water vapor,carbon dioxide and other gas.Then small plants grew.They multiplied and filled the oceans and seas of oxygen.Many millions of years late,the first green plants began to appear o
8、n the land.When the plants grew into forests,reptiles appeared for the first time.They give birth to young generally by lying eggs.When dinosaurs disappeared,mammals became more importantly.Now small clever animals with hands and feet appeared all over the world.As time going by they covered the ear
9、th and they are putting too much carbon dioxide into the atmosphere which prevents heat escape from the earth into space.Whether life will continue on earth for millions of years to come will depend on whether this problem will solved.,M4Unit5 Theme Parks,Opened in 1987,Futuroscope is one of the lar
10、gest space-age park in the world.This theme park in France uses the most advancing technology.Its 3-D cinemas and giant movie screens provide brand new experiences of earth and beyond.Visitors can get closely to parts of the world they had never experienced,go to the bottom of the ocean,flying throu
11、gh the jungle and visiting the edges of the solar system.The amazed,up-to-date information together with many opportunities for hands-on learning make the world come to life in a complete new way for the visitors.,(3)、学做盯师。平时训练一定要求学生对10个地方加以修正。从学生的答卷我们发现一部分学生往往因为畏难情绪,只改几处,从而放弃了多改几处或许还可多得几分的机会。(4)、循环
12、使用之前做过的改错材料,使之成为早读或晚读的资料。这样既强化了学生对词组、语法知识的印象,同时又培养了语感。并且改错也是写作语言、内容、话题等方面很好的积累,值得学生去背诵。,(5)、学生用书后面的不规则动词表抓落实,各各检测,逐步突破。(6)、鼓励学生建立专属于自己的改错集错本,对考点和知识点进行经常性归纳,查漏补缺,建构改错知识网络。,四、书面表达题分析,1、一模试题回顾:为了营造一种“多读书,读好书”的良好氛围,我班将举行一次主题班会,要求以“A good book can affect our life”为题作演讲,向同学们介绍一本自己读过的好书,并谈谈自己的感悟。注意:1.字数:12
13、0个词左右;2.讲稿的开头和结尾已给出(不计词数)。Boys and girls,_ Thats all.Thank you!,2、一模作文特点:,文体:应用文之演讲稿题示方式:文字话题:贴近考生实际,考生有话可说。体裁:属于开放性作文,学生可围绕话题 及题目要求,抒发自己的感受。,3、我校学生的得分情况:平均分(14.67),第四档具体情况:,从统计数据可以看出:我们的学生在书面表达方面太过薄弱,极需提高。,4、学生作文中的具体问题,(1)、词性误用So never give up,and have a big confident.In the end,we will be success.
14、Forgive is better than sadness.In the book,Jane is a brave,kind and ability girl.,(2)、词的用法失误,But which book we should to read?because the book is worthy to read.Reading good books has good effect to our life.,(3)、不规则动词变化的错误,It teached me we should take a positive attitude towards life which can help
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