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1、单证电文处理及业务风险提示,二零零八年六月五日省行国际业务部 蔡丹玲,内容概览第一部分 单证业务电文处理一、单证业务电文编写要点介绍二、单证业务电文处理注意事项第二部分 单证业务电文错报分析第三部分 单证业务风险提,2单证电文处理及业务风险提示,3.单证电文处理电文编写要点介绍,一、电文编写要点介绍1.直接切入主题 2.突出客观主体 3.简洁为美要点1、直接切入主题(突出发报目的)建议:开门见山提出问题/观点/要求例1:业务背景:出口寄单收汇业务电文经办行在3月2日向开证行寄单收汇,并于当日按信用证条款规定向偿付行纽约东京三菱银行(BOTKUS33)进行电索。3月13 日,经办行收到偿付行来电
2、,称未收到开证行授权,所 以不能付款给索汇行。经办行经查明,开证行已于3月6日收妥单据。因此,拟向开证行发送MT799电文,要求其授权偿付行向我行付款。经办行编写的电文内容如下:,4.电文编写要点介绍,(MT799)20:190BP080000001 21:1234567000001 FOR USD17600 DD MAR.2,2008 UNDER YOUR L/C NO.1234567,5电文编写要点介绍直接切入主题,PLS BE INFORMED THAT WE HAVE SENT THE ABOVE MENTIONED DOCUMENTS TO YOUR GOODBANK ON MAR.
3、2,2008 BY DHL COURIER SERVICE CO.AND WE HAVE CLAIMED REIMBURSEMENT TO THE REIMBURSING BANK-BANK OF TOKYO MITSUBISHI UFJ,LTD,THE NEWYORK BY AUTHENTICATED SWIFT IN THE SAME DAY AS PER L/C STIPULATED.,6电文编写要点介绍直接切入主题,WE HAVE LANDED THE DHL COMPANYS NETWORK,AND WE FOUND THAT YOU HAVE RECEIVED THE DOCUME
4、NTS ON MAR 6,2008.BUT WE HAVE RECEIVED A MT799 FROM THE REIMBUSING BANK DD MAR.13,2008,THEY TOLD US THAT THEY CANNOT HONOUR US FOR THE REASON OF NOT HAVING GOT AN AUTHORIZATION FROM YOU.SINCE WE HAVE NOT RECEIVED ANY REFUSAL ADVICE UPTO NOW,ACCORDING TO UCP600,7电文编写要点介绍直接切入主题,ART.16,YOU ARE PRECLUDE
5、D TO CLAIM THAT THE DOCUMENTS CONSTITUTE A DISCREPANCY.IN ORDER TO SETTLE THIS MATTER,YOU SHOULD AUTHORISE THE REIMBURSING BANK TO PAY TO US IMMEDIATELY.THANK YOU FOR YOUR KIND CO-OPERATION IN THIS MATTER.B.RDS.EXPORT LC DEPT.,8电文编写要点介绍直接切入主题,修改1:PLS BE INFORMED THAT WE HAVECLAIMED REIMBURSEMENT TO
6、THE REIMBURSING BANK-BANK OF TOKYO MITSUBISHI UFJ,LTD,THE NEWYORK BY AUTHENTICATED SWIFT ON MAR.2,2008 AS PER L/C STIPULATEDBUT WE HAVE RECEIVED A MT799 FROM THE REIMBUSING BANK DD MAR.13,THEY TOLD US THAT THEY CANNOT HONOR US-FOR THE REASON OF NOT HAVING GOT AN AUTHORISATION FROM YOU.,9电文编写要点介绍一直接切
7、入主题,例2.开证行承兑了单据,承诺于某个日期 付款,但过了到期日,我行却还没有收 到对方付款。经办行拟写的电文内容 如下:YOU HAVE CONFIRMED THAT YOU WOULD EFFECT PAYMENT TO OUR HEAD OFFICE(SWIFT:ABOCCNBJ)A/C HELD WITH WACHOVIA BANK N.A.,NEW YORK(SWIFT:PNBPUS3NNYC)ON MATURITY DATE,I.E.MAY 08,2008,10电文编写要点介绍一直接切入主题,ON YOUR ACCEPTACE ADVICE ON APR.8,BUT WE HAV
8、E NOT RECEIVED THE PROCEEDS UPTO NOWYOU SHOULD INVESTIGATE THIS MATTER IMMDEDIATELY AND EFFECT PAYMENT TO US WITHOUT ANY DELAY.THKS AND B.RGDS,11电文编写要点介绍一直接切入主题,例2建议:DOCS HAS BEEN ACCEPTED TO MATURE ON MAY 8,2008,BUT WE HAVE NOT RECEIVED FUNDS UPTO DATE PLS EFFECT PAYMENT WITHOUT ANY DELAY.RGDS.,12电
9、文编写要点介绍突出客观主体,要点二、突出客观主体(明确关注对象)建议:适当使用被动语态句式,将信用 证、单据、不符点、收付汇款项等 客观事项作为语句表述主语例1:修改1修改2:,13电文编写要点介绍突出客观主体,修改1:PLS BE INFORMED THAT WE HAVE CLAIMED REIMBURSEMENT TO THEREIMBURSING BANK:BANK OF TOKYO MITSUBISHIUFJ,LTD,THE NEWYORK BY AUTHENTICATED SWIFT ON MAR.2,2008 AS PER L/C STIPULATED,BUT WE HAVE R
10、ECEIVED A MT799 FROM THE REIMBUSING BANK DD,修改2:PLS BE INFORMED THAT WE HAVE CLAIMED REIMBURSEMENT TO THE REIMBURSING BANK:BANK OF TOKYO MITSUBISHIUFJ,LTD,THENEWYORK BY AUTHENTICATED SWIFT ON MAR.2,2008 AS PER L/C STIPULATEDBUT WE WERE ADVISED BY THE REIMBUSING BANK DD,14电文编写要点介绍突出客观主体,修改1:MAR.13,20
11、08 THEY TOLD US THAT THEY CANNOT HONOR USFOR THE REASON OF NOT HAVINGGOT AN AUTHORISATION FROM YOU.,修改2:MAR.13,2008 WITH MT799 THAT THEY CANNOT HONOR US FOR THE REASON OF NOT HAVING GOT AN AUTHORISATION FROM YOU,15电文编写要点介绍突出客观主体,修改1:PLS BE INFORMED THAT WE HAVE SENT THE ABOVE MENTIONEDDOCUMENTS TO Y
12、OUR GOODBANK ON MAR.02,2008 BY DHL COURIER SERVICE CO.(BUT WE HAVE RECEIVED A MT799 FROM THE REIMBUSING BANK DD MAR.13,THEY TOLD US THAT THEY HAVE NOT GOT AUTHORIZATION FROM YOU TO HONOR OUR PAYMENT.),修改2:SINCE DOCUMENTS HAVE BEEN SENT TO YOUR GOODBANK ON MAR.2,2008 BY DHL COURIER SERVICE CO.,16电文编写
13、要点介绍突出客观主体,WE HAVE LANDED THE DHL COMPANYS NETWORK,AND WE FOUND THAT YOU HAVERECEIVED THE DOCUMENTSON MAR 6,2008 SINCE WE HAVE NOT RECEIVED ANY REFUSAL ADIVICE UPTO NOW,ACCORDING UCP600ART.16,YOU ARE PRECLUDED TO CLAIM THAT THE DOCUMENTS CONSTITUTE A DISCREPANCY.IN ORDER TO SETTLE THIS MATTER.,AND D
14、HL RECORD SHOWED THAT DOCUMENTS HAVE BEEN RECEIVED BY YOUR GOOD BANK ON MAR.06,2008.AS NO REFUSAL ADVICE HAS BEEN RECEIVED UPTO NOW,ACCORDING TO UCP600 ART.16,YOUR ARE PRECLUDED TO CLAIM THAT DOCUMENTS CONSTITUTE A DISCREPANCY.IN ORDER TO SETTLE THIS MATTER.,17电文编写要点介绍简洁为美,要点3、简洁为美 建议:有依有据,言简意赅 TIPS
15、:1.电文中的要素、内容尽量不要重复 2.有上下文内容联系的,冠词可以省略 3.多使用通用的缩略语 4.语法不需严谨规范 5.PLS BE INFORMED THAT/KINDLY NOTE THAT 并非“必须有”,18电文编写要点介绍简洁为美,修改220:190BP080000001 21:123456779:TOP URGENTRE.OUR DOCUMENTS 000001 FOR USD17600 DD MAR.2,2008 UNDER YOUR L/C NO.1234567,修改320:190BP080000001 21:123456779:TOP URGENTRE.UR DOCU
16、FR USD17600,19电文编写要点介绍简洁为美,修改2PLS BE INFORMED THAT WE HAVE CLAIMED REIMBURSEMENT TO THE REIMBURSING BANK:BANK OF TOKYO MITSUBISHIUFJ,LTD,THENEWYORK BY AUTHENTICATED SWIFT ON MAR.2,2008 AS PER LC STIPULATED,BUT WE WERE ADVISED BY THE REIMBUSING BANK DD MAR.13,2008 WITH MT799 THAT THEY CANNOT HONOR US
17、,修改3WE HV CLAIMED REIM ON BOTKUS33/REIM.BANK BY AUTH SWFT ON MAR.2,2008 BUT WERE ADVSD ON MAR.13 THAT THEY CANNOT HONOR US.,20电文编写要点介绍简洁为美,修改2FOR THE REASON OF NOT HAVINGGOT AN AUTHORISATION FROM YOUSINCE DOCUMENTS HAVE BEEN SENT TO YOUR GOODBANK ON MAR.2,2008 BY DHL COURIER SERVICE CO.,修改3FOR THE R
18、EASON OF NOT HAVINGGOT AN AUTHORISATION FROM YOUSINCE DOCS SENT TO YU ON MAR.2,21电文编写要点介绍简洁为美,修改2DHL RECORD SHOWED THAT DOCUMENTS HAVE BEEN RECEIVED BY YOUR GOOD BANK ON MAR.06,2008.AS NO REFUSAL ADVICE HAS BEEN RECEIVED UPTO NOW,ACCORDING TO UCP600 ART.16,YOUARE PRECLUDED TO CLAIM THAT DOCUMENTS CO
19、NSTITUTE A DISCREPANCY.,修改3AND DHL RECORD SHOW THAT DOCS RCVD BY YU ON MAR.06,AS NO REFUSAL ADVICE REACH OUR COUNTER UPTO NOW,ACCORDINGTO UCP600 ART.16,YU ARE PRECLUDED TO CLAIM THAT DOCUMENTS CONSTITUTE A DISCREPANCY.,22电文编写要点介绍简洁为美,修改2IN ORDER TO SETTLE THIS MATTER,YOU SHOULD AUTHORISE THE REIMBUR
20、SING BANK TO PAY TO US IMMEDIATELY.THANK YOU FOR YOUR KIND CO-OPERATION IN THIS MATTER.B.RGDS.EXPORT L/C DEPT,修改3SO,IMMDLY EFFECT PYMT BY AUTHORISE BOTKUS33 TO HONOR UR CLAIM OR PAY TO US DIRECTLY BY REMIT PRCDS TO PNBPUS3NNYC FR CREDIT TO ABOCCNBJ FURTHER TO THEIR GUANGDONG BR.QUOTING UR REF.YR PRO
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