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1、事例型议论文,07年2以约120个词表达你对父亲的感恩，并包括如下要点：(1)读信后的感受；(2)以你自己成长的经历说明你的感受；(3)表达你对父亲的感激和祝福。10年.以约120词对用金钱鼓励孩子学习的现象进行议论，内容包括：(1)你对用金钱鼓励孩子学习的看法：(2)你的父母（或其他亲人）是如何鼓励你学习的；(3)你认为怎样才能更好地鼓励孩子学习,How to write,原则上是和之前的议论文一样，一点一段，但具体要求上，内容有所不同，段落的详略处理也不同：07年2以约120个词表达你对父亲的感恩，并包括如下要点：(1)读信后的感受；(2)以你自己成长的经历说明你的感受；(3)表达你对父亲

2、的感激和祝福。10年.以约120词对用金钱鼓励孩子学习的现象进行议论，内容包括：(1)你对用金钱鼓励孩子学习的看法：(2)你的父母（或其他亲人）是如何鼓励你学习的；(3)你认为怎样才能更好地鼓励孩子学习,各段具体要求,1.事例型的作文，往往第一点都是：感受，看法。直接开门见山，表达主题。After reading Susans story,（过渡）Im strongly inspired and motivated.（表达感受）It is beyond my imagination that a person can fight for her dream for so long with s

3、uch a strong perseverance.（进行一句话原因扩展）As for the issue mentioned above,(过渡)I cast a negative to his doings.(直接表明看法)because he had thrown away his years of hard work,great academic achievements and a promising future just for some short-term benefits.Now,he knows better than anyone that dishonesty cos

4、ts dearly.(进行一个原因的扩展),2.事例型作文，关键想好例子，如何举一个好例子1.先抓题目中的关键词10年.以约120词对用金钱鼓励孩子学习的现象进行议论，内容包括：(1)你对用金钱鼓励孩子学习的看法：(2)你的父母（或其他亲人）是如何鼓励你学习的；(3)你认为怎样才能更好地鼓励孩子学习2.考虑事例具体内容,在这一步里，切记围绕中心来设计例子，不要前后铺垫过多！I have a friend whose name is Xiaoming.He is a very lazy boy,and he does like studying.He seldom does his homewo

5、rk,and review his lessons.So he always get into trouble when quiz comes.直接切入中心：My classmate Wang Tao once made a similar mistake.During a math quiz,he was having trouble working out a problem.When the teacher looked away,he peeked and copied the answer from his classmate.He was glad that he had a hi

6、gh mark in the quiz.But when he came across a similar question in the final exam,he didnt know how to solve it and eventually failed the test.凡写事例，必用一般过去式！,3.最难想的就是例子：1.）调动经验，大胆想象：作文书p157尤其注意利用语文素材中的名人例子，时事体裁来例证，如果题目要求是你或身边人的例子，注意根据实际情况来改编2.）复读材料，移花接木利用所给的材料，不改事情发生轨迹，改其中基本信息。,最后一点，比较多变，根据要求调整写作长短07：

7、(3)表达你对父亲的感激和祝福。10：(3)你认为怎样才能更好地鼓励孩子学习,阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。Dear Ari,As you sleep in my arms,Im amazed at how light you feel.I stare at your tiny body,so fragile that a sudden wind could lift you up into the air.I love this feeling of protecting you and dreaming of all I have in store for yo

8、u.I intend to bring you up to be brave and successful in an often difficult society.Thats why your mommy and I have named you Ari,which means lion.Its our hope that you will grow strong and eagerly grasp every opportunity to do well for yourself and others.Before you came into the world,we had spent

9、 months imagining what youd be like.Would you be a boy or a girl?Would you look like Mommy,Daddy or your elder brothers?Anyway,we would find out soon.Finally your mothers labor came.And several hours later,we met the first time.I held you high up in the air.I then was able to cut your umbilical cord

10、(脐带)and put you in your mothers arms.She still had enough energy to radiate the love while she pressed you to her face.And here we are tonight.As I hold you close,you sleep so peacefully.I press my ear to your chest and hear your strength.I am listening to the first beats of a lions heart.Welcome to

11、 the world,Ari.Love,Daddy,写作内容 假设你就是信中的Ari，父亲在你出生的时候写了这封信。今天是父亲50岁生日，你准备以写信的方式，祝贺他的生日。以下是信的内容(信的开头和结尾已经为你写好)：1以约30个词概括父亲在他信中对你的期望；2以约120个词表达你对父亲的感恩，并包括如下要点：(1)读信后的感受；(2)以你自己成长的经历说明你的感受；(3)表达你对父亲的感激和祝福。,阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。Dear Ari,As you sleep in my arms,Im amazed at how light you feel.I st

12、are at your tiny body,so fragile that a sudden wind could lift you up into the air.I love this feeling of protecting you and dreaming of all I have in store for you.I intend to bring you up to be brave and successful in an often difficult society.Thats why your mommy and I have named you Ari,which m

13、eans lion.Its our hope that you will grow strong and eagerly grasp every opportunity to do well for yourself and others.Before you came into the world,we had spent months imagining what youd be like.Would you be a boy or a girl?Would you look like Mommy,Daddy or your elder brothers?Anyway,we would f

14、ind out soon.Finally your mothers labor came.And several hours later,we met the first time.I held you high up in the air.I then was able to cut your umbilical cord(脐带)and put you in your mothers arms.She still had enough energy to radiate the love while she pressed you to her face.And here we are to

15、night.As I hold you close,you sleep so peacefully.I press my ear to your chest and hear your strength.I am listening to the first beats of a lions heart.Welcome to the world,Ari.Love,Daddy,07作文讲评,Summary：一定注意审题，要注意陷阱：究竟是要概括全文？还是一个段落？以约30个词概括父亲在他信中对你的期望I intend to bring you up to be brave and success

16、ful in an often difficult society.Thats why your mommy and I have named you Ari,which means lion.Its our hope that you will grow strong and eagerly grasp every opportunity to do well for yourself and others.题干关键词？主要抓什么？名词或形容词！,5分Summary：1.必须出现的关键词：brave,successful,strong,grasp every opportunity.2.注意

17、不要抄原句3.承上启下怎样避免抄原句？1.改词性：a man of bravery and strength2.改句型：Its our hope that.=You looked forward to my growing up into a man of.,From you letter,you wished me to be strong-minded and successful,looking forward to seeing me fight for my future bravely and do well for myself and others.You hoped me t

18、o be brave and successful in an often difficult society,and grow strong and eagerly grasp every opportunity to do well for yourself and others.Happy birthday!Do you remember the letter you wrote to me 10 years ago?In order to achieve your expectation of being a strong,successful and brave person,I t

19、ried my best to do well for myself and others.,5,抓住关键词，换词换句型,2，有关键词，但是太多抄原文,0，不要写任何与summary无关的信息，审清楚题意！,正文：(1)读信后的感受；(2)以你自己成长的经历说明你的感受；(3)表达你对父亲的感激和祝福。重点写？审题：自己亲身经历或虚构的故事不要泛泛而谈，确定一个故事！凡故事必有主题，应该突出什么主题？moved和SUMMARY相对应-brave,successful,strong。这样全文都能相互呼应叙述故事，要交代起因-经过-结果不要整段都是对话,郭婉芸,Tear streamed down

20、 after I read your touching and moving letter.I feel as if I were still the little baby in profound sleep in your arms,protected by the shelter brimful of love.(直面表达感受)You are always standing by me along the way I set foot on.I can still remember vividly the day when you went climbing with me.（总起介绍故

21、事）At the very beginning,I climbed quickly to show my youth and strength.(起因)But when we got halfway up the hill,so exhausted and breathless was I that I couldnt even move a little,leaning on a rock and considering giving it up,“Dad,why not take a cable car?”Just at that moment,your smiling face turn

22、ed into a serious one.After a pregnant silence,you told me that there is no short cut in life and perseverance is the only way to success.Only when I stick to it can I really learn the true meaning of life.（经过）But it was not until I stood on the top of the hill and caught sight of the fantastic scen

23、ery that I understood your words,which,from then on,have sown the seed of persistence in my inner heart and encouraged me to move forward whenever I came across obstacles.结果+总结升华 I always feel grateful to be blessed with you as my dad,and actually you are more than a father,and also a faithful frien

24、d who accompanies me and a lighthouse that guides me.(感激）And on your fiftieth birthday,may you stay in good health and happiness forever.（祝福）,People said that the love of fathers is like a mountain.After reading your letter,I understood it deeply with tears in my eyes,and the love conveyed in it rem

25、inds me that the guidance you have been giving to me is to help be a brave and strong man.（点明接下来要举例子和例子的主题）There are many incidents about that,but this is the most impressive one.（过渡，承上启下）That dates back to my primary school when I looked thin and weak.Therefore,it made me the target of a gang of my

26、 school.They kept bullying me to show their“strength”and I had to swallow my anger and pride,feeling myself inferior like a timid mouse.（交代事情起因）After you learned the cause of my misery,you comforted me gently and told me the meaning of my nameAri,a lion.With a convincing and encouraging voice,you to

27、ld me to stand up for myself and fight back by cooperating with other bullied children.（事情经过）Your words injected power into my body,and I made it.No one dared to bully me and other students like me.（结果）It is bravery and strength that you have been emphasizing,and I will keep these virtues all throug

28、h my life.（例子后的一句话升华和点评）Dear daddy,I am grateful for what you have said and done for me.Without your attendance and guidance,my life would be in a shadow.Today is your 50th birthday,so I hope you can lead a happy life as before and keep healthy as a lions father.,何垚熹,thanks to:黎家辉，詹淑微，曾嘉莹,谢毅文，梁晓愉,Af

29、ter I read the letter full of love and expectation,words fail to convey my feelings,and only tears of joy I shed could express how moved and touched I am.I am totally immersed in an intense sense of warmth and care.Brave,strong,successfulthese words remind me of the day you taught me to ride a bike.

30、(总起)From 8 oclock in the morning,you kept me from falling by holding the bike in balance and running after me.（起因）One track after another,I still dared not to ride by myself.After riding smoothly for a distance,I looked over to show my excitement in making progress,only to find that you were standin

31、g far away,smiling and waving.I suddenly lost my balance and fell off.You came to comfort me,but so scared was I that I felt like giving up.You said,“My little lion,never give up half way.He who can not taste the bitter is not a true man.”经过I recollected my strength and tried again and again.Finally

32、,I was able to acquire the riding skill.（结果）If it hadnt been for your words,I would not have sparkled my inner potentials and taken up the challenge in life so well.（总结）Dad,hardly can I convey my gratitude for your meticulous care in word.You are the spring shower that moistens my heart and helps me grow up strongly and healthily.As today is your birthday,I am taking this moment to say that thank you,daddy,and happy birthday!may you stay in good health and happiness forever.,