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1、How to improve passages Focusing on varieties of words and sentence patterns,灵活变换句式1 简单句并列句复合句Both my mother and father are fond of music.-My mother likes music,so does my father.There was no bus,and we had to walk home.-There being no bus,we had to walk home.2 主动语态被动语态1 All of the teachers speak hi

2、ghly of his teaching methods.-His teaching methods are highly thought of by all the teachers.,2)Someone accuses a footballer of taking money on purpose for not scoring goals so as to let the other team win.-A footballer was accused of taking-3)A discussion about whether it is necessary for parents t

3、o accompany their children to the university was held on the Internet.3 正常语序倒装语序You can cover a story by yourself only when you have seen what he does.-Only when you have seen what he does,can you cover a story by yourself.,2)Not only am I interested in photography,but I(also)took a course at univer

4、sity.4 一般句式特殊句式He didnt come into the classroom until the bell rang.-It was not until the bell rang that he came into the classroom.-Not until the door bell rang did he come into the classroom.,2)You must make me know when you are in trouble.-Do make me know when you are in trouble.5 一般句式祈使句We shoul

5、d live up to the expectation of our parents.-Live up to 6 一般句式感叹句It is very important to keep your promise.-How important it is to keep your promise!7 完整句式省略句式1)After he had finished the exercises,he went out.-After finishing the exercises,he went out.,2)My hometown isnt what it used to be ten years

6、 ago.3)Never go against a red light when crossing the street.8 普通句式名词性从句What caused the fire is a puzzle to the policeWhat surprises/excites/interest/disappoints/worries/me most is that-After what seemed a long time,he became impatient.That is what we should do,9 灵活使用定语从句I live in a house,and its wi

7、ndow faces south.-I live in a house,whose window faces south.I live in a house,the window of which faces south.10 灵活使用虚拟语气 Its time that we should do eye exercises.11 灵活使用状语从句He is a child,but he knows a lot.Child as/though he is,he knows a lot.,练习 1.40%的学生认为应收门票,但票价不应太高.40%of the students think tha

8、t entrance fees are necessary,but the prices should not be high.40%of the students believe that entrance fees should be charged,but it should be low.2 公园是公众休闲的地方.A park is a place for the public to rest and enjoy themselves.A park is a place where people rest and relax.A park is a place where people

9、 can have a rest and have fun.,3 使我吃惊的是他这次得了满分.1)What surprised me is that he got full marks this time.2)It made me surprised that he got full-3)It was surprising that he got full marks-4 我建议我们举行一个英语晚会.I suggest we should hold an English evening party.My suggestion is that we should hold-5 这个孩子懂得太多,

10、我们深感惊讶.The little boy knows so many things that we feel surprised.It is that the little boy knows so many thing s that surprises us.Much to our surprise,the little boy knows-,In recent years,Beijing has been advancing very fast.All these make peoples lives convenient,pleasant and colorful._ which_Wi

11、th the development of _ _so _ that_,In recent years,Beijing has been advancing very fast,makes peoples lives convenient,pleasant,Beijing,peoples lives are becoming more and more convenient,pleasant and colorful.,Nowadays,Beijing is developing fast peoples lives are getting more convenient,pleasant a

12、nd colorful.,Discussion,我收到你的来信有三天了。,Make your discovery,Your letter reached me three days ago.It is three days since I received your letter.,A.I received your letter three days ago.,B.It was three days ago that I received your letter.,我们刚一出门就开始下雨了。,Hardly had we started when it began to rain.,No so

13、oner had we started than it began to rain.,It began to rain as soon as we set out.,The moment we started,it started to rain.,It began to rain immediately we started.,Shortly after we started,it began to rain.,Learn to use,新年即将来临。,The New Year is around the corner.,The New Year is going to make its a

14、ppearance.,The New Year is coming.,The New Year is drawing nearer and nearer.,The New Year is on the way.,It wont be long before the New Year arrives.,Learn to use,我花了50块钱买这本字典。I _ 50 yuan on the dictionary.,I spent 50 yuan(in)buying the dictionary.It cost/took me 50 yuan to buy the dictionary.I pai

15、d 50 yuan for the dictionary.The dictionary was worth 50 yuan.I was charged 50 yuan for the dictionary.The dictionary cost me 50 yuan.,spent,Learn to use,一、the+est+名词+(that)+主语+have ever+seen(known/heard/had/read,etc)the most+形容词+名词+(that)+主语+have ever+seen(known/heard/had/read,etc),例句：海伦是我所见过的最美丽的女

16、孩。Helen is the most beautiful girl that I have ever seen.,张老师是我曾经遇到的最仁慈的教师。那是我们曾经住过的最昂贵的旅馆。那是我所看过的最有趣的电影。“茶馆”是我们所看过的最好的戏剧。悉尼是我所参观过的最美的城市。,Mr.Zhang is the kindest teacher that I have ever had.That is the most expensive hotel that we have ever stayed in.That is the most interesting film that I have ev

17、er seen.Tea House is the best play that we have ever seen.Sydney is the most beautiful city that Ive ever visited.,二、Nothing is+er than to+V.Nothing is+more+形容词+than to+V.,例句：没有比接受教育更重要的事了。Nothing is more important than to receive education.,没有比上大学更令人激动的事了。没有比学习数学更困难的事了。没有比在河里游泳更有趣的事了。没有比执行这项政策更紧急的事

18、了。工作一整天之后，没有比休息更有必要的事了。,Nothing is more exciting than to go to college.Nothing is more difficult than to learn maths.Nothing is more interesting than to swim in a river.Nothing is more urgent than to carry on the policy.Nothing is more necessary than to have a rest after a whole days work.,三、cannot

19、emphasize the importance of too much.（再怎么强调.的重要性也不为过。）,例句：我们再怎么强调保护眼睛的重要性也不为过。We cannot emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much.,我们再怎么强调道路安全的重要性也不为过。如果我们想把英语学好，我们怎么强调阅读的重要性也不为过。我们再怎么强调勤奋的重要性也不为过。为了保持健康，我们再怎么强调食品质量的重要性也不为过。,We cannot emphasize the importance of road safety too much.W

20、e cannot emphasize the importance of reading too much,if we want to learn English well.We cannot emphasize the importance of diligence too much.To keep ourselves healthy,we cannot emphasize the importance of food quality too much.,四、There is no denying the fact+that从句（不可否认的.）,例句：不可否认的，我们的生活质量已经每况愈下。

21、There is no denying the fact that the qualities of our living have gone from bad to worse.,不可否认，我们的日常生活费用在逐日上升。不可否认，快餐已经成为现代生活的一部分。无可否认，私家车确实给我们的生活带来了方便。不可否认，父母的过度关心也许会给孩子带来意想不到的效果。,There is no denying the fact that the cost of our daily life is increasing day by day.There is no denying the fact tha

22、t fast food has become part of the modern life.There is no denying the fact that private cars do bring convenience to our life.There is no denying the fact that too much concern from parents may bring unexpected effects on their kids.,五、It is universally acknowledged+that从句(全世界都知道.；众所周知.),例句：全世界都知道树

23、木对我们是不可或缺的。It is universally acknowledged that trees are indispensable to us.,众所周知，空气和水对人类来说非常重要。全世界都知道第29届奥运会将在北京举行。众所周知，在现代，因特网对我们来说是不可或缺的。全世界都知道核武器对人类是非常危险的。,It is universally acknowledged that air and water are very important to man.It is universally acknowledged that the 29th Olympic Games will

24、 be held in Beijing.It is universally acknowledged that the internet is indispensable to us in modern times.It is universally acknowledged that nuclear weapons are dangerous to human beings.,七、An advantage of is+that 从句（.的优点是.）,例句：使用太阳能的优点是它不会制造任何污染。An advantage of using the solar energy is that it

25、wont create(produce)any pollution.,使用温室的优点是它能够生产更多的蔬菜。使用e-mail的优点是它不会浪费纸张。使用因特网的优点是我们能在任何时候寻找我们所需要的信息。使用飞机的好处是它能够节省时间。在线购物的好处是它方便、省时。,An advantage of using the green house is that it can produce more vegetables.An advantage of using e-mail is that it wont waste any paper.An advantage of using the in

26、ternet is that we can look for any information we need at any time.An advantage of using the plane is that it can save time.An advantage of shopping on line is that it is convenient and can save time.,八、The reason why+句子 is+that从句（.的原因是.）,例句：我们必须种树的原因是它们能供应我们新鲜的空气。The reason why we have to grow tree

27、s is that they can provide us with fresh air.（they can supply fresh air for us）,他失败的原因是他拒绝听从我的劝告。他哭的原因是他对结果非常失望。他没有通过考试的原因是他没有努力学习功课。我们激动的原因是我们将有一个三天的假期。,The reason why he failed is that he refused to listen to my advice.The reason why he cried is that he was very disappointed at the result.The reas

28、on why he didnt pass the exam is that he didnt work hard at his lessons.The reason why we are excited is that we will have a three-day holiday.,九、So+形容词+be+主词+that从句（如此.以致于.）,例句：时间是如此珍贵，我们经不起浪费它。So precious is time that we cant afford to waste it.,他是如此生气以致于说不出一句话来。那个男孩如此可爱，我们大家都喜欢他。我们学校如此美丽，以致于我们都为它

29、骄傲。他一直如此努力地学习，所以迅速取得了进步。光线运行如此之快，以致于我们很难想象它的速度。,So angry is he that he cant speak a word.So lovely is the boy that we all like him.So beautiful is our school that we are all proud of it.So hard has he been working that he has made rapid progress.So fast does light travel that it is difficult for us

30、to imagine its speed.,十、adj+as+subject（主词）+be,S+V（虽然.）,例句：虽然我们的国家富有，我们的生活质量绝对令人不满意。Rich as our country is,the qualities of our living are by no means satisfactory.by no means=in no way=on no account 一点也不,虽然他还是个孩子，他却懂得很多东西。虽然他们都很累了，但他们都不愿停下来休息。虽然我已经老了，可我还能战斗。尽管他个子高，他也够不到那架子上的苹果。虽然这项任务很困难，他们还是设法按时完成了。

31、,Child as he is,he knows a lot.Tired as they were,they wouldnt stop to have a rest.Old as I am,I can still fight.Tall as he was,he couldnt reach the apple on the shelf.Difficult as the task was,they managed to accomplish it in time.,十句作文与三段式 Changes in Peoples Diet There have been many changes nowad

32、ays in the diet of the Chinese.(1)主题句 For example,grain,the main food of most people in China,is now playing a less important role,while the high nutrition food such as milk,meat,has increased.(2)扩展句 The changes in peoples diet can be accounted for by a number of factors.(3)主题句 First,people are much

33、 wealthier than before.(4)扩展句 With a higher income,they can afford to buy good foods.(5)扩展句,Another factor is that people have realized the importance of a balanced diet to their health.(6)扩展句 Lack of certain amount of neat or milk,for example,will result in poor health.(7)扩展句 Finally,meat and mile,

34、are produced in large quantities.(8)扩展句 For all those reasons,what was formerly called“the basket of vegetables”has become that of varied foods.(9)扩展句 We believe that there will be greater changes in peoples diet in the future.(10)主题句,练习由于目前我国各地教育水平发展不平蘅，导致高考各省市录取分数线差别很大，基于这种状况，出现了高考移民现象针对这一现象谈谈你的看法

35、,Nowadays the development of education varies from place to place,which causes in different provinces the scores for the enrollment are quite different,and that can even go up to more than 100.Many parents or students think out a way to solve the problemimmigrate to other places,where the enrollment

36、 scores are lower.I think it is unfair.As we know,to enter an ideal university,a student will give it everything he or she has.The efforts that every student makes are nearly the same.But at different places,the same scores lead to different results.,But at different places,the same scores lead to d

37、ifferent results.For example,a student in Beijing with lower scores will enter a university,while a student from Shandong has to get much higher scores to enter the same one.The government should take some measures to solve this problem so that every student has the same right to receive education a

38、nd has the equal chance to enter a university.,练习假如你叫李华，是一名大学生，对近年来大学生就业情况颇有己见，请根据下面提供的信息给写一封信，并谈谈你的看法,Dear Editor,I am writing to you to talk about taking up occupations for college graduates.Nowadays,many graduates are looking forward to obtaining employment in big cities,not willing to work in th

39、e countryside.As a matter of fact,there are not enough opportunities to satisfy most of the hunters in big cities while in the countryside talented people are badly needed and a lot of posts are waiting for us.,Rural areas are a vast world,you can put your abilities to good use and youll be able to

40、make greater contributions to the building of new countryside.Therefore,I believe we can have as bright a future in the countryside as we have in the city.Yours,Li Hua.,议论文表达模板不同观点列举型1）有一些人认为 另一些人认为 我的看法 The topic of-is becoming more and more popular recently.There are two sides of opinions of it.So

41、me people say A is their favorite.They hold their view for the reason of-,whats more moreover While others think that B is a better choice in the following reasons:Firstly,Secondly(besides).Thirdly(finally)As far as I an concerned,I firmly support the view that-.,练习某网站就社会上普遍关注的“大学新生报到时，家长是否送他们到学校”这一

42、问题开展一次讨论。有人认为应该送，如：缺少社会经验；带贵重物品不安全；帮忙安排宿舍有人认为不该送：是锻炼的好机会，孩子能应付各种困难；不能一切都为孩子做等为此，写一篇文章，并阐述自己的观点,Recently a discussion about whether it is necessary for parents to accompany their children to the university was held on a website,and the opinions are divided.Some people think that it is necessary for p

43、arents to accompany them because it is the first time that they have left their homes and they know little about the outside world.In addition,they argue that it is not safe for them to take money and some other valuables with them all by themselves.Finally,parents can help arrange their belongings

44、in dorms when they arrive.,However,the others hold a different view.They think going to university alone is good for them.Though they may come across difficulties on the way,they are old enough to deal with them.Besides,parents cant do everything for them.In my opinion,parents shouldnt accompany the

45、ir children to university because students entering university are grown-ups who can take care of themselves.,05 NMET 2 假设你是李华，最近国内一家英文报纸正在讨论北京动物园是否应迁出市区。以下是你所在班级的讨论情况。请你给该报写一封信，反映讨论结果。,June 3,2005,Dear Editor,Recently,our class have had a heated discussion about whether the Beijing Zoo should be mo

46、ved out of the city.,05 NMET 2(23)June 3,2005,Dear Editor,Recently,our class have had a heated discussion about whether the Beijing Zoo should be moved out of the city.Some of my classmates are in favor of the move.They say large crowds of tourists to the zoo will result in traffic jams.They also sa

47、y that once moved,animals will have more space and better living conditions in the suburbs.,However,other students are against the idea,saying that the Beijing Zoo,built in 1906,has a history of 100 years,and is well-known at home and abroad.So it should remain where it is.Whats more,moving may caus

48、e the deaths of some animals.To move or not,this is a big decision which has to be made by people in Beijing.Yours truly,Li Hua,高三年级对如何填报志愿做了一项调查,结果如下,简要介绍调查结果发表你的看法.词数150左右.,Recently a survey was conducted among the students in one school about how to choose their courses and universities.Senior mi

49、ddle school graduates of our school have different opinions about it.About 35%of the students believe the choice should be based on their own interests.They say interest is the mother of success.It is a miserable thing to have to spend most of your time studying what you have no interest in.,Most st

50、udents(around 45%),however,insist that main consideration should be given to the needs of the society,for,they argue,not everyone can find the job they like best.Besides,interest can be born and lost.In my opinion,its really difficult to make a choice and would rather depend on their parents or teac