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1、作文实例,2003年作文,Directions:Study the following set of drawings carefully and write an essay in which you should describe the set of drawings,interpret its meaning,and point out its implications in our life.You should write about 200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.（20 points）,It goes without saying that

2、 the drawings aim at revealing a common and serious problem in China:how to educate and cultivate the young.Lets take a closer look at the drawings.In an ideal condition,the flower blooms.But when moved out of the green house,it perishes under the rain and storm.It is obvious that the flower in gree

3、nhouse cant withstand wind and rains.,Nowadays the young generation in China,like the flower in the greenhouse,live under the full protection from their parents.Parents want to show all their love to their children.They give their children all the best things they can afford and do not let their chi

4、ldren do anything at home.Self-centeredness and arbitrariness have become a trait of the young generation.Once leaving their parents,many young people cannot make a living of their own.They get lost when stepping into the complex reality and cannot face any hardships and difficulties.,Children educa

5、tion has become one of the most popular topics discussed not only by education experts,but also by people in all walks of life.The failure of children education does more harm to the development of our society and our civilization than to children themselves.Thus,its high time that parents,educators

6、 and the government made concerted efforts to put an end to this situation.,注意一：选词要精,I think?I believe/argue/hold/insist/maintainAs far as I am concerned/When it comes to me/In my opinion/In my viewIt goes without saying that/There is no denying the fact that,王立非，张岩，2007，p.110,Hyland,2006,p.61Phrase

7、s in a HK Learner Corpus,Frequency of phrases per 50,000 words,如何对待“万能句型”,Directions:,Write an essay of 160200 words based on the following drawing.In your essay,you should1)describe the drawing briefly,2)explain its intended meaning,and then3)support your view with an example/examples.You should wr

8、ite neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.(20points),As we can see from the picture,a football match is going on.On guarding the door,the left man seems to be keeping a“huge door”that is easy and inevitable for a goal,while the right person hesitates to kick the ball with an illusion about the“huge door keeper”.

9、It is obvious that both of them exaggerate the difficulties in front of them.,This photo does reflect a thought-provoking social phenomenon which is not uncommon in China now.The young always give up because the problem is beyond their ability to cope with.Superficially,it seems to be somewhat reaso

10、nable,but when weighing in the mind,we find there is an apparent tendency underlying this phenomenon:the lack of confidence.,Firstly,it is well-known that we exist in a dynamic world with various difficulties.We can do nothing but face them.Secondly,attitude is the key point to take the first step.A

11、ssume bravery and confidence to solve the problem,you will find the question is not as“huge”as you imagine.,Take us for example,the entrance exam for graduate students even seems to be a horrible monster before us.Some people may give up,some persist.So,with confidence and the right assessment of th

12、e difficulties,try and exert your strength,and then we will overcome all problems.,On the whole,I believe we young people should face the difficulties in right manner.And nothing is impossible,just do it.,注意三：段落结构,注意三：段落结构,启承转合,字数分配,开头段,主题句；展开句（12句）；小结句。,中间段的展开方法,1、列举法(Listing),first,second,third.la

13、stfirstly,secondly,thirdly.finallyto begin with,whats more,in the endfirst of all,then,next,moreover,furthermore.in the first place,in the second place,last but not least,2、举例法(Exemplification),for example,for instance,such as,like a good case in point isThere are many examples to prove.Here I will

14、cite just a few.There is enough/convincing/sufficient evidence to prove.Take.as an example.,3、比较对比法(Comparison and Contrast),just as,in comparison,like,similarly,likewise,correspondingly,similar toin contrast,on the other hand,on the contrary,unlike,whereas,but,however,yet,whileThere are some simila

15、rities/differences between.have something/little in common with.,4、因果法(Cause and Effect),because,because of,since,now that,owing to,due to cause,result in,lead to,therefore,thus,consequently,as a result,as a consequenceThe reasons why.can be traced to.The causes for.are as follows.,结尾段,1、解决问题，展望未来,A

16、s far as I am concerned,we should do something to prevent such an evil phenomenon from happening again.To begin with,all the society should condemn such a wrongdoing and these children should be punished by law.Whats more,every citizen must realize it is our duty to support our parents when they are

17、 old.Only with the joint efforts can we hope to solve this problem.,Therefore,it is imperative for us to take drastic measures.For one thing,we should appeal to our authorities to make strict laws to control commercial fishing.For another,we should enhance the awareness of people that the ocean reso

18、urces are vital to our survival.Only in this way can we protect our ocean resources.Also,I believe that we human beings can overcome this difficulty,and we will have a bright future.,2、总结归纳,I dare say that our society is suffering corruption and cheat which are causing damage to society both materia

19、lly and morally.But the hen and her like should know that by dishonest words no one could survive the intense competition in the market economy.They should remember the old saying,Honesty is the best policy.,So to sum up,we should offer our help to all who are in need.We expect to get love from othe

20、rs and we also give love to others.I believe that the relationship between people will be harmonious and our society will be a better place for us to live in.,注意四：文章脉络清晰,As is vividly described in the two pictures,many young people are fans of stars and they try every means to show their adoration.T

21、he first photo shows a face of a guy who has the name“Beckham”a famous British footballer written on his face,while in the second picture another guy spends 300 yuana big sum of money for many people doing a hairstyle of Beckham.,The photos clearly reveal a serious and pervasive social problem nowad

22、ays.First of all,there is no denying that many youngsters want to be famous or rich overnight,therefore their focus is only on the success of the superstars,ignoring the fact that the famous people have to overcome many hardships and difficulties before they attain their success.A case in point is B

23、eckham or Liu Xiang.,Whats more,following the footsteps of superstars will waste the youngsters precious time.They are at a prime time to learn new knowledge and lay a solid foundation for their future career.Sheer adoration of stars will ruin their study and their future.,Last but not least,some st

24、ars are not the ideal idols for young people,for example,the famous footballer Maradona used to abuse drugs.This,of course,has a negative effect on the development of the young people.,In my point of view,effective measures must be taken to correct this situation.It is the responsibility of the auth

25、orities to educate the young people to achieve success in a correct way.Meanwhile,the younger generation should redirect their adoration for stars to hard work,thus making greater contributions to the society.,注意五：题材,一、问题解决型,1、1997,2、1998,3、1999,4、2000,5、2003,6、2005,7、2006,二、积极弘扬型,1、2001,2、2002,3、2004,三、客观分析型,1、2006,2、2007,