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1、,第一节,If you want something you never had,you have to do something you have never done!,QQ：3328222985,毕云 Brittany,Warm Up,How do you think writing should be prepared?要不要记忆素材？要不要背模板？要要要,上,从第一个字开始计算字数?脑子一片空白？,刑场什么感觉,考,China Dream has long/current been a heated topic.That Chinese achieve China dream has

2、 long been a hot topic.,大作文分类之横看成岭,1、教育2、建筑3、科技4、旅游5、交通6、文化7、环境8、传媒9、政府（5,10%）10、社会11、抽象（快乐，成功）,社会类包括：食品安全，快乐生活，男女平等平分家务；大城市生活,社会,政府,教育,2015作文分布,教育 27%,社会21.2%,政府11.5%,2015作文题目汇总,雅思作文之横看成岭侧成峰,大作文分类之侧成峰,1、原因措施/原因结果/问题措施In many countries,a high proportion of criminal acts are committed by teenagers.Wh

3、at are the reasons and what do you suggest to solve this problem？2、一石二鸟（kill two birds with one stone）:混合题目例如：政府+教育2016.1.9;犯罪与教育；传媒与犯罪等Some people think that the government should invest more money in teaching science than other subjects for the progress of the country.To what extent do you agree o

4、r disagree?3、优势弊端，消极积极影响2015.1.29 Scientists and tourists travel to remote natural environments,such as the South Pole.Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?,4、讨论双方，发表意见2015.1.17 Some people think that the amount of noise people make have to be controlled strictly while other say th

5、at people are free to make as much noise as they wish.Discuss both views and give your opinion.5、同意不同意2015.1.10 The leaders or directors of organizations are often older people.But some people say that young people can also be a leader.Do you agree or disagree?,教育3、Some people believe that studying

6、in a college or university is the best way for students to prepare for their future career.Others think they should leave school as soon as possible to develop their career through work experience.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.2013.3.9 大学教育对就业的帮助4、universities and colleges are now off

7、ering qualifications through distance learning from the Internet rather than teachers in the classroom.Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?2013.3.2 远程教育好坏,5、Some people think that older school children should learn a wide range of subjects to acquire more knowl

8、edge,while other people believe they should learn a small number of subjects in details.Discuss both views and give your opinions.2013.4.27 通才还是专才6、Some people think it is important for all children to learn history in school.Others believe that other subjects are more relevant to childrens lives to

9、day.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.2013.5.18 是否应该学习历史7、Some people think family has the most powerful influence on childrens development.Others，however,believe that other things have greater effects.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.2013.6.15 家庭教育重要吗？8、Some people think seco

10、ndary school students should learn international news as one of their subjects,while others believe that this is a waste of valuable time.Discuss both views and give your own opinion2013.6.22 学生应该学国际新闻9、Many parents these days work in other countries,taking their families with them.Do you think adva

11、ntages of the development outweigh its disadvantages?2013.10.19,10、As part of education,students should spend a period of time studying and living in a different county to learn language and culture.To what extent do you agree or disagree?2013.11.21 学生应该在国外生活一段时间学习国外的语言文化11、Children find it difficul

12、t to concentrate on or pay attention to their study in school.What are the reasons?How can we solve this problem?2014.1.18 学生不能专注学习的原因解决措施12、Childrens education is expensive.In some countries,the government pays some or all of the costs.Do the advantages outweigh its disadvantages?2014.2.22 义务教育以及免费

13、教育，教育很贵13、Some people think that all young people should be required to have full-time education until they are at least 18 years old.To what extent do you agree or disagree？2014.3.8 18岁之前强制教育14、Some people believe the purpose of education is to prepare people to be useful members for society.Others

14、 say that the purpose of education is to achieve personal ambitions.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.2014.4.12 教育的功能是成为栋梁或者满足个人雄心,15、Some people think that children can learn efficiently by watching television.Therefore,children should be encouraged to watch TV regularly both at school a

15、nd at home.To what extent do you agree or disagree？2014.5.17 看电视是否应该被鼓励对儿童教育来说16、Many young people leave school with a negative attitude towards learning.What are the reasons and how can we encourage them to study?2014.5.24 学生厌学的原因以及解决措施17、Some people think adults should learn practical skills by th

16、emselves,while others think they should learn with teachers in the classroom.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.2014.6.19 成人实际能力（成人教育）提升靠自己还是靠老师18、Some people say that it is better to teach language students in small classes,while others think the number of people does not matter.Discuss b

17、oth views give your own opinion 2014.12.4 英语授课大班还是小班19、somepeople think painting and drawings are as inprotant as other subjects,and they should be compulsory in high school education.To what extent do you agree or disagress?2014.12.20 学生应该学习画画20、In some countries many young people choose to work or

18、 travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies.Discuss,the advantages and disadvantages.2015.2.28 间隔年21、Some working parents believe childcare centers can provide best care for children,while others think family members like grandparents can do it better.Discuss bot

19、h views and give your opinion 2015.3.14 谁来管孩子，幼儿园还是祖父母22、Some people think that only the best students should be rewarded.Others,however,think that it is more important to reward students who show improvements.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion2015.4.18 最好的学生还是进步最大的学生应该收到表扬23、Some pe

20、ople believe that in order to improve educational quality,we should encourage students to make comments or even criticism on their teachers,but others think it will lead to the loss of respect and discipline in the classroom.Discuss both views and give your own opinion 2015.5.16 是否应该挑战教师权威,24、It is

21、suggested that young adults should undertake a period of unpaid work in the community.Does it bring more benefits or drawbacks to the community and young people?2015.7.4 年轻人应该参加公益25、Some people say that the best way to let children know the danger of crimes is for them to be educated by those who we

22、re once in prison but now have become good citizens.2015.8.8 让罪犯来教育小孩26、Students in school or university can learn more from classes and teachers than from other sources(e.g.the Internet or TV）.To what extent do you agree or disagree?2015.9.12 学校教育最重要,27、In some countries,schools provide general edu

23、cation with a wide range of subjects,while in some other countries,students learn a narrow range of subjects related to a particular career.Which one is more appropriate in todays world?2015.10.8 学生是否应该多学科目28、Some people say that playing computer games is bad for children in every aspect,while other

24、s think it has positive effects on childrens development.Discuss both views and give your opinion.电子游戏是否有利于小孩的发展29、Some school leavers go traveling or work for a period of time instead of going directly to university.Do you think there are more advantages or disadvantages for their studies？间隔年 2015.

25、11.7,303132、对孩子而言，读书比看电视和玩电子游戏更好。Reading stories in books is better for children than watching televison or playing computer games.To what extent do you agree or disagree?,教育,谁来教？家长（爷爷奶奶）V.S.老师（学校）政府V.S.社会犯人V.S.学校?为了教育，父母应不应该参加育儿培训？粑粑麻麻谁的角色更重要？,课堂外电视，电子游戏，网络对教育有好处吗？远程教育？长时间学习行么?Gap year?教育与就业？要不要参加课

26、外活动？体育对教育有木有好处？,课堂内教什么偏才V.S.通才历史要不要学？政治要不要学？美术要不要学？能不能挑战老师权威？,教学方法进步最大的还是学习最好的应该被表扬？教育的功能是成为栋梁或者满足个人雄心？义务教育(谁掏钱)？大班小班？国外读语言好不好？,谁来教,Some working parents believe childcare centers(儿童保育中心)can provide best care for children,while others think family members like grandparents can do it better.Discuss bo

27、th views and give your opinion 2015.3.14 谁来管孩子，幼儿园还是祖父母,谁来教？,Some working parents believe childcare centers(儿童保育中心)can provide best care for children,while others think family members like grandparents can do it better.Discuss both views and give your opinion 2015.3.14 谁来管孩子，幼儿园还是祖父母教育引发热议，为什么？Young

28、sters development is essential to the（long-term prosperious）prosperity of a nation in the long run.如果是你，你打算怎么写？题目中暗示哪些点需要做回应（task response）task response:working parents;childcare centers;grandparents;比较；give your opinion,粑粑麻麻去上班，我去幼儿园去幼儿园有什么好处？,1、爸妈忙，没时间照看小孩.working parents.Look after.be busy with.b

29、e occupied with2、基于这个情况，.是个趋势.tend to do.（there is a tendency that.）;given the fact thatGiven the fact that,working parents are usually occupied with full-time jobs,they tend to send their children to the childcare centers3.幼儿园，这个地点，有哪些好处(老师专业，)Given the fact that,working parents are usually occupie

30、d with full-time job,they tend to send their children to the childcare centers where professional teachers are available while children can receive early childhood enlightenment除了得到好的教育还能接触到各种游戏 Given the fact that working parents are usually occupied with full-time job,they tend to send their child

31、ren to the childcare centers where professional teachers are available while children can receive both early childhood enlightenment and get access to a variety of games.,连接词的使用 besides；in addition to;additionally;,4、玩游戏有哪些好处Whats more,children will benefit a lot from playing games5、举例子.is(being)one

32、 of this example，手眼协调能力Whats more,children will benefit a lot from playing games,taking baseball for instance.Their hand-eye coordination is well developed during the competitions.6、其他好处?7、团队合作，如何与同伴相处，促进，given a boost to社交能力 peer pressure8、Besides,team sports will definitely give a boost to cultiva

33、ting team spirits meanwhile providing kids the possibility to learn how to get along with others(their peers).Nevertheless,those who are nurtured at home are less likely to develop such certain skills.,去幼儿园的坏处儿园,过度句 Though various advantages of kindergarten mentioned above,its undesirable effects sh

34、ould not be ignored.1.老师精力有限，不是每个学生都能得到无微不至的照顾 面对这一现状faced with，结果是学生没法得到.本应该有的关心Firstly,faced with the limited resources available in the kindergarten,it turns out that child can not receive the equal treatment,not to mention the expected considerate caring.虐童.abuseBesides,some nurseries proved/rep

35、orted to have abusing scandals 使家长很担心，用主语从句Besides,that some nurseries proved to have abusing scandals worries parents a lot.,论点2 综上，另一个观点是可以理解的（另外一种趋势是被理解的）,祖父母溺爱Thus it is understandable that home nurturing enjoys popularity than ever before.However,in my opinion,family members,especially the gran

36、dparents are more likely to spoil their grandson or granddaughter in a more material way.Exposed to such floods of spoiling,no wonder that there is an increasing number of youngsters misbehave when compared with their parents who are well-disciplined.二孩政策放开，最大的阻碍来自哪里？老大why?小孩学会分享，不自私 sharing，selfish

37、.以自己为中心，认为是理所应当due to lack of experience in playing with their peers,home-educated children are always self-centered,having no idea of sharing plus taking everything they have for granted.,结尾,As all the factors mentioned above,the positive effects of being educated in kindergarten far outweighs that

38、 of learning at home.,应不应该学政治新闻,Some people think secondary school students should learn international news as one of their subjects,while others believe that this is a waste of valuable time.Discuss both views and give your own opinion2013.6.22 学生应该学国际新闻What was your favorite subject when you were

39、a secondary student,how about international news?Recently,whether juveniles should learn international news as a subject has arisen a wide spread topic under discussions.看新闻是趋势 tendency，tend to;接触新闻 get access to;People who support this idea may argue that it is a definite tendency for youngsters to

40、 get access to the global news since the past several decades had witnessed tremendous changes in the complex relationships among countries.,读新闻的人更受欢迎；拓宽学生视野，促进give a boost to 学生的成熟 maturity；Global news enjoyed increasing popularity among teenagers.Thus,young individuals who are familiar with intern

41、ational news are more likely to make friends.In addition,the global related information can help to broad our horizons,giving a boost to the mind maturity of youngsters,by offering overall views.反对学国际新闻依然有道理 make senseHowever,if we take a look at the opposite viewpoints,we may also find that it make

42、 sense.,理想是美好的，现实是残酷的given the fact that,学生时间都是被其他科目占满了这些科目为什么这么重要?升学要考面对这么紧张的学业压力学生不大可能挤出时间学新科目 Given the fact that students in secondary schools are always occupied by major subjects,like math,English,physics,which account for a large proportion in their entrance tests proceeding to the next perio

43、d.So it is understandable when young guys are expected to focus on these crucial subjects.Faced with a lot of homework and academic pressure,students are less likely to spare time for a new subject.,国际化跟我有毛关系，我还是土鳖一只，在本地住 Besides,regardlessofglobalization,mostofuslivelocallyratherthanglobally,whichm

44、eansthatstudyinginternationalnewscanbeawasteoftimeformanyinthefuture.而且政治给人一种boring 的感觉Whats more,relating to political affairs,international news leaves the public the boring impression,which is of little attractive to teenagers.,学什么谁应该说了算,priority Nevertheless,when it comes to my perspective,the p

45、riority of deciding what to learn should rely more on the students themselves.(Asforme,Ithinkthatthisproposalgoestoofarbeyondareasonableconsiderationforcurriculumdesign.)想学的应该如何对待，不想学的应该如何对待想学的多给支持，不想学的不要逼迫When certain subjects are available at schools,those who are interested in global news should

46、be exposed to more related materials and supports while who shows little interest should not be forced to learn.(281),其他观点补充,Nonetheless,schoolcurriculumcannotincludeeveryimportantaspectofhumanwisdom.Instead,itisthosedomainsthatofferfundamentalknowledgeandskillssuchasmathandscienceorbasicwaysofthink

47、inglikephilosophyandliteraturethatshouldbeconsideredtobecompulsoryforschoolchildrentomakeefforton.Homework：Some people think all children learn history in school is important;some others think learning subjects more relevant to life is important.Discuss both views and give your opinion.（2013.05.18）,

48、是否应该学单一科目 素材积累,some people it is uncessary for students to learn.that is not relevant to their lives.They should put their efforts in a more useful subjects for better individual development.If a student want to be an engineer,they should concentrate on the study of science subjects.If they want to

49、study abroad,they should work hard on improving their English skills.No company or university will consider the students knowledge of history in job interview or enrollment of universities.,which is considered as essential for enhancing their sence of honor.by analysizing the causes and effects of 2

50、 world wars,people would better cherish(are more likely to worth)the peace today and prevent such disasters happening again.curriculum design;elimination of XXX subject.,They presume that history is about everything that happened in the past;therefore has nothing to do with our present life which ha