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1、英语写作 胡朝慧制作,高职高专商务英语系列教材,索引,英语写作,English Writing,英语写作,高职高专商务英语系列教材,Teaching Aims,Skill-training Objectives.The students are expected to get to familiar with the Basic English Writing Skills.Knowledge objectives The Basic skills of English Writing.Important&Difficult Points 1.words and phrases.2.sente

2、nce structures.3.paragraphs writing.4.know figures of speech.Approach Interactive teaching,discussion,questions and answers.,Chapter 1,Step 4,Step 2,Step 1,Introduction,Presentation,Discussion,Exercises,Chapter 1,Step 1 Introduction Basic English Writing Skills In English writing,It is one of the ba

3、sic skills of mastering the idiom usage of words and phrases.No matter in written or oral English,words and phrases are the general elements in expression.Meanwhile,well-written sentences can make your writing more clear and attractive.A good sentence to be equal to construct a good paragraph.A good

4、 paragraph needs a good sentence.Therefore,it is advisable to use appropriate sentence structures to express your ideas more briefly and efficiently.To be a good writer,it is necessary to grasp the basic skills of writing.,英语写作,高职高专商务英语系列教材,Chapter 1,Step 2 Presentation How to use Synonyms 1.To use

5、synonyms to add flavor to your writing.Your writing will be boring if you use the same word over and over.2.Exchange the common nouns for a synonyms if you want to be more specific.3.Check the meaning of the synonyms you use in a dictionary so you dont use the wrong word by accident.4.Use a thesauru

6、s to pick synonyms to enhance your writing.,英语写作,高职高专商务英语系列教材,Chapter 1,Make Good Sentences 1.Try to make short sentences.2.Correct in sentence structure.3.Correct in grammar.4.Use the active voice rather than passive voice.,英语写作,高职高专商务英语系列教材,Chapter 1,Make Good Paragraphs 1.Unity:state the main ide

7、a of the paragraph in clearly constructed topic sentence.Make sure each sentence is related to the central thought.2.Coherence:Arrange ideas in a clear,logical order.Provide appropriate transitions to the subsequent paragraph.3.Adequate development:develop your paragraph with specific details and ex

8、amples.,英语写作,高职高专商务英语系列教材,Chapter 1,Definition Figures of speech are special terms in language.They add color and interest to our speech and writing.Common figures of speech include the following:Metaphor;Metonymy;Personification;Paradox;Simile;Hyperbole;Parallelism.This shows the same statement,wit

9、hout and then with figures of speech:plain languageHe ran quickly down the street.with a simileHe ran like a hare down the street.with a metaphorHe hared down the street.,英语写作,高职高专商务英语系列教材,Figures of speech,Chapter 1,英语写作,高职高专商务英语系列教材,How are the paragraphs developed in various ways?What is the diff

10、erence between simile and metaphor?How to expand a sentence?,Step 3 Discussion Topics,Chapter 1,英语写作,高职高专商务英语系列教材,Step 4 ExerciseI.Choose suitable words given to complete the following sentences.1.free,freely,freedom a.He wants to live a life _from troubles.b.They fought for national _.c.You can spe

11、ak _ in front of me.2.science,scientist,scientific a.Most of the Nobel Prize winners are _.b.His name is known to many in the _ circles.c.We are living in a world of modern _.3.relate,relative,relation a.My uncle is one of my nearest_.b.there is no _ between those two events.c.Does what you say _ to

12、 what you have done?,Chapter 1,英语写作,高职高专商务英语系列教材,4.assure,ensure,insure.a.We tried to _ the nervous old lady that flying was safe.b.Insurance companies will_ ships and their cargoes against loss at sea.c.I cannot _ his being there in time.5.accept,acceptable,acceptance a.Is this program _ to you?b.T

13、he _ of the proposal is under discussion.c.He asked her to marry him and she _ him.Keys:1.a.freely b.freedom c.freely 2.a.scientists.b.scientific c.science 3.a.relative b.relation c.relate 4.a.assure b.insure c.ensure 5.a.acceptable,b.acceptance,c.accepted,Chapter 1,英语写作,高职高专商务英语系列教材,II.Correct the

14、following sentences by replace the jargon expressions with your own words and phrases.1.Tom did not have enough expertise to fill the new position of management.2.I need his financial input before I can guesstimate our expenditures next fall.3.If you dont breath,then you ll die.4.The students consci

15、ous kept him cheating in the exam.5.She lead the campers on an over-night hike.keys:1.skills,2.help,3.breathe,4.conscience,5.ledIII.Replace the underlined general words and phrases with specific ones.1.My father can repair almost anything.2.In the supermarket,a lot of things are sold.3.We live in a

16、nice village 4.His relatives gave him some gifts.5.The girl is crying Keys:(1)bicycles,radios,TV sets(2)Various fruits,food and clothes,(3)in a small,beautiful village,(4)His uncle gave him a watch on his birthday.(5)The girl is crying for failure of the game VI.(Omitted),Chapter 1,英语写作,高职高专商务英语系列教材

17、,V.Write SV,SLVC,SVO,SVIODO,SVOC after each of the following sentences.1.She has been looking for her lost book 2.We smelled the material burning.3.You must get everything ready before seven.4.He bought his son an expensive car.5.A bird in hand is worth two in bush Keys:1.S-V-O 2.SLVC 3.SVOC 4.SVIOD

18、O 5.SV VI.Decide whether each of the following sentences is a simple,compound or complex sentence.1.She was aged six when she first went to school.2.Where there is life there is hope.3.You werent at the meeting yesterday to hear what other people thought about this problem.4.You can either write to

19、me or call me in my office 5.We must hurry,or we ll be late for school.Keys:plex,2.simple,plex,pound,pound,Chapter 1,英语写作,高职高专商务英语系列教材,VII.Choose the best one to complete the sentence.1.Go to see the doctor,_your cold may get worse.A.but B.while C.either D.or2.The girl _ serves in the hotel is the o

20、wners daughter.A.which B.who C.what D.how3.I clean the room _ you were getting the dinner.A.because B.if C.while D.and4.He tried hard,_ he was unsuccessful.A.therefore B.but C.or D.unless5.We wont change our minds _ happens.A.which B.it C.however D.whatever.6.John seized Daniel by both his hand _ he

21、 appeared in the street.A.as long as B.each time C.the moment D.not until7.Most plants need air _ they need water.A.just as B.as long as C.as though D.even if8.It was necessary to extend the factory building _ the company was doing more and more business.A until B.lest C.although D.as9._ we have no

22、money,we cant buy a freezer.A until B.lest C.although D.as10._difficult it may be,we can finish it in time.A.Whatever B.No matter who C.No matter how D.No matter whatkeys:1.D 2.B.3.C 4.B 5.D 6.C 7.A 8.D 9.B 10.C,Chapter 1,英语写作,高职高专商务英语系列教材,VIII.Choose the correct verbs to complete the sentences.1.Ei

23、ther of those movies(is,are)worth seeing 2.None of the students(was,were)could answer the question3.Visiting an airport to watching incoming planes(is,are)a pleasure to many people.4.The boxes of cake(was,were)given to Patricia on her birthday.5.One of the restaurant guests(needs,need)a telephone di

24、rectory and a cup of coffee.6.Five gallons of gasoline(is,are)all I can afford.7.A pen and a ball-pen(is,are)lying on the desk.8.The music(was,were)everything I had expected.9.The bike with yellow fenders and two new tires(is,are)mine.10.The number of automobile accidents(has,have)increasing quickly

25、 in the past ten years.11.The horse as well as its rider(is,are)hungry and thirsty.12.Physics(is,are)an interesting subject.,Keys:(1)is(2)was(3)is(4)were(5)needs(6)is(7)is(8)was(9)is(10)has(11)is(12)is,IX.Choose the correct pronoun to rewrite the following sentences.1.If a person wants to go to coll

26、ege,(he,they)should concentrate on getting a high scholastic average.2.All the students mailed(his,their)letters home.3.If anyone calls me,tell(him,them)to wait until I return from meeting.4.My brother,along with(his,their)roommate is going to the movies.5.Ruth and Mary decide to share(her,their)app

27、le.,Keys:(1)he(2.)their(3)him(4)his(5)their,Chapter 1,英语写作,高职高专商务英语系列教材,Chapter 1,X.Rewrite the following sentences by emphasizing the underlined words or phrases.,1.John saw your brother in the playground 2.I did not go home until six yesterday.3.The trees in the campus were best of all.4.The taxi-

28、driver caught the thief last night.His father could hardly read and write.Keys:1.It was John that who saw your brother in the playground2.Best of all were the trees in the campus3.Not until six did I go home yesterday 4.It was the thief whom that the driver caught last night.5.Hardly could his fathe

29、r read and write,英语写作,高职高专商务英语系列教材,Chapter 1,XI.Fill in the blanks with proper words to emphasize the sentences.1.Lei Fong is _model of Chinese youth.2.Who-can stay in the dark cave for 24 hours alone?3.She _ is to blame for the absent of concert.4.This essay is _ more difficult than that one 5.I _s

30、aid so.Keys:(1)himself(2)himself(3)herself(4)itself(5)do,英语写作,高职高专商务英语系列教材,XII.Add subordinate clauses or phrases to expand these main clause,add the kinds of clauses or phrases named in parentheses.1.None of us know the news(Appositive clause)2.The TV is the latest model(Attributive clause)3.The ma

31、n is tall(Attributive clause)4.He was reading a novel(Adverbial clause)5.The girl is laughing(Participial phrase),Keys:,1.None of us know the news that he will be the president of the company next month 2.The TV is the latest model which it sold well in Europe 3.The man who is sitting near the windo

32、w is tall4.4)He was reading a novel when his wife came from work.5.laughing happily,the girl came into the room with her little dog,Chapter 1,英语写作,高职高专商务英语系列教材,XIII.Combine each of the following pairs sentences into complex sentences 1.Nuclear plants are clean and economical way of producing vast am

33、ounts of much need energy.Local residents are willing to set up with them(if)2.The audience were protesting The concert was canceled.(because)3.He came across the streetmet with his old friend(when)4.She is going to spend her summer holidays in London She has some relatives(where)5.He is the man You

34、ve been looking for.(whom)Keys:1.Nuclear plants are clean and economical way of producing vast amounts of much need energy if local residents are willing to set up with them 2.The concert was canceled because the audience were protesting3.When he came across the street he met with his old friend Joh

35、n 4.She is going to spend her summer holidays in London where she has some relatives live in 5.He is the man whom youve been looking for.,Chapter 1,英语写作,高职高专商务英语系列教材,XVI.Expand the following sentences(Omitted)xv.Choose topic sentences for the following sentences:1.Some of the students like to study

36、alone,but others enjoy studying in groups.Which do you prefer?a.There are several advantages and disadvantages of studying alone.b There are two major ways to study.c.Studying with others is a good idea for three reasons2.I think Internet is very helpful to everyone.a.Some people dont like watching

37、games on Internetb.We can search information by various ways c.He likes go shopping on Internet.3.The increasing number of cars is a serious problem.a.The number of accidents last year increased 15 percent over the year before.b One cause is the great increase in the number of cars on the road.c.The

38、re would be fewer accidents if drivers were more careful.d.Ownership of a car involves a lot of expense.,Chapter 1,英语写作,高职高专商务英语系列教材,4.I enjoy traveling abroada.There are so many traffic jams on my way homeb.Foods are delicious in that hotelc.I can see many beautiful scenery spots during my tripd.Se

39、rvices are slow in that shop.5.He likes reading a.He always search for information on advertisements b.His favorite book is“My grandfathers gift”.c.He wrote many articles for the college magazined.He seldom reads stories on line,Keys:(1).a(2.)c(3)a(4)c(5)b,XVI.Write the topic sentence of each the pa

40、ragraph and try to write the conclusion paragraph of the passage.But what does a successful language learner do?Language learner research shows that successful language learners are similar in many ways._ They do not depend on the book or the teacher they discover their own way to learn the language

41、.Instead of waiting for the teacher to explain.they try to find the patterns and rules for themselves.They are good guessers who look for clues and form their own conclusions._.Therefore,successful language learners do not wait for a chance to use the language;they look for a chance.They find people

42、 who speak the language and they ask these people to correct them when they make a mistake.,Chapter 1,英语写作,高职高专商务英语系列教材,They want to learn the language because they are interested in the language and the people who speak it.It is necessary for them to learn the language in order to communicate with

43、these people and to learn from them.What kind of language learner are you?If you are a successful language learner _,Keys:First,successful language learners are independent learnersSecondly,successful language learning is active learningFinally,successful language learners are learners with a purpos

44、e.What kind of language learner are you?If you are a successful language learner,you have probably been learning independently,actively,and purposefully.On the other hand,if your language learning has been less than successful,you might do well to try some of the techniques outlined above.,XVII.Rear

45、range the following paragraph,changing the order of sentences to make it coherent We left quite early before there was too much traffic.So we parked our bicycles under the trees.After having a two hours swim we had a wonderful lunch in the cool shade under the trees.We got home late and terrible exh

46、austed.Then we went for a walk.We bought some cakes with us for lunch.We saw some beautiful birds and butterflies in the fields.,Keys:Last weekend we went to the countryside to have a picnic.we bought some cakes with us for lunch.We left quite early before there was too much traffic.After about two-

47、hours we came to a nice place.It was near a river,with some big trees beside it.So we parked our bicycles under the trees and went for a swim.After having a two hours swim we had a wonderful lunch in the cool shade under the trees.Then we went for a walk.We saw some beautiful birds and butterflies.A

48、fter walking for about two hour we return home.,Chapter 1,英语写作,高职高专商务英语系列教材,Exercise 5,XVIII,XIX(Omitted)XX.Point out and name all the figure of speech in the following sentences:1.Time like a fashionable host,that slightly shakes his passing guest by the hand.2.She has more goodness in her little f

49、inger than he has in his whole body.3.I told you a thousand times.4.Men fear death,as children fear to go in the dark.5.All the worlds a stage,and all the men and women merely players.6.The waves are mountain high.7.The young actor was tall,dark,and handsome.8.This is a government of the people,by t

50、he people,for the people.9.The wind whistled through the trees.10.A duty dodged is like a debt unpaid.,Keys:(1)personification(2).hyperbole(3)hyperbole(4).similar(5)metaphor(6)hyperbole(7)Parallelism(8)Parallel(9)personification(10)similar,Chapter 1,英语写作,高职高专商务英语系列教材,XXI.Translation the following se