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1、Print1、However, I will live in near my parents and my cousin and I can see them everyday.点评：语法错误，建议将everyday改为every day。错误类型：形容词错误What will my life be like in 20 years首师大附属云岗中学2、Plants help us breathe in carbon dioxide and exhale oxygen, make the air around us is becoming more pure and fresh.点评：more

2、 . pure疑似形容词比较级误用。错误类型：形容词错误What my life will be like in 20 years清华附中丰台学校3、Let us work together to strengthen environmental protection consciousness, make environment clean, the air more pure and fresh and sweet, more lush trees, the river is more clear.点评：more . pure疑似形容词比较级误用。错误类型：形容词错误What my lif

3、e will be like in 20 years清华附中丰台学校4、I want to go to Shanghai for vacation,and Ill probably to Singapore for holiday.点评：请检查for holiday中名词的单复数。错误类型：名词错误What Will My Life Be like in 20 Years丰台七中5、I will buy the house in every counties.点评：请检查every counties，注意名词数的一致性。错误类型：名词错误My Life in20 years十八中左安门分校6、

4、In my spare time, I will read books and travel around to visit the famous building, I can see Good scenery and eat local food.点评：请检查Good，确认大小写正确。错误类型：名词错误My Life in20 years十八中左安门分校7、And, also launched a super new car of environmental protection, name is solar car.点评：car疑似冠词缺失或可数名词单用。错误类型：名词错误What my

5、 life will be like in 20 years清华附中丰台学校8、I will live in my country CHINA.点评：请检查CHINA，确认大小写正确。错误类型：名词错误What My Life Will Be Like In 20 Years东铁营二中9、Ill live in beijing.点评：请检查beijing，确认大小写正确。错误类型：名词错误My future life十八中西马校区10、When I get angry ,It can also make me happy.点评：请检查It，确认大小写正确。错误类型：名词错误My future

6、life十八中西马校区11、I love children so I think I will be an art teacher and I will teach my students how to paint both by hands and by computer.点评：建议将 by hands 改为 by hand。错误类型：名词错误What Will My Life Be Like in Twenty Years长辛店学校12、I plan to design some super softwares that can help people draw beautiful pic

7、tures just as they can imagine.点评：softwares 一般不用复数形式错误类型：名词错误What Will My Life Be Like in Twenty Years长辛店学校13、Because I can see different view .点评：view疑似冠词缺失或可数名词单用。错误类型：名词错误In my future life中国教科院丰台实验学校14、In the future,I will be a businessman and I will be a media companys president.点评：单复数错误，建议将a me

8、dia改为a medium。错误类型：名词错误My life in 20 years黄土岗中学15、I want to be the teacher that are friends with students, so I will still talk to students face to face rather than using social media.点评：请检查friends，注意名词数的一致。错误类型：名词错误What my life will be like in 20 years.丰台二中16、And, At some important Festivals .点评：请检

9、查At，确认大小写正确。错误类型：名词错误What will my life be in 20 Years东铁营一中17、Because i will do a lot of meaningful things .点评：请检查i，确认大小写正确。错误类型：名词错误what will my life be like in 20 years首经贸附中18、Because the car was good and the environmental protection, so very attractive!点评：句子错误，because和so不能同时出现在同一句子中。错误类型：介词错误What

10、my life will be like in 20 years清华附中丰台学校19、In the spare time, I will read books and watch TV.点评：In the spare time疑似介词误用。错误类型：介词错误What will my life be like in the 20 years南苑中学20、Because there are many famous people.点评：疑似连词开头的句子不完整。错误类型：句子不规范What Will My Life Be like in 20 Years丰台七中21、Because there ar

11、e many famous people.点评：本句语法不规范，请检查。错误类型：句子不规范What Will My Life Be like in 20 Years丰台七中22、Because I want to live with my family together.点评：疑似连词开头的句子不完整。错误类型：句子不规范What Will My Life Be like in 20 Years丰台七中23、Because I want to live with my family together.点评：请检查本句完整性。错误类型：句子不规范What Will My Life Be lik

12、e in 20 Years丰台七中24、Because I want to live with my family together.点评：本句语法不规范，请检查。错误类型：句子不规范What Will My Life Be like in 20 Years丰台七中25、I think Ill wear all kinds of color clothes, like jeans ,sports T-shirts .点评：英文标点符号之前无须空格。错误类型：句子不规范What Will My Life Be like in 20 Years丰台七中26、geqingsong点评：请确认句首单词

13、大写。错误类型：句子不规范What Will My Life Be like in 20 Years丰台七中27、Maybe in the other city.点评：请检查句中谓语动词。错误类型：句子不规范What will my life be like in 20 years首师大附属云岗中学28、However, I will live in near my parents and my cousin and I can see them everyday.点评：本句语法不规范，请检查。错误类型：句子不规范What will my life be like in 20 years首师大

14、附属云岗中学29、I will be an interist and I will work in my own office .点评：英文标点符号之前无须空格。错误类型：句子不规范What will My life be like in 20 years首师大附属丽泽中学30、I enioy my job very much because I like saving people.点评：本句语法不规范，请检查。错误类型：句子不规范What will My life be like in 20 years首师大附属丽泽中学31、then I will design my brand.点评：请

15、确认句首单词大写。错误类型：句子不规范My Life in20 years十八中左安门分校32、Then I can use computer management my company.点评：本句语法不规范，请检查。错误类型：句子不规范My Life in20 years十八中左安门分校33、I will dont worry about doing housework.点评：本句语法不规范，请检查。错误类型：句子不规范My Life in20 years十八中左安门分校34、Because every home will have a robot.点评：疑似连词开头的句子不完整。错误类型：

16、句子不规范My Life in20 years十八中左安门分校35、Because every home will have a robot.点评：本句语法不规范，请检查。错误类型：句子不规范My Life in20 years十八中左安门分校36、it is so interesting.点评：请确认句首单词大写。错误类型：句子不规范My Life in20 years十八中左安门分校37、Because it can make me strong and get away from flu.点评：疑似连词开头的句子不完整。错误类型：句子不规范My Life in20 years十八中左安门

17、分校38、Because it can make me strong and get away from flu.点评：本句语法不规范，请检查。错误类型：句子不规范My Life in20 years十八中左安门分校39、on weekend,I often play basketball with my friends.点评：请确认句首单词大写。错误类型：句子不规范My Life in20 years十八中左安门分校40、its a good way to relax.点评：请确认句首单词大写。错误类型：句子不规范My Life in20 years十八中左安门分校41、it can mak

18、e me happy.点评：请确认句首单词大写。错误类型：句子不规范My Life in20 years十八中左安门分校42、My life will be exciting and comfortable .点评：英文标点符号之前无须空格。错误类型：句子不规范My Life in20 years十八中左安门分校43、The exhaust fumes and it, a wind is converted into oxygen, so as not to pollute the environment.点评：本句语法不规范，请检查。错误类型：句子不规范What my life will b

19、e like in 20 years清华附中丰台学校44、Because the car was good and the environmental protection, so very attractive!点评：本句语法不规范，请检查。错误类型：句子不规范What my life will be like in 20 years清华附中丰台学校45、I can swim ever day.点评：本句语法不规范，请检查。错误类型：句子不规范What will my life be like in 20 years卢沟桥中学46、So I can take care of them, do

20、nt let them feel lonely.点评：本句语法不规范，请检查。错误类型：句子不规范What Will My Life Be like in 20 years佟麟阁中学47、In my spare time.点评：本句语法不规范，请检查。错误类型：句子不规范What My Life Will Be Like In 20 Years东铁营二中48、In my spare time.点评：请检查句中谓语动词。错误类型：句子不规范What My Life Will Be Like In 20 Years东铁营二中49、Because my dream is to travel arou

21、nd the world.点评：本句语法不规范，请检查。错误类型：句子不规范What My Life Will Be Like In 20 Years东铁营二中50、Because my dream is to travel around the world.点评：请检查本句完整性。错误类型：句子不规范What My Life Will Be Like In 20 Years东铁营二中51、Because my dream is to travel around the world.点评：疑似连词开头的句子不完整。错误类型：句子不规范What My Life Will Be Like In 2

22、0 Years东铁营二中52、Because I live very happy.点评：疑似连词开头的句子不完整。错误类型：句子不规范What My Life Will Be Like In 20 Years东铁营二中53、Because I live very happy.点评：本句语法不规范，请检查。错误类型：句子不规范What My Life Will Be Like In 20 Years东铁营二中54、Because I live very happy.点评：请检查本句完整性。错误类型：句子不规范What My Life Will Be Like In 20 Years东铁营二中55

23、、This is I feel very happy.点评：本句语法不规范，请检查。错误类型：句子不规范What My Life Will Be Like In 20 Years东铁营二中56、Because our capital is Beijing and itsvery big and beautiful.点评：本句语法不规范，请检查。错误类型：句子不规范My future life十八中西马校区57、Because our capital is Beijing and itsvery big and beautiful.点评：疑似连词开头的句子不完整。错误类型：句子不规范My fut

24、ure life十八中西马校区58、In my spare time.点评：请检查句中谓语动词。错误类型：句子不规范In my future life中国教科院丰台实验学校59、In my spare time.点评：本句语法不规范，请检查。错误类型：句子不规范In my future life中国教科院丰台实验学校60、Because I can see different view .点评：疑似连词开头的句子不完整。错误类型：句子不规范In my future life中国教科院丰台实验学校61、So I will go swimming with my friend, listen to

25、 some music with my family, watch TV with my family.点评：请检查go|listen，疑似双谓语错误。错误类型：句子不规范What will my life be like in 20 years?分院附属学校62、So I will go swimming with my friend, listen to some music with my family, watch TV with my family.点评：本句语法不规范，请检查。错误类型：句子不规范What will my life be like in 20 years?分院附属学

26、校63、We can use it do almost things.点评：本句语法不规范，请检查。错误类型：句子不规范What will my life be like in 20 years?分院附属学校64、We can use it do almost things.点评：请检查can|do，疑似双谓语错误。错误类型：句子不规范What will my life be like in 20 years?分院附属学校65、I thinkbeing a doctor is a meaningful job.点评：本句语法不规范，请检查。错误类型：句子不规范what my life will

27、 be like in 20 years丰台八中66、I think people will thanks me a lot.It makes me very happy点评：本句语法不规范，请检查。错误类型：句子不规范what my life will be like in 20 years丰台八中67、I want to be the teacher that are friends with students, so I will still talk to students face to face rather than using social media.点评：请检查are，确认

28、主谓一致。错误类型：句子不规范What my life will be like in 20 years.丰台二中68、When I in my spare time,I will learn English lauguage.点评：本句语法不规范，请检查。错误类型：句子不规范what my life will be in tweny years中国教科院丰台实验学校69、When I in my spare time,I will learn English lauguage.点评：请检查从句中的谓语动词。错误类型：句子不规范what my life will be in tweny yea

29、rs中国教科院丰台实验学校70、When I in my spare time,I will learn English lauguage.点评：请检查本句完整性。错误类型：句子不规范what my life will be in tweny years中国教科院丰台实验学校71、Because I will travel around the world.点评：疑似连词开头的句子不完整。错误类型：句子不规范what my life will be in tweny years中国教科院丰台实验学校72、Because I will travel around the world.点评：本句语

30、法不规范，请检查。错误类型：句子不规范what my life will be in tweny years中国教科院丰台实验学校73、Because my job is very busy.点评：疑似连词开头的句子不完整。错误类型：句子不规范What will my life be in 20 Years东铁营一中74、Because my job is very busy.点评：请检查本句完整性。错误类型：句子不规范What will my life be in 20 Years东铁营一中75、Because my job is very busy.点评：本句语法不规范，请检查。错误类型：

31、句子不规范What will my life be in 20 Years东铁营一中76、And, At some important Festivals .点评：本句语法不规范，请检查。错误类型：句子不规范What will my life be in 20 Years东铁营一中77、I still remember that day clearly when I first came to my middle school.点评：本句语法不规范，请检查。错误类型：句子不规范An Unforgettable Experience四中璞瑅学校78、Because I will master C

32、hinese, English and Kroean.点评：本句语法不规范，请检查。错误类型：句子不规范What My Life Will Be Like in 20 Years芳星园中学79、i think my job is very good .点评：请确认句首单词大写。错误类型：句子不规范what will my life be like in 20 years首经贸附中80、sometimes, I will have a trip.点评：请确认句首单词大写。错误类型：句子不规范what will my life be like in 20 years首经贸附中81、Because

33、i will do a lot of meaningful things .点评：本句语法不规范，请检查。错误类型：句子不规范what will my life be like in 20 years首经贸附中82、Because i will do a lot of meaningful things .点评：疑似连词开头的句子不完整。错误类型：句子不规范what will my life be like in 20 years首经贸附中83、Every year, I will outbound travels with my parents.点评：请检查本句完整性。错误类型：句子不规范L

34、ife in 20 Years北师大四附中84、But when will my dream come ture ?点评：拼写不规范，建议将ture改为true。错误类型：拼写错误My future life十八中西马校区85、I have to study harder now,in this way ,my dream probably can come ture!点评：拼写不规范，建议将ture改为true。错误类型：拼写错误My future life十八中西马校区86、I will watch many movies because that is my favourate.点评：拼

35、写不规范，建议将favourate改为favourite。错误类型：拼写错误What Will My Life Be Like in Twenty Years长辛店学校87、However,I will live near my parents and I will visit them often, I will never forget my parents.点评：搭配 forget parent 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语。错误类型：搭配错误My future life右安门外国语学校88、Let us work together to strengthen environment

36、al protection consciousness, make environment clean, the air more pure and fresh and sweet, more lush trees, the river is more clear.点评：搭配 strengthen consciousness 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语。错误类型：搭配错误What my life will be like in 20 years清华附中丰台学校89、So I can take care of them, dont let them feel lonely.点评：注意car

37、e for和take care of区别。错误类型：搭配错误What Will My Life Be like in 20 years佟麟阁中学90、People can book tickets office or buy everything they need at home.点评：搭配 book office 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语。错误类型：搭配错误What will my life be like in 20 years?分院附属学校91、I will enjoy my life ,because it will full of love and it will be v

38、ery beautiful.点评：搭配错误，will full of不规范，建议修改。错误类型：搭配错误what my life will be in tweny years中国教科院丰台实验学校92、I will be so relax because I wont need to solve problems.点评：be so relax 疑似动词连用。错误类型：动词错误What Will My Life Be Like in 20 Years民大附中丰台学校93、The original car depends on the gasoline to start, now solar ca

39、r of environmental protection, as long as with the aid of sunlight, then the energy gathered together, can run, but also need not fear not move without sunshine.点评：fear not move 疑似动词连用。错误类型：动词错误What my life will be like in 20 years清华附中丰台学校94、I read a book ,watch TV.点评：watch 疑似动词连用。错误类型：动词错误In my fut

40、ure life中国教科院丰台实验学校95、If I have a lot of time ,I will go travel in other places.点评：建议将travel改为travelling。错误类型：动词错误In my future life中国教科院丰台实验学校96、We can use it do almost things.点评：请检查use it do almost things，确认动词用法正确。错误类型：动词错误What will my life be like in 20 years?分院附属学校97、We can use it do almost thing

41、s.点评：请检查use it do，确认动词用法正确。错误类型：动词错误What will my life be like in 20 years?分院附属学校98、I think people will thanks me a lot.It makes me very happy点评：动词错误，请检查will . thanks。错误类型：动词错误what my life will be like in 20 years丰台八中99、I think people will thanks me a lot.It makes me very happy点评：请检查thanks，确认情态动词用法正确

42、。错误类型：动词错误what my life will be like in 20 years丰台八中100、I will live near my work place,bacause it will not is far for me.点评：请检查will not is，确认情态动词用法正确。错误类型：动词错误what my life will be in tweny years中国教科院丰台实验学校101、I will live near my work place,bacause it will not is far for me.点评：动词错误，请检查will . is。错误类型：动

43、词错误what my life will be in tweny years中国教科院丰台实验学校102、geqingsong点评：请检查geqingsong，确认拼写正确。错误类型：用词错误What Will My Life Be like in 20 Years丰台七中103、I will be an interist and I will work in my own office .点评：请检查interist，确认拼写正确。错误类型：用词错误What will My life be like in 20 years首师大附属丽泽中学104、I enioy my job very mu

44、ch because I like saving people.点评：请检查enioy，确认拼写正确。错误类型：用词错误What will My life be like in 20 years首师大附属丽泽中学105、I will feel exciting when I have a surgery.点评：请检查exciting，注意易混用法的区别。错误类型：用词错误What will My life be like in 20 years首师大附属丽泽中学106、I will save hunman life one by one.点评：请检查hunman，确认拼写正确。错误类型：用词错误What will My life be like in 20 years首师大附属丽泽中学107、My home will be close to the hospital because I can go to work conviniently.点评：请检查conviniently，确认拼写正确。错误类型：用词错误What will My life be like in 20 years首师大附属丽泽中学108、My life will be exciting and comfortable .点评：请检查exciting，注