2017届高三Writing道歉信.ppt

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1、2017届高三书面表达针对练（三）道歉信,（2016全国卷）假设你是李华，与留学生朋友Bob 约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：1.表示歉意；2.说明原因；3.另约时间。,题目要求,注意：1.词数100 左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,题目要求,一、定人称、时态，审题快而不偏人称以 为主，主要时态用,四步写作,第一人称,一般现在时,二、列提纲、准写词、要点全而不漏1.约好一起去书店去书店,四步写作,Go to the bookstore,2.表示歉意向某人表达真诚的歉意,四步写作,express ones heartfelt apology to sb,3.不能

2、 去的原因是要代表学校参加英语辩论大赛参加英语辩论大赛,四步写作,take part in the English debate competition,4.另约时间对方便,四步写作,be convenient for,三、由词汇、组成句，表达亮而不俗1.我们计划这个星期六去书店。,四步写作,We planned to go to the bookstore this Saturday.,三、由词汇、组成句，表达亮而不俗2.正因为如此，我写信是想表达我真诚的道歉。,四步写作,Because of this,Im writing to express my heartfelt apology t

3、o you.,三、由词汇、组成句，表达亮而不俗3.我被选出来代表我们学校参加英语辩论赛，你知道对我来说是非常重要的。,四步写作,Im chosen to represent our school to take part in the English debate competition,which,you know is of great importance to me.,三、由词汇、组成句，表达亮而不俗4.如果我们这个星期天去书店，你方便吗？,四步写作,Would it be convenient for you if we go to the bookshop this Sunday?

4、,四、衔接词、巧串联，佳作顺而不乱用unfortunately,however等衔接词串句成文,四步写作,Dear Bob，How are you doing?We planned to go to the bookstore this Saturday.Unfortunately,I cant make it.Because of this,Im writing to express my heartfelt apology to you.,四步写作,How I wish I could go with you!However,Im chosen to represent our schoo

5、l to take part in the English debate competition,which,you know is of great importance to me,for I have been dreaming of having a chance like this to improve my spoken English.,四步写作,Would it be convenient for you if we go to the bookshop this Sunday?Im looking forward to your reply.Best regards!Yours,Li Hua,这是根据本题目学生完成的一篇习作，文中有10处错误，请改正。1.planning planned 2.which who 3.informs informed4.I we 5.leaves left6.choose choice7accepting accept8.from后加the9去掉on 10.of from,写改两用,