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1、托福独立写作高分范文赏析 为了让大家更好的准备托福考试，给大家整理一些托福考试作文范文，下面就和大家分享，来欣赏一下吧。托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析：attending classes required or optional托福写作难点话题一览Attending classes: required or optional?Some people believe that university students should be required to attend classes. Others believe that going to classes should be

2、optional for students. Which point of view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and details to explain your answer.写作思路展开结构分析这个话题其实两边都是有些片面的，因此建议考生不要急于选择哪一个观点。正确做法是先尽量多地列举两种观点的优缺点，然后进行比较，最终选择一个立场。大家可以考虑一下这几个问题，比如在培养大学生时，是否应该以培养学生的自主能力为主?如果强制所有的学生去上课，是否真的会提高所有学生的学习效率?有些学生可能在某些课堂上得不到有效的帮助。如果允许所有的学生

3、都可以自由选课，是否会有些学生失去目标?另外现行的选修课和必修课制度是否已经一定程度上解决了这个矛盾。考虑清楚这些问题的答案再选边站会比较好一些.本话题高分范文赏析The most important responsibility of college students is to pursue their course of study to the best of their ability. In most cases, this would mean attending every class. In reality, however, not every student is the

4、 same,and not every class is the same. If a student can study more effectively in another way, then that student should be allowed to pursue his/her studies to the best of his/her abilities, and not be required to attend classes that are not helpful to him/her.Some students find it difficult to conc

5、entrate in large lecture classes and find reading quietly a more effective way of studying. If a student can achieve more by reading in the library and meeting with a professor during office hours than students who attend every class, he/she should not be prevented from studying in the most effectiv

6、e way for him/her.The most important measures of a college students academic progress are tests. In the weeks before exams, college students need to arrange their own schedules becomes critical. For instance, if a student is very good at math but very poor at English, it might make more sense for th

7、at student to skip math class and spend the extra time preparing for an English test. If students are required to attend classes whose content they are already familiar with, at best they will be bored by redundant material, at worst they will fail tests in subjects they are less proficient in.The a

8、rgument might be made that it is the schools responsibility to organize its curriculum so that students are always challenged and therefore truly need to be at every class. I contend that it is impossible to tailor an entire schools curriculum to the individual needs of every single student. The bes

9、t that can be hoped for is a well thought out curriculum with enough flexibility to handle the differences between individual students. Schools should trust the students to make choices that are in their own best interests, and use testing as the final arbiter of academic excellence.托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高

10、分范文赏析：what makes a good neighbor托福写作难点话题一览What makes a good neighbor?Neighbors are the people who live near us. In your opinion, what are the qualities of a good neighbor?Use specific details and examples in your answer.写作思路展开结构分析这道题目的展开需要考虑两个问题，首先是邻居能够带给你哪些帮助?其次是邻居可能会给你造成哪些困扰?把这两个问题的答案都写下来，基本上你就能找到

11、话题展开的方向了。一般来说，形容邻居比较常见的一些quality有intelligence, honesty, a sense of humor等等。当然这也是描述各类积极的正面的人群都很容易用到的基本优点，还有比如optimistic and positive; politeness; loyalty大家也可以考虑用到这篇*的话题展开当中去。本话题高分范文赏析Neighbors are extraordinarily important people in our lives. Many people make a decision about what place they want to

12、 live in based on their future neighbors. People most want to live near neighbors who are respectful, vigilant, and community-minded.The foundation of any relationship, whether among neighbors or friends, colleagues or family members, is mutual respect. Respect between neighbors means that when they

13、 see each other they will be warm and polite.Neighbors dont have to be friends, but they need not be strangers either. Because neighbors live close together, sometimes it is unavoidable that they will learn personal details about their neighbors. A respectful person will not intrude upon their neigh

14、bors privacy, or share these private details with anyone else.Another important aspect of being a good neighbor is to be vigilant. If people see a robber trying to break into their neighbors house, then they should call the police. If they see a neighbors young child in a dangerous situation, they s

15、hould help the child, or at least give the alarm. If the government posts new regulations, they will help inform their neighbors of the new laws. If everyone in a neighborhood watches out for each others safety, then the neighborhood will be a safer and more pleasant place. Moreover, good neighbors

16、are community-minded. They care about their local environment. Good neighbors will not throw trash on the ground, and if they see trash on the ground they will pick it up. They will make decisions based with consideration to their neighbors. They wont play loud music late at night or get drunk and f

17、ight in public. They want to live in a happy, peaceful community and they believe that their personal actions have a direct effect on the happiness of all of their neighbors. If all the people in the community think about the good of the community when they make decisions, the whole community will b

18、enefit.托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析：opinion on a new restaurant托福写作难点话题一览Whats your opinion on a new restaurant built in your neighborhood?It has recently been announced that a new restaurant may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to sup

19、port your answer.写作思路展开结构分析这道题目相信大家很容易联想到实际生活，因此无论从支持还是反对的角度来展开应该都能想出不少理由和论据。比如正面的有小区内的餐馆越多，竞争就越激烈，那么价钱就会更公道，反面的可以写可能会出现卫生问题，也可能有客人酗酒闹事等等。总之此题目可以联系实际生活想出不少例子，展开难度还是比较低的。本话题高分范文赏析Until recently our neighborhood hasnt had any restaurants. We have a local food market and several small convenience store

20、s, and even several street side food stands, but no real restaurants. Im personally in favor of opening a new restaurant in our neighborhood, and believe it will make peoples lives more convenient, support the local economy, and create a healthier community spirit. Cooking at home every night is tim

21、e-consuming and tiring for local families. After a long day at work, local people have to spend at least one hour to shop for groceries, and even more for cooking dinner, and cleaning up after the meal. By the time all is finished, they almost have no time to enjoy the company of their families. Eat

22、ing out would save time if there were a restaurant nearby, but the closest restaurant is a 30-minute walk away. If a restaurant opened in our neighborhood it would allow local people to relax for a night or two every week and enjoy more time with their families.A new restaurant would also help the l

23、ocal economy. Building the restaurant would require the labor of local carpenters, plumbers, and electricians. The new restaurant would need to buy a great deal of food and produce from local markets and supplies like furniture, cooking utensils, and everyday items from local merchants. It would als

24、o create jobs for waiters, managers, and chefs. Perhaps most importantly, a new restaurant could also potentially attract business from the surrounding neighborhoods, bringing more investment into our community.托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析：learn by yourself or with a teacher托福写作难点话题一览Learn by yourself or w

25、ith a teacher?Some people think that they can learn better by themselves than with a teacher. Others think that it is always better to have a teacher. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons to develop your essay.写作思路展开结构分析这道题算是托福写作中比较经典的一道题目，类似的变体题也有很多。建议大家先不要急于选择哪一个观点，因为两个观点都有些片面。从好处上来说，有老师的好处是系

26、统的指导、提供疑难解答、更快、更有效率等等。而自学也有其存在的必要性，比如自学能力应该是追求知识的过程中最重要的能力之一。比较合理的写法是两者结合来说，比如任何科目都应该指导和自学相结合。或是不同的科目、不同的阶段有不同的选择。本话题高分范文赏析Whether we need a teacher or not depends on circumstances. The relationship between a teacher and a new subject is somewhat similar to that between a tour guide and an unknown c

27、ity. When we come to an unknown city for the first time, we definitely need a tour guide. We might have a detailed map, but it is unlikely functionalit isnt surprised that we can hardly interpret those mysterious symbols. Likewise, when we are beginners, it is wise to learn with teachers. They can t

28、ell us where to begin with, what we should do, and which reference we should choose. When we confront difficulties, we can ask them for help, and their advices will always be tremendously helpful. With teachers assistance, we might learn easier, faster, and more interestingly.After a period of time,

29、 we have learned a lot. We now know the city pretty well, even though there are still many places we havent been to. It doesnt matter. Now that we are able to recognize those mysterious symbols on the map, what we need perhaps is not a tour guide but a more detailed map.Similarly, we need richer ref

30、erences for learning. There are still many fields unexplored; they are, nevertheless, no longer puzzling. The task is simple: we will explore them one by one, little by little. If we are working on a certain skill, practice more; if we are preparing a test, practice more; whatever we are learning, w

31、hat is always to bear in mind is that, like people always say, practice makes perfect. After another period of time, we might have become others tour guide, but we still want to make out more. We want to know which restaurant is the most decent, which bookstore is the most professional, which coffee

32、 shop is the most classical. Even the most comprehensive map doesnt have adequate information. We again need experts.In learning, its much the same. We need experts to consult for specific problems.Furthermore, the most beneficial merit of consulting experts is that we can not merely refer to them b

33、ut even discuss with them in depth. As is often the case, a solution for a complex matter is not waiting for us right there and then, sometimes it comes out of inspirations of discussion.In short, having a good teacher is always better than having none, but the importance of a teacher varies from period to period, and more often than not depends on different stage in which we are learning.