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1、托福独立写作高分范文赏析2020 为了让大家更好的准备托福考试，给大家整理一些托福考试作文范文，下面就和大家分享，来欣赏一下吧。.托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析：television destroyed communication托福写作难点话题一览Has television destroyed communication among people?Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television has destroyed communication among friends and famil

2、y. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.写作思路展开结构分析同意不同意都有很多内容可以展开的一道题目。如果选择不同意这个观点，你可以说一方面人们看电视的时间越来越多;另外一方面人与人之间的关系越来越冷漠。但是这两个现象并不是完全、直接的因果关系。造成人们关系冷漠的原因很多，比如，来自方方面面的压力：工作、生活。如果同意观点则可以说的确很多人为了看电视里的一些节目而改变了社交习惯和安排，看电视占据了大家的社交时间等等。本话题高分范文赏析While television has been somewhat harmf

3、ul in its effects, it has hardly destroyed communication among friends and family, although for some people, the assertion that television has destroyed communication among friends and family seems pretty plausible.Television, invented in last century, with its wide availability, increasingly prospe

4、rous programs, becomes one of the most powerful means of communication in the history, and is more and more difficult to ignore. Television is as much a part of our lives as are our meals, work, or school; studies consistently show that the average American child spends almost as much time watching

5、television as does he or she in school. We all have only 24 hours a day and it is clear that the more time one spends on watching television, the less time one does with his or her family and friends. Hence the passage printed in the newspaper or magazine titled Television took my husband away. Temp

6、ting as such claim might be, it is hardly true.Instead of television, it is the increasing pressure of modern life that took her husband away. We have no definite evidence to say people nowadays endure more pressures than did their counterparts in the past, but it is absolutely true that people nowa

7、days undergo great pressures that come from various directions, including work, school, economy, and so forth. Investigations show that people who earn more than RMB 50, 000 annually spend at least 60 hours on work per week, much more than those who earn RMB 20,000 annually. Today a bachelors degree

8、 may no longer guarantee a decent pay, more and more companies post their want ads claiming that applicants must have at least masters degrees, which take two or three years longer. People nowadays have very little time for anything; television is merely among many other factors that affect communic

9、ation, and is definitely not the main cause of degradation. It seems that the more one is educated, the more one is aware of the deleterious effects that excessive television causes, and either deliberately avoid it or actually do not enjoy it. On the other hand, there really are many people addicti

10、ve to television. But the fact is, were television not existent, surely these people would have found other escapes, such as alcohol or gambling for example. In other words, people always find a way to do what they want to do.Therefore, I can hardly agree that television has destroyed communication

11、among friends and family.托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析：influence of movies or television on peoples behavior托福写作难点话题一览The influence of movies or television on peoples behaviorHow do movies or television influence peoples behavior? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.写作思路展开结构分析电影、电视等大众传媒

12、(mass media)往往可以对人们的行为产生影响，通过改变人们的价值观、世界观、审美观而改变人们行为，比如通过制造“社会热点”而使大众不停地讨论一件事情;或是通过满足人们的幻想，或使人们处于平衡状态，或使人们一定程度上失衡。本话题高分范文赏析The impact that movies or television has had on our daily life, and society in general, is undeniable. No doubt it will become even greater as the scope of which continues to gr

13、ow, and as the relevant technologies become more and more sophisticated, and so fascinating that virtually nobody will be able to escape. Already, it can be seen how western movies are exercising influence on our youth generation: they grow long-hair regardless of their gender, commonly part of whic

14、h is dyed in gold; they wear jeans in each and every season, usually the knees of which are deliberately tattered; boys are fond of earrings or other odd pendants; and girls are keen on Marlboros and weird bad words. The major means that movies and television influence the public is by creating topi

15、cs of discussion in the society. Movies offer people (the consumers) issues to talk and think about. Titanic had brought a worldwide uproar by its extolling of fascinating immortal love; Prime Color and Wag the Dog met the national debate on right and duty of the president of the United States. Anti

16、war movies such as Tears of the Sun and All Quiet on the Western Front among numerous others have been raising the question that is any war really to uphold justice or is it really worthy that an individual makes sacrifices to his country and at the same time ignores his own family or his personal v

17、alues? Television also shapes our understanding of what is important and what is not important (to know). The important issues are being discussed over and over or in the beginning of a program. The not important stories are the ones that are not being told at all. The not very important stories are

18、 probably very short and hidden in the last part. By prearranging public issue, movies and television make decisions for us. Even though there are critical thinking individuals in any society, they are definitely in minority; the public in whole indeed lack skills of critical thinking, and therefore

19、 they are often led by the movies and television. In brief, movies and television, by offering topics and affecting the ways in which we discuss the important issues, has a strong influence on our perception of the truth, of the world or of the structure of our society. We have to admit that it has

20、a role in our lives as a source of information, experiences, entertainment, amusement andrelaxation托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析：change about your hometown托福写作难点话题一览The most important thing you want to change about your hometown.If you could change one important thing about your hometown, what would you cha

21、nge? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.写作思路展开结构分析这个题目灵活度比较高，关键在于改变，尽量写积极正面，能够让家乡变得更好的角度。比如增加绿化，改善环境等等，因为一个好的环境会使人们更加快乐更加健康。从这类角度来展开思路明确符合主旋律写起来也会更顺手一些。本话题高分范文赏析I was born in a small town named Hailin, located in the North-East of China. The most serious problems in my hometown

22、 are the backward ideas about a womans place in the family, school, workplace, and society. These negative stereotypes hurt not only women, but all of society as well. If possible, I would change the attitudes of the people in my hometown so they would view men and women equally. Discrimination agai

23、nst women in my hometown begins before they are even born. Because people here believe that only a man can carry on the family line, every family wants to have at least one son. Each family is only supposed to have one child because of the overpopulation problem. This means that if a family can find

24、 out a fetus is female before it is born they might abort it. Or in other cases, people will have many female babies before they have a son, which only makes the population problem worse. If female babies were considered as important as male babies, then these two problems probably would not exist.

25、Discrimination against girls continues as they go to school and work. The prevalent stereotype is that women are not as smart as men and we shouldnt waste time and money educating them. Families often insist that their daughters stay at home and help with housework while sending their sons to school

26、. Girls are born every bit as smart as boys and equally deserve to reap the benefits of education. Many of the worlds famous scientists and leaders are women, from Marie Curie to Margaret Thatcher. We need to eliminate the stereotype that women are less intelligent than men so that our community can

27、 benefit from the achievements that women are capable of making when armed with education. In fact, women need to be respected enough to hold professional and leadership jobs in our community. This would mean that in the classified section of newspapers, there would no longer be jobs for men only. W

28、e will never know how many women could have done those jobs better than a man could have until the parents of every baby girl decide that their daughter is worth as much as their son. This is probably the most important thing that I want to change about my hometown.托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析：new factory

29、near your community托福写作难点话题一览The advantages and disadvantages of a new factory near your community.A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the facto

30、ry? Explain your position.写作思路展开结构分析大家可以先讨论“假设工厂真的落成了，而带来的好处和坏处”，而后发表看法。从好处来说，考生可以写直接增加了就业机会(到工厂去上班);间接增加了就业机会(会有很多服务业，比如饭店、商店、超市等等跟着开业)。如果工厂规模足够大，物流规模也足够大，那么将最终成为交通改善的起点。另外大的工厂可以缴纳很多税，对地方财政有好处，进而促进社区的繁荣等等。从坏处来写，大家则可以写会带来各种污染，比如，噪音、废气、污水，或是工厂不一定会赢利对社区起不到促进作用等等。本话题高分范文赏析I live in a primarily agricult

31、ural community, and most of the population lives hand to mouth. Parents keep children home from school to work in the fields. If there is a flood or a drought, people starve. A new factory would mean regular monthly salaries as well as protection against natural disasters or a sudden drop in the pri

32、ce of our main agricultural product, say, corn. Regular salaries would allow families the confidence to make investments in their futures. The locals would be able to plan their finances accurately and free themselves from debt. This in turn would encourage entrepreneurship and further develop the l

33、ocal economy. People could begin to open shops, restaurants, dormitories, and entertainment facilities to serve the factory workers with their savings. Profits from these small enterprises would further enrich the local community and turn our relatively poor farmland into a truly profitable developm

34、ent zone. Perhaps more parents could then afford to send all of their children to high school and maybe even college. There would certainly be negative effects as well. If the area becomes prosperous, immigrants from poorer regions will come here looking for work. Because of their relative poverty t

35、hey will work harder for less money than the locals and drive wages down. There might be more immigrants than factory jobs available, leading to an unemployment crisis with a rising crime rate as a potential negative side effect. On the other hand, the proposed factory would almost certainly have ad

36、verse effects on the local environment, particularly in regards to polluting the water. This is perhaps the most serious concern, because without clean water the area cannot sustain life of any kind, com, livestock, or human. However, because of the relatively desperate economic situation of my hometown, I believe the potential benefits of opening a new factory would outweigh the risks. If we take the proper precautions, such as imposing strict environmental standards and providing adequate social services for immigrants, the whole area stands to benefit.