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1、托福写作范文附思路解析最新整合 为了让大家更好的准备托福考试，给大家整理一些托福写作范文附思路解析，下面就和大家分享，来欣赏一下吧。托福写作范文附思路解析131. Only people who earn a lot of money are successful? Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Only people who earn a lot of money are successful. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.分析

2、不能同意。Only是绝对修饰词。确实，往往成功的一个表象是金钱的多少。钱不是衡量成功的唯一的标准。黑社会分子(members of criminal syndicate)、一些黑心的商人 (evil-minded businessman)。有些职业收入远不如其他行业，比如，我国的教师，护士。成功的定义更应该基于社会贡献：甘地(Gandhi)就身无分文(without a cash in his pocket);特蕾莎修女 (Mother Theresa )也是好例子。范文 China is host to over one billion people. While the majority

3、of Chinas population is not rich; in fact, it is a very small percentage of people who hold the status of being wealthy. Does this mean that the vast majority of Chinese people are unsuccessful? The answer to this is irrefutably no. There are many measures of success, and money is one of them. Howev

4、er, money is far from the main measure of success. To prove this point, one need only consider the possibility that a man could be wealthy beyond belief, but not consider himself successful. Perhaps he inherited his money, and has done nothing of value in his life. Perhaps he earned the money throug

5、h ill means. Whatever the situation, it is more than possible that a rich man could be considered unsuccessful, either by himself, or by others. Many people believe that the main measure of success is happiness, rather than material goods. Without happiness, even a person with money, status and chil

6、dren would not be successful. However, a low paid schoolteacher might think he/she was very successful if he/she succeeded in getting children to learn their material well. Or perhaps a housewife, who makes no money of her own, would feel successful if she raised a healthy, well-adjusted child and k

7、ept her home looking wonderful. It is also important to look at the difference between self-perceived success and ones success in the eyes of another person. Perhaps the outside world views a man as unsuccessful if he does not have a lot of money, but he views himself as very successful because of h

8、is achievements in life. Whose opinion is more important? I believe that if one thinks he/she is successful, then he/she is, no matter what other people say. In conclusion, money is not the only measure of success. Anyone can be successful, whether they are rich or poor. What matters is how one view

9、s himself/herself; if one is proud of ones achievements in life, and feels that he/she has lived a fulfilling life, then he/she is successful.132. If you could invent something new, what product would you develop? If you could invent something new, what product would you develop? Use specific detail

10、s to explain why this invention is needed.分析比较自由的选择，只要能够列出三个理由，或者要完成的若干个功能。比如，治疗SARS病毒的药物。范文 The world today is moving at a faster and faster pace. An invention that would be exceptionally useful for the human race would be an intelligent humanoid robot. On a daily basis, millions of people in China

11、 perform tasks which are exceedingly tedious, and are a tragic waste of the abilities of these people. Tasks such as house cleaning, street cleaning, some types of farming, some factory work, toll booths and a multitude of other jobs would be performed just as easily by a robot as by a man. In some

12、cases, robots could potentially outperform man because they would not need to rest. They could perform these simple tasks at a rapid speed, and therefore would be a significant advantage in some manual labor jobs. Other tasks that people perform are incredibly dangerous, and often cause life long in

13、juries, or much worse as to kill people. If these types of jobs were performed by machines, there would be far fewer work-related injuries and deaths. A prime example is deep sea welding on oil platforms. Every year there are many deaths of workers who hold this dangerous position. In addition, beca

14、use it is such a high-stress job, the workers lives are often shortened because of inability to cope. As machines obviously do not feel emotional stress, they would perform hundreds of times better than men do in these types of situations. Humanoid robots would also more efficiently perform complex

15、jobs such as surgeries and manufacturing high-tech materials. For example, eye surgeries and brain surgeries require a very steady, careful hand, and an intensely varied knowledge of the human anatomy. A robot could be programmed to complete such surgeries flawlessly. Manufacturing high-tech materia

16、ls is very complex, as it involves many intricate mathematical problems. A robot could be programmed to perform calculations in seconds that would take a man hours or days to perform. Therefore, I think an intelligent humanoid robot would be incredibly beneficial to the human race, although many of

17、the tasks it performs would need to be supervised by a person, and some tasks would be impossible to perform for a robot.托福写作范文附思路解析133. Are a persons childhood years the most important years of a persons life? Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A persons childhood years (the tim

18、e from birth to twelve years of age) are the most important years of a persons life. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.分析不能同意，the most important是修饰词。参见：范文范文 It is generally accepted that a persons childhood years are very important years of a persons life, but it ishardly appr

19、opriate to say those years are the most important. We do not reject the importance of childhood years. Actually it is rather important for later part of a persons life.Our lives, to a large extent are subject to our recognition of our surroundings. Our world views have been structured from very earl

20、y stage of our childhood, mainly through our daily experiences. Everyone therefore actually has his or her own world different from those of others, because even though we all live in a single world, each and every one of us in fact lives in distinctive worlds which are determined by distinctive per

21、ceptions that vary widely from individual to individual. Hence, we should not be surprised by the extent to which a persons life is influenced by ones childhood. Childhood, however, is only part of ones life, and it is merely one of several determinatives that shape ones adult life. Among various de

22、terminatives is ones learning ability. Human beings are superior to any other animals on the Earth simply because of their vigorous ability to learn. Psychology teaches us that training and self-training can dramatically alter ones characteristics and even the ability to learn, which may eventually

23、alter his/her life. Furthermore, learning is a life long process, which means every part of ones life could be an essentially crucial period, and could play an indispensable role in ones life. Examples are available everywhere. Einstein was taken for an idiot by his teacher when he was a child. Even

24、 though every thankful man would have known exactly that that doesnt necessarily mean he was really an idiot, the awkward attitude of his stupid teacher absolutely mad Einsteins childhood an awful one. Nevertheless, Einstein led a wonderful life. Most parents nowadays seem to believe the statement t

25、hat childhood is the most important phase of ones life, and therefore often force their children to learn those alleged essential skills for the sake of the future. The fact is, such behavior is rather presumptuous, because there still are many other important factors that affect ones life.134. Shou

26、ld children be required to help with household tasks as soon as they are able to do so? Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Children should be required to help with household tasks as soon as they are able to do so. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.分析 as so

27、on as they are able to do so有些过于绝对。所以不能同意让孩子太早参加家务活动更好写一些。 ? 尽管让孩子做家务有很多的好处 ? 让过早参与家务劳动，而不顾孩子的承受能力，可能会导致孩子的逆反心理(antagonistic psychology)，反倒达不到教育目的。 ? 要先让孩子明白做家务的好处，让他心甘情愿地去做才能达到教育的目的。范文 Helping out with household tasks is the first job that most people usually partake. From an early age, children ar

28、e encouraged to help around the house, doing little tasks that help out their parents and grandparents. I believe that this is an important feature of society, and should be continued. It is very important for children to learn how to be responsible for their environment. This is a skill that they w

29、ill take with them throughout their lives, and it should be fostered at an early age. If people are able to keep a clean house or workplace, they will be able to achieve tasks much more easily. For example, if children learn early in life that everything has its place, then this lesson will not only

30、 teach them to keep things tidy, but also instruct them on how to stay organized. Another reason why this is important is because it promotes a strong work ethic in children at an early age. If a child is given responsibilities around the house, and it is made sure that the child completes these tas

31、ks, the child will learn how important it is to follow through on instructions. Many parents go so far as to punish their children for not doing chores, which I think will ultimately be beneficial for the children. It will help them in all of their later endeavors in life. Finally, encouraging child

32、ren to do work around the house as soon as they are able to gives them an appreciation of what their parents do for them to keep them safe, clean and warm. Many young children have no idea how difficult it is to keep a house in good condition. It is important that children learn from an early age ho

33、w much their parents do for them, and learn to respect their parents more based on this. Overall, I agree with putting children to work early in life around the house. Of course, there are limits on this. Children should not become the maids of the household. They should be given enough work to enco

34、urage a strong work ethic and an appreciation of their parents, but not so much that they have no time to do anything else.135. Should high schools require students to wear school uniforms or permit them to decide what to wear to school? Some high schools require all students to wear school uniforms

35、. Other high schools permit students to decide what to wear to school. Which of these two school policies do you think is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. 参见：范文范文 While in most present day high schools it is controversial that whether students should wear uniforms,

36、most elementary schools have adopted uniform policy with wide support. Uniforms serve students benefits in several ways. First of all, uniforms act as social equalizers. Children often feel less social pressure when everyone in the school dresses the same way. Students who can not be fashionable due

37、 to limited family finances are made to feel more comfortable among their peers. Moreover, the wearing of uniforms influences students perceptions of school climate. Students are made to feel as if they are a part of a team by wearing a uniform. School climate is improved considerably because kids p

38、erceive that they fit in because they look like everybody else. In addition, school uniforms would assist students and parents in other ways. Students would learn to appreciate the elimination of so many choices when getting dressed for a school day. Students would not be tardy for school as often b

39、ecause of the indecision about what to wear in the mornings. However, when the issue comes to high school situation, further details should be carefully examined. Students in high schools are in a much different situation from students in elementary schools. High school students are sometimes called

40、 young adults, by which people are expecting their maturity, at least to some extent. Its moderate that schools are expected to operate a well-disciplined, structured environment that is conducive to learning. But uniform is not the right answer to various difficulties and problems that the high sch

41、ool education is confronting. For example, while proponents address the safety that uniform policy would bring, opponents are aware of the fact that campus violence would not be reduced because of uniforms. Having grown up already, most students no longer feel that uniforms help them become a part o

42、f the school. Furthermore, uniforms may not save parents as much money as many people would like to believe. Uniforms do not eliminate the need for clothing needed for outside school. Students many times dont wear their school clothing the rest of the day once they are out of school. Sneakers, jacke

43、ts, boots, casual clothing, and more will still be needed. What may first appear to be economical may not be accurate in reality. It has been said that a controversy can not exist without a fundamental dispute, and it seems that the answer to the school uniform debate is not a simple yes or no. Ther

44、e is no clear consensus as to the benefits of school uniforms. However, as to high schools, uniform policy should eventually be reconsidered as many other regulations which have already been eliminated including Boys hair should not touch collar, or Girls skirts must be longer than knees.托福写作范文附思路解析

45、136. Is playing a game fun only when you win? Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Playing a game is fun only when you win. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.分析不能同意，only是绝对修饰词。玩游戏的快乐不一定来自于输赢。有些游戏是有输赢的，而另外一些游戏是没有输赢的。过于在乎输赢，将导致游戏失去意义。范文 Playing games is one of

46、the most popular forms of entertainment in the world. Every country has a number of popular games that are played all the time. For example, in China, Mahjong and Chinese Chess are both very popular. I think playing game in itself is full of fun, winning a game is just a pleasure extra. It would be

47、impossible to think that one could win a game all the time when they first start playing it. This is especially true for strategy games such as the above-mentioned. In many cases, playing against the top players of a game and losing is an honor, not a disappointment. The age-old adage says that prac

48、tice makes perfect. This is as true in games as it is in any other endeavor. In order to win a game all of the time, you need to practice it over and over and learn the strategies of the game. Practice is necessary to win a game. If this was really an annoying process, no one would ever play games.

49、However, it is the journey of the game, not the destination that is important. Going through the actual game is the fun part; if one wins a game, that is an added bonus. People truly enjoy the process of playing a game. If winning was the only thing that was important, we would all play Rock-Paper-Scissors all of the time. People enjoy the process of playing a game because of the social aspects. Playing a game, especially a long, enduring game like Mahjong is a bonding expe