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1、托福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析 为了让大家更好的准备托福考试，给大家整理了托福考试满分范文,下面就和大家分享，来欣赏一下吧。托福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析：和濒危动物抢地盘?托福写作难点话题一览Land for human needs or endangered animalsSome people think that human needs for farmland, housing, and industry are more important than saving land for endangered animals. Do you agree or disagree w

2、ith this point of view? Why or why not? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.写作思路展开结构分析虽然两边立场都可以选，但一般来说按照政治正确的思路还是建议选择站濒危动物这一边，中国考生比较容易relate到的例子就是熊猫了吧。所以认为选择不同意更好写一些。大家可以列举两三个保护endangered animals的重要性。同时不要忘了说明人类也确实需要更多的土地。只不过不能只顾眼前利益(short term benefits)而已。这样就能两边都兼顾到一些了。本话题高分范文赏析

3、When making decisions about land use, some say that human needs should come before animal needs in every case. While I agree that human needs should have primary consideration, humans have a special responsibility to protect the land that endangered animals call home. Animals adapt very slowly to su

4、dden changes in their environments. Many endangered animals can only live in one place, or in a specific type of place. Humans, on the other hand, have a special ability to adapt quickly to changing and hostile environments. For instance, if humans need to live in a very dry environment they can use

5、 technology to locate and drill for water, or build pipelines to bring in water from outside. Thousands of years ago the residents of Xinjiang province dug underground tunnels hundreds of kilometers long to carry water to oasis towns like Turpan. Because humans are thus flexible while many animals a

6、re not, humans should make an effort to use up all available space before encroaching upon the habitats of endangered animals. One of the important reasons to protect endangered animals is that the delicate ecological balance of an area might be irreparably harmed by their extinction. For example, i

7、f humans chop down forests and use the land to grow corn, they might simultaneously destroy the habitats of a kind of bird that eats locusts. The next year because the locust population can grow unchecked, locusts might destroy the entire nearby corn crop. Not only do the birds lose their homes, but

8、 humans are also harmed. The ecological balance of many natural habitats is still not well understood and humans interfere in it at their peril. Finally, humans have much to learn from endangered species. One example is in the field of medicine. By observing a particular species of endangered monkey

9、s in South America, scientists have discovered that monkeys eat a certain kind of plant when they get sick. Through research the scientists discovered that this plant also has medicinal value for humans. If the monkeys habitat had been destroyed to create more farmland, not only would we lose the pl

10、ants and the monkeys, we would also lose life-saving medicines and the potential for medical research.托福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析：对永不放弃的探讨托福写作难点话题一览Do we need Never, never give up?The expression Never, never give up means to keep trying and never stop working for your goals. Do you agree or disagree with this

11、 statement? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.写作思路展开结构分析这道题目比较狡猾，很多人可能一看到never就马上选好边准备反对了，但觉得大家最好还是结合题目的实际情况来分析。never的确是一个绝对词，但是由于这道题目说的是never give up，本身是一个积极向上的说法，所以，认为比较合理的态度是“很大程度上同意”。比如大家可以说永不放弃的前提是 “制订一个现实、可行、并有意义的计划”等等。本话题高分范文赏析Near the end of the Second World War, Churc

12、hill delivered his most famous and the shortest speech: Never, Never Give Up. The British and people in many other countries were tremendously encouraged, and finally went through the hardest period in human history. Never give up represents a strong and positive life attitude. Some people are ready

13、 to quit when they feel they cannot endure the difficulties of some work or they think they cannot find a way to finish the required task. Such people usually become upset and disappointed and lose their self-confidence, although they virtually can do every thing well simply by trying once more. In

14、cases such as acquiring second language, most people failed simply because they had given up. Acquiring second language might be the easiest task among diverse academic curriculums, because one can be successful only by plain repetition, though it is painstaking and time-consuming. Never give up. Su

15、ch strong belief often gives us the second chance. The fact that we fail-somewhere does not mean we are going to fail everywhere, and especially it does not necessarily mean that we are deprived of opportunities to win there. There probably is a second chance. Many successful people did fail before.

16、 Yu Minhong, the founder of New Oriental School, was able to study in Peking University only after three attempts. He wasnt reckoned as successful after graduation, among many signs is the fact that almost all his classmates went abroad while he w each and every time refused by officials in visa-gra

17、nting office for unexplained reasons. Yet he never gave up, which makes his later success inevitable. Psychology teaches us that we do get what we want, if we know exactly what we want and want the right thing. First of all, we must make sure that our clearly defined goals are achievable, and that o

18、ur carefully designed means are practicable. A superficial claim like I want to be a millionaire brings nothing. And an unrealistic goal like inventing a perpetual motion machine is absolutely meaningless. But if we want to acquire a second language, it is both realistic and meaningful. By careful p

19、lanning, and relevant persistence we have no reason to fail. And numerous examples tell us that even if the methods are problematic, many still finally attain great achievements. Therefore, in most cases, the belief Never, never give up is really something that we should always bear in mind.托福写作高分满分

20、范文点评和思路解析：历史建筑的保留和拆除托福写作难点话题一览Should historic buildings be preserved or be replaced with modern buildings?Should a city try to preserve its old, historic buildings or destroy them and replace them with modern buildings? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.写作思路展开结构分析保留历史建筑的必要性在于

21、其文化意义、教育意义和商业意义(比如开发旅游业)。而拆除则是出于城市土地需求的现实性来考虑，比如开发住房和商业场所。至于要不要保留，也往往是看哪一个价值更大，并且要具体情况具体分析。The answer depends on the concrete analysis of concrete conditions。本话题高分范文赏析Tall glass towers, whose shiny facades are as cool as their air-conditioned insides, are becoming part of cityscapes from South Ameri

22、ca to North East Asia. In the process, old buildings are making room for the seemingly unstoppable advancement of modernity. Thus the face of the global city is changing, and city planners are facing the difficult choice of either preserving historic building or replacing them with modern ones. As t

23、here are strong arguments for either option, the final decision will depend on a thorough analysis of the specific situation at hand. It is important to preserve historic buildings and parts of cities because they are part of the cultural heritage that gives identity to a community. Old homes and li

24、ving quarters are a part of history, and, once destroyed, leveled, and buried under thousands of tons of concrete and steel, they will be lost forever. The constructions erected in their places in too many cases lack any sort of connection to the place. These buildings are anonymous and cultureless

25、edifices that could stand tall in any other part of the world. They lack the charm and character of their historic predecessors.Yet the construction of new buildings is a sign of modernization. Not only will many people find work in the process of building these structures, but their existence will

26、attract future investments and thus greatly benefit the economy of an area or country. In addition, these new buildings often have lower maintenance costs in comparison to the aged constructions. More importantly, newly development homes and office spaces include the comforts of modern life, e.g. ai

27、r-conditioning and modern kitchens, are thus comfortable to live in.Sweeping generalizations are impossible here. A city government should try its best to preserve the old, historic charm of a city and its people. Yet at the same time, they have to look forward and modernize old, rundown buildings i

28、n an effort to make their city a more comfortable place to live in and a more successful place to do business. Therefore, a city should think about its general interests and goals and then try to make specific decisions in individual situations.托福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析：读写能力在现代社会的重要性Is literacy more importa

29、nt today than in the past?Is the ability to read and write more important today than in the past? Why or why not? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.写作思路展开结构分析一定程度上，同意这个说法。(In a sense, it is true that)阅读并理解(Comprehend)的能力，在信息过度丰富的今天，更加重要。现代人的阅读量要比过去高出许多倍(过去大学生就是很高的学历，现在博士后postd

30、octoral才算是高学历)。需要更多的能力去辨别真伪。写作的能力更是如此，比如在工作中，写报告是一项重要内容，公司的规模越大，越是如此。没有写作能力，就等于没有升迁机会。本话题高分范文赏析As the world becomes smaller and smaller due to the process of globalization, it becomes more and more important that everyone learns how to read and write. If one is to keep up with the fast pace of the w

31、orld, literacy skills are of utmost importance.Technology is expanding at an ever-increasing rate. Computers, and the Internet, have become common terms in almost all nations in the world. If one wants to be able to communicate with others using this efficient method, one must learn the basics of re

32、ading and writing. The objects we have in our home are also becoming increasingly more complicated. For example, if one wants to use a DVD player with their television, one must be able to read the manual to learn how to work it. Even the most basic technologies come with an instruction guide: if on

33、e is unable to read, they will constantly be struggling to figure out how to work these technologies.As mentioned above, the world is becoming much smaller. More people are finding it necessary to leave their homes in small towns and villages, moving to the big cities where there is more opportunity

34、. Some of these people find it quite difficult to navigate around the city, as one must know how to read in order to understand the street signs. If one cannot find the place where one has to report for work, it would be very difficult to make a living.Finally and perhaps most importantly, being abl

35、e to read and write gives us the opportunity to think for ourselves. Wherever we are, people in authority positions tell us what we should believe. However, in many cases, it is not in our own best interest to follow the leaders ideas. People must learn to read and then examine the information for t

36、hemselves. This is the only way that culture can evolve. Therefore, I think the skills of reading and writing are of vast importance, no matter where one lives in the world. The world population will continue to grow, and the only way to keep ahead is to learn to read and write.托福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析：看书学

37、习还是实践经验?托福写作难点话题一览Which is more important, book knowledge or experience?It has been said, Not everything that is learned is contained in books. Compare and contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books. In your opinion, which source is more important? Why?写作思路展开结构分析大家要注意

38、这道题目两种做法都有很多内容可以说，所以一定要先进行比较，如果选择从书本中获取的知识角度来写，那么这种方式的优点是了解的知识类型题材、范围更多、学习内容更有深度更加系统化。缺点是书本上的知识有时过于教条、也不见得完全准确。如果大家选择从实践中获取知识，那么优点是获取直接、简单明了、更具实用性、同时有些知识无法从书本中获得只能靠实践来积累。从缺点展开，则可以说这种获取知识的方式缺乏体系，有很大的随意性，很容易让学习者产生片面理解。另外，老师不建议大家为了树立一个观点拼命踩另一个观点，也就是不一定要说A比B更重要，或者B比A更重要。大家可以选择在不同的情况下进行不同的比较，比如学习抽象知识，书本是

39、最好的*。学习游泳，这只能靠经验。另外，大多数的知识要书本经验相结合才可以。大家还可以从知识所属的科目来展开，有些科目或者知识适合通过实践学习，比如，语言，体育;有些科目或者知识适合通过阅读学习，比如，物理、化学、历史、地理;还有些科目或者知识适合通过与别人交流来学习，比如销售技巧;管理技巧。总之尽量避免一概而论(treat different things/problems/matters as the same)，要看学什么，以及学习的阶段。本话题高分范文赏析In general, knowledge gained from books has a wider range than tha

40、t gained from experience. We now live in a world that typophile is no longer overpriced, and that printed matters are readily available. In libraries, we can learn nearly everything only if we have already acquired basic reading skills, philosophy, history, literature, physics, mathematics, chemical

41、s, biology, geography, anthropology, and the list will go on. Unlike the experience of an individual that is limited by the range of that individual, books seem to have almost no limitation. Sitting in the local library, we virtually can travel everywhere through an interesting geographic encycloped

42、ia, and certainly, with nearly no expense at all.On the other hand, it can be argued that sometimes knowledge gained from experience is much deeper and more comprehensive than that gained from books. It is quite true that not every thing is contained in books. How to deal with personal finance, how

43、to cope with current social trends, even how to most effectively organize our own mind, and numerous other things can seldom be found thoroughly and comprehensively discussed in books, we have to gain the knowledge by our own experience. And the sad news is that even some knowledge that is contained

44、 in books usually needs further comprehension, mainly through experience. As to which source is more important, the answers vary. Some knowledge can be acquired only through books. Its hard to imagine we can have a good understanding of history without reading books. On the other hand, some knowledg

45、e can be obtained only through experience. When we try to learn to swim, merely a detailed manual of swimming skills, even abundantly filled with illustrations, is at most useless. We have to jump into the water and then gain the knowledge with experience. We have to use books and experience as source simultaneously to get what we want to know. Take learning physics for example, both books and experiences are equally important sources, and examples as such are numerous.Therefore, I think whether one source is more important than the other depends on circumstances.