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1、托福写作高分满分范文点评2020 为了让大家更好的准备托福考试，给大家整理一些托福考试作文范文，下面就和大家分享，来欣赏一下吧。.托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析：Does easier-prepared food improve the way people live?托福写作难点话题一览Does easier-prepared food improve the way people live?Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Use

2、specific reasons and examples to support your answer.写作思路展开结构分析首先，从总体上必须承认“食物变得越来越容易准备”是一种生活上的进步，所以自然会带来improvement。使人们的生活方式发生了一些变化。从好的方面来说，大家可以从节省时间、带来方便、一定程度上把妇女从繁杂的家务中解放了出来等角度来展开。当然大家也可以从不好的变化来说，比如准备食物是一种重要的家庭活动，可是食物变得容易准备一定程度上使家人在一起的时间减少等等。另外，考生还可以引出快餐来进行证明，比如人们普遍变胖了，尤其是儿童肥胖问题等等。本话题高分范文赏析People

3、today can prepare their meal much easier than has ever been before. To prepare a single dinner,provident housewives usually had to work for hours in the past: they had to buy home dirty vegetables which had to wash, meat which had to slice, and so on so forth. Each and every step of preparation was

4、a time-consuming task. But now, things are entirely different. Supermarkets provide vegetables and meat clean and neat, some of them even have relevant ingredients and need only a few minutes to be made into delicious meals. And this change has indeed greatly improved the way people live. In a sense

5、, food preparation is no longer a tedious task, at least much easier to tolerate. Such a change has liberated many women and given them chance to do more meaningful things, for example, a higher pay job or a more respectful one. On the other hand, more men are becoming willing to do the thing that t

6、hey once hated so much, and in some cases such transformation of men brought dramatic positive impact on the family. Today, its not hard to imagine a wife comes home after a days hard work and how delightful she is to find out his husband has already prepared her several her favorite dishes! Childre

7、n can more easily become independentat least they can make themselves breakfasts or dinners when parents are occasionally not present.But such a change has also brought some unexpected consequences. Girls nowadays are becoming more and more reluctant to deem household work as their responsibility. T

8、he reason is quite straightforward: it was once really ridiculous to insist men do trivial household work rather than go work and earn money to support family, but conditions have altered now, girls might think: I can work as well, or maybe I can earn a higher salary than you do, dear boy friend, if

9、 you want to marry me, answer me one question first, will you prepare me breakfast and dinner every day? And some boys, on the other hand, are becoming hesitant to get married, or simply remain solitary, among miscellaneous reasons they do so is one thing: I can take care of myself, at least I dont

10、really need someone prepare me dinner!Anyway, such a change is positive and it did improve the quality of peoples life. At least it has brought girls, boys, husbands, wives, children and everyone else who has to prepare food an opportunity, no matter what kind of opportunity it is.托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范

11、文赏析：Are parents the best teachers?托福写作难点话题一览Are parents the best teachers? Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.写作思路展开结构分析题目中直接出现了best这种最高级词汇，显得观点太过绝对，所以不能同意。建议大家可以从不是所有的父母都是好老师/最好的老师不仅仅是父母这些角度来

12、展开。比如有些父母尽管善良，但对教育孩子一无所知;还有些父母不配做孩子的老师，对孩子有不良影响等等，都是大家可以具体论述的方向和切入角度。本话题高分范文赏析Obviously, in most cases the earliest teachers people have are their parents, and parents are generally most concerned about the development of their children. However, it is not completely true to say that parents are the

13、 best teachers.First of all, not all parents are good teachers. As normal individuals, some parents more or less have some bad habits. Even though parents almost instinctively devote themselves to cultivating their offspring, the outcome might turn out to be disappointment, for all children tend to

14、unconsciously or subconsciously copy everything including bad ones from their parents. Another deficiency of parents as teachers is the fact that most parents are lack of common senses of education. All too often we observe some parents tend to pursue their cherished but failed dream by forcing thei

15、r children to develop in a prearranged direction. Ironically, when their children do not follow the instructions, the children will be regarded as disobedient or allegedly rebellious. In fact, it is parents rather than their children that virtually disobey common sensesMoreover, some parents are qua

16、lified as good teachers, but not all of them are the best ones. When children are in the preliminary school, it is not surprising that parents are perhaps capable of teaching their children almost every subject even better than professional teachers in the school. But the situation will not last lon

17、g. We live in a world where knowledge is accumulated by multiplying and at the same time becomes more and more specialized. Therefore, to be a professional in a certain field today takes much longer time than has ever been before. No parent is able to be professional in all fields, though they might

18、 be experts in one or more fields. Wise parents often release rather than charge their children as early as possible. They are aware of the possibility outside the family.Parents may, nevertheless, help their children much more than do good teachers. Most parts of children education are virtually be

19、yond teachers reaches. It is parents that supplement. Psychology studies have shown us that parents love sometimes has astonishingly magic power to their children. Albeit Einsteins mother and that of Forest Gump are both good examples. On the other hand, parents might do their children harm more tha

20、n do bad teachers as well. The natures of those children whose parents have divorced are often severely distorted.In a word, it is rather superficial to simply say that parents are the best teachers.托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析：Why do people attend college?托福写作难点话题一览Why do people attend college?People atte

21、nd college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.写作思路展开结构分析说明人们选择上大学的具体原因(一个或者多个)，比如增加经验、拓展知识、开阔视野等等。以为了实现理想(idea

22、l; idealistic为例，可以举例：周恩来就是为中华之崛起而读书。为了保证将来的就业机会，可以说上大学会有更多的机会，在以后的职业竞争中更有优势等等。本话题高分范文赏析After graduating from high school many young people have the option to directly enter the work force. Most students who have the opportunity, however, decide to go to college before finding jobs (They attend colle

23、ge to obtain more choices,-higher salaries, and more opportunities for advancement in an increasingly competitive job market. Before attending college, students have a limited opportunity to specialize. After obtaining a specific college degree a job applicant can be competitive for previously unava

24、ilable jobs. For instance, applicants with Computer Science degrees would not only be qualified for jobs in high-tech companies, they would also be well prepared for any job with computer skills as a prerequisite. With a larger range of potential jobs to choose from, degree holders are more likely t

25、o find a job that suits their particular needs and interests.Additionally, employers are willing to pay a premium for highly qualified applicants. For example, many companies desire employees who are competent in more than one language and offer higher salaries to attract them. Even if a job applica

26、nt without a college degree has high standardized test scores, employers may still place a higher value on an applicant with similar test scores who also possesses credentials from a well-known university. Because of the extent to which a college degree is accepted by employers as proof of competenc

27、e in a given field, college graduates are not only more likely to receive more job offers, they can also command higher salaries than applicants who lack college diplomas.Finally, in addition to offering more choices and higher salaries, a college degree offers access to jobs with a clear path towar

28、ds professional advancement. A B.S. in biology, for example, could allow a student to find a job in a lab after graduation, a first step on the road towards a career in scientific research. The same major could also be used to apply to medical school, and a career as a doctor. Both of these avenues

29、would be unavailable without taking the first step of an undergraduate degree in biology.托福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析：衡量工作价值的方式托福写作难点话题一览Is money the most important aspect of a job?Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The most important aspect of a job is the money a person earns. Use specifi

30、c reasons and examples to support your answer.写作思路展开结构分析这道题目问的是大家对于职业选择的看法。因为题目中使用了most important这样的绝对词，所以一般来说都是选择反对这个观点会比较容易展开论述。实际上除了看工资以外，关于一项工作的价值还可以从其职业发展，对个人能力提升的帮助等方面来展开，这些都是大家比较容易想到也相对好展开的论点。本话题高分范文赏析I understand that nowadays it is very important for people to earn a lot of money. As a matt

31、er of fact, many people equate money with success: the more money you earn, the more successful you are. However, the financial aspect is not the most important aspect of a job. The work environment and camaraderie with ones coworkers, the personal fulfillment from ones occupation, and the opportuni

32、ty to balance professional and personal lives are much more important. People who spend forty hours a week or more at their place of employment should enjoy their work environment, especially the company of their co-workers. After all, the prospect of having to spend any amount of time in a room or

33、a building with people who one does not respect, who are unpleasant, or, even worse, hostile, will have a very negative effect on ones disposition and mental health. A few more dollars in the bank account cannot compensate for this. Similarly, one should derive a special fulfillment or pleasure from

34、 doing ones job. Normally, a person will spend at least a third of his/her adult life at work (eight hours or more every day). One should not waste this time by doing work that is boring or tedious even if it is well paid. The money earned will only enrich the life away from work but not enhance the

35、 work experience. Finally, the personal life can only be enjoyed adequately if there is enough time away from the professional life. Affluence affords many nice things, such as houses or cars or television sets, but a person who has to work night and day will not be able to derive any pleasure from

36、them. Also, a father or a mother who makes a lot of money might be able to provide his or her family with a comfortable life, but how much good does that do if he or she never sees them? Time spent with family, especially children, is invaluable, and thus a job with long hours might cost a person more than it affords.