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1、托福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析2020 为了让大家更好的准备托福考试，给大家整理了托福考试满分范文,下面就和大家分享，来欣赏一下吧。托福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析：从玩游戏中学到什么?托福写作难点话题一览Does playing games teach us about life?Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Playing games teaches us about life. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.写作思路展开

2、结构分析玩游戏的好坏处讨论算是比较热门的话题之一，但这道题目转了个弯，问能不能教会我们生活中的事情。大家如果支持的话可以说玩游戏的过程也能学到很多道理，比如团队合作的重要性，或是持之以恒的毅力等等。不支持可以说游戏就只是放松娱乐的方式，并没有太多深刻的含义。当然也可以用it depends的思路来说，比如玩什么游戏，怎么玩才能学到东西等等，不同情况要分开来看等等。本话题高分范文赏析Across the world many cultures have their own favored games. While most of these cultures created the games

3、themselves, many of these games have similar attributes. One reason for this is that people everywhere find games entertaining. More importantly, however, games teach us about life, socialization, and about how to work as a team, and how to win and lose gracefully.One of the most important developme

4、nts one can make in his personality is the ability to socialize well with others. Having a charismatic personality will take a person far in any field. Almost all games have socialization aspect deeply ingrained in them. Football and basketball both encourage a person to treat others with respect. T

5、his is known as having good sportsmanship. Of course respecting others is a social skill that we all must learn if we are to succeed in life.Many popular sports involve a group of people, ranging from two people to twenty people working together as a team. In these situations it is always of utmost

6、importance to be a team player. Of course in the business world being a team player has become a buzzword in most offices. Being a team player means that one should work well with others in the face of adversity. Team sports are full of challenges and obstacles that a team must overcome together.Fin

7、ally most sports teach a person the value of winning and loosing gracefully. In sports etiquette it would be incredibly uncouth to start crying or throw a tantrum if one were to lose a game. Likewise if one wins a game and gloats excessively in the face of their adversary, it is equally looked down

8、upon. The same goes in real life. One must learn the subtleties of defeat and victory and learn to minimize their outward emotions.In conclusion, I posit that games have much to teach us about life. To sum up they teach us how to work well with others. On a lighter note they also teach us how to hav

9、e fun, which is an important life lesson in and of itself.托福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析：要不要尝试新事物?托福写作难点话题一览Do what you already do well or try new things?Some people like to do only what they already do well. Other people prefer to try new things and take risks. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and exam

10、ples to support your choice.写作思路展开结构分析讨论两种attitudes各自的好处。然后在不同的情况下，选择不同的态度。比如：锻炼身体有很多种方法，如果我已经习惯了慢跑，只要能够达到身体健康的目的，就不必要花时间练习一些其他的体育项目了。放松的时候可以听听音乐往往是同一首歌或曲子已经听了很多年。但是看电影，却很难做到重复看同一个电影几百遍。本话题高分范文赏析A defining characteristic of people is the degree to which they are willing to break out of their comfort

11、 zone. Old habits and well honed skills give great comfort to any individual, but new personal challenges build character and allow one to grow as a person. It was not until very recently that I fully comprehended this. Today, while I still enjoy doing the things I am already good at, I have become

12、increasingly eager to try new things because I have learned the value of new experiences. I have always been a talented athlete, and I still find great comfort on the basketball court and in the swimming pool. These are familiar places where I feel at home. They are also places where I continue to e

13、xcel. However, not so long ago my older cousin, a person whom I have always looked up to and admired, reminded me that there is nothing wrong with discovering new talents or doing many different things very well. He introduced me to music. For the past sixteen months I have been learning how to play

14、 the guitar, and this new experience has been extremely rewarding. Initially, I struggled. My inability to play even the simplest of notes frustrated me, and quite often I thought about giving up. Yet with my teachers encouragement I continued to make progress. Now my appreciation for music is much

15、more profound than ever before, and my appetite for new experiences is whetted. Together with a couple of classmates I have formed a book club. Every week we get together and discuss a piece of literature. Of course, my friends were hesitant to give this new idea a try at first. Nevertheless, I have

16、 convinced them to be risk takers, and now all of us enjoy not only each others company but also books and stories, which is a completely new experience for all of us. Together we are planning to learn how to dance and to purchase bicycles to explore the area around our hometown. We dont want to lim

17、it ourselves to what we know already.托福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析：怎样才算好室友?托福写作难点话题一览What makes a good roommate?Many students have to live with roommates while going to school or university. What are some of the important qualities of a good roommate? Use specific reasons and examples to explain why these quali

18、ties are important.托福写作思路展开结构分析这道题目其实是比较具有现实意义的，因为无论是现在就读大学住宿舍的考生，还是以后要出国留学的同学，都会面临和室友相处的问题。一般来说比较容易相处的室友特征是友善，乐于交流，尊重个人隐私，喜欢互相帮助等等，大家可以从这些角度来展开话题。本话题高分范文赏析While studying at university, many students find that sharing an apartment with roommates is the best living situation available. These arrangem

19、ents can work out quite well, as long as one chooses the right roommate. There are a number of important qualities that one should look for in a potential roommate. These qualities include friendliness, cleanliness, and a good work ethic. Choosing a friendly roommate is very important if one wants t

20、o create a healthy living environment. If ones roommate is unfriendly, many annoying situations can occur. For example, if ones roommate is unfriendly, it is difficult to hold a conversation with him/her. Being able to have a pleasant conversation is vital, as everyone needs to have a short break fr

21、om studying from time to time. Conversations can help us to relax a little bit, and can even be a stimulus to continueour work. Page 95 of 201 Having a clean roommate is also very important. If ones roommate is messy, it can lead to many arguments over whose turn it is to do the cleaning. If one con

22、stantly has to clean up after his/her roommate, he/she will have by Lost Lawyer less time to concentrate on his/her studies. Also, living in a clean environment allows one to be much more successful in all endeavors. Finally, a roommate should have a good work ethic. If ones roommate is constantly p

23、rocrastinating and waiting until the last minute to do assignments, it can ruin ones ability to do his/her own work. If a roommate is always coming home late or playing music loudly instead of doing work, it will be very difficult for a studious person to get anything done. In conclusion, I believe

24、that having a clean friendly roommate with a good work ethic is most enjoyable. It allows one to get on with his/her own work, and to concentrate on what matters most: getting good grades.托福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析：优先发展电脑科技?托福写作难点话题一览What makes a good roommate?Many students have to live with roommates while

25、going to school or university. What are some of the important qualities of a good roommate? Use specific reasons and examples to explain why these qualities are important.托福写作思路展开结构分析这道题目其实是比较具有现实意义的，因为无论是现在就读大学住宿舍的考生，还是以后要出国留学的同学，都会面临和室友相处的问题。一般来说比较容易相处的室友特征是友善，乐于交流，尊重个人隐私，喜欢互相帮助等等，大家可以从这些角度来展开话题。本

26、话题高分范文赏析While studying at university, many students find that sharing an apartment with roommates is the best living situation available. These arrangements can work out quite well, as long as one chooses the right roommate. There are a number of important qualities that one should look for in a pot

27、ential roommate. These qualities include friendliness, cleanliness, and a good work ethic. Choosing a friendly roommate is very important if one wants to create a healthy living environment. If ones roommate is unfriendly, many annoying situations can occur. For example, if ones roommate is unfriend

28、ly, it is difficult to hold a conversation with him/her. Being able to have a pleasant conversation is vital, as everyone needs to have a short break from studying from time to time. Conversations can help us to relax a little bit, and can even be a stimulus to continueour work. Page 95 of 201 Havin

29、g a clean roommate is also very important. If ones roommate is messy, it can lead to many arguments over whose turn it is to do the cleaning. If one constantly has to clean up after his/her roommate, he/she will have by Lost Lawyer less time to concentrate on his/her studies. Also, living in a clean

30、 environment allows one to be much more successful in all endeavors. Finally, a roommate should have a good work ethic. If ones roommate is constantly procrastinating and waiting until the last minute to do assignments, it can ruin ones ability to do his/her own work. If a roommate is always coming

31、home late or playing music loudly instead of doing work, it will be very difficult for a studious person to get anything done. In conclusion, I believe that having a clean friendly roommate with a good work ethic is most enjoyable. It allows one to get on with his/her own work, and to concentrate on

32、 what matters most: getting good grades.托福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析：上大学的理由Why do people attend college?People attend college or university for many different reasons ( for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge ) . Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific r

33、easons and examples to support your answer.写作思路展开结构分析说明人们选择上大学的具体原因 ( 一个或者多个 ) ，比如增加经验、拓展知识、开阔视野等等。以为了实现理想 ( ideal; idealistic 为例，可以举例：周恩来就是为中华之崛起而读书。为了保证将来的就业机会，可以说上大学会有更多的机会，在以后的职业竞争中更有优势等等。本话题高分范文赏析After graduating from high school many young people have the option to directly enter the work forc

34、e. Most students who have the opportunity, however, decide to go to college before finding jobs ( They attend college to obtain more choices,-higher salaries, and more opportunities for advancement in an increasingly competitive job market. Before attending college, students have a limited opportuni

35、ty to specialize. After obtaining a specific college degree a job applicant can be competitive for previously unavailable jobs. For instance, applicants with Computer Science degrees would not only be qualified for jobs in high-tech companies, they would also be well prepared for any job with comput

36、er skills as a prerequisite. With a larger range of potential jobs to choose from, degree holders are more likely to find a job that suits their particular needs and interests.Additionally, employers are willing to pay a premium for highly qualified applicants. For example, many companies desire emp

37、loyees who are competent in more than one language and offer higher salaries to attract them. Even if a job applicant without a college degree has high standardized test scores, employers may still place a higher value on an applicant with similar test scores who also possesses credentials from a we

38、ll-known university. Because of the extent to which a college degree is accepted by employers as proof of competence in a given field, college graduates are not only more likely to receive more job offers, they can also command higher salaries than applicants who lack college diplomas.Finally, in ad

39、dition to offering more choices and higher salaries, a college degree offers access to jobs with a clear path towards professional advancement. A B.S. in biology, for example, could allow a student to find a job in a lab after graduation, a first step on the road towards a career in scientific research. The same major could also be used to apply to medical school, and a career as a doctor. Both of these avenues would be unavailable without taking the first step of an undergraduate degree in biology.