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1、托福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析汇总 为了让大家更好的准备托福考试，给大家整理了托福考试满分范文,下面就和大家分享，来欣赏一下吧。托福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析：读写能力在现代社会的重要性托福写作难点话题一览Is literacy more important today than in the past?Is the ability to read and write more important today than in the past? Why or why not? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answe

2、r.写作思路展开结构分析一定程度上，同意这个说法。(In a sense, it is true that)阅读并理解(Comprehend)的能力，在信息过度丰富的今天，更加重要。现代人的阅读量要比过去高出许多倍(过去大学生就是很高的学历，现在博士后postdoctoral才算是高学历)。需要更多的能力去辨别真伪。写作的能力更是如此，比如在工作中，写报告是一项重要内容，公司的规模越大，越是如此。没有写作能力，就等于没有升迁机会。本话题高分范文赏析As the world becomes smaller and smaller due to the process of globalizati

3、on, it becomes more and more important that everyone learns how to read and write. If one is to keep up with the fast pace of the world, literacy skills are of utmost importance.Technology is expanding at an ever-increasing rate. Computers, and the Internet, have become common terms in almost all na

4、tions in the world. If one wants to be able to communicate with others using this efficient method, one must learn the basics of reading and writing. The objects we have in our home are also becoming increasingly more complicated. For example, if one wants to use a DVD player with their television,

5、one must be able to read the manual to learn how to work it. Even the most basic technologies come with an instruction guide: if one is unable to read, they will constantly be struggling to figure out how to work these technologies.As mentioned above, the world is becoming much smaller. More people

6、are finding it necessary to leave their homes in small towns and villages, moving to the big cities where there is more opportunity. Some of these people find it quite difficult to navigate around the city, as one must know how to read in order to understand the street signs. If one cannot find the

7、place where one has to report for work, it would be very difficult to make a living.Finally and perhaps most importantly, being able to read and write gives us the opportunity to think for ourselves. Wherever we are, people in authority positions tell us what we should believe. However, in many case

8、s, it is not in our own best interest to follow the leaders ideas. People must learn to read and then examine the information for themselves. This is the only way that culture can evolve. Therefore, I think the skills of reading and writing are of vast importance, no matter where one lives in the wo

9、rld. The world population will continue to grow, and the only way to keep ahead is to learn to read and write.托福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析：介绍代表国家的象征托福写作难点话题一览The thing representing your countryIf you were asked to send one thing representing your country to an international exhibition, what would you choose? W

10、hy? Use specific reasons and details to explain your choice.写作思路展开结构分析这道题目自由度很高，对中国考生来说应该也很容易想到各种代表性的事物，比如中国特产的吉祥物大熊猫，或者中国瓷器，这些都是对老外来说也非常具有中国特色，耳熟能详的事物。本话题高分范文赏析If I were to send one thing to an international exhibition that represented my culture, it would be rice. Chinese culture, boasting a lengt

11、hy history, is composed of numerous sub-cultures. The agricultural way of life, centered around rice, has played a vastly important part in the countrys history. For thousands of years, the Chinese have been diligently cultivating their land. Blood, sweat and tears have been shed over their soil in

12、the pursuit of favorable harvests. This reliance on the land for so many thousands of years accounts for Chinas strong rural essence. The need for rice production has led the Chinese to pay particular attention to irrigation technologies and improving cultivation. The agricultural way of life, cente

13、red on rice, has had a strong influence on the social, economic, political and ideological developments of ancient China. In this sense, traditional Chinese culture may be considered a rice culture. A meal without rice, the Chinese say, is like a beautiful woman with only one eye.In China, where the

14、 word for rice is also the word for food, young girls are warned that every grain of rice they leave in their bowls will be a pockmark on the face of their future husbands. Instead of saying, How are you? as a typical greeting, the Chinese ask Have you had your rice today? Quitting or losing a job i

15、s called breaking the rice bowl and it is bad luck to upset a bowl of rice. Rice is also a very important commodity in todays society. It is one of the major exports in China, allowing people all over the world to take part in something that emanates Chinese culture. Rice remains a staple food for b

16、oth the rich and the poor, and there is hardly a meal had in our country that does not involve this fine grain. As you can see from the above-mentioned text, rice is an integral part of Chinese culture and tradition. While Chinese culture is spread over a vast number of arts and crafts, I believe th

17、at it is the humble, but profound rice that speaks to us all, and most poignantly represents the essence of our culture.托福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析：一生中童年最重要?托福写作难点话题一览Are a persons childhood years the most important years of a persons life?Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A persons child

18、hood years (the time from birth to twelve years of age) are the most important years of a persons life. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.写作思路展开结构分析这道题目里既然出现了the most这样绝对的词汇，那么一般来说选择反对disagree会是比较好的选择，但凡绝对尽量反对这条破题原则大家要用起来。人生有不同阶段，每个阶段都有其各自的重要性，因此强行对比分高下本来就不是很有逻辑性的说法，童年当然很重要，但成

19、长以后青年中年甚至老年都各有其价值所在，建议大家从这个角度展开来进行论述。It is generally accepted that a persons childhood years are very important years of a persons life, but it ishardly appropriate to say those years are the most important. We do not reject the importance of childhood years. Actually it is rather important for late

20、r part of a persons life.Our lives, to a large extent are subject to our recognition of our surroundings. Our world views have been structured from very early stage of our childhood, mainly through our daily experiences. Everyone therefore actually has his or her own world different from those of ot

21、hers, because even though we all live in a single world, each and every one of us in fact lives in distinctive worlds which are determined by distinctive perceptions that vary widely from individual to individual. Hence, we should not be surprised by the extent to which a persons life is influenced

22、by ones childhood. Childhood, however, is only part of ones life, and it is merely one of several determinatives that shape ones adult life.Among various determinatives is ones learning ability. Human beings are superior to any other animals on the Earth simply because of their vigorous ability to l

23、earn. Psychology teaches us that training and self-training can dramatically alter ones characteristics and even the ability to learn, which may eventually alter his/her life. Furthermore, learning is a life long process, which means every part of ones life could be an essentially crucial period, an

24、d could play an indispensable role in ones life. Examples are available everywhere. Einstein was taken for an idiot by his teacher when he was a child. Even though every thankful man would have known exactly that that doesnt necessarily mean he was really an idiot, the awkward attitude of his stupid

25、 teacher absolutely mad Einsteins childhood an awful one. Nevertheless, Einstein led a wonderful life. Most parents nowadays seem to believe the statement that childhood is the most important phase of ones life, and therefore often force their children to learn those alleged essential skills for the

26、 sake of the future. The fact is, such behavior is rather presumptuous, because there still are many other important factors that affect ones life.托福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析：学校买书还是买电脑?托福写作难点话题一览Should school buy computers or books?Your school has enough money to purchase either computers for students or book

27、s for the library. Which should your school choose to buy computers or books? Use specific reasons and examples to support your recommendation.写作思路展开结构分析两边都可以写，无论是书还是电脑都有各自的优点和缺点可以展开，不过要注意围绕题目对学校有帮助这点来写。比如选择书籍，可以说计算机的坏处，比如计算机更新换代太快一直要投入很多钱;计算机并不万能;没有好的软件计算机发挥不了作用，而软件又是很大的花费;用计算机上网找的资料不完整，无权威性等等。 。本话

28、题高分范文赏析There are many difficult decisions that school supervisors must make in order to ensure the success of their students. One of these decisions is how to spend money when it is available. Quite often, extra funds are spent on either computers or books. Given the choice, I believe that money is

29、best spent on computers.New technology is being created faster and faster. Each year, IBM develops a new super computer that is hundreds of times faster than the previous model. With this constantly changing technology, it is easy for schools to be left behind because they cannot afford new gear. St

30、udents deserve to learn on the best technology available, so schools should always upgrade their computers whenever possible. Computers also offer students a wealth of information, perhaps more than books can provide. It is now possible to buy e-books, dictionaries and encyclopedias for a computer.

31、These computer versions of popular research tools are much better than their hardcover predecessors. For example, a computer encyclopedia takes up no space in the library, it allows students to access the information instantly, and it is much more cost effective than buying the entire series on pape

32、r. Also, the Internet allows students to find information on anything their hearts desire.Finally, spending school funds on computers is more beneficial than spending money on books because computers prepare the students for the working world. In todays society, to attain a high paying position in a

33、 company it is necessary to have basic computer skills. If students do not have the ability to learn such skills, they will be left behind while others succeed in their place. Accordingly, I feel it is better for schools to spend money on computers rather than books. In addition to the reasons liste

34、d above, it is important to note that most major cities have extensive libraries that a local school would be hard-pressed to match. However, libraries frequently do not house computers, and if they do, they are constantly in use by other patrons. In many cases, the only chance a young person has to

35、 use a computer is at his/her school.托福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析：问名人一个问题托福写作难点话题一览If you could ask a famous person one question, what would you ask?If you could ask a famous person one question, what would you ask? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.写作思路展开结构分析这道题目比较有意思，属于脑洞大开的题，问名人一个

36、问题。这个名人既可以选择历史上的名人，也可以选择活在现在这个时代的名人。大家需要先选定自己想要问问题的名人，然后再想一个能够和名人的生平事迹相关联的问题来提问，大家不妨多从自己平时积累的作文论据素材里找找灵感。本话题高分范文赏析In todays society, there is a great amount of pressure on famous people. They must constantly be aware of their appearance, and how they will look in the publics eyes. If I had to pick o

37、ne question to ask a famous person, I would ask them if they are glad that they achieved fame. I think this question is very interesting because it gives insight into what it would be like to be famous, it tells us about the individuals personality, and it would give the famous people a chance to ex

38、plain what their life would have been like if they had never been famous. By asking the above-mentioned question, the famous person would reflect on whether or not they enjoyed their fame. If the person answered that he/she would rather not be famous, it implies that the life of a famous person is n

39、ot as wonderful as many people expect it would be. However, if the answer was positive, it shows that despite all the negative aspects that come with fame, it is still worth the trouble. When answering this question, the famous person would give us insight into his/her personality. Perhaps the perso

40、n would rather be more introverted, and therefore, does not appreciate all of the constant attention. On the other hand, it is possible that the person thrives in admiration and attention, and would not have it any other way. Is the famous person the type of people who does not like having to worry

41、about everything he/she says? Do these types of issues bother him/her? I would find all of this information very interesting. Finally, when answering this question, the person would have to reflect on what his/her life would have been like if he/she had never been famous. Perhaps there were dreams or aspirations that he/she never got to realize because he/she is now constantly in the public eye. Would life as a regular person have been more enjoyable? By asking the above-mentioned question, all of these queries would be answered.