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1、托福写作范文附思路解析整合 为了让大家更好的准备托福考试，给大家整理一些托福写作范文附思路解析，下面就和大家分享，来欣赏一下吧。托福写作范文附思路解析106. What kind of transportation you would choose? You need to travel from your home to a place 40 miles (64 kilometers) away. Compare the different kinds of transportation you could use. Tell which method of travel you would

2、 choose. Give specific reasons for your choice.分析 36提供了option，但是不能选飞机(为了64公里的路而乘坐飞机有点ridiculous)。比较“步行(on foot; walk)”“汽车(automobile; car)”“自行车(bicycle)”。选择bicycle可能更容易写一些。范文 If I need to travel to a place 40 miles away from my home, there are a number of different modes of transport I could utilize

3、, namely, I could take the bus, a car, or the train. The bus is a good choice as the bus system in Beijing has been well-developed. It is possible for me to travel almost anywhere within 40 miles of my house by bus. While on the bus, I can read a book, or relax, assuming it is not too full. The prob

4、lem with taking the bus, however, is that it is often crowded. It is often uncomfortable, especially during hot summer days. Taking a car is an excellent option, assuming one can afford a car. Cars are notoriously expensive in China, and most people do not have this luxury. However, if it is availab

5、le, a car is very convenient. You can travel to the exact desired location in record time. A car, especially a personal car, is never crowded. You never have to share space with anyone. However, one cannot relax while driving a car. There is no opportunity to just take in the sights, or read a book.

6、 One must always be focused on the road. The train, or the subway, is another option. If the location I am traveling to is on the subway line, then this option is by far the best. While trains can be congested, they are the fastest method of traveling. Subway trains are never subject to traffic jams

7、, as they usually run underground. However, the subway system in Beijing does not go everywhere that I need to. Often, if I take the subway, I then have to either walk for 20 minutes, or take a bus. Overall, I think that the car is the best option, if it is available. The car is convenient and comfo

8、rtable. However, the bus and the train are both good options if a car is not available.107. Should higher education be available to all students or only to good students? Some people believe that a college or university education should be available to all students. Others believe that higher educat

9、ion should be available only to good students. Discuss these views. Which view do you agree with? Explain why. 分析两个观点都有些极端。所以，先分析，在选择自己的立场。义务教育制度(institution of compulsory education )说明社会已经认识到基础教育(fundamental education) 对所有的人都是必需的。但是大学教育是不是所有人都需要的?这个社会很多职业(比如，饮食业)不需要大学教育。让所有的人都上大学，是不是成为过分的财政负担(finan

10、cial burden of the government)?用什么样的方法确定一个学生good enough so as to deserve higher education? 考试?考试制度也有缺陷。可能选择的立场比如：我们国家目前是需要更多的人接受大学教育。与此同时，一方面要保障大学教育的质量，另一方面，要改革考试制度，保障考生的公平机会。范文 Some people believe that only good students should have access to a university education. Others posit that higher educati

11、on should be open to everyone, regardless of their academic abilities. I agree with the former opinion. Universities should only allow good students into their programs because these students value the importance of a good education and are interested in furthering their education. Furthermore, if a

12、ll students were allowed into universities, the schools would quickly become saturated, and the quality of education received would diminish. A university education is very important to a good student. This type of student has set his/her sights on a university education from early on, and has put i

13、n the necessary work to earn a place in a good university. Poor students who did not try to achieve good grades in high school obviously do not care about their education, and therefore, do not deserve to go to university. However, if these poor students go back to school and improve their grades, t

14、hey should also be allowed to go to university. Good students are very interested in furthering their education. They have put copious amounts of work into their education, and are interested in learning more. Poor students are usually not as interested in furthering their education. If they were in

15、terested in this, they would have tried harder to begin with. With that said, let us suppose for a moment that universities did allow all students, regardless of their grades, into university. The school would quickly become overfull, and good students, who really care about their education, would s

16、uffer because of it. They might not be able to get into the classes they want, and if they do get in, there might be so many students in the class that it is impossible to learn. In conclusion, I think that it is important to save a university education for those who really want itgood students. If

17、a poor student wishes to go to university, then he/she will have to return to high school and improve his/her grades.托福写作范文附思路解析108. Learning about life: by listening to the advice of others or through personal experience? Some people believe that the best way of learning about life is by listening

18、to the advice of family and friends. Other people believe that the best way of learning about life is through personal experience. Compare the advantages of these two different ways of learning about life. Which do you think is preferable? Use specific examples to support your preference.分析两个观点都有些极端

19、。所以，先比较分析，在选择自己的立场。听从他人劝告和建议的优缺点：综合许多人的看法，可能更容易得到正确的答案;但是久而久之(in the course of time; as time passes)，可能会变得没有主见(lose ones own judgment) 自己做决定、从自己的经验出发的优缺点：可能不全面，但是能够培养自己的观察能力，分析能力。不同的事情，要有不同的选择。范文 Some people believe that the best way to learn about life is to listen to the advice of friends and fami

20、ly. Others argue that the most beneficial way to learn about life is through personal experience. I want to maintain that learning about life through personal experience is the best way. I believe this because one usually does not learn well unless he/she experiences something on his/her own, becaus

21、e one can have different opinions and views on life man his/her family and friends, and because it is simply a more interesting way to learn. There have been many times in my life where a family member told me that life was a certain way, but I still wanted to see for myself. After having the experi

22、ence, I agreed with what my family member had told me. However, I never regretted trying the experience for myself. I think one can learn something more completely if he/she experiences it for himself. When a family member or a friend tells me to do something, I value his/her opinion. However, there

23、 are some occasions when I do not fully agree with their opinions. In these cases, I want to try out the experience. There is a possibility that I will disagree with their conclusions on the topic. For example, if a friend tells me that a movie is terrible, I might still go to see the movie. It is m

24、ore than possible that we will have differing opinions on whether the movie was good or not. Finally, I think it is important to learn about life through personal experience because it is a much more interesting way to learn. If one never experienced anything for oneself, life would be very boring.

25、For example, a friend told me that Urumchi was a city that I would not enjoy visiting. He said there were not many attractions there, and there were many other beautiful places in China that I should go instead. In spite of this warning, I went to see Urumchi for myself. I did not think the city was

26、 spectacular, but I did have a good time on my trip, and was glad that I went. Having the experience of going to the place was worthwhile enough for me.109. Follow the customs of the new country you are in, or keep your own customs? When people move to another country, some of them decide to follow

27、the customs of the new country. Others prefer to keep their own customs. Compare these two choices. Which one do you prefer? Support your answer with specific details.分析一定要进行比较。至于要选择什么，看情况，要看是什么样的习惯?比如中国人到了美国，就要习惯go Dutch的付账习惯。不然很吃亏。但是庆祝春节，家人在一起包饺子(dumpling)的习惯，没有必要更改。还可以举出很多例子。范文 When one is settli

28、ng in a new country, one has a choice of whether to assimilate into the new culture, or keep the customs of ones home. I think that the wisest decision is to try to integrate some of the new culture into ones own existing customs and beliefs. To understand this reasoning, we must first look at the a

29、dvantages of both methods. If one moves to a new country, there are many advantages of following the set customs of the new place. By assimilating into the culture, one can break the cultural barriers much quicker. For example, if one were to move to Canada from China, one could easily live in one o

30、f the Little China areas, and to all intents and purposes, ignore the Canadian culture. This, however, would be a mistake, as it would close off all of the positive things that Canada has to offer. If one does not assimilate into the new culture, one cannot get a Western job. The person would also b

31、e missing out on a multitude of experiences, such as different food. Nevertheless, there are also many advantages of keeping ones own customs if one moves to a new country. Some people find it very difficult to leave their home and go to a new country. Keeping up old, familiar customs is very comfor

32、ting. In addition to this, when one keeps their own customs, one finds it easier to meet others of the same nationality, which can also be a relief. When everything around you has changed, keeping your culture intact can be a very soothing way. By and large, I think it is best to assimilate to the n

33、ew culture while retaining key elements of ones own culture. For example, one can make an effort to learn the language of the new country, while still speaking ones own language at home. This can actually be an excellent strategy, as speaking two languages is better than speaking one, no matter wher

34、e you are in the world. When one takes on some of the new culture while keeping some of his/her own, one gets the excitement and opportunity of the new culture, while keeping the familiarity and ease of his/her own culture.110. Spend time alone or with friends? Some people prefer to spend most of th

35、eir time alone. Others like to be with friends most of the time. Do you prefer to spend your time alone or with friends? Use specific reasons to support your answer.分析 110和111非常相像。休闲时间的活动包括：看书、听音乐、看影碟、去电影院、去酒吧、听音乐会、打牌、下棋、爬山、打球 有些活动适合独自进行，有些活动需要特定数目的人手，还有些活动人越多越好根据不同的情况，就有不同的选择。相关题目：111、146范文 Some pe

36、ople enjoy spending most of their time with friends, while others prefer to be alone for the majority of the time. I prefer to spend most of my time with friends, because friends offer excitement and new ideas, they can console me when something bad happens, and spending too much time by myself can

37、be boring. Friends can offer excitement and fresh ideas to a situation. No matter what I am doing, if a friend is there, it is more interesting. For example, if I am shopping, a friend makes the experience more fun. We can look at things together, and explore our likes and dislikes. Having a friend

38、around also allows me to do some things that I would not be able to do otherwise. For instance, I can go with a friend to a park and play badminton. Some things are just impossible to do by myself. Friends can also console you if something bad happens. If I get bad news, and a friend is around, I do

39、 not have to feel badly by myself. A friend will try and cheer me up, and attempt to take my mind off whatever negative things happened. For example, last year I broke my leg and was in a cast all summer. I had friends around me to cheer me up and distract me from the misfortune. In addition to thes

40、e reasons, I find that if I spend too much time by myself, I get lonesome and bored. As mentioned above, there are some things you just cannot do without friends around. Some of these things, such as sports, are my favorite activities. I do enjoy some activities that do not involve other people, suc

41、h as reading. However, I find that I can do these things before bed, or when I wake up. Overall, I think having friends around me is the best way for me to spend my time.托福写作范文附思路解析111. Spend time with one or two close friends, or with a large number of friends? Some people prefer to spend time with

42、 one or two close friends. Others choose to spend time with a large number of friends. Compare the advantages of each choice. Which of these two ways of spending time do you prefer? Use specific reasons to support your answer. 参见：110范文 Of the two possibilities, I prefer the first, that is, to spend

43、my time with one or two close friends, because I enjoy close friendship with one or two people and the cozy atmosphere of spending time with close friends. When spending time with a large number of friends, it tends to be difficult to form solid, meaningful friendships with any of the people, since

44、cultivating friendship needs time to communicate. On the other hand, when spending time with only one or two close friends, it is more likely to get to know these people on a very close level. I think this closeness is very important in a friendship. In fact, if I share no closeness with a person, t

45、hen I do not consider him a friend; I consider him an acquaintance. Moreover, it is not only closeness but also the cozy atmosphere that makes me prefer spending time with only one or two friends. In this cozy atmosphere, I always feel there is nothing that I could not or would not tell my friends,

46、as they feel the same. This means we can trust each other completely. Although this doesnt at all mean theres no cozy atmosphere or complete trust when spending time with many friends, it is my observation that everyone tends to be more open in private. This is why I enjoy the intimate friendship. I

47、n addition, spending time with few friends can save much time, since the relationship among a few people is more likely to be simpler. Im not proficient at dealing with relationship among people, and often get frustrated communicating with a crowd. However, when I am spending time with one or two cl

48、ose friends, this doesnt matter at all. In fact, my close friends, notwithstanding few in number, always tell me Im their best friend who can truly care about them and handle the relationship smoothly. I think it is my personality that has me make such a choice.112. Should young children spend most

49、of their time on school studies or playing? Some people think that children should begin their formal education at a very early age and should spend most of their time on school studies. Others believe that young children should spend most of their time playing. Compare these two views. Which view do you agree with? Why?分析两种观点都有些极端。先比较两种观点，然后选择一个折衷的立场。早上学的好处和坏处：好处是很多提前上学的孩子显得聪明，对付学习显得游刃有余(be more than equal to a task; accomplish a task with ease)。完成formal educati