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1、托福写作满分范文点评和思路解析 为了让大家更好的准备托福考试，给大家整理了托福考试满分范文,下面就和大家分享，来欣赏一下吧。托福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析：广告宣传中的国家形象托福写作难点话题一览Can advertising tell you a lot about a country?Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Advertising can tell you a lot about a country. Use specific reasons and examples to support your

2、answer.写作思路展开结构分析同意这个观点更容易写一些。陈述立场后，说明广告是怎样反映一个国家的历史、文化、以及其他情况的。通过比较来说明更容易写一些，比如：中国，与 10 年前相比，广告中的女性数量变多了，暴露的程度也提高了。说明人们的观念，以及社会的观念发生了变化。中国与欧美国家相比，中国广告中药物广告数量特别多。说明这方面的法制还有待改善。本话题高分范文赏析Advertising does not mean to educate or illustrate. Primarily it is a vehicle for business and it aims to sell prod

3、ucts. As a result, the information we can gather from looking at advertisings is quite limited. However, the cultural ideas used to sell commodities reveal a societys value system, and from the nature of the advertising and the product it aims to sell we can draw conclusions as to which social demog

4、raphy might be the most affluent.In order to be most effective an advertising campaign will make use of the cultural values of a country. Obviously, companies will be able to sell more products if a great many people relate to the goods and the images used to sell them. For example, in a country lik

5、e the United States where a great percentage of the population is religious, advertisers use expressions such as heavenly, divine, or revelation, because these have connotations that prospective customers will likely identify with. Similarly, advertisers will try to employ fashion models who embody

6、a cultures ideals of personal beauty, because attractive men and women will sell more products than unattractive ones.Companies identify social demographics or parts of society that are most likely to buy their products and design their advertisings accordingly. For example, teenage girls are more l

7、ikely to buy mobile phones than retired factory workers. Thus companies will make use of fashion trends in their ads and probably pay a famous pop singer a big chunk of money to endorse their product. If the majority of all advertisings in a country are geared towards a specific target market or aud

8、ience, then this part of the population probably has the most financial resources at their disposal.Although we can learn some things about a country by looking at its advertising we have to remember that this knowledge is limited. After all, advertising is only directed at people who have the means

9、 to buy consumer goods. Thus advertising does not tell us anything about the overall prosperity or likes and dislikes of a country. Also, advertising not only reflects but also tries to shape and change cultural values. Therefore, it does not accurately reflect the exact state of a countrys culture.

10、托福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析：自主创业还是替人打工?托福写作难点话题一览Be self-employed, work for someone else, or own a business?Some people prefer to work for themselves or own a business. Others prefer to work for an employer. Would you rather be self-employed, work for someone else, or own a business? Use specific reasons to e

11、xplain your choice.写作思路展开结构分析不要急于选择。先讨论两种情况各自的优缺点做老板，赚钱的，可是风险也大给别人打工，是稳定，但是工资少。选择哪一种要看各人情况。本话题高分范文赏析There are advantages to all three kinds of employment. Owning ones own business might very well be the fastest way to fortune. Working for an employer, on the other hand, is often less risky and usual

12、ly there are fewer responsibilities. However, I would like to be self-employed. Being self-employed would cater to my strength of working independently, it would give me a maximum of professional and personal freedom, and I would not have to take responsibility for the continued financial security o

13、f any employees and their families. I am a perfectionist and enjoy working by myself. When I work in a team or together with a group of people, usually the others quality standards are much lower than my own. Furthermore, I like to be involved in every step of the development process. For example, i

14、f I could become a journalist I would like to be self-employed because I would be responsible for researching, writing, and editing. At most major newspapers and magazines these are three different areas.Another great benefit of being self-employed is the ability to balance personal life and career.

15、 When working for a major company I would have to work on assignments that dont interest me very much. Also, it would be difficult for me to take vacation time whenever I needed. However, as a self-employed person I can decide which jobs I want to take and which jobs to reject. Nobody would order me

16、 around. Also, I could design my own work schedule and adjust or change it if it interfered with my personal life.Lastly, as a self-employed professional I would neither have to give orders nor take orders. After all, I dont work for anybody and nobody works for me. As I am not very fond of managing

17、 people and even less interested in being bossed around, the independent or self-employed work would suit me just fine.托福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析：应该做违心的事吗?托福写作难点话题一览Should people sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing?Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should sometimes do

18、 things that they do not enjoy doing. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.写作思路展开结构分析这道题目审题时要注意一个关键词sometimes，这个词本身比较委婉，放在句子里面就让这个观点没有那么极端。因此支持同意会比较好写。偶尔做一些自己不想做不喜欢做的事情其实是比较正常也容易理解的事情。大家可以结合自身的生活经验来给出一些例子，比如为了健康去吃自己比喜欢吃的食物，或是为了未来发展学习一些自己不感兴趣的课程专业等等。本话题高分范文赏析We live in a world in

19、which every one wants to be successful. Nothing is wrong about the desire to be No. 1, and there is no doubt that being successful is enjoyable. Nevertheless, it is somewhat childish to think we can be finally successful by only doing what we enjoy doing. People often are amazed by the glorious appe

20、arance of a skyscraper, however they at the same time forget the fact that the skyscraper had taken a long time to construct, maybe much longer time to design, and possibly even cost peoples lives during the constructing process! We may categorize things into two groups, the enjoyable and the unenjo

21、yable; at the same time, another category can be made: the necessary and the unnecessary. The point is, things that are necessary are not always enjoyable and things that are enjoyable sometimes may be unnecessary. Doing things that are necessary rather than those that are merely enjoyable is not on

22、ly helpful, but might also be indispensable for individual success. We all admire even envy those who now have attained great achievements, such those famous stars as Jacky Chen, Jet Li. We should, however, be aware of the exorbitant prices they have paid for their present glories. Jacky Chen once t

23、old that when he was still a teenager, he and his partners were required to practice more than 12 hours a day; and it was said that Jet Li was sent to be an apprentice when he was hardly four years old! Apparently, those seemingly cruel hardships have turned out to be the best gifts years later. But

24、 for yesterdays struggle, todays glories could not exist. Things that are both enjoyable and necessary or both unenjoyable and unnecessary virtually seldom exist. We may dislike some curriculums in university, such as mathematics or history, but they are necessary; we may prefer leisure times to wor

25、k days, but the latter are indispensable. Pursuing a successful life is nothing more than making wise decisions, and by wise we mean the choice of doing the necessary first.托福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析：老师工资和学生表现挂钩托福写作难点话题一览Should teachers be paid according to how much their students learn?Do you agree or disag

26、ree with the following statement? Teachers should be paid according to how much their students learn. Give specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.写作思路展开结构分析不能同意。乍看起来(at the first glance)很有道理。问题在于：教育不是商品。如何保证能够确切地衡量学生究竟学到了多少?学生学到多少，并不是老师一个人的事情，还要看学生自身的素质(quality);能力(capacity)等等。如果采取了这样

27、的方式，就会出现老师迎合(cater to/ pander to/ play up to students taste)学生而不是引导 (guide; lead)学生，违背了教育的原则。本话题高分范文赏析People usually believe that teachers have the most important job in all of society. They raise our children to be forward-thinking, bright individuals. They ensure that children get along with each

28、other, and learn to work together as a team. As such, being a teacher typically means a stable paycheck. However, when some people propose that teachers should be paid according to how much their students learn, I can hardly agree. First of all, students may not be interested in learning. When stude

29、nts are not interested in learning, the teacher can hardly be held responsible. The teacher can grade them harshly, keep them in after class, and discipline them severely, but the students will still not learn if they do not want to. If the teacher is trying his/her best to teach the students, and t

30、he information is presented clearly and succinctly, he/she can do no better job. Moreover, there is a limit on how much a child can learn. If a teacher was to be paid according to how much his/her students learned, there would be a certain point where he/she could teach them no more. I remember when

31、 I was in high school, there would be moments in the year when I didnt think I could fit any more information into my head. This was not my teachers fault, and the point is that I just was not absorbing the material. I think many teachers would find this problem if they were paid by how much their s

32、tudents learnt. Most importantly, teachers should not be paid according to how much their students learn because some of the lessons that a student learns cannot be measured by a test. We cannot simply give children a test to discover how much they have learnt in a class. Tests rarely measure ones social skills, ones abilityto communicate, or ones ability to integrate successfully into the world. However, it is the teachers who help students to manifest these qualities.