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1、toefl托福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析 为了让大家更好的准备托福考试，给大家整理了托福考试满分范文,下面就和大家分享，来欣赏一下吧。托福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析：衡量工作价值的方式托福写作难点话题一览Is money the most important aspect of a job?Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The most important aspect of a job is the money a person earns. Use specific reasons and exampl

2、es to support your answer.写作思路展开结构分析这道题目问的是大家对于职业选择的看法。因为题目中使用了most important这样的绝对词，所以一般来说都是选择反对这个观点会比较容易展开论述。实际上除了看工资以外，关于一项工作的价值还可以从其职业发展，对个人能力提升的帮助等方面来展开，这些都是大家比较容易想到也相对好展开的论点。本话题高分范文赏析I understand that nowadays it is very important for people to earn a lot of money. As a matter of fact, many peo

3、ple equate money with success: the more money you earn, the more successful you are. However, the financial aspect is not the most important aspect of a job. The work environment and camaraderie with ones coworkers, the personal fulfillment from ones occupation, and the opportunity to balance profes

4、sional and personal lives are much more important. People who spend forty hours a week or more at their place of employment should enjoy their work environment, especially the company of their co-workers. After all, the prospect of having to spend any amount of time in a room or a building with peop

5、le who one does not respect, who are unpleasant, or, even worse, hostile, will have a very negative effect on ones disposition and mental health. A few more dollars in the bank account cannot compensate for this. Similarly, one should derive a special fulfillment or pleasure from doing ones job. Nor

6、mally, a person will spend at least a third of his/her adult life at work (eight hours or more every day). One should not waste this time by doing work that is boring or tedious even if it is well paid. The money earned will only enrich the life away from work but not enhance the work experience. Fi

7、nally, the personal life can only be enjoyed adequately if there is enough time away from the professional life. Affluence affords many nice things, such as houses or cars or television sets, but a person who has to work night and day will not be able to derive any pleasure from them. Also, a father

8、 or a mother who makes a lot of money might be able to provide his or her family with a comfortable life, but how much good does that do if he or she never sees them? Time spent with family, especially children, is invaluable, and thus a job with long hours might cost a person more than it affords.托

9、福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析：加入团队做leader还是member?Is it better to be a member of a group than to be the leader of a group?Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to be a member of a group than to be the leader of a group. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.论做lead

10、er的好处：主动，可以使用多的资源，获得更多;缺点：风险大，要承担更多责任。讨论做member的好处：安逸;没有风险;缺点：收获较小。另外，如何选择做leader还是member一定程度上与一个人的性格有关。同时，还需要看是做什么的group，视情况而定。本话题高分范文赏析When working in a group, there are many different positions, but basically, one can think of a group as having two job types: member and leader. Some people believ

11、e that it is better to be a member of a group than it is to be the leader. However, I think it is better to be a leader in a group because as the leader, ones ideas are more likely to be heard, he/she is more likely to receive accolades for completework, and he/she is able to make important decision

12、s for the group. The leader of a group has the strongest voice of all. If someone enjoys coming up with new, exciting concepts and making a difference in a project, then he/she should be the leader. It can be a frustrating experience at time to be a member of a group. At times, a members ideas are n

13、ot taken seriously, because he/she does not have respect that the leader has. If one leads a group, his/her ideas will always be heard and respected, and usually followed through with. When a project is complete, it is the leader that receives accolades for doing a good job. While the entire team ge

14、ts some respect and appreciation upon completion, it is the leader who receives the most admiration. This is an advantage for building ones resume, and generally gaining respect in society. People always respect the leader of a group more than the members. Moreover, it is better to be the leader of

15、a group than a member because the leader is able to wield the power. Being the leader means getting a say in all decisions, and often, is allowed to follow through with any ideas that he/she thinks up. This can mean that things that a person finds important will be completed quickly and efficiently.

16、 Overall, I believe that it is better to be the leader of a group than to be a member. A leader can make decisions, follow through with them, and receive recognition for a job well done. However, there are of course some negatives of being a leader. The leader has much more responsibility for the pr

17、oject than anyone else, and if there is a failure, it is the leaders fault. If a person is willing to take on this added responsibility, then being a leader is by far the best position.托福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析：历史建筑的保留和拆除托福写作难点话题一览Should historic buildings be preserved or be replaced with modern buildings?S

18、hould a city try to preserve its old, historic buildings or destroy them and replace them with modern buildings? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.写作思路展开结构分析保留历史建筑的必要性在于其文化意义、教育意义和商业意义(比如开发旅游业)。而拆除则是出于城市土地需求的现实性来考虑，比如开发住房和商业场所。至于要不要保留，也往往是看哪一个价值更大，并且要具体情况具体分析。The answer depen

19、ds on the concrete analysis of concrete conditions。本话题高分范文赏析Tall glass towers, whose shiny facades are as cool as their air-conditioned insides, are becoming part of cityscapes from South America to North East Asia. In the process, old buildings are making room for the seemingly unstoppable advancem

20、ent of modernity. Thus the face of the global city is changing, and city planners are facing the difficult choice of either preserving historic building or replacing them with modern ones. As there are strong arguments for either option, the final decision will depend on a thorough analysis of the s

21、pecific situation at hand. It is important to preserve historic buildings and parts of cities because they are part of the cultural heritage that gives identity to a community. Old homes and living quarters are a part of history, and, once destroyed, leveled, and buried under thousands of tons of co

22、ncrete and steel, they will be lost forever. The constructions erected in their places in too many cases lack any sort of connection to the place. These buildings are anonymous and cultureless edifices that could stand tall in any other part of the world. They lack the charm and character of their h

23、istoric predecessors.Yet the construction of new buildings is a sign of modernization. Not only will many people find work in the process of building these structures, but their existence will attract future investments and thus greatly benefit the economy of an area or country. In addition, these n

24、ew buildings often have lower maintenance costs in comparison to the aged constructions. More importantly, newly development homes and office spaces include the comforts of modern life, e.g. air-conditioning and modern kitchens, are thus comfortable to live in.Sweeping generalizations are impossible

25、 here. A city government should try its best to preserve the old, historic charm of a city and its people. Yet at the same time, they have to look forward and modernize old, rundown buildings in an effort to make their city a more comfortable place to live in and a more successful place to do busine

26、ss. Therefore, a city should think about its general interests and goals and then try to make specific decisions in individual situations.托福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析：介绍代表国家的象征托福写作难点话题一览The thing representing your countryIf you were asked to send one thing representing your country to an international exhibiti

27、on, what would you choose? Why? Use specific reasons and details to explain your choice.这道题目自由度很高，对中国考生来说应该也很容易想到各种代表性的事物，比如中国特产的吉祥物大熊猫，或者中国瓷器，这些都是对老外来说也非常具有中国特色，耳熟能详的事物。本话题高分范文赏析If I were to send one thing to an international exhibition that represented my culture, it would be rice. Chinese culture

28、, boasting a lengthy history, is composed of numerous sub-cultures. The agricultural way of life, centered around rice, has played a vastly important part in the countrys history. For thousands of years, the Chinese have been diligently cultivating their land. Blood, sweat and tears have been shed o

29、ver their soil in the pursuit of favorable harvests. This reliance on the land for so many thousands of years accounts for Chinas strong rural essence. The need for rice production has led the Chinese to pay particular attention to irrigation technologies and improving cultivation. The agricultural

30、way of life, centered on rice, has had a strong influence on the social, economic, political and ideological developments of ancient China. In this sense, traditional Chinese culture may be considered a rice culture. A meal without rice, the Chinese say, is like a beautiful woman with only one eye.

31、In China, where the word for rice is also the word for food, young girls are warned that every grain of rice they leave in their bowls will be a pockmark on the face of their future husbands. Instead of saying, How are you? as a typical greeting, the Chinese ask Have you had your rice today? Quittin

32、g or losing a job is called breaking the rice bowl and it is bad luck to upset a bowl of rice. Rice is also a very important commodity in todays society. It is one of the major exports in China, allowing people all over the world to take part in something that emanates Chinese culture. Rice remains

33、a staple food for both the rich and the poor, and there is hardly a meal had in our country that does not involve this fine grain. As you can see from the above-mentioned text, rice is an integral part of Chinese culture and tradition. While Chinese culture is spread over a vast number of arts and c

34、rafts, I believe that it is the humble, but profound rice that speaks to us all, and most poignantly represents the essence of our culture.托福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析：获得成功和运气有关吗托福写作难点话题一览Does luck have anything to do with success?“When people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with su

35、ccess.” Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position.写作思路展开结构分析首先题目里的nothing to do有点太过极端了。很明显是出题者给大家挖的坑，即使同意这个观点考生也不能太过武断，要避免观点太过绝对和偏颇。所以建议大家选择的态度是不能完全同意也不能完全不同意，如果要同意立场尽量维持在“很大程度上同意”会比较好。考生可以指出luck确实存在，然后展开说可能导致人们成功的若干原因：诚实、睿智、幽默;执著;肯

36、于做不喜欢的事情等等。本话题高分范文赏析Here is a true story, a story about an African man called Cinque who slew a most terrifying beast that any one has ever seen, a lion. His siblings in the village who know about this anecdote gave him great respect and call him the big man. However, he told the truth later. It had

37、 killed several people, even hunters among us. Everyone including me was afraid. I was lying down with my family, when out of nowhere it appeared. As it came for me, I picked up a big rock and I threw it. And that wasnt bravery, because any man would do the same to protect his family. But by some mi

38、racle, you see, I hit it. I dont know how that killed it, but it did. A rock, you see, a rock. I received the gratitude of everyone in the village. I was given respect. They treated me as if I was a prince. They gave me the finest country cloth. All these things they gave me, I took them all. But I

39、knew I didnt deserve it, for when I threw that rock at that beast, if I missed it, I wouldnt be sitting here today trying to explain these things to you or somebody else, Id just be dead. Im not a big man, just a lucky one. You see, luck does exist. When it appears, mathematicians describe in such a

40、 way that something has an extremely small probability but it does happen. People often say, one has to have an opportunity to succeed. In this case, luck is the opportunity, and to some extent is an indispensable factor to achieve success.When people say luck has nothing to do with success, I wonde

41、r it is not their intention to deny existence of luck, but to encourage. Because luck in fact is a factor that one can not and should not count on, even though we know people who have succeeded have their own luck. It is somewhere, but nobody knows where. It happens sometime, but we dont know when. By contrast, hard work is something that everyone can count on, and as is often the case, hard work might bring luck. Therefore, luck itself is of no hope, and lack of luck should not be an excuse to failure.