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1、TOEFL托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析 为了让大家更好的准备托福考试，给大家整理一些托福考试作文范文，下面就和大家分享，来欣赏一下吧。.托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析：do you like to get up early or get up late托福写作难点话题一览Which kind of life do you like, get up early or get up late?Some people prefer to get up early in the morning and start the days work. Others prefer to

2、 get up later in the day and work until late at night. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.写作思路展开结构分析这是个非常私人的问题，所以大家可以直接代入自己的经验来写。一般来讲，尽管很多人都喜欢睡懒觉，但是单纯从题目容易展开的角度来说，早起的好处应该更容易写一些。比如早起有益于健康，可以去锻炼身体;早上大脑经过休息，相对更加清醒，适合学习等等，理由很轻松就能想出一大堆。但选择晚起要想出好处就要稍微困难一些了，可能不太容易

3、展开，需要大家自行斟酌。本话题高分范文赏析When I was a kid and didnt want to go to bed early, my father always used to say, The early bird gets the worm. I certainly knew what he meant: people who stay up late at night arent able to get up early and take full advantage of the new days opportunities. Im not sure how wise

4、 I am, but I can certainly feel that getting a good nights sleep and an early start helps me do a full days work. I However, every job or task always has unforeseen problems and complications. A trip to the post office seems simple enough, but could be complicated and lengthened by heavy traffic, fo

5、rgetting to bring money or addresses, or long lines. When I need to do many things in a day, a| delay at the post office can negatively affect all of my other tasks. To minimize these potential negative effects, I try and get an early start that leaves me plenty of time later in the day to finish my

6、 other tasks. Another important reason to get up before 8:00 a.m. is that businesses usually start their workdays by 9:00 a.m. at the latest. A person who wakes up at 10:00 a.m. has already lost two precious business hours. This gives them less time to go to the bank, the post office, or deal with a

7、ny company or government office that keeps regular business hours. People who get up early have the extra benefit of all of the hours of a full business day during which they can be more productive than they can during non-business hours. Finally, getting up early and going to sleep early is a fairl

8、y standard schedule to which most of society adheres. If I adhere to it as well, I will have more time to spend with my family and friends. If I get up late and stay up late, I will not only lose opportunities to interact with others during business hours, I will also lose chances to interact with p

9、eople because they are asleep! This would be all right if I were a hermit, but since I enjoy the company of others, I prefer to be an early bird.托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析：spend money immediately or save for future托福写作难点话题一览Spend your earned money immediately or save it for future?Is it better to enjoy y

10、our money when you earn it or is it better to save your money for some time in the future? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.写作思路展开结构分析大家可以先讨论一下储蓄的必要性以及及时享乐的好处，然后可以采取it depends策略进行选择。比如你可以写是花钱及时享乐还是把钱存起来取决于赚到钱的具体数量。如果一个月赚到的钱比较少，存也存不了多少，那么可以选择花掉。而如果能赚到比较多的钱，就可以选择花掉一些，存起来一些等等。本

11、话题高分范文赏析My mom used to tell me: You can only spend money once. What she meant is that if you spent money frivolously, you might really need it later and regret your earlier careless spending. After several years of managing a small amount of my own money, I have come to the conclusion that my mom wa

12、s right, saving is better than spending. No one knows what tomorrow will bring, the only thing we can do is to try to be prepared. When disaster strikes, perhaps a sudden illness in the family, having money on hand can mean the difference between life and death. When opportunity knocks, a surprise a

13、cceptance to a top university for instance, money is needed for tuition, board, and books. This is not to say that one should not spend any money because they have to prepare for every possible contingency. It simply means that one should not spend recklessly without having a substantial amount of m

14、oney to guard against an unpredictable future. The importance of saving money when young cannot be overstressed. This is because young people can tolerate higher-risk, higher return investments, and can let their investments mature longer, allowing interest on savings to compound. If invested well,

15、$5,000 today could become $20,000 in 15 years. This concept is so powerful because the investor does not have to work for the money, the money works for the investor. Saving is not only a bulwark against an unpredictable future, it is also a way to generate future wealth. At last, while it is true t

16、hat spending money can be enjoyable, it is not the only way to have fun. The idea that we must always be consuming things in order to have a good time is a lie told to us by advertisers. These companies tell us that only when we drive the right car, wear the right clothes, and drink the right bevera

17、ges will we be truly happy. In reality, each person determines the standard of his/her own happiness. For my part, I have decided that creating things, writing, painting, making music, is what truly makes me happy. The amount of money I need to spend doing these things is almost nothing, but the hap

18、piness they bring me is immeasurable. I would prefer to save money for unavoidable expenses and enjoy life by being a producer, not a consumer.托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析：how to deal with a gift of money托福写作难点话题一览How to deal with a gift of money?You have received a gift of money. The money is enough to bu

19、y either a piece of jewelry you like or tickets to a concert you want to attend. Which would you buy? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.写作思路展开结构分析这道题目的立场都是比较中立的，所以考生选择哪一个都无所谓，只要能够列出三个理由展开*就可以了。选择买珠宝可以说珠宝比较保值，“钻石恒久远一颗永流传”，或是珠宝更有实用性，以后可以经常戴着等等;选择去音乐会则可以用艺术是无价的，或是音乐会现场体验更好，表演者最后一次

20、谢幕演出非常珍贵等等。总之要能够给出可以自圆其说的理由就行了。本话题高分范文赏析It seems not a difficult decision for me. But if I was given the gift of money in different time, I would have different answers. If I was given the money when I was in my high school, I would buy a ticket to a concert. I had been longing for attending concert

21、s of famous artists to enjoy those transcendent pieces such as saxophone of Kenny G. Unfortunately I just was not able to afford those exorbitant prices. The given amount should be better if it is enough for several tickets so that I could take along my best friends, whose situations were much simil

22、ar to mine. If I was given the money when I was in the university, I would buy a fine piece of jewelry, and give it to my girl friend as a casual present, for we might enjoy a certain concert, but hardly could it be permanently impressive. Memories are always not reliable. We tend to simply forget a

23、nything at best, memories are somewhat distortedif time past long enough. But if I bought my girl friend a piece of jewelry, not costly though it might be, it would be a perfect reminder, being never changed. If I was given the money recently, it would only make me feel funny. I dont want to go to c

24、oncerts anymore, because I became more and more reluctant to present in crowd public places, and besides, I have bought a super Hi-Fi which always brings me identical pleasure. And I dont want to buy any jewelry either, for it is meaningless for a man who is now solitary. Nevertheless, if I was forc

25、ed to accept some money as a giftit hardly happensI might buy some books, after all, reading always makes me relaxed and amazed.托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析：businesses hire employees for entire lives托福写作难点话题一览Should businesses hire employees for their entire lives?Businesses should hire employees for their

26、 entire lives. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.写作思路展开结构分析不同意比较好写一些。因为题目中的entire这个词是一个过于绝对的修饰词，所以一般来说应该是要反对的。企业雇用人员的原则应该是以利益为上，能够为企业带来更多利润的员工才侄儿雇佣，但企业对于员工也是有义务要负责的，特别是那些做出过重大贡献的员工。大家可以结合这两方面来拓展观点。本话题高分范文赏析The decision to hire an employee for life is

27、a serious commitment on the part of both parties. For the employee, such an arrangement means lifetime job security. From the perspective of an employer, however, the deal is not so sweet. Guaranteed lifetime employment, or tenure, at a company, can promote bad work habits, prevent innovation, and l

28、ead to potentially disastrous personnel problems. When a workers employment is contingent upon their job performance, they will tend to work diligently. On the other hand, if workers know that no matter how hard they work, they will receive the same amount of money and have no chance of being fired,

29、 there are no incentives for them to work. For people to be model workers they need compelling reasons to work hard and produce work of the highest quality. A tenure-system promotes laziness, inefficiency and low-quality work because it fails to offer incentives for good work, and fails to offer com

30、pelling deterrents against bad work. Secondly, companies that offer lifetime positions to employees cannot adapt to a rapidly changing world. For instance, if an employee who was hired by a company twenty years ago might be too old to effectively learn new computer-related skills. In todays modern o

31、ffice environment, companies that cannot make effective use of new technology are at a severe disadvantage to those that can. In this case, a company that does not have the freedom to restructure, hiring and firing employees, in accordance with shifting demands is likely to fail. A company that prov

32、ides its employees with tenure effectively locks out new blood and runs the risk of being paralyzed by a staff unable to change with the times. Finally, offering tenure to employees is a major risk because of unforeseeable personnel problems. Every office, no matter how well managed, is bound to hav

33、e personality conflicts. In many cases, personality conflicts can lead to one of the feuding parties leaving the company. But if the conflict involves two tenured employees, the business might be seriously affected, even destroyed. Despite the uncertainty it brings to workers lives, the company must

34、 look out for its own best interests first and not allow this disastrous situation to occur by not instituting a tenure policy.为了让大家更好的准备托福考试，给大家整理一些托福考试作文范文，下面就和大家分享，来欣赏一下吧。.托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析：do you like to get up early or get up late托福写作难点话题一览Which kind of life do you like, get up early or get

35、 up late?Some people prefer to get up early in the morning and start the days work. Others prefer to get up later in the day and work until late at night. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.写作思路展开结构分析这是个非常私人的问题，所以大家可以直接代入自己的经验来写。一般来讲，尽管很多人都喜欢睡懒觉，但是单纯从题目容易展开

36、的角度来说，早起的好处应该更容易写一些。比如早起有益于健康，可以去锻炼身体;早上大脑经过休息，相对更加清醒，适合学习等等，理由很轻松就能想出一大堆。但选择晚起要想出好处就要稍微困难一些了，可能不太容易展开，需要大家自行斟酌。本话题高分范文赏析When I was a kid and didnt want to go to bed early, my father always used to say, The early bird gets the worm. I certainly knew what he meant: people who stay up late at night ar

37、ent able to get up early and take full advantage of the new days opportunities. Im not sure how wise I am, but I can certainly feel that getting a good nights sleep and an early start helps me do a full days work. I However, every job or task always has unforeseen problems and complications. A trip

38、to the post office seems simple enough, but could be complicated and lengthened by heavy traffic, forgetting to bring money or addresses, or long lines. When I need to do many things in a day, a| delay at the post office can negatively affect all of my other tasks. To minimize these potential negati

39、ve effects, I try and get an early start that leaves me plenty of time later in the day to finish my other tasks. Another important reason to get up before 8:00 a.m. is that businesses usually start their workdays by 9:00 a.m. at the latest. A person who wakes up at 10:00 a.m. has already lost two p

40、recious business hours. This gives them less time to go to the bank, the post office, or deal with any company or government office that keeps regular business hours. People who get up early have the extra benefit of all of the hours of a full business day during which they can be more productive th

41、an they can during non-business hours. Finally, getting up early and going to sleep early is a fairly standard schedule to which most of society adheres. If I adhere to it as well, I will have more time to spend with my family and friends. If I get up late and stay up late, I will not only lose oppo

42、rtunities to interact with others during business hours, I will also lose chances to interact with people because they are asleep! This would be all right if I were a hermit, but since I enjoy the company of others, I prefer to be an early bird.托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析：spend money immediately or save f

43、or future托福写作难点话题一览Spend your earned money immediately or save it for future?Is it better to enjoy your money when you earn it or is it better to save your money for some time in the future? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.写作思路展开结构分析大家可以先讨论一下储蓄的必要性以及及时享乐的好处，然后可以采取it depends

44、策略进行选择。比如你可以写是花钱及时享乐还是把钱存起来取决于赚到钱的具体数量。如果一个月赚到的钱比较少，存也存不了多少，那么可以选择花掉。而如果能赚到比较多的钱，就可以选择花掉一些，存起来一些等等。本话题高分范文赏析My mom used to tell me: You can only spend money once. What she meant is that if you spent money frivolously, you might really need it later and regret your earlier careless spending. After se

45、veral years of managing a small amount of my own money, I have come to the conclusion that my mom was right, saving is better than spending. No one knows what tomorrow will bring, the only thing we can do is to try to be prepared. When disaster strikes, perhaps a sudden illness in the family, having

46、 money on hand can mean the difference between life and death. When opportunity knocks, a surprise acceptance to a top university for instance, money is needed for tuition, board, and books. This is not to say that one should not spend any money because they have to prepare for every possible contin

47、gency. It simply means that one should not spend recklessly without having a substantial amount of money to guard against an unpredictable future. The importance of saving money when young cannot be overstressed. This is because young people can tolerate higher-risk, higher return investments, and c

48、an let their investments mature longer, allowing interest on savings to compound. If invested well, $5,000 today could become $20,000 in 15 years. This concept is so powerful because the investor does not have to work for the money, the money works for the investor. Saving is not only a bulwark agai

49、nst an unpredictable future, it is also a way to generate future wealth. At last, while it is true that spending money can be enjoyable, it is not the only way to have fun. The idea that we must always be consuming things in order to have a good time is a lie told to us by advertisers. These companies tell us that only when we drive the right car, wear the right cloth