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1、外研版七年级下,写作素养提升练,Module 1Lost and found,外研版七年级下,本模块以介绍失物招领处的物品以及某人丢失物品的信息为话题，内容包含:失物招领处所在地、人们丢失物品的原因、招领处物品介绍，人们寻找自己物品的情景，要细心保管自己的物品的观点等。,单 词：(A)物品类1.蜡笔crayon 2.手套glove3.手表watch 4.字典dictionary5.钥匙key 6.橡皮擦eraser(B)颜色类1.红red 2.白white 3.黑black 4.绿green 5.黄yellow 6.蓝blue7.紫purple 8.棕brown,短 语：at the airp

2、ort,at the station,on the plane/train/bus,in the taxi(注意介词的不同),1.First of all,come and look in the lost and found box!2.People often lose things when theyre travelling or when theyre in a hurry.3.They leave things on planes,on trains,on buses and in taxis.4.Hundreds of people come here every day.,句

3、型：,假设你是Mr Smith,昨天下午五点，你所在的农场丢失了一只鸭子和一头猪。请根据下面的提示内容,用英语写一则寻物启事。提示:1.鸭子,黄色,大嘴巴,2 岁;2.猪，很肥，大约5 岁;3.电话:8798-582-607要求:包括以上所给全部要点。,1.体裁：应用文2.话题：写寻物启事3.人称：描述事件以第一人称为主4.时态：主要使用一般现在时,【审题指导】,【思路构建】,LostYesterday afternoon at 5 oclock.On Mr Smiths farm.My duck.It is yellow with a big mouth.Its two years old.

4、My pig.It is very fat and it is about 5 years old.Call Mr Smith at 8798-582-607.Thank you very much.,【范文赏析】,点评：语言简洁明了，没有拖泥带水。作为一则寻物启事，对丢失物件的特征表述直截了当，也可以称得上是一则告示。让读者快速获取信息，是一篇佳作。,假如你是莉萨(Lisa)。今天上午你将书包落在了学校餐厅。请根据下面表格所给信息，写一则寻物启事，张贴在学校布告栏里。词数50 左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。,LostMarch 3rdIm Lisa.This morning I lo

5、st my purple schoolbag in the school dining hall._Lisa,_,LostMarch 3rdIm Lisa.This morning I lost my purple schoolbag in the school dining hall.There are five books and a pencil box in my bag.Two pens,three pencils and an eraser are in the pencil box.You can also see a brown wallet,a pair of red glo

6、ves and a,_,mobile phone in the bag.A box of crayons is in it,too.These things are important to me.Please help me look for my schoolbag.If you find it,please call me at 3022837.Lisa,外研版七年级下,写作素养提升练,Module 2What can you do?,外研版七年级下,本模块话题是谈论个人能力。主要用情态动词can 来介绍或询问某人的能力。还要求同学们能够谈论各自的喜好和意愿。,单 词：play,join

7、,club,music,sport,choose,read,watch,enjoy,travel,help,sing,dance,monitor,promise,team,sure,短 语：would like,be good at,do well in,be ready to,like doing,the best,get on well with,just like,1.I would like to say something about myself.2.I am really good at.3.is my favourite.4.She can play the piano wel

8、l.5.I can/cant.so I want to join club.,句 型：,6.What about you?Can you?7.Choose me as and I promise to8.I work very hard,and I do well at school.9.Im kind and Im always ready to help others.,根据下面表格提供的信息，把你新认识的朋友Helen 及其家庭成员的情况用英语介绍给大家。注意：词数不少于70；内容可以适当扩展。,1.体裁：记叙文2.话题：介绍他人情况3.人称：主要用第三人称4.时态：一般现在时,【审题指

9、导】,【思路构建】,Hello,everyone!This is my new friend.Her name is Helen.She and her parents come to China from America.But her mother was born in Britain.Helen is in Class 2,Grade 7.She is a good student.She can speak Chinese and she can read some Chinese books,too.Her father is a doctor in a hospital.He c

10、an ride a horse.He often goes riding at weekends.Helens mother is an English teacher.She can play the piano very well.All of them are very kind.,【范文赏析】,点评：本文开头直接点题，条理清晰，要点齐全。重点介绍“我”的朋友Helen，详略得当。能运用本模块所学的用can 表示能力的句型，并能对所介绍的内容进行合理扩展，使文章生动而不单调。结尾的句子也起到了很好的概括作用。,假如你是Paul，学校正在评选优秀学生干部(Excellent Student

11、 Cadre)，请你根据下面表格中的信息，用英语写一封推荐信给你们的班主任王老师。,要求：1.推荐信必须包含表格中所给信息，并适当发挥。2.语法正确，行文连贯，书写规范。3.词数60 左右。推荐信的开头结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。,Dear Mr Wang,I would like to recommend John for Excellent Student Cadre._I look forward to hearing from you soon.Yours,Paul,_,Dear Mr Wang，I would like to recommend John for Excellent

12、Student Cadre.He is the best student in Class 1,Grade 7.He is good at all his subjects and likes reading,singing and doing sports.He can also play the piano well.He is friendly and often helps the other students with their lessons.,_,If John can be the Excellent Student Cadre,we will be happy.I look

13、 forward to hearing from you soon.Yours,Paul,外研版七年级下,写作素养提升练,Module 3Making plans,外研版七年级下,本模块以制订计划、做打算为话题，主要介绍自己周末或假期打算做什么事情，以及自己的期望和感受。要求会灵活使用 be going to。,单 词：housework,fantastic,hope,during,second,collect,fun,early,nobody,nothing,短 语：plan to do,go over lessons,look forward to,do ones homework,go

14、sightseeing,have a good time,enjoy oneself,take a walk,have a picnic,at the weekend,on Saturday morning,1.On Saturday morning,Im going to check my email and do my homework.2.It is going to be a fantastic weekend!3.We re going to meet in the park at one oclock.4.Im looking forward to the football mat

15、ch tomorrow.,句 型：,5.Im going to enjoy myself during the May Day holiday.6.Im going on a summer camp in Sydney,Australia.7.We re also going sightseeing and going to have a picnic on the beach.,学校英语兴趣小组打算在周六进行一次登山野餐活动,你作为活动组织人员,要用英语向小组里所有同学介绍一下这次活动的主要安排。要包括以下活动,并根据活动内容适当增加一些注意事项。要求:词数不少于60。,1.体裁：记叙文2.

16、话题：周末活动计划3.人称：主要使用第一人称4.时态：主要使用一般将来时,【审题指导】,【思路构建】,Hello,everyone.We are going to climb the hill and have a picnic together on Saturday.We are going to meet outside the school gate at 7:00 am and set off at 7:20 am.Dont be late and remember to take some food and drinks.We are going to climb the hill

17、 at 8:00 am.You must be careful when you climb the hill.At 11:30 am,we are going to have a picnic.We are going to go back at 2:30 pm.I hope we are going to have a great weekend.,【范文赏析】,点评：全文语句通顺，语意连贯，主干内容按照时间顺序展开叙述，时间状语的使用清晰地表达了各项计划的具体时间，条理清晰，逻辑性强，且句式丰富，准确使用了本模块所学的be going to 结构来描写计划和安排。,假如今天是“五一”劳动

18、节。现在是上午8 点，车站里人山人海，许多人正在等火车。他们打算去旅游观光。格林一家打算去爬华山。王先生和他的孩子们打算去迪士尼乐园，因为他们喜欢米老鼠。张先生和他的妻子打算去三亚玩，因为他们喜欢阳光和大海。所有人都会玩得很开心。请根据以上内容提示，写一篇80 词左右的英语短文。,要求：1.句子通顺，语意连贯，内容完整；2.包含以上所有提示内容，可适当发挥；3.文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。It is May Day today._,_,It is May Day today.Its eight oclock in the morning now.There are lots of peopl

19、e at the train station.They are waiting for their trains.They are going to go sightseeing.The Greens are going to climb Mount Hua.Mr Wang and his children are looking forward to going to Disneyland because they like Mickey,_,Mouse.Mr Zhang and his wife are going to Sanya because they like the sunshi

20、ne and the sea.All the people are going to have a good time.,外研版七年级下,写作素养提升练,Module 4Life in the future,外研版七年级下,本模块以“未来生活”为话题，要求学生能够使用一般将来时表达对未来生活的想象和向往。,单 词：different,robot,machine,weather,clothes,school,traffic,everywhere,pollution,短 语：in the future,long holidays,light work,free time,in twenty yea

21、rs time,some day,more and more,a big change,1.Life in the future will be different.2.In ten years time,maybe there wont be any.3.Students/Teachers will/wont.4.Will there be./Is there going to be?5.What will our future life be like?6.Im looking forward to.,句 型：,我们无法改变过去，却能用勤奋和智慧创造美好未来。亲爱的同学，你对未来的生活有着

22、怎样的期待呢？请以“My life in the future”为题写一篇英语短文，畅想自己未来的学习、工作和生活。要求：1.语句通顺，合乎逻辑，书写规范。6080 词。2.文中不得使用真实的姓名和学校名称。,1.体裁：记叙文2.话题：未来生活3.人称：第一人称4.时态：一般将来时,【审题指导】,【思路构建】,My life in the futureMy life in the future will be colorful and meaningful.Im going to be a good doctor after I leave school.But I will never gi

23、ve up studying and my robot teacher will help me get more education at home.I believe Ill bring my parents health and happiness.In my spare time,Ill stay with my,【范文赏析】,family.Well travel a lot and do lots of sports.Ill also read as many books as I can for I want to be a better man.I hope my dream w

24、ill come true with my hard work and the life in the future will get better and better.,点评：本文结构清晰，语言精炼，时态明显而准确。充满想象力的观点让文章富有个性化色彩，此为亮点所在。使用经典三段式行文方法，对未来生活进行了设想和介绍，并在最后表达了愿望。will 和 be going to 表示对将来的计划和打算，for，with 的使用使内容富有逻辑，紧密相连。,二十年以后，你的生活将会发生什么变化？根据下列提示展开合理想象，写一篇70 词左右的英语短文。1.Where will you live?2.

25、What job will you do?3.What will you do in your free time?4.Which countries will you visit?,_,In twenty years,I will live in a big house in Hefei and I will be a professor in a college.I will have some robots,and they will help me do lots of work.I will have a lot of free time.I can play baseball an

26、d go fishing with my friends.Every year,I will visit many countries like America，Japan and England with my family and good friends.Anyway,I will have a happy life in twenty years.,外研版七年级下,写作素养提升练,Module 5Shopping,外研版七年级下,本模块话题是“购物”，这是我们在日常生活中经常接触的话题。其常见的命题形式是让学生谈论某种购物方式的优劣，并谈谈自己的观点。请注意：1.既要说优点，也要说缺点

27、，这样观点全面，有逻辑性。2.要学会使用连接词，如first,second,third 等，使文章条理清晰。,单 词：market,supermarket,size,take,sale,price,fresh,advantage,compare,pay,post,product,receive,safe,later,open,over,短 语：try on,one day,online shopping,go out,several advantages,receive it by post,pay for it over the Internet,compare the prices of

28、the same product,1.It is a new way of shopping.2.It is popular and it has several advantages.3.You can also compare the prices of the same product.4.But it isnt safe to pay over the Internet.5.Every coin has two sides.（凡事都有两面。）,句 型：,网购已不再是一个新鲜的社会现象。但它与实体店购物的比较依然是人们热衷的话题。请根据下表提示，谈谈网上购物的利与弊。,要求：1.语句流畅

29、，书写规范;2.包含提示内容，可适当发挥;3.词数80 左右，首句已给出，不计入总词数;4.文中不能出现人名、地名等真实信息。Online shopping is quite popular in our daily life now._,1.体裁：议论文2.话题：谈论网购的优劣3.人称：以第二人称为主4.时态：一般现在时,【审题指导】,【思路构建】,Online shopping is quite popular in our daily life now.It is a new way of shopping.First,it is very convenient for us to bu

30、y things over the Internet.Second,the stores online are open for 24 hours so you can shop at any time you like.Last,you dont need to stand in a line and wait for a long time.,【范文赏析】,However,there are many disadvantages as well.First of all,you cant see the real products.As a result,you may be cheate

31、d easily.Also,many people cant have fun going out with friends.They dont feel happy.All in all,we should make proper use of online shopping.,点评：本文格式正确，要点齐全，在文章开头就点出中心论点，接下来分两段分述网购的优劣，逻辑清晰；在分别叙述网购优缺点的同时，用了连接词连接要点，层次清晰。最后一段对文章进行了总结，也是亮点。,随着互联网的普及，网购越来越流行，相信同学们身边一定有不少同学已经通过网络进行购物了，比如淘宝网，京东商城等，但是网络购物究竟有

32、何利弊呢？请写一篇80 词左右的短文，谈谈网上购物的好处与坏处。,要点：1.网络购物在中国发展迅速；2.网络购物的两三个优势，比如：商品多样，不限时间，不用排队等；3.不足之处两三点，比如：不知道质量如何，多花钱，不能够享受购物的乐趣等。参考词汇：Internet shopping/online shopping,advantages and disadvantages,_,Online shopping is growing fast in China.It has several advantages.First,there are many different kinds of prod

33、ucts for you to choose.Second,you can shop at any time and you dont need to wait in a line.Of course,it also has some disadvantages.For example,you dont know the quality of the products and you may spend more.At the same time,you cant have fun going out with friends.,外研版七年级下,写作素养提升练,Module 6Around t

34、own,外研版七年级下,通过本模块的学习，我们学到了方位介词的用法以及如何问路和指路。所以在实际写作过程中应注意知识点的融合。,单 词：bank,museum,along,across,opposite,tourist,turn,guidebook,right,underground,take,square,famous,clear,church,finish,短 语：get to,on the left,in front of,near here,the way to,over there,turn left,take the underground,get off,begin with,t

35、he middle of,from home to school,on the map,on a clear day,next to,post office,at the cinema,at the end of the street,bus stop,1.We are standing in front of Tiananmen Square.2.Can you tell me the way to?3.Could you tell me how to get to?4.Go across Dong Changan Jie,go along the street and turn left

36、at the third crossing.5.Is there a bookshop near here?,句 型：,6.How can I get there?7.Why not ask the policeman over there?8.Take the underground to,or you can take a bus or a taxi.9.Have a nice day!10.Welcome to this short tour of London.,11.Were standing opposite12.It takes you 135 metres above the

37、river.13.When you are tired,the best way to see London is by boat.14.As you go along the river,the London Eye is on your right.,假设一群外国客人来你的学校参观学习，由你带领外国客人参观校园，请你使用简洁的英文介绍一下校园的布局，80 词左右。,1.体裁：记叙文2.话题：问路、指路、方位的表达3.人称：第一人称4.时态：一般现在时,【审题指导】,【思路构建】,Ladies and gentlemen,welcome to our school.This is a map

38、 of my school.When you come into the school gate,youll see a tall classroom building in the middle of the school.There are two flower beds on both sides of the main road.On the left,there is a library building,and on the right is an office building.A big sports ground is behind the classroom buildin

39、g.,【范文赏析】,You can see many trees around the school.My school isnt very big,but it is very beautiful.I like having lessons here.I love my school very much.,点评：本文格式正确，要点齐全，语言通顺流畅，是一篇佳作。开篇明义，然后着重介绍校园的布局和美丽景致，恰当地运用了方位表达的知识，体现了较好的语言功底。,假设你是Jack,这个周日邀请David 来你家参加你的生日聚会，请你用英语给他发一封邮件，告诉他去你家的路线：在学校门口坐8 路车，在龙

40、河路站下车，沿着龙河路走，在第二个路口向右转，一直向前走，当看到左边有一个邮局时，你家就在邮局的后面。信的内容要包含以上要点，不少于80 词。,_,Dear David,This Sunday is my birthday.Im going to have a birthday party at 6：30 pm in my house.I hope you can come to my party.I will be really happy.Now I will tell you the way to my home.You can take the No.8 bus at our scho

41、ol gate to the Longhe Road stop.Then go along Longhe Road,and take the second turning on the right.,_,Go straight ahead,and then you will see a post office on your left.My house is behind the post office.Im looking forward to your coming and I am sure you will have a good time.Yours,Jack,外研版七年级下,写作素

42、养提升练,Module 7My past life,外研版七年级下,本模块以“过去的生活”为话题，通过谈论出生日期和出生地，过去的学习和生活等，使学生能够使用含有be 动词的一般过去时描述过去的生活以及表达感受。,单 词：town,village,countryside,road,strict,friendly,difficult,good,ago,yesterday,last,east,west,south,north,was/were,短 语：be born,10 years ago,in the past,in a small/big city,primary school,the na

43、me of,go back,first teacher,my past life,at that time,1.Life in the past was different.2.I was born in3.My primary school/first teacher was4.Teachers were strict,but very friendly to us too.5.I was so happy at that time.6.There was/werein the past.,句 型：,转眼间我们已经进入了初中的学习生活，过去的生活还历历在目，请写一篇短文，介绍一下自己过去的学

44、习和生活。要求：1.语句通顺，合乎逻辑，书写规范。6080词。2.文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称。,1.体裁：记叙文2.话题：过去的生活3.人称：第一人称4.时态：一般过去时(be),【审题指导】,【思路构建】,I can t forget my past life!I was born on September 13th,2005 in Hefei,Anhui Province.My primary school was in a small village.I not only learned knowledge but also shared happiness with my fri

45、ends.Teachers were very strict,but very friendly to us after class.I was very difficult at home,but good at school.My house was,【范文赏析】,not very big,but comfortable.I wasnt bored in it.Now I still remember my village and first school.I m looking forward to seeing my teachers and friends again.My past

46、 life was so colorful that I would never forget it.,点评：本文开门见山直奔主题，为下文描述过去的生活做好铺垫，介绍了自己过去的出生情况，学校以及老师，自己的性格特征等。语言简练，通俗易懂，结尾处作者表达了对过去生活的怀念，呼应开头。一个not onlybut also 的佳句使用和三个notbut 的排比句等使短文内容富有逻辑，紧密相连。,过去的生活是什么样子？过去的人如何生活？请你采访你的爸爸或妈妈，根据他们的回忆描述一下他们过去的学习和生活。要求：1.语句通顺，时态正确，书写规范。不少于60 词。2.文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称。,_

47、,My father was born in a small village in the west of Anhui Province on August 20th，1978.He said life was very different at that time.There were 4 children living in the old house.What a big family it was!There were no computers or mobile phones at school.So he learnt hard by reading books and had m

48、ore time to help at home.Schools were usually,_,far away from home but all the teachers and classmates were really friendly to him.They often played and had fun with each other.Life was not easy for his poor family but he was never bored in the past time!,外研版七年级下,写作素养提升练,Module 8Story time,外研版七年级下,本

49、模块写作任务是根据提示描述一个故事，要求学生要正确使用时态和规则动词的过去式来描述故事，同时使用first,then,next,finally 等词连接各个部分内容，使文章显得更有条理性。,单 词：sunny,cloudy,rainy,gold,forest,girl,shout,cry,return,lesson（经验教训）,短 语：long long ago,once upon a time,1.There was a girl/boy called2.It was sunny that day.3.They played in the park.4.It was not easy to

50、get the football back from the river.5.At last,they asked for help from other people.,句 型：,周日，小熊高兴地在公园里放风筝，可是风筝突然挂在了树上，小熊该怎么办呢？请根据图片信息写一则英语小故事。,要求：1.必须包含所提示信息，开头已给出，不计入总词数；2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范。,1.体裁：故事2.话题：根据图画描述一个故事3.人称：第三人称4.时态：一般过去时,【审题指导】,【思路构建】,It was sunny yesterday.At first a little bear wal