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1、人物比故事更重要（点评）先有人物后有故事，故事由人物生出，有什么人物必然会发生什么故事。这是真理，和鸡生蛋蛋生鸡不是一回事，没有讨论的必要。无论在小说里，还是在我们真实的生活里，人物都是很重要的。因为我们的生活平淡无奇，没有什么故事发生，人物就显得更重要。我们，你和我，还有他和她，都是平常百姓，普通人，一生里究竟有多少故事呢？所以写好人物，比写好故事，更重要。高奕的小说处女作就为我们奉献了一个人物：小职员赵正国，在办公室里负责填写报表的。这样的小职员随时随地可见，除了高奕，谁想过写写他们？如果你想当作家，就先关注你身边的人物吧，看看他们一个一个有什么与众不同的地方，哪怕有一丝一毫与众不同，就值

2、得你大写特写。在高奕的小说里，赵正国因为会办事又会拍马屁，得到领导的赏识，又因为脾气暴躁，连办公室主管都怕他。可是在一次饭局上的小小失误，使他添了一个啼笑皆非的毛病，并由此闹出了一系列的笑话，使人忍俊不禁。这到底是一个什么样的失误呢？他又添了一个什么毛病呢？高奕把一个小职员赵正国写得淋漓尽致。字数有限，在这篇点评里，我不复述高奕的小说，有兴趣的朋友，请你读本期北京文学高奕的小说。在此，我想说说高奕，高奕本人也是一个人物。作者也是人物，而且是更加活生生的有血有肉的人物，不然，任何一个作家都是写不出文章的。高奕1987年5月7日生于北京，按说，这样的出生时间和出生地点，高奕应该很幸福。不，高奕不幸

3、福。为什么高奕不幸福呢？因为高奕自幼患有恶性眼疾，眼睛几乎瞎掉。在他成长的日子里，每一天都有健康孩子欺负他。连高奕很亲的亲人都不喜欢他。在此我不说出是高奕的什么亲人。我真诚地希望他读到高奕的小说，也读到我的点评，改变对高奕的态度。高奕是个好孩子，是值得社会，更值得亲人爱的孩子。受尽欺负，高奕无处可逃，只有逃进文学里。文学是眼睛几乎瞎掉的高奕的唯一桃花源。像高奕这样逃进文学里的人是很多的。我也是。也许，说不定，你也是。然而，高奕比我们付出的更多，因为他自幼患有恶性眼疾。逃进文学里后，高奕很幸运，在他十二岁的小小年级他就读到了著名作家谈歌的短篇小说桥。从此，他爱上谈歌，爱上短篇小说。他执意要给自己

4、取笔名寻歌，就是他爱谈歌的证明。他开始写作，开始投稿，他遇上了北京文学，遇上了我。两个不幸的人遇到一起会产生怎样的感情？是的，在高奕十二岁的时候他就爱上了谈歌，在我到北京之前我就爱上了汪曾祺。纵然我是一棵小草，我也有热爱太阳的权利，是不是？为什么高奕爱谈歌？为什么我爱汪曾祺？都是因为文学。因为文学，我们爱。因为文学，我们爱那些著名的作家，我们也爱我们身边一个又一个普通人，我们更爱我们的亲人，哪怕这些亲人曾经伤害过我们。因为文学，我们还爱我们笔下的人物，任何一个人物，所有人物，我们都爱。在此，我要特别告诉你的是：如果你真的想当作家，你先学会爱吧，先学会爱你身边一个又一个普通人吧。爱是值得我们每一

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