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1、GRE作文4大常见低分问题 考生提升GRE作文成绩先要解决一些常见的扣分问题，比如内容论证等环节可能造成扣分的各种错误。下面就和大家分享GRE作文4大常见低分问题逐一盘点分析，希望能够帮助到大家，来欣赏一下吧。GRE作文4大常见低分问题逐一盘点分析GRE写作常见低分原因：写作速度慢内容空洞在新GRE作文中的另一个普遍问题是写作速度太慢，这显然是因为在考试前所作的准备不够充分。GRE考试的写作除了开头段和结尾段，中间一般应该写三段。但是考生在规定时间内往往只能写两段，而且字数也不够，只能写400字左右。GRE写作虽然没有字数要求，但是一篇较好的、成熟的，能够充分展示自己观点的GRE作文，一般应在

2、600字左右，或者是600字以上。由此可见，一篇400字左右的*在内容上是不够充实的。GRE写作常见低分原因：论证缺乏说服力在阐述思想观点之后，缺乏有力的例证去支持所阐述观点。或者总是引用每个人都耳熟能详的例证，例如目前最流行的例证有两个B和两个E，两个B即Bill Gates和Bill Clinton。两个E即Einstein和Edison。并不是这些例证不恰当或不足以说明问题，而是如果每一位GRE考试的考生都把爱迪生发明电灯作为例证，都引用爱因斯坦所说的成功是百分之九十九的勤劳加上百分之一的天分，那么自己的*就显得平庸乏味，不吸引人。同时，也说明考生的知识面狭窄，视野不开阔。GRE写作常见

3、低分原因：分析太肤浅宽泛在习作中没有能够表现出对题目的复杂性的理解，有时考生用简单应对TOEFL作文的方法来对付新GRE作文，这是错误的。例如，当题目中的论述没有明确说明，但其中却隐含由这种论述可能带来的或可能产生的影响时，即implications(隐含意义)，往往在考生的作文中被忽略。还有，没有对题目的statement进行qualification，即：对原来的题目进行分析，或者是缩小它的范围。因为GRE的题目往往是比较宽泛的，直接针对如此宽泛的题目写作是非常困难的，所以必须在*的第一段中对题目进行整理。最后一个问题是在阐述自己观点的时候，缺乏对对立观点予以应有程度的承认。GRE写作常见

4、低分原因：结尾段虎头蛇尾还有一个非常关键也是获得高分至关重要的问题是写作最后一段时不应该只是简单的重复第一段的内容和语言。写作最后一段应该换一种说法，应该paraphrase第一段的要义。这点虽然与及格分数不甚相关，但是与GRE作文是否能获得最高分数息息相关。这个弱点往往是由于同学们非常缺乏写作语汇(working vocabulary)所致。GRE考生大都是大学生，或是在校，或是即将毕业，在阅读方面的英文词汇量大大超过了中学生，但在写作词汇上却与中学生相差不多，这是在备考时需要解决的问题。如何解决上述GRE作文问题，给出以下几条建议：充分积累案例论据素材在备考过程中要多准备例子，并把它们一一

5、写下来，进行分类。一个例子往往可以应对好几个同类的题目，这样做是效率最高的办法。提升自信树立写作信心我们都害怕写作文，想到要练习写一整篇*，往往就没有了信心。其实我们可以从练习写作开头段，然后设计*的提纲开始。写开头段能够让我们以轻松一点的心情着手GRE写作的准备，并且迅速了解所有的题目，因为GRE的题目数量是固定的。储备写作词汇高分句式储备积极词汇，用时得心应手。从备考的开始就要着手增加working vocabulary, 当然也包含词组，成语。平时背的词汇往往只是看到它能知道其中文的某个翻译意思，但是我们却不能灵活运用这些词汇进行表达，更不用说在短暂的GRE写作考试时间内用它们遣词造句了

6、。GRE写作满分范文赏析The media (books, film, music, television, for example) tend to create rather than reflect the values of a society.For our grandparents it occurred through films and books. For the baby boomers it was a result of television and revolutionary music. No matter how the impact took place, it

7、 is clear that since its very advent, the media have played a crucial role in not simply being representative of the values of our society but creating them as well.During the roaring twenties Americans found themselves in a struggle between the old ways of their ancestors and the new ways of the fu

8、ture. The once steadfast beliefs that men and women should not touch while dancing, and that ladies should not drink or smoke were suddenly being challenged. From where was all this rebellion stemming? Partly it was due to the returning doughboys from the shores of Europe bringing home revolutionary

9、 ideas they had encountered while at war. Nonetheless, returning soldiers could not be held responsible for the social upheaval that America experienced. There had to be another cause, and there was, the media. Although the films of the era were silent they spoke volumes to the society for which the

10、y were created. Women in these movies wore their hemlines a few inches shorter than the decade before them and they wore cosmetics to accentuate their new bobbed haircuts. The movies, as well as the books of that era, demonstrated a new materialistic attitude that America had never before experience

11、d. Films portrayed every character as having the money to buy a new car, drink, smoke and partake in the leisures of life, a philosophy that was soon adopted by the youth of the decade. The use of the media in the twenties was to serve as a catalyst for the revolutionary ideas that were circulating.

12、 The films and books of that era sped America along its path of change that eventually led to the greatest social unrest that the United States had ever known.Unlike the twenties, the sixties and seventies utalized the media in a way that appealed to those searching for truth in a lost and confused

13、world. Martin Luther King Jr. realized the impact of the media on society during his campaign for civil rights. King urged his followers to withstand any abuse that they might encounter because the media will take their peacefulness into the homes of their society. By doing so, King sucessfully bega

14、n to change the traditional view of race. Americans began to sympathize with the protesters because of the undeserved turmoil they faced at the hands of the government. As a result, America relinquished the Jim Crow laws and saw many other groups press for their individual rights as well. Television

15、 cameras rolled as Cesar Chavez organized the migrant workers in California and as Bella Abzug and Gloria Steinham linked arms to protest the lack of womens rights.While the media helped to shape some attitudes about racism and gender it also helped to uncover the truth behind government lies. Durin

16、g the NixonComments:This is an outstanding response, even though it is not quite finished. The writers views on the issue are so cogent, well articulated, and well developed that the writer was not penalized for failing to provide a conclusion. What matters is the quality of thinking and writing dis

17、played, not whether a paper is totally finished or has a certain number of words.The writers skill is apparent in the opening lines. The first words, For our grandparents it occurred, immediately spark the readers interest.GRE写作满分范文赏析The media (books, film, music, television, for example) tend to cr

18、eate rather than reflect the values of a society.The media does tend to create rather than reflect the values of a society.One example of this observation is the fact that the media is owned, controlled and used my a segment of the population that is usually out of touch with the realities of groups

19、 within the society it covers. . . For example, the gangster rappers have gained a reputation for being women hating, anti-authority, and violent. Before, the MTV and V-H1 and CNN provided coverage to these groups, theyre were limited to street sales and specific areas that w ere not mainstream. Tha

20、nks to national coverage in print and broadcast, these groups becaome more popular because it was different and taboo. The lyrics, dances, and fashion statements portrayed became big money items and surburbanited people were intrigued withe this counter-culture. They began to act, talk and behave li

21、ke the lyrics espressed. Continued media fenzy contributed to kids wanting to become more familiar with this culture, thereby creating an atmosphere or arena for this counter-culturre to legitimate. The media created these values but these vlaues of the gangster rapeer do not reflect the actual valu

22、es of the society.Another example of the media creating the values of a society is the coverage of the modeling industry. Clearly, most women neither want to or can look like Kate Moss. The typical Calvin Klein male models do not appear the way most men are naturally. This look is both unhealthy and

23、 atypical of most humans. Nevertheless, thanks to the medias coverage, including magazine advocating, newspapers ads, and commercials to sell products, a large portion of this society has done everything from liposuction to becoming bullimic to attain a supermodel look. If the media does not cover t

24、he indutrsy in such a manner, a growing number of people would not care about the skeletal look of kate Moss or any other unrealistic physical attrubutes that are usually genetically or surgically produced. The media creates this image of how men and women should look thereby creating the values of

25、this society. These values would be totally different without the medias negative influence.Lastly, when the media chooses to focus on pervers and negative, and unhealthy aspects of a society, then that part of society becomes the values of that society. Gangster rap or anorexic models could not pos

26、sibly have made it without the medias concentrated coverage of either.Comments:This response presents an adequate discussion of the topic. After a succinct announcement of the writers position on the issue, the paper develops two relevant examples: musicians (gangster rappers) who have negatively in

27、fluenced peoples behavior and superstar models who have negatively influenced peoples self-image.Although the examples are well chosen and support the writer抯 position, they are not always clearly explained. For example, the writer claims that most women neither want to nor can look like Kate Moss b

28、ut then contradicts that claim by explaining that a large portion of this society has done everything from liposuction to becoming bullimic to attain a supermodel look.In general, the vocabulary is clear, but not particularly precise. Sentences are formed correctly, but they lack effective variety. Grammatical and mechanical errors occur, but they do not seriously interfere with meaning. In almost every way, this is an adequate response and earns a score of 4.GRE