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1、托福写作高分范文用法指点 托福写作备考时考生常会找来各类高分范文进行参考模仿，而这种学习方法也的确能帮助大家快速提升写作水平和成绩。下面就和大家分享托福写作高分范文用法指点，希望能够帮助到大家，来欣赏一下吧。托福写作高分范文用法指点 范文虽好也要合理使用托福高分范文需先做鉴定筛选首先要讲的是对于托福高分范文的鉴定和筛选。在使用范文进行备考之前，考生先要对自己找到的范文材料做一个简单的鉴定和筛选工作。这样做主要有两个目的。首先现在市面上网络上有关托福写作高分范文的资料数量众多，但其中并非所有资料都具有参考价值，有些所谓的高分范文存在过期(老托福)、*质量不高或是内容错误较多(拼写语法等)之类的问

2、题。考生需要先自行过滤一下范文资料，才能避免这类低质量范文的误导和干扰。其次，即使是真正符合要求的高分范文，大家也需要结合具体的话题进行一下挑选，对于考试中出现频率较高的题目，其范文参考价值显然要更高一些。这方面建议大家结合相应的托福写作高频题目类资料来进行挑选。做完基本的鉴定筛选后，剩下的高分范文才是大家应该认真学习的对象。避免抄袭雷同请学会改写范文对于范文的具体用法中，考生常会犯的一个错误就是直接照抄。这一点其实可以了解，有些高分范文的句子写得实在漂亮，考生见猎心喜之下直接就拿来使用的情况也并非没有。但大家需要考虑的是托福写作考试中的电脑审核环节E-RATER，这个程序会自动比对大家的*，

3、如果考生的*和某些范文中出现完全相似的内容，就有可能被判定为雷同抄袭，后果就很严重了。因此，大家如果在学习范文的时候看到了一些很不错想要借鉴的句子内容，不妨先对句子进行一些简单的改写，在确保不丢失其精华的前提下做出一定的改动，这样既可以把好句子收为己用，也能够避免抄袭雷同的风险。不要盲目套用范文素材例子关于范文的使用，考生还需要注意的一点就是不要盲目套用范文的素材例子。这些高分范文之所以得分高，并不是因为案例素材有多么出色，而是因为写作者能够把这些案例素材的价值发挥出来，很好地契合了题目和自身观点提升了*的说服力，简单来说，就是例子举得很巧妙。而考生使用范文中的例子，也需要能够发挥出例子的价值

4、才行。有些同学看了高分范文，觉得哪里都好，例子也拿来直接套用在其它相似甚至不怎么相似的题目话题中，这种做法就是标准的不动脑筋生搬硬套，哪怕例子质量很高无法发挥其价值，在*中只会显得无比突兀，作文得分想来也不会太理想了。托福考试作文独立写作范文：应该接受家人还是政府的帮助A/D: People can solve important problems in their daily life on their own or with the help from families; The help from the government is not necessary.题目解析题目大意：人们可以

5、自己或通过家人的帮助来解决生活中的重大问题，所以政府的帮助是没有必要的。波波建议此题目选择不同意，即认为政府的帮助还是很有必要的，思考分论点的方向使用拆分，对题目中的抽象名词 important problems 拆分具体化为环境问题和教育问题，然后分别展开。Some teachers are just lecturing(speaking) on the class and students only take notes; some other teachers make their class time on discussion and projection and students

6、sharing their ideas with their classmates. Which one do you prefer?Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People can solve important problems in daily life on their own or with the help from families, so the help from government is not necessary.托福写作范文参考一:In a society that changes as

7、 amazingly as ours, the role played by government in our daily life has been brought under the spotlight of mass media. Consequently, the general public and sociologists are wondering whether people can solve important problems individually or with the governmental support. Towards such a long runni

8、ng tug-of-war, I am inclined to claim that the help from government is necessary in the process of resolving important problems, especially in the aspects of protecting environment and addressing the disparity of educational resources.In the first instance, consider the environmental issues. As is c

9、ommon sense, the deteriorating natural environment is so severe and complicated that the solution of such a problem is far beyond the reach of any individuals or families. The serious air pollution in China is a good case in point. Despite the fact that people can take some actions such as wearing m

10、asks or taking the public transportation to relieve the haze occurring frequently in the major cities of China in some degree, the problem cannot be radically solved. To illustrate, the major cause responsible for the smoggy weather is nothing but the emission of waste gas such as dust and smog from

11、 an appalling number of heavy-pollution factories. In this case, it is the government that can get rid of the fundamental cause by shutting down these plants and enacting laws or regulations to restrict their production, which cant be achieved by any individuals.In the second instance, the same logi

12、c goes to the educational problems. As is known to all, many school-age children in rural and remote areas are not able to receive education in school due to the lack of educational resources. According to a survey conducted by the Education Ministry in China in 20XX, approximately 3 million kids in

13、 the Southwest of China didnt have the chance to get educated on account of lacking in tables, textbooks and even spacious classrooms. When confronted with the issue mentioned above, what individuals or families can do is quite limited. Undoubtedly, only the government has the adequate financial res

14、ources and power to allocate educational resources to those places. For example, the government of China builds nearly 10,000 primary schools called Hope School in the distant places, which alleviates the disparity in educational resources between different regions to a large extent.Judging from wha

15、t has been discussed above, we can draw the conclusion that although the ability of individual or families is becoming stronger and greater than before, the help from government is of great necessity in the course of solving significant problems, especially those in the areas of education and enviro

16、nment.托福考试作文独立写作范文：现在比以前更容易接受教育It is easier to become a educated person today than it was in the past.点睛题目大意：成为一个受过教育的人现在要比过去更加容易。此题属于典型的古今对比，常见的思考方向有：科技水平、物质水平、受教育水平、人们的意识和观念、社会的趋势和政策。波波建议选择同意，因为高科技的产品出现和人们教育意识的提升。独立写作范文一As is known to all, receiving education has always been the main way for us to

17、 acquire knowledge throughout the human civilization history. Recently there has been a hot debate whether education today is more accessible to the public than in the past. As far as I am concerned, there is no doubt that people nowadays have much easier access to education with the following reaso

18、ns.To begin with, the advent of various high-tech products has enriched the ways and approaches to receive education. Obviously, with the introduction of advanced means of education, educational resources take on multiple forms such as distant education and online study, which make knowledge more ac

19、cessible to us. However, in the past, the only way to get educated was to attend classess in traditional schools, which definitely increases the difficulty of gaining education. For example, in the process of making preparations for TOEFL test, I want to take class in Beijing New Oriental School. Bu

20、t I am an undergraduate student of a university far away from Beijing. Meanwhile, due to the academic pressure from my college study, it is impossible for me to take a month off and to have an intensive course in Beijing. Thanks to the online courses, I can take these classes in my college while han

21、dling the tasks and assignment from my field of study. The online courses make possible the in-time response to my questions and online submission of assignments.Secondly, since more and more importance is being attached to education, it is much easier and essential to get educated than in the past.

22、 Under the society full of intense competition, acquiring formal education has become the essenital precondition for anyone to make a living. As a result, the public awareness of receiving education is much stronger than before, leading to a common phenomenon that an increasing number of parents sen

23、d their kids to study abroad. However, in the bygone days/in the old days, the requirement for a person was not as strict as it is today, with the result that less attention was paid to education. According to a survey conducted by the National Educational Department in China, the number of students

24、 who take the national college entrance examination has risen from 88.3% in 20XX to 92.5% in 20XX. Meanwhile, another research shows that the literacy rate in China has increased by 23.6% in 20XX compared with 61.50% in 1993. The above data has shown that the number of educated people has gone throu

25、gh a dramatic rise, which indirectly indicates that education now is more available to the public.Admittedly, some areas in the world may be cited as an exception. For instance, people in the war-stricken areas including Iraq and Syria do not have easier access to education and some of them are even

26、 on the verge of starvation. In these areas, the current educational situation is not better than that in the past. However, such cases only occupy such a tiny percentage of the global population that they can be neglected.In conclusion, I believe that it is much easier for the public to receive edu

27、cation than in the past with the aid of technology and the awakening sense of education.独立写作范文二Access to education is an indispensable part of ones privilege regardless of ones gender, culture, and family background. When it comes to the availability of educational resources, some believe that it is

28、 more difficult for kids from common household to get decent education due to the wide gap between rich and poor and the ever-increasing tuitions, while others claim that it is much easier for people to have access to different educational resources than ever before. I, personally, tend to argue tha

29、t multiple educational resources are more accessible to modern people based on the following reasons.First off, the advent of technological gadgets makes it possible for people from common family backgrounds to gain access to education. To be more specific, with the appearance of smart phones, table

30、ts and computer laptops, it is easier for people of all age groups, including adolescents and teenagers, to get access to all kinds of education resources. For example, with internet access and a laptop, which is basically a necessity for everyone, people of all age groups can get proper education e

31、specially with the establishment of massive on-line open course like courser, Edx, etc. These massive on-line courses covers a wide range of topics ranging from computer science, coding, to language learning and soft skill development. In sharp contrast, a few decades ago, people from poverty-strick

32、en areas had never dreamed of attending the lectures offered by world-renowned professors, however, with the above-mentioned resources, it is absolutely possible for those people to realize their dreams. Thus, state-of-the-art technology makes if possible for people to have full access to high quali

33、ty educational resources.Additionally, governments have put so much financial and human resources to provide education at different levels so that people enjoy a better chance to be educated. For instance, Chinese government spared no effort in this regard since education from kindergarten to twelft

34、h grade is fully subsidized and such educational experience is accessible to children from both rural and urban areas. Besides, institutions of higher learning and various research centers receive state fund, and the figure is so phenomenal that it is not exaggerated to claim that it is in billions

35、of U.S. dollars. Such foundations can be for multiple purpose, like purchasing advanced science equipment, attracting bring young researchers and scientists, funding cutting-edge research to improve peoples livelihood, directly and indirectly. All of these institutions and universities are in a bett

36、er position to provide education resources to people.In conclusion, it is much easier for people to get education of all level ranging from kindergarten to tertiary education since education comes in handy with advanced technological tools like these massive on-line courses and governments effort to improve peoples educational experience.托福写作高分范文用法指点