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1、Lesson five：task two开头段&审题,Morning,开头段写法,contents,审题,大作文类型,观点讨论类 agree or disagree positive or negative advantage outweigh disadvantage Discuss bothgive your own opinion.问题解决类 why happened? How to solve the problem?,Task 2 Introduction(argumentation),Task 2 introduction,introduction,The best way to

2、solve the worlds environmental problems is to increase the price of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree?,背景：The issue of the impact of global environmental problems has heated up in recent years. 焦点：There is a perception that higher prices at the pump are a small sacrifice for a program th

3、at helps the environment , while a counter-argument is that it provides no benefits . 个人观点：My personal view is that higher price is no benefits to solve the problem.,introduction,In modern society, an increasing number of children suffer from obesity. Some people think parents are main reasons for t

4、his, while others think there are other causes leading to this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.,题 目 A,题 目 B,The obesity rate of children is growing nowadays. Some people believe it is mainly due to parents inappropriate way of raising them. Do you agree or disagree?,introduction,背景：近年来

5、儿童体重剧增这个问题日益热化。The issue of the rocketing average weight of children has heated up in recent years.,开头段练习,焦点：有观点认为家长应为他们错误的养育方式负责，而持相反观点 人认为是现代生活方式是导致恼人局面的根本原因。 There is a perception that parents are responsible for this severe problem due to their imappropriate way of fostering, while a counter-arg

6、ument is that the modern life styles are the foundamental reason of this disturbing situation.,开头段练习,个人观点：我个人认为家庭 社会都无法免责。My personal view is that both the households and the society cannot avoid the obligation.,开头段练习,背景句,事实陈述开头法：（普遍性）It is quite common for sb. to do sth.（纠结性）It is always interestin

7、g to find that individuals take different views towards（表关注）In recent years, much more attention than ever before has been paid to / have become a controversial issue 定义法（需要加个原因）：The importance of to .is a matter for debate. The influence of is a subject matter.,To introduce the topic in general,S 1

8、,观点陈述型：There is a perception that , while a counter-argument is thatOne topic of discussion is concerned with whether it is necessary to转折让步型：However, some people believe this is and should be as much as possible.,S 2,Let readers know what topic is under debate/discussed,焦点句,Personally,My personal v

9、iew is that From my point of view, is of benefits/its benefits are far more over its downsides/its benefits cannot justify its harmful effects.（上句是反方观点） However, in my view（自己观点）,S 3,Your personal view on the issue,观点句,开头段常用语言,在当代：In the present age/ in this day and age/ in the present-day society/

10、in contemporary society/ at present/ in current society/ in the contemporary world众所周知：It is generally(widely/commonly/extensively/universally) believed that越来越重要： play a/an role in perform an function inAdj. Important significant critical crucial essential fundamental pivotal vitalN: be of importan

11、ce/ significance,开头段常用语言,以惊人的速度向前发展 ：is advancing at an amazing(staggering/astonishing/accelerated) speed越来越流行：is increasingly prevalent/ popular in the contemporary world问题越来越严重： The problem of is becoming increasingly severe( grave/ serious/ worrying/ disturbing/ worrisome),Women and men are commo

12、nly seen as having different strengths and weaknesses. Is it right to exclude males or females from certain professions because of their gender?,开头段练习,开头段练习,事实开头法：一个普遍的事实是（普遍性）It is quite common that women and men normally have greater freedom of choice in terms of employment. 令人困惑的是（纠结性）It is alway

13、s confusing to find that women still earn less and enjoy fewer promotions than men in spite of the fact that gender equality has even been highly demanded by the public.越来越多的人关注 （表关注）In recent years, much more attention than ever before has been paid to gender equality since womens social status has

14、 been increasingly promoted.,There have always been differences in the types of men and women have done. However, the trend in modern times has been for both men and women to have greater freedom of choice in terms of employment. Some people might say that there is no need to go further. However, in

15、 my view, wherever possible, gender equality should be encouraged.,开头段练习,Protecting the environment现阶段没有人会否定保护环境的重要性，但关于如何完成人们却没有达成一致。These days, no one would deny the importance of protecting the environment. But there is no consensus on how to achieve this end.,introduction练习,Funding education背景：前

16、十年以来高等教育的资金一直是整个国家最焦点的讨论及争论话题。In the last decade, the funding of higher education has become one of the most vital focuses of discussion and disputes across the whole country.观点：关于谁应为快速增长的高学费负责，人们观点各有不同。Opinions are deeply divided as to who are responsible for paying the increasingly high fees.,intr

17、oduction练习,Restriction on air travel；飞机成为越来越多人的运输首选。Airplanes are becoming the first choice of transportation by a growing/increasing number of people. 反对者认为空航应该被限制因为它产生的大量污染和消耗大量燃料。Some protesters claim that air travel should be restricted because of its massive pollution and much fuel consuming. 我

18、很难赞同他们。I find it extremely difficult to side with them.,introduction练习,写作,构思,审题,大作文写作步骤,资源图示,检查,找topic word,观点句,修订错误句型,起承转合,审题,观点讨论类 agree or disagree positive or negative advantage outweigh disadvantage Discuss bothgive your own opinion.问题解决类 why happened? How to solve the problem?,In spite of the

19、many advances women have made in education and employment, they continue to be at a disadvantage when it comes to pay and promotion. In your view, what should be done to promote equality of opportunity for men and women in the workplace?,审题,One possible approachA more feasible approachTo further enc

20、ourage equality,Gender equality,would be for government to force employers to promote the same numbers of men and women and to pay them the same salaries.,would be for government themselves to take the lead by ensuring that their male and female employees earn the same for equivalent work and that w

21、omen are promoted fairly.,companies could be required to publish figures on the rank and average earnings of men and women in their workforce.,Women and men are commonly seen as having different strengths and weaknesses. Is it right to exclude males or females from certain professions because of the

22、ir gender?,审题,There may indeed be good arguments for allowing posts to remain predominantly male or female.However, in the vast majority of situations, making occupations more open to both genders has distinct advantages.The changes that result from allowing men into female-dominated occupations and

23、 vice versa may be subtle, but they are far-reaching. However, to benefit the most from this development, it is important not to expect males and females to approach work in identical ways.,审题,Development in technology causes environmental problems. Some people believe the solution to these problems

24、 is that everyone accepts a simpler way of life while others think that technology can solve these problems. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.,现象,观点,+,+,问题,观点,审题,It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. H

25、owever , it is sometimes claim that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.,审题,Childcare is an important task for nations. It is suggested that all mothers and fathers should be required to take the childcare training cou

26、rses? To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?(2013.1.19),审题,Instructions of BABY,Why childcare training courses?,审题,表现诡异，令人抓狂？,behave in ways that can be confusing and even upsetting,了解婴幼儿什么样的行为是有挑战性的,learn what challenging infant and toddler behavior looks like,阻止并正确回应这些挑战行为,pre

27、vent and respond to challenging behavior,审题,Infant and toddler care training- Infants and toddlers sometimes behave in ways that can be confusing and even upsetting for the adults in their lives. In those courses parents will learn what challenging infant and toddler behavior looks like and why it h

28、appens, and ways they can work together with their childrens caregivers to prevent and respond to challenging behavior.,It is true that,such class can teach parents how to better take care of their children systematically,Another reason I would like to mention is that, since these organizations have

29、 professional experts providing particular nursing trainings and knowledge for them, like baby feeding, baby bathing and so on.,it seems impossible to require all parents to undergo a period of parenting class.,the information explosion has provided us an alternative to acquire knowledge from variou

30、s channels.,However, the question is that,审题,个人,家庭,集体,社会,世界,审题思路,governments dutycultural globalizationtraditional cultureendangered languagesHow to reduce crime, rehabilitate criminals,Task two 难点话题,审题+头脑风暴,观点句选择,观点句排列,审题：迅速找核心词列观点：分正反面列观点举例子：每个观点句后尽量列例子,观点较多的话，选择最有说服力，最容易写的,意见讨论类：根据两方观点多少，决定文章比例；问题解决类 逻辑比例排 序,小结,观点讨论类写作框架,介绍段（2-3 sentences),主体段1（支持/反对）,主体段2（继续支持/反对）,主体段3（让步反对/支持）,结论段（总结观点）,介绍段（2-3 sentences),主体段1（支持/反对）,主体段2（反对/支持）,结论段（总结个人观点）,五段式,四段式,VS,I persist until I succeed!,