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1、托福独立写作让步式写法运用实例分析 托福独立写作中使用经典五段写法的考生很多,但这种写法有一个问题,那就是如果中间三个段落的分论点之间逻辑关系不够鲜明,或是考生想不出三个分论点,那么这种写法就会难以实现。下面就和大家分享托福独立写作让步式写法运用实例分析,来欣赏一下吧。托福独立写作让步式写法运用实例分析托福独立写作思路分析在写一边倒的*的时候,多数考生喜欢采用经典的五段式写法,即开头段、结尾段、中间三段三个分论点论证。这样的写法当然无可厚非,然而多数学生会碰到两个问题,一是我只能想到两个理由,第三个理由写不出来怎么办?二是我三个理由都写完了,但是字数不够300字怎么办?这样的情况,就需要我们的
2、救命稻草让步段出场了。什么是让步段写法?让步段,顾名思义,就是退了一步的段落。例如,For further career success, is relate well to other people more important than studying hard at school? 选择了同意的立场,写完了三个同意的理由之后,可以再写一点让步段论述一下反方的观点,即在学校学习好也很重要。写让步段的好处有很多,一是上文提及的最实际的用途-凑字数,二是从行文逻辑看,写一段让步段也可以展现考生思维的严密性。只要时间允许,此种一举多得的做法为何不尝试呢?托福独立写作让步段写法讲解但是,让步段写
3、作也需要遵循一定的原则。考生在写作时,应当按照三部曲进行:1)写出一个反方观点 2)进行一定程度的削弱 3)重申自己的观点。1. 写出反方观点这一步大多数同学都做得不错,但是在提出反方观点之前,可再加上一些连接词,例如admittedly, nevertheless等等。还拿之前拿到题目做例子,For further career success, is relate well to other people more important than studying hard at school? 总观点是同意,让步段写学习好也挺重要的。第一步引出反方观点时,应写:Admittedly, ac
4、quiring an excellent GPA is one significant proof of your ability, for study is one of the major tasks that students are supposed to fulfill in school.2. 进行一定程度的削弱这是大多数同学会忽略的一步。很多同学在写让步段的时候,喜欢跳过第二步,直接重申自己的观点,然而这样的写法会显得逻辑上牵强,行文也显得生硬。因此,在提出反方观点时要进行一定的削弱。例如在写完上文那句话之后,应加上:However, the outstanding scores
5、 only prove the intelligence of the student, while the EQ, largely reflected by how well you relate with others, plays an utmost significant role in the future career success.3. 重申自己的观点这一步非常重要,因为让步段的提出仅仅是小插曲,重要的还是自己的观点。切不可写了让步段,就忘了自己的立场,那样就是得不偿失了。因此,在写完上面两句话之后,需要再加上一句,therefore, I still hold the opi
6、nion that relate well with others is more important than acquiring high scores in school.在让步段的写作当中,尤其需要注意两点:1是第二步的削弱过程,这样可使*看起来不那么唐突,更为流畅。2是另外还需注意字数的控制,让步段切不可写得超过之前的论述段的长度,否则就有观点不明确的嫌疑了托福写作:找论据的具体技巧托福写作论据通常来自两个角度:个人和社会。个人角度通常会涉及到个人的身体和心理的健康,个人的动机,梦想,兴趣爱好,职业和学业,家庭背景,个人生活方式以及个人的能力。社会角度一般包括政府税收,教育,民族文化
7、,经济,能源环境以及社会秩序。1. Government should be responsible for the tuition fee of university students. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?题目的意思是政府该不该支付大学生的学费,针对这个题目,无论是同意还是不同意,我们都按个人和社会两个角度来看一下。同意个人:For those students who are with great intelligence but from poor families, government
8、surely should be responsible for their tuition fee and provide them opportunities to go to school and then release pressure for their families. 因为此题讨论的是大学生的学费,正如前面所提到的,个人的构思角度包括个人家庭经济背景。社会:As we all know, economy is a master key to a countrys development and it is undeniable that students who finish
9、 their education are the main force pushing forward social and economic development, for which government should encourage education for the benefits of the whole society. 既然从社会角度出发,就要试着往这方面靠拢,首先想想学生接受教育对社会的益处是什么?上文提到,社会角度包括经济,所以政府支持教育必然对推进社会经济发展有好处。不同意个人:Paying tuition fee for university students c
10、an make them access to education easier, therefore, some students may lose motivation without financial pressure and will not cherish the studying opportunities. As a consequence, it is hard to guarantee the quality of university education. 个人的角度包括学习动机,政府给大学生支付学费可能会让他们丧失学习动机,从而影响教学质量。社会:Due to the l
11、imited financial budget, government is likely to suffer a great pressure if spending too much money on education; as a result, our government will not have extra energy to develop in other fields, such as science and technology, as well as the medical advances, which are also with great significance
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