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1、托福写作29分高手经验分享 托福写作想要取得高分难度是比较高的，不仅因为作文本身不好写，更是由于作文评分标准较为主观考生很难把握。今天给大家带来了托福写作29分高手经验分享,希望能够帮助到大家，一起来学习吧。托福写作29分高手经验分享 独立综合高分模板一览托福综合写作高分模板分享The professor presents a lecture regarding(主题), and her proposition forms a sharp contrast with what is stated in the reading passage.First, the reading passage

2、 claims that (reading的第一个点). However, the professor points out that (listening的反驳).Another part that distinguishes the reading from the listenging is that(reading的第二个点). The professor explains that(listening的反驳).Finally, what the reading stated concerning (reading的第三个点)differs a lot from what is men

3、tioned by the professor. As she puts it, (listening的反驳)托福独立写作高分模板分享因为一般都用一边倒式写法，所以给的模板也是一边倒的，不过只要稍加改动就能用来写持中立的*When it comes to the issue about (题目), peoples opinion differs from person to person. Some hold the view that(一个观点)， while others argues that(另一个观点). As far as Im concerned, I support the p

4、rior/latter point for the reasons that(概括自己的论点)It is true that (反方论点)has its own merits. For one thing, (反方论据1). For another, (反方论据2).However, is this a wise choice? After taking more factors into consideration, I suggest that(正方论点).First,(正方论据1)Second, (正方论据2)In short, from what has been discussed

5、above, we can safely draw the conclusion that (把第一段的论点重复一遍)托福备考之独立写作满分范文task：Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.托福备考之独立写作满分范文：The Advantages of City LifeTher

6、e are undeniable advantages to both life in a big city and in a small town. The former offers more excitement and convenience while the latter offers a cleaner, quieter and often friendlier place to live. However, despite the advantages of small town life, I prefer to live in a big city for several

7、reasons.First, life in the city is more convenient. More goods are available and stores are open later. Also, there is better public transportation so it is easier to get around. I can find almost anything I want easily in the city. Second, there are more ways to spend leisure time in the city. Ther

8、e are many places I can go to meet friends and have fun. Finally, and most importantly, the city offers more educational and career opportunities. The city often attracts the best teachers and the best companies. There is also a wider choice of jobs so it is easier to move up the career ladder.For a

9、ll of these reasons, I prefer to live in the city. Although I sometimes miss the fresh air and quiet life of a small town, nothing can make up for the opportunities that the city offers me. If one wants to be successful, I believe the best place to live is the city.托福写作语料库：钱多假期少VS钱少假期多 你到底喜欢哪个A job

10、with more vacation time but a low salary is better than a job with a highsalary but less vacation time.是否同意低薪假期多的工作比高薪假期少的工作好?题目解析：对比类写法主题观点：支持高薪假期少的工作【思路拓展】1.工作是生活的重要部分，因此是幸福的源泉，很多人将自己的成就感和薪水的高低联系到一起。薪水高意味企业重视自己，因此，获得职业成就感和自豪感的机会就多。2. 经管可能休闲的时间减少，但是，高薪可以给家人带来更加幸福的生活。具体而言，改善居住环境，子女接受精英教育，家人的医疗有保障，这些

11、是幸福的源泉。3. 工作着是美丽的，因为人不是怕忙，而是怕闲下来，工作通过有建设地利用了时间，使人心满意足，再也没有无聊之感。因此，世界上即使是最枯燥的工作，也比无所事事要强。【原创语料库】1.One of the traits of modern way of working is that people enjoy more freedomand flexibility in selecting their favorite jobs. 现代择业方式的重要特征之一就是人们在选择自己喜欢的事业方面更加自由，灵活。点评：One of the traits ofis that 的最重要的特征之一

12、就是2. It often happens that modern job-seekers often fall into a dilemma when facedwith the option of choosing a handsomely paid job with less vacation or opting for acareer with meager salary but less leisure hours.人们常常陷入两难的困境，是选择高薪假期少的工作好，还是低薪假期多的工作好。3. a handsomely paid job with less vacation n高薪假

13、期少的工作点评：vacation 假期(美国);holiday 假期(英国)4. a career with meager salary but less leisure hours n低薪假期多的工作5. When it comes to the issue that whether people shall take up the job with morefreedom or the counterpart that could provide them alluring economic incentive, therenever lacks debates and arguments

14、.当提及到是应该选择自由时间更多的工作，还是经济回报更好的工作的时候，人们常常争议不断。点评：alluring economic incentive n 诱人的经济鼓励6. Many people prefer to secure a well-paying job even though they may haveless time at their disposal.很多人喜欢高薪的工作， 尽管他们的自由时间减少。点评：at ones own disposal v 可以供自己支配7. Making large sums of money could improve ones quality

15、 of life挣到很多的钱可以提高生活的质量(细节展开)8. to receive fine education with high quality v接受精英教育9. to smell the flowers when aging v老年的时候，偷得余生半日闲(作家文采)10. to take a few days off in luxurious seaside resorts when vacation comes v假期来临，在海边的奢华度假胜地享受生活11. take their salary as an indication of happiness v 把薪水当成是幸福的一种象

16、征12. have a meager salary = have a low-paid job v有低薪的工作 记忆：m + eager = meager adj 少量的13. enjoy more freedom = have more time at ones own disposal v 有更多的自由14. enjoy the flexibility of work v 享受工作的灵活15. have a flexible working time v 有更加灵活的工作时间点评：假期多的利好;远程办公的利好;远程教育的利好16. have more time that could be

17、allocated to their families， friends or hobbies有更多的时间留给家庭，朋友和爱好点评：谈及低薪假期多的工作的利好17. A well-paid career indicates high social status，which could earn respectfrom others. Some top stars or financially richer business leaders could serve asperfect examples.高薪工作意味社会地位高，也赢得他人的尊敬，明星和企业家就是很好的例证。点评：financial

18、ly richer business leaders n富有的企业家(推荐背诵)18. Working, by occupying time constructively, makes one contented and withno time for boredom.工作，有建设性地利用时间，使人心满意足，再也没有无聊之感(推荐背诵)19. A busy life is what every individual aspires after.人人渴望充实的生活。点评： is what every individual aspires after v 是人人渴望的。20. Provided workload is not excessive in amount, even the dullest work in thisworld is less painful than idleness.假如工作不是过量的话，即使这个世界上最枯燥的工作，也比无所事事要强。点评：provided = if 假如