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1、写作话题：Recipe (食谱),How to make food（如何制作食物）,Unit 8,写作话题：Recipe (食谱)How to make fo,Learning objectives:,掌握简单介绍某种事物制作过程的说明文写作方法；能用步骤连接词“first, next, then, (after that), finally”等表示做事情的先后顺序； 学会用祈使句表示做某件事情的指令；培养爱美食、爱生活的热情。,Learning objectives:掌握简单介绍某种事物,说明文的写作方法要抓住特征说明事物；要选好说明角度；要合理安排说明顺序; 说明文的语言要确切、简洁、通俗

2、。,写作方法指导,说明文的写作方法写作方法指导,写作方法指导,常见的说明顺序有：（1）以说明某一事物发展过程为主的说明文，常按事物形成的时间顺序来进行说明；（2）以说明某一事物构造为主的说明文，常按事物构成部分的组合顺序或人们观察事物的先后顺序来进行说明（一般使用空间顺序，也可用逻辑顺序）；（3）以说明某些事物相互关系及其特点为主的说明文，往往按照先总体后局部来进行说明；（4）以说明科学实验为主的说明文，往往按照实验本身的顺序进行说明；,写作方法指导常见的说明顺序有：,Language box（语言工具箱）,1. Unit topic languages（单元话题语言） 以连线、标序号等形式列

3、举本单元与本话题写作相关的词块、句子。 名词/动名词词块: milk shake, ice cream, glass bowl，two pieces of butter, sugar, half a kilo of flour, three bottles of milk, spoon,Language box（语言工具箱）1. Unit top,Language box（语言工具箱）,动词词块：teach sb how to make it, cut. up into small pieces, pour.into, add,have a sweet tooth, put into the

4、oven, mix them all up, cook it for five minutes, turn on the blender, peel,Language box（语言工具箱）动词词块：,Language box（语言工具箱）,表顺序的词块：first, next, then, finally, ,Language box（语言工具箱）表顺序的词块：,Language box（语言工具箱）,名词/动名词词块: （ ）半公斤面粉，（ ）奶昔， （ ）三瓶牛奶，（ ）糖， （ ）两块黄油， （ ）勺子， （ ）玻璃碗， （ ）冰淇淋，,（ ）谈话节目， （ ）才艺表演， （ ）体育节目

5、， （ ）情景喜剧， （ ）卡通片， （ ）肥皂剧， （ ）动作片，,Language box（语言工具箱）名词/动名词词块: （,Language box（语言工具箱）,动词词块：（ ）把倒入， （ ）把放入烤箱， （ ）打开搅拌机， （ ）煮5分钟， （ ）教某人如何制作， （ ）切成碎片， （ ）添加， （ ）爱吃甜食， （ ）把搅拌混合 （ ）削皮，,（ ）准备好做某事， （ ）尽力做某事，,Language box（语言工具箱）动词词块：（ ）准备,Language box（语言工具箱）,表顺序的词块： （ ）首先，（ ）然后，（ ）其次，（ ）最后,Language box（语言工

6、具箱）表顺序的词块： ,(2) Patterns（句型）,利用wh-questions充实写作内容。Anna, an American girl is asking Jim about how to make zongzi. They are in the kitchen.Anna: Jim, the Chinese zongzi is so delicious. Can you tell me _ to make it?Jim: Sure. We need to have rice, leaf and some meat.Anna: How _ rice do we need? And ho

7、w _ meat do we need?,how,much,much,(2) Patterns（句型）利用wh-questions,(2) Patterns（句型）,利用wh-questions充实写作内容。Jim: Two kilos of rice and one kilo of meat are enough. _, wash all the things. Remember to keep the rice in the water for at least a few hours.Anna: Then?Jim: _, you need to cut up the meat, _, m

8、ix together all the ingredients and add some salt.,First,Then,Next,(2) Patterns（句型）利用wh-questions,(2) Patterns（句型）,利用wh-questions充实写作内容。Anna: Whats next? Can I put something delicious into the rice? What about eggs or beans?Jim: Either is OK. Its up to you. _, put the rice and meat together into lea

9、f. _, fold the leaf. Dont let the rice out of it. You must be careful.Anna: OK, I see. Thats it? Jim: Yes. Just put zongzi into the hot pot and cook for about an hour. _, you can enjoy the special food zongzi.,After that,Finally,Next,(2) Patterns（句型）利用wh-questions,(2) Patterns（句型）,I can make wonderf

10、ulLet me teach you how to You need Now its time to Get all the tings ready. We can enjoy it.,(2) Patterns（句型）I can make won,(2) Extensive languages（拓展性语言）,(1) The more you eat, the less flavor; the less you eat, the more flavor. Chinese Proverb多吃少滋味, 少吃多滋味。中国谚语(2) The spirit cannot endure the body w

11、hen overfed, but, if underfed, the body cannot endure the spirit. St Frances de Sales食之过饱，心灵无法容忍躯体；食不果腹，躯体同样无法支撑心灵。赛尔斯,(2) Extensive languages(1) The,(2) Extensive languages（拓展性语言）,(3) The doctor of the future will give no medication, but will interest his patients in the care of the human frame, di

12、et and in the cause and prevention of disease. - Thomas A Edison未来的医生不开药，而是鼓励自己的病人关注自己的身体、饮食和疾病的原因、预防。爱迪生(4) One should eat to live, not live to eat -Benjamin Franklin人为生而食，非为食而生。本杰明富兰克林(5) When walking, walk. When eating, eat. Rashaski Zen Proverb行走时，专心行走。进食时，专心进食。Rashaski Zen 箴言,(2) Extensive lang

13、uages(3) The,写作任务,假如你想与你的老师和同学分享你最喜爱的食物及做法，请用写一篇80词左右的关于食物制作的短文，题目内容不限，可运用祈使句，适当发挥，使文章充实丰满。 要求：1. 用简洁的语言写清楚所用的各种原料。2. 运用表示先后顺序的first，next，then，finally等词，将各种原料按照先后顺序合理地搭配，写成一篇连贯的文章。3. 表达制作好后的感受。,写作任务假如你想与你的老师和同学分享你最喜爱的食物及做法，请,1. 审题想一想，填一填。,审题体裁：_人称：_时态：_,审题体裁：_人称：_时态：_,第一人称,一般现在时,说明文,1. 审题想一想，填一填。审题审

14、题第一人称 一般现在时说,(2). 内容要点列一列，, Think of your favorite food and make a list of ingredients . Write a recipe for your favorite food. How do you feel after making your favorite food?,(2). 内容要点列一列， Think of you,While writing,3. 写一写: 写初稿,While writing 3. 写一写: 写初稿,4. 同伴互赏我欣赏，我快乐！,请交换习作互相欣赏，用红笔划出对方的亮点,并对 不足的地

15、方进行适当修改。你能给同学什么建议，使得对方的习作更好呢？根据worksheet上的评分标准，给同伴的习作打分。,4. 同伴互赏我欣赏，我快乐！请交换习作互相欣赏，用红,请和同伴交换习作，依据以上提示和下列评价表，相互欣赏与修改习作，然后给对方的习作打分。,修改习作时可使用这些符号：优美句子； 漏词；错处：； 删除；语法错误 G ； 人称错误 P；时态错误 T； 拼写错误Sp,请和同伴交换习作，依据以上提示和下列评价表，相互欣赏与修改习,Show Time,Show Time,How to make an apple milk shake?I can make wonderful apple

16、milk shake. Let me teach you how to make it. You need three apples，some ice cream and a bottle of milk. First，peel the apples and cut them up into small pieces. Next，put the apple pieces and ice cream into the blender. Then pour the milk into the blender. If you have a sweet tooth, add some honey. T

17、urn on the blender and have it work for about one minute. Finally，pour the apple milk shake into a glass. Now its time to enjoy it! Do you like it? Isnt it healthy and delicious?,文章开篇点题，条理清晰，准确运用祈使句，让人一目了然，符合说明文的行文要求。,首先简要说明材料及用量，然后准确描述做法，合理运用first、next、then、finally等词串起全文，扩展合理。,结尾处还用上感叹句和否定疑问句，丰富了文章

18、的句式。,How to make an apple milk sha,How to make cakes? I like cakes very much. They taste delicious and theyre healthy food. Last week, I learned how to make cakes at home. Now lets have a try. First, get all the tings ready. We need three eggs, two pieces of butter, half a kilo of flour, some sugar

19、and three bottles of milk. We also need a spoon, a glass bowl and an oven. Next, pour the eggs into the bowl, put two pieces of butter and the flour in the bowl and add some sugar and some milk. Then mix them all up. Finally, put the bowl into the oven, and cook it for five minutes. The cake is read

20、y and we can enjoy it. I have a feeling of satisfaction after sharing the cakes with my families.,本文根据已有经验介绍蛋糕的做法，结构完整，思路清晰。第二自然段把原料要求和做法要求合并一起写，内容丰富却丝毫不显杂乱。,文章中量词使用准确，动词指令明确，使读者记忆深刻。,结尾处用了have a feeling of satisfaction表达了自己的满足之情，显得不落俗套。,How to make cakes?本文根据已有经验,你学习这个话题写作有收获吗？若有，请列举你最大的收获。若无，请写出1-3主要原因。,你学习这个话题写作有收获吗？若有，请列举你最大的收获。若无，,