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1、雅思写作范文解读：大家一起去图书馆转转 今天雅思写作范文解读，我们来聊一下图书馆这个话题。下面就和大家分享雅思写作范文解读：大家一起去图书馆转转,希望能够帮助到大家，来欣赏一下吧。雅思写作范文解读：大家一起去图书馆转转题目：maintaining public libraries is a waste of time since computer technology is new replacing their functions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?就范文而言，结构上是典型的五段式，第一段开头，表明自己的观点，认为我们应该继续保

2、存图书馆，中间三段分别论述公共图书馆的两个优势以及存在的缺点。最后一段进行简单的总结。下面附上范文：Word Count: 330The advent of computer technology(电脑科技的出现) has shaped the landscape of many traditional industries, among which the public library is the one that has been unprecedentedly (空前地)challenged. Although the concern and worry for fading domi

3、nance (优势)of library is not all unwarranted, I still believe the maintenance of public libraries is necessary.Libraries, though not so easily accessible(可接近的) as the digital books backed by the computer technology, can create an atmosphere which can sooth readers and then make them more concentrate

4、on reading and study. The piles of books, ranging from literature ones such as novels, poems and prose to the non-literature counterparts such as encyclopedias(百科全书), history books and so on will give readers a sense of solemn(庄严感) and they are likely to treat reading as a holy baptism(洗礼) stimulati

5、ng their cognitive development(认知发展). In comparison, when readers get some information by e-books, they may regard it as a spiritual fast food, thereby absorbing little but idling away(消磨时光) time.Another point for continue to run public libraries is that the functions of libraries is not restricted

6、to do some readings; instead, it is now a multi-functional complex(多功能综合体) in which the visitors can attend an academic lecture, exchange opinions on some issues with participants in some seminars or receive some professional training and education. This experience can hardly be obtained through som

7、e e-books or online courses, which may mainly focus on the presentation of knowledge itself rather than the communication of those who are engaged in it.Of course, cost of the maintenance of public libraries is one point that undermines(逐渐损坏) the predominance of them. In the virtual digital world, c

8、ost can be reduced because of less spending on personnel and premises, making the price of some e-books more seductive(具有吸引力的). Easy access to abundant resources is also magnetic to(对具有吸引力的) some readers, especially who need to keep pace with the latest information.In conclusion, public libraries st

9、ill our attention and effort to maintain its operation, in spite of the rising importance of digital devices.雅思写作：大作文5分原因分析Band 5Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace. Others think that the true function of a university sho

10、uld be to give access to knowledge for its own sake, regardless of whether the course is useful to an employer. What, in your opinion, should be the main function of a university?What knowledge and skills should universities provide has been argued for many years. Some people think that the true fun

11、ction of universities provide knowledge for their own purpose, but nowadays, more and more people point out that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills according to the workplace.The first reason for universities should provide these knowledge and skill is the students n

12、eeds. Obviously, the most of the students go to university purpose of is to get some knowledge and skills which could make them have the ability to get a job. If a university does not provide these knowledge and skills, the students might not get a job and they would be very disappointed. As a resul

13、t, the university would lose its students.Moreover, providing knowledge and skills needed in the workplace makes a university progress. The new skills and information always are initiated in the workplace, so focusing on the needs of the workplace the university could get sound strategies to do rese

14、arch and make it more modernization.Lastly, providing these knowledge and skills could benefit our country which usually gives a financial support to universities. Having these knowledge and skills, students are more easy to get a job, and this can make our countries economy strong.In conclusion, it

15、 can be said that providing the knowledge and skills which the workplace needs is every universitys basic function.只能拿到5分的原因：一、这个题目中有两方的观点：some 及others的，很明显这位考生在后面的论证过程中完全忽视了others的观点,都在一味地论证some 的观点的正确性，于是考官给出的评语是：it does not address all parts of the question.写作建议NO.3：Do not neglect any part, or yo

16、u will regret your mark.不要忽视任何东西，否则你的分数会让你很伤心。二、这位考生在连接词和复杂句型上都表现得不错，可是他太偷懒了，knowledge and skill这个词组一共用了9次，这种高频率的repetition让这位考生付出了比较惨重的代价，所以看者希望你们能够汲取这样的教训，多注意Paraphrase的练习。尤其是常考的考试主题所可能涉及到的高频单词更是要做好homework. knowledge and skill就属于top 3 的高频考题的教育类，所以这类的词汇一定是多多准备才对，如 expertise, conversance, instructi

17、on, competence, aptitude, technique, prowess, dexterity 都可以拿来替换这两个词。写作建议NO.4：Paraphrase helps you parachute into a higher band.改写能助你拿到高分。碰到雅思写作中的“模糊”题目怎么办在雅思考试当中，有一类题目最让考生摸不着头脑。这类“像雾像雨又像风”的题目总称抽象类题，话题主要集中在一些价值形态的考查上。那么对于任何带有“定向不明”的敏感词的题目，我们考生可以采取的杀手锏就是“下定义”法，即化抽象为具体。今天就拿两种例题分别来实验一下定义法，看是不是让你顿时拨开云雾见青

18、天了。总的来说，抽象题也分两种，第一种是完全抽象。所谓“完全抽象”，即整个题目都看似飘渺，这种题目给人思维发散的空间比较大。如一道大作文题：Some people think young people should be free to choose his or her job,but other people think they should be realistic and think more about their future. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.对于这道题，我们首先可以想一下“Free to chose”是

19、指怎样随心所欲?这种选择往往是基于自己的兴趣爱好或是起薪，也或者是工作条件。那么第一个论点的解释就出来了：The youngsters occupational choice always lies in their own interest, initial payment or work conditions like company locations.第二个论点说应该多考虑一下“future”，其中包括工作长久稳定或者是可以获得一个长远的自我提升：The permanence of career or the self-cultivation opportunity has also

20、been taken into consideration by some job seekers. There is a case in China that working in the government means being a civil servant forever without worrying about losing job.定义完了两种观点的明确意思，那么在分别的主体段就可以充分来论证这种选择对自己是不是更有利。第二种抽象题为暗藏抽象。典型例题是剑8当中test1的大作文题：Some people think that parents should teach ch

21、ildren how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.很多人可能忙着去讨论老师和家长的重要性了，为何不停下笔来，来注意一下“good member of society” 这个暗藏的抽象名词呢?范文里考官的定义是：In order to be a good member of any society the individual mus

22、t respect and obey the rules of their community and share their values. 首先在主体段第一句话表明自己对社会好成员的三个特性的理解，接着可以很形象地来论述这些品德是如何在家庭或学校中学到的。类似的有一道真题：The qualities a person needs to become truly successful in todays world cannot be learned in university or similar academic institutions. To what extent do you a

23、gree or disagree?拿到这道题，先不要急着去辩证在学校里都获得了些什么。那么想一下成功需要的品质都包含什么。假如说我们也从三个方面来定义，那么可以说是勤奋，创新和竞争合作意识：The factors contributing to great achievement have never been associated with the qualifications merely, what matters includes the virtue of diligence, creativeness and the sense of cooperation and competition.接下来就可以尽情讨论这些品质是否能从大学机构获得了。综上，“下定义”是为了大事化小，小事化为笔下生花。结构上可以使思路更清晰，语言上可以使*更立体丰满。所以，考生如果能巧妙使用定义法，那么变最难缠的题型为最喜欢的题型也就手到擒来了。