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1、为什么托福独立写作会无话可写 托福独立写作遭遇陌生话题无话可写?积累论证论据素材不可缺?今天给大家带来了托福独立写作遭遇陌生话题无话可写，希望能够帮助到大家，下面就和大家分享，来欣赏一下吧。托福独立写作遭遇陌生话题无话可写?积累论证论据素材不可缺为什么托福独立写作会无话可写?托福独立写作中考生遇到某些题目觉得无话可写想不到展开的点，这种情况其实并不少见。相信对托福官方真题50多套题目作文都有过一定了解的同学会有这样的感觉，同样是独立写作的题目，有些题目比如大学里是否应该设置运动课程一看就很有思路很好写，还有些题目比如政府资助宇宙探索是不是在浪费钱则会让人一头雾水不知道应该如何支持和反驳。这种情

2、况可能会因为考生的学术背景和个人兴趣差异而有所区别。但独立写作题目的脑洞之大也的确会让不少同学觉得吃不消。因此，有些同学面对特定话题完全没有思路无话可写，其实也情有可原。当然，同情归同情，但大家也不能寄希望于自己在参加托福考试时就正好能遇到有利于自身发挥的独立写作题目。考生仍然需要具备面对陌生冷门话题有话可写的应对能力。而这种应对能力的关键就在于写作素材的积累。托福独立写作展开话题需积累哪些素材?说到写作素材的积累，很多同学可能第一时间会想到的是词汇和句式。的确，独立写作对考生的词句运用能力是有一定要求的。但想要顺利展开话题，大家需要积累的并不是词句类的素材，而是更有价值的论证和论据素材。这就

3、好比造房子，如果说词汇和句式是建筑材料的话，那么论证和论据素材就是建筑图纸了，而没有关键的图纸告诉你如何造房子，堆积了再多的建筑材料也是没有意义的。1. 论证素材论证素材可能是考生比较容易忽略的一种需要积累的素材。与其说是素材，其实更不如说是一种展开作文话题的思路和理论，或者说是对论点进行理论分析的素材。举例来说，环境保护这类话题在写作中比较常见，而当大家讨论为什么要进行环境保护时，选择支持环保的可能会说到环境对人类生存的影响，环境以及可持续发展等等，这些能够支持大家同意环保的理论，其实就是论证素材。而很多同学之所以会无话可说，其实就是缺乏了对这类论证素材的积累。大家面对陌生话题，即使勉强选择

4、了一边的观点，也会因为缺乏理论支持想不出分论点讲不出道理。支持环境保护，然后为什么呢?有人就在这里卡壳写不出下文了。这样当然是没法写好独立作文的。2. 论据素材另一类素材是论据素材。这种素材就比较好理解了，简单来说就是支撑观点的例子，例子的种类有很多，从名人典故到历史事件等等都可以作为论据来使用，只要能够用来证明观点就能算是论据素材。这类素材大家应该是比较会主动去积累的，但如果思路不正确的话依然会出现无话可说的局面。这是因为大家在积累素材时可能会更关注一些针对特定话题主题的例子，而对于具有较大通用性适用性的论据则储备不足。因此面对有些话题考生就会灵感源源不断论据一想一大堆，遭遇另一些话题则想不

5、出能够用得上的论据例子。这也需要大家在积累论据素材时多加注意才行。如何积累论证和论据素材?那么考生应该如何积累论证和论据素材呢?认为比较简单实用的做法是看范文。当然并不是要大家直接去抄去模仿范文的写法思路。合理的做法是先找一些自带优质范文的托福独立写作备考资料，然后大家可以按照审题自己罗列论证论据素材对照范文的顺序来进行准备。这种做法既能够保证考生的主观能动性，即自身对题目进行的审题和对论证论据素材的列举，又能够帮助大家学习和补充高分范文中的论证论据素材，同时还能通过对比两者的形式让考生看清自己选择素材和范文所用素材的差异，进一步加深大家对题目的理解和对素材的印象。可以说是高效实用一举多得的积

6、累素材的好方法。托福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析：如何保持身体健康?托福写作难点话题一览What do you do for good health?People do many different things to stay healthy. What do you do for good health? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.写作思路展开结构分析保持身体健康的最直接方式就是“锻炼”(take exercise; have physical training)。锻炼身体的方式很多，慢跑(joggi

7、ng)，爬楼(climbing stairs)，爬山(climbing)，健身房(gymnasium; gym; fitness centre)器械锻炼(body building)，健美操(aerobics dancingexercises)，篮球、足球、羽毛球(badminton)、网球(tennis)等等都可以写。就算你平时根本不锻炼也要选择一个，说明为什么那种方式能给你带来好处以及带来了什么样的好处。 。本话题高分范文赏析Scientists have discovered that one of the main methods of prolonging a persons lif

8、e is to keep healthy. There are many different methods to keep in good shape, and one must choose those that are most appropriate for their own lifestyle. Personally, in order to keep healthy, I eat well, exercise, and get lots of rest.Eating well is an excellent way to keep healthy. If one is const

9、antly drinking pop or eating fried foods, they will not be able to keep a healthy weight. One must eat lots of vegetables and fruit, and stay away from all foods that are high in cholesterol. In order to maintain a low level of cholesterol in my diet, I tend to eat more fish rather than heavier meat

10、s. Fish is much healthier than red meat, and I find it much tastier as well.Exercising is also very important to leading a healthy lifestyle. One should exercise for at least half an hour, three to four times a week. Exercise can include anything from going to the gym to work out, to going on a long

11、 walk around the city. If I am particularly busy, I will walk up the Stairs to my apartment rather than taking the elevator. This provides me with the minimum amount of exercise necessary to stay fit.The third thing I do to keep healthy is sleep well and often. I typically sleep for approximately ei

12、ght and a half hours every night. Sleep is very important, as your body uses this rest time to heal itself. If one tries to live for long periods of time without sleep, they will quickly become haggard and disheveled. Sleep is absolutely necessary for a healthy life.In conclusion, I find that eating

13、 well, exercising and sleeping often is the best way for me to keep healthy. If a person can change their lifestyle and incorporate these three ideas, they will be much better off for it. A person who leads a healthy lifestyle will be less likely to get sick, and they will live longer.托福写作高分满分范文点评和思

14、路解析：成年人的成长经历托福写作难点话题一览What events make a person an adult?People recognize a difference between children and adults. What events (experiences or ceremonies)make a person an adult? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your answer.写作思路展开结构分析首先大家需要点出儿童和成人的区别，也就是Difference between children and ad

15、ults，比如成熟(mature);独立(independent);独立思考(critical thinking);解决问题(problem solving);自我责任(self-responsible)等等。接着能够成长的EVENT也需要写好，比较容易想到的有毕业典礼、18岁生日等。本话题高分范文赏析People have many different ways expressing, celebrating and legislating our passage from childhood into adulthood. I believe that there is no single

16、 moment that defines when a child becomes an adult. Becoming an adult is based on a variety of events, namely, when ones body changes, when ones mind expands, and when one accumulates experiences.Small children are usually referred to as cherub like. They are all beautiful with rosy cheeks, bright e

17、yes, and tender skin. As a child grows into an adolescent, they grow taller, but their frames remain quite small. Once a youth grows from an adolescent to an adult, frames develop substantially. Their shoulders broaden and they are able to form defined muscles. This physical change is the most obvio

18、us sign of a child becoming an adult.The second modification that occurs is the expansion of ones mind. When one is an adult, they are able to comprehend much more advanced thought processes. They start to be able to think for themselves, and make decisions that are best for them. Children are not c

19、apable of making complex decisions regarding their lives or their future. They do not have a mind capable of carefully weighing all of the options and deducing the right choice.This expansion of the mind is a result of the numerous experience a person has on his/her way to becoming an adult. As one

20、moves through the world, they gather important information about how the world works. This information becomes ones personal database of knowledge: such a database is absolutely necessary if one is to grow past childhood. The experiences of which I speak are the happenings in our day-to-day lives. W

21、e are constantly placed in situations where we must choose one path or another. Of course, one will make mistakes along the way. These mistakes are an important learning tool, which help us become wise adults.In conclusion, children become adults when they have sufficiently matured. Their bodies, their minds, and the number of experiences they have had must grow. Once this process is complete, they can rightfully claim to be adults.为什么托福独立写作会无话可写