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1、经典古诗词英译 以清明为例,2014.12,科技英汉互译教程,目录,2014.12,古诗词英译概述,清明英译文赏析,2,3,清明英译小试,科技英汉互译教程,古诗词英译概述,2014.12,我国古代诗人在严格的格律束缚下,着力于构筑情景 交融的意美,达到“从心所欲,不逾矩”的境界,充分发挥和展现了汉语表义的魅力。给译者带来很大困难。,形美,音美,“三美”原则 （许渊冲）,Beauty in Sense,Beauty in Style,意美,Beauty in Sound,科技英汉互译教程,“3S”Priciple,许先生曾说：三美的重要性并不是鼎足三分的。在我看来,最重要的是意美,其次是音美,再

2、其次是形美。换句话说,押韵的音美和整齐的形美是必要条件,而意美却既是必需条件,又是充分条件。因此,在翻译唐诗的时候,我要求在传达原诗这种音美和 形美的范围之内,用深化、等化、浅化 的译法，尽可能传达原诗的意美”。,意境,音韵,形体,（许渊冲.翻译的艺术.1984）,清明英译文赏析,2014.12,科技英汉互译教程,蔡廷干译(1989) :,All Souls DayThe rain falls thick and fast on All Souls Day,The men and women sadly move along the way.They ask where wineshops c

3、an be found or where to rest And there the herdboys fingers Almond-Town suggest.,清明（杜牧）清明时节雨纷纷，路上行人欲断魂。借问酒家何处有，牧童遥指杏花村。,优点：题目意译，主题相合缺点：第三人称，情感略弱,清明英译文赏析,2014.12,科技英汉互译教程,吴钧陶译(1996):,The Pure Brightness DayIt drizzles thick on the Pure Brightness Day;I travel with my heart lost in dismay.“Is there a

4、public house somewhere, cow boy?”He points at Apricot Bloom Village faraway.,清明（杜牧）清明时节雨纷纷，路上行人欲断魂。借问酒家何处有，牧童遥指杏花村。,优点：韵脚一致，朗朗上口缺点：题目直译，有所偏差,清明英译文赏析,2014.12,科技英汉互译教程,孙大雨译(1997) :,The Clear-and-Bright FeastUpon the Clear-and-Bright Feast of springThe rain drizzleth down in spray.Pedestrians on countr

5、y-side waysIn gloom are pinning away.When asked “Where a tavern fair for restIs hereabouts to be found”,The shepherd boy the Apricot Bloom VillDoth point to afar and say.,清明（杜牧）清明时节雨纷纷，路上行人欲断魂。借问酒家何处有，牧童遥指杏花村。,优点：一二四押韵，符合七绝格律缺点：单句变双句，不够简洁清晰,清明英译文赏析,2014.12,科技英汉互译教程,万昌盛、王中译( 1999) :,The Tomb-visiting

6、 DayThe ceaseless drizzles drips all the dismal day,So broken-hearted fares the traveler on the way.When asked where could be found a tavern bower,A cow boy points to yonder village of the apricot flower.,清明（杜牧）清明时节雨纷纷，路上行人欲断魂。借问酒家何处有，牧童遥指杏花村。,优点：题目异化，铺垫情感缺点：韵脚转换，格律略杂,清明英译文赏析,2014.12,科技英汉互译教程,杨宪益、戴乃

7、迭译( 2000) :,In the Rainy Season of SpringIt drizzles endless during the rainy season in spring ,Travelers along the road look gloomy and miserable.When I ask a shepherd boy where I can find a tavern,He points at a distant hamlet nestling amidst apricot blossoms.,清明（杜牧）清明时节雨纷纷，路上行人欲断魂。借问酒家何处有，牧童遥指杏花村

8、。,优点：意境开阔，身临其境缺点：韵脚欠佳，感情稍弱,清明英译文赏析,2014.12,科技英汉互译教程,许渊冲译( 2000) :,The Mourning DayA drizzling rain falls like tears on the Mourning Day;The mourner s heart is going to break on his way.Where can a wineshop be found to drown his sad hours?A cowherd point s to a cotmid apricot flowers.,清明（杜牧）清明时节雨纷纷，路

9、上行人欲断魂。借问酒家何处有，牧童遥指杏花村。,优点：题译准确，中西合璧，长短整齐缺点：第三人称，代入感弱，无伤大雅,清明英译小试,2014.12,科技英汉互译教程,张锦旺译( 2014) :,The Qingming DayRain around the Qingming Day meaning no stop;People on tomb-visiting way are in a sad-mood.“Where can I find a wine shop nearby, cow boy?” He points me in the direction of Xinhua Village.,清明（杜牧）清明时节雨纷纷，路上行人欲断魂。借问酒家何处有，牧童遥指杏花村。,优点：长短整齐，一二四韵脚略好缺点：语法欠佳，意美不足意境无,谢 谢 ！,请各位老师同学批评指正,2014.12,科技英汉互译教程,