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1、Completing the Story-To be polished 读后续写讲评课,by Shilling,What are the major problems in your writing?,Coherent sentence1衔接句,Coherent sentence2,coherent sentence3t,In this lesson, students are able to1. develop the paragraph logically based on the original story by focusing on coherent sentences2.lear

2、n to polish the writing with rich language,Final aim is to get high marks,climax (高潮),ending,beginning,development,？,“5W1H”,Task1: Retell the original story,Somebody：Who is the main character?Wanted: What did the character want?But: What was the problem?So: How did the character try to solve the pro

3、blem?Then: What did the character do?,Para 1: Suddenly he had an idea._ Para 2: The next morning Jim handed his present to his mom._,？,Underlined words: Mothers Day, present, newspaper, advertisement, shopping spree,the best mother, hug, an envelope, his entry, his prize,How to make his entry the sp

4、ecial present to his best mother?,Task2: Clarify what will be written,Para 1: Suddenly he had an idea._ Para 2: The next morning Jim handed his present to his mom.,衔接句1,S1: He copied the entry and got an envelope. -XXS2: How about changing characters and let me take care of mom as she did. -叶S3: It

5、occurred to him that he should put his original competition article as a present on Mothers Day. -黄S4: Without a second thought he ran to his room, taking out a pencil and the paper . -蔡S5: “Why not copy my entry to my mom?” Jim thought to himself. Then he rushed into his bedroom. -戴,Task3: Assess t

6、he first coherent sentence,S5: “Why not copy my entry to my mom?”,Para 1: Suddenly he had an idea. Para 2: The next morning Jim handed his present to his mom.,衔接句1,Sample:“Why not copy my entry to my mom?” Jim thought to himself. Then he rushed into his bedroom.,Tip：Logic coherent sentences matter.,

7、What action(verbs) will be written next?,Para 1: Suddenly he had an idea._ Para 2: The next morning Jim handed his present to his mom.,Task4: Polish your writing with rich language,衔接句1,衔接句2,Para 1: Suddenly he had an idea._ Para 2: The next morning Jim handed his present to his mom.,Task4: Polish y

8、our writing with rich language,He quickly ran into his room to find his original entry and that newspaper. Then he copied it with pencils and crayons on a big piece of paper. After that, he decorated the paper with a bunch of carnations and glued a photo of his mom on that large advertisement, and s

9、tuck his work on the newspaper.,“Why not present my entry to my mom?” Jim thought to himself.,Without hesitation, he rushed to his room to find his original contest entry.,Taking out his bright red crayons,he started to copy it neatly on the biggest piece of yellow construction paper.,After that, he

10、 decorated the paper with a shape of love, to the bottom of which he glued a picture ofhis mom and him hugging tightly.,衔接句2,衔接句1,Everything finished, he admired what he had done, uttering “Nothing could be better than my present. ” With great sense of satisfaction, he slid into his bed and fell fas

11、t asleep that night.,Para 1: Suddenly he had an idea.Para 2: The next morning Jim handed his present to his mom.,衔接句3,What will Jim say?,hug or not hug?,What will Mom react?,What will they feel?,“And she gives the best hug, but never in front of my friends, who would laugh at me for hugging my mom.”

12、,Para 1: Suddenly he had an idea._Para 2: The next morning Jim handed his present to his mom._,衔接句1,衔接句2,衔接句3,Rewrite Para 2,Focus on the two given sentences,Homework: Self-Improvement重新修改,1.情节 Logic plot 10分2.语言 Appropriate language 5分3.过渡句 Coherent sentences 3分4.划线词 Five more underlined words 3分5.

13、书写 Handwriting 3分,1. Bouncing from the couch, Jim rushed to his desk,searching for his entry. -夏雅婷 2. Reading the words on the envelope, mom grinned with a little satisfaction. - 徐速 3.Mother was so moved beyond words that she couldnt help hugging his son tightly. -陈语量4. Tears stream down his rosy cheeks. - 林博5. Exhausted, Jim slid into his bed and fell fast asleep that night.,What makes your writing good ?,