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1、托福综合写作高分经验分享 托福综合写作高分经验分享, 如何提取归纳听读资料信息?今天给大家带来了托福综合写作高分经验分享，希望可以帮助到大家，下面就和大家分享，来欣赏一下吧。托福综合写作高分经验分享 如何提取归纳听读资料信息?托福综合写作提取信息难点分析对于题目中给出的阅读和听力材料，特别是听力材料，考生需要在很短的时间内把握其重点信息和论证方法，这是综合写作的第一个难点。但由于涉及的题材都是一些学术的*和报道，所以在归纳方面还是有一定的规律可循，考生如能掌握以下重点并多加练习，必能攻破这一难关。托福综合写作阅读材料如何提取信息?首先，阅读的部分往往*于一些学术类的*，因此其内容和结构往往都有

2、很好的逻辑性和完整性，往往*的首句会提出*的谈论背景和对象，并紧跟其后提出*的主题，而接下来的文字则会围绕这个主题展开一些细节性的话题。同时，*的最后一段也会有重点的观点和信息，也是考生重点要把握的部分。而在段落中间，一般情况下，学术类*采取归纳式(先进行论证或举例子后总结观点)和讨论式(以主题句开头后面进行论证)的模式，同时考生应该要多注意表示转折、因果关系和总结性的连接词，把握了这些内容，对于考生掌握阅读材料的重点信息和结构有很大的帮助。托福综合写作听力素材信息整理经验其次对于听力材料，这是综合类写作过程中的难点，但考生在已经理解了阅读材料的基础上，对于听力材料的主题就已经有了一定的把握，

3、因此考生需要将听力的重点放在判断听力*的观点和阅读*的观点的比较上，是互相支持还是互相对立，支持或对立的观点分别用哪些论证手段和实例来证明。但是，由于听力材料不会再次出现，因此考生一定要在听力过程中过好笔记，记住关键性的句子和词语，为此建议考生平时多做相关听力资料的听取和笔记练习。托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析：causes of peoples longevity today托福写作难点话题一览The causes of peoples longevity todayIn general, people are living longer now. Discuss the cau

4、ses of this phenomenon. Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.写作思路展开结构分析首先提供一份数据给大家参考：20世纪初全球平均年龄(life expectancy)大约45岁。到20世纪末，这个数字已经增长到70岁左右。考生可以结合这份数据来做一些*。然后要分析人们越来越长寿的原因，大家可以从这几点来展开：越来越好的饮食条件，饮食卫生，越来越科学的饮食模式;越来越发达的医疗技术、越来越完善的医疗保健系统;经济稳定、社会稳定。举个极端一点的例子：前苏联(the previous Soviet Uni

5、on)解体(disintegration/breakup)后，俄罗斯的平均年龄大幅度下降。本话题高分范文赏析Among various factors that contribute to todays longevity of people are three most obvious ones: the improvement of food conditions, the development of modern medical technology, and finally current stability of economy in our country.Food condit

6、ions are better than before and are still being developed with a rapid pace. First of all, foods are more hygienic. People today drink untainted mineral water, sterilized skim milk, which are cheaply supplied in supermarkets. Furthermore, foods are more nutrient. Not to mention various carefully des

7、igned nutrient products. People can just ignore the possibility of being dystrophic, since they can keep nutrient balance by simply taking a cheap pill of vitamin compound every day. Another essential improvement that contributes to peoples longevity is swiftly developing medical technology. Develop

8、ment of modern medical technology has always been amazing. Certain diseases such as tuberculosis, pneumonia, and dysentery are now easy to remedy with low expenses, but in the past, they are all probably lethal ones. The dental technology seems developed little except its exorbitantly charged bill,

9、yet the simplest technology contributes to peoples longevity most. It is not difficult to imagine that if an individual who lived in the past got a toothache, without certain dental care which is common today, he was certainly in an awful prospect: he might even die of a toothache!Current societal a

10、nd economic stabilization is also a very indispensable factor. People have less pressure in a more stable society, the less pressure they suffer, the healthier they are. Todays ideal stabilization even provides people an opportunity to secure their futurebuy insurances. Various types of insurances a

11、re readily available, which make people feel safe, and have to a large extent reduced people anxieties, and therefore indirectly contribute significantly to the longevity of people.托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析：teenage student having a part-time job托福写作难点话题一览Is it advisable for a teenage student to have a p

12、art-time job?In some countries, teenagers have jobs while they are still students. Do you think this is a good idea?Support your opinion by using specific reasons and details.写作思路展开结构分析这道题目大家首先要注意审题。题目中说的是teenager而不是college students。Teenagers have jobs，这显然是一个BAD idea。Teenager，意指十几岁的孩子16岁或者18岁以下(18岁以

13、上就是adult了，16、7的孩子往往被称之为 young adults。雇用童工(Employing children labor)目前在很多国家是非法(illegal)的。也违反国际儿童保护条约(International Children Act )。允许雇用童工，或存在童工现象，都是一个国家落后愚昧的表现。所以大家不要说teenager打工可以锻炼自我，teenager需要的是接受教育，健康成长，也不要说teenager打工可以认识社会，teenager还不具备足够的心理承受能力(psychological endurance)，过早步入社会 (early exposure to th

14、e real world)，只能导致世界观、价值观(out look of world, value, etc.)的扭曲(deteriorated; distorted)。本话题高分范文赏析People who oppose the idea of students taking part time jobs say that students should use their time to focus on exclusively on studying. I would argue instead that part-time jobs helps students focus on t

15、heir studies, provides valuable practical experience, and allows them a feeling of success and independence that is a perfect complement to their academic pursuits.A popular criticism of schools is that they are ivory towers, or places where study and research are divorced from the real world. A par

16、t-time job related to their major gives students an exciting chance to apply the theories they have learned in school. Chemistry is a notoriously abstract, boring, difficult subject. When a student takes a part-time job in a medical research lab, however, he/she might discover how important studying

17、 Chemistry is for saving peoples lives. This student might then return to his/her Chemistry studies with renewed vigor. What was an abstract academic pursuit becomes a concrete and interesting goal with a real relationship to the students life.Part-time jobs also help students strengthen their resum

18、es, build important contacts with companies, and familiarize them with the contemporary state of their respective fields. No matter how hard they try, Computer Science textbook publishers cannot keep up with the rapid development of new computer hardware, software, and programming languages. C.S. st

19、udents who wish to maintain a competitive edge in the job market should find part-time positions where they can learn state-of-the-art techniques. After they graduate from college, they might then return to their part-time employer to look for a full-time position, or approach other employers with g

20、ood references and cutting-edge work experience.Finally, the feeling of success that comes from holding a part-time job can build students confidence. Knowing that they can do a job well and be paid for it is an important character-building experience that many students put off for too long. Learnin

21、g to manage the money that they make will be a critical part of their future lives. If they make mistakes handling their money in college, the results will probably not be disastrous, but will teach them valuable lessons that they will be sure to remember in the future, when they will be truly indep

22、endent.托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析：advantages and disadvantages of my city托福写作难点话题一览The advantages and disadvantages of my city.A person you know is planning to move to your town or city. What do you think this person would like and dislike about living in your town or city? Why? Use specific reasons and

23、details to develop your essay.写作思路展开结构分析这是一道关系到大家实际情况的题目，但同时这是一个讨论假设问题的题目。因此建议大家可以尽量展开想象。注意：不要只说my city，要指出你所在城市的名字， 比如：Beijing, Shanghai等等。一般来说，人们会喜欢城市的原因有：女人喜欢商场;男人可能喜欢书店;大的公园、动物园;名胜古迹;文化氛围。而人们会讨厌的原因有：交通堵塞;空气不新鲜;大城市的排外主义(exclusivism)、不友善(unfriendly)等等。本话题高分范文赏析If my friend Joey wants to move to Be

24、ijing, I think even though she might find something she dislikes, she will ultimately like this greatest city in our country. The weather might be one thing that she dislikes. The weather in Beijing is characterized by dry climate and it is much windy and dusty than that of Guangzhou city. Joey is v

25、ery sensitive about her skin, so she will definitely hate dusty winds in Beijing. Moreover, Beijings winter is far too much colder than that of Guangzhou, it might take Joey, as many other people came from the South, a very long time to get accustomed to. Nevertheless, she might well enjoy winter in

26、 the North, since she has never seen snowflakes in reality before. I remembered the shining of yearning and eager in her eyes when I once told her what the winter in the North looks like.She might be always irritated by heavy traffic in Beijing, though taxis in Beijing cost much less than in Guangzh

27、ou. When I was in Guangzhou, seldom was I trapped by traffic jams. It must be ridiculous for her to have spent more than two hours and still didnt arrive at the destination which is merely 10 kilometers away. And the most ludicrous thing is, even if you possess a private car, it is more likely to be

28、 useless, for parking lots are always crowded, which means more time is to be wasted. Good news for her is that the bus system and that of subway in Beijing are well developed and more convenient, and she wont have to bear that odor of bromhidrosis owing to burning weather as she once experienced in

29、 buses of Guangzhou. What she will definitely love is the cultural ethos of the city. Beijing has a history probably longer than any other big city in China. To visit all historical landscapes in Beijing, she will need at least three years, no kidding!Beijing has the most famous and excellent univer

30、sities, the largest libraries, the richest museums, yet most important of all, her best friend! Amazingly, in this aged city, people are sometimes more international. Joey is especially fond of art, and Beijing is the right place for her, in which concerts of international singers or other musicians are much frequent, and she will even be able to attend Cui Jians casual private concert in a coffee shop on a rainy autumn weekend.托福综合写作高分经验分享