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1、托福写作语法扣分是大问题 托福写作语法扣分是大问题?常见易错语法问题实例精讲。今天给大家带来了托福写作语法扣分是大问题,希望可以帮助到大家,下面就和大家分享,来欣赏一下吧。托福写作语法扣分是大问题?常见易错语法问题实例精讲托福写作避免语法结构错误扣分实例分析选择合适的语法结构可以使句子意思的表达更为精确和简练。虽然语法的多样性也很重要,但选择最恰当的语法结构仍然是更为重要的考虑因素。以下原则是在考虑选择何种语法结构时可以参考的原则:1. 一个句子的主语和谓语动词应该能够反映句子中的最重要的意思。例如:The situation that resulted in my grandfathers
2、not being able to study engineering was that his father needed help on the farm.从意思上来分析,上面这句话需要表达的重要的概念是“grandfathers not being able to study”,而在表达这个概念时,原句用的主语是situation,谓语动词是was,不能强调需要表达的重点概念,可以改为下面这句话:My grandfather couldnt study engineering because his father needed help on the farm.2. 避免频繁使用“the
3、re be”结构,例如下面的句子:There were 25 cows on the farm that my grandfather had to milk every day. It was hard work for my grandfather.可以改为:My grandfather worked hard. He had to milk 25 cows on the farm every day.更简洁的句式为:My grandfather worked hard milking 25 cows daily.3. 把从句改为短语或单词。例如:Dairy cows were raise
4、d on the farm,which was located100 kilometers from the nearest university and was in an area that was remote.简介的表达方式为:The dairy farm was located in a remote area, 100 kilometers tothe nearest university.4. 仅在需要强调宾语而不是主语的时候,才使用被动语态。例如:In the fall, not only did the cows have to be milked, but also the
5、 hay was mowed and stacked by my grandfathers family.本句不够简洁的原因是本句的重心应该是“忙碌的家庭-my grandfathers family”,而使用了被动语态后,仿佛重心变成了cows和hay。下面的表达方式是主动语态,相对来说更简洁一些:In the fall, my grandfathers family not only milked the cow but also mowed and stacked the hay.5. 用更为精确的一个动词来代替动词短语,例如下面这句话:My grandfather didnt have
6、 time to stand around doing nothing with his school friends.Stand around doing nothing其实可以用一个动词来表达,即loiter:My grandfather didnt have time to loiter with his school friends.6. 有时两句话的信息经过组合完全可以用一句话来简练地表达,例如:Profits from the farm were not large. Sometimes they were too small to meet the expenses of run
7、ning a farm. They were not sufficient to pay for a university degree.两句话的信息可以合并为下面这句更为简洁的句子:Profits from the farm were sometimes too small to meet operational expenses, let alone pay for a university degree.托福写作模板:电力ElectricityThe modern age is an age of electricity. People are so used to electric l
8、ights, radio, televisions, and telephones that it is hard to imagine what life would be like without them. When there is a power failure, people grope about in flickering candlelight, cars hesitate in the streets because there are no traffic lights to guide them, and food spoils in silent refrigerat
9、ors.Yet, people began to understand how electricity works only a little more than two centuries ago. Nature has apparently been experimenting in this field for million of years. Scientists are discovering more and more that the living world may hold many interesting secrets of electricity that could
10、 benefit humanity.All living cell send out tiny pulses of electricity. As the heart beats, it sends out pulses of record; they form an electrocardiogram, which a doctor can study to determine how well the heart is working. The brain, too, sends out brain waves of electricity, which can be recorded i
11、n an electroencephalogram. The electric currents generated by most living cells are extremely small - often so small that sensitive instruments are needed to record them. But in some animals, certain muscle cells have become so specialized as electrical generators that they do not work as muscle cel
12、ls at all. When large numbers of these cell are linked together, the effects can be astonishing.The electric eel is an amazing storage battery. It can seed a jolt of as much as eight hundred volts of electricity through the water in which it live. ( An electric house current is only one hundred twen
13、ty volts.) As many as four-fifths of all the cells in the electric eels body are specialized for generating electricity, and the strength of the shock it can deliver corresponds roughly to length of its body.托福写作模板:成功与品质托福写作模板及范文参考:Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? One of the ch
14、aracteristics of successful leaders is their sense of responsibility in accepting their mistakes.托福写作范文参考:Undoubtedly, successful leaders may have various kinds of characteristics, such as honesty and loyalty. However, some people wonder if the sense of responsibility in accepting their mistakes is
15、the characteristic they possess. I believe that successful leaders capability is great enough that they can handle the consequences of their mistakes, especially when considering the power they hold and the knowledge they possess.Firstly, these leaders have great influence on society. This influence
16、 can help them resolve the very problem they cause. For example, the leaders in the government passed a policy of printing more currency for our country three years ago. After this policy was enforced, it had a significant impact on our society. Frankly, our society has experienced great inflation a
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