托福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析：好老板具备的特质.doc

《托福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析：好老板具备的特质.doc》由会员分享，可在线阅读，更多相关《托福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析：好老板具备的特质.doc（9页珍藏版）》请在三一办公上搜索。

1、托福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析：好老板具备的特质 托福写作的题目类型很广涉及话题种类繁多，有些话题考生初看之下会有完全没思路不知道如何展开的困扰。今天给大家带来了托福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析 ,希望能够帮助到大家，下面就和大家分享，来欣赏一下吧。托福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析：好老板具备的特质托福写作难点话题一览What makes a good boss?What are some important qualities of a good supervisor (boss)? Use specific details and examples to explain why t

2、hese qualities are important.写作思路展开结构分析这道题目是偏向于职场概念的一道题。还在学生阶段的考生要写好这道题，重点在于找到类似boss或者supevisor概念的对象，比如学习小组的组长，班级里的班长或是班主任老师等等。然后再往这个方向去思考自己喜欢的boss应该具有的特质。一般来说赏罚分明，能够和下属搞好关系，对待员工公平公正，这些都是一个好老板应该具备的特征。本话题高分范文赏析A good boss is imperative to a successful workplace. The best bosses are serious, creative,

3、 and flexible. If a boss lacks any of these qualities, problems are certain to arise in the workplace.While humor and kindness are important characteristics for bosses to have, work is a serious business, and must be approached with a serious attitude. A boss must be able to keep his/her employees w

4、orking hard and on schedule. He/She must set down rules, enforce them, and also personally adhere to them. If the boss comes in late to work, leaves early, or spends all day joking with the co-workers, then the employees will neither respect nor work hard for him/her. A boss must have a serious and

5、professional attitude that sets an example for all of the employees in the workplace.To confront the countless problems that arise every day in the workplace, a boss must be extremely creative. If a client needs the company to meet a deadline earlier than expected, a boss must find ways to motivate

6、employees to work faster and harder. A boss who lacks creativity might force his/her employees to work overtime. In this case, the employees might be very tired and upset; they might work slower or produce lower quality work as a result. A creative boss might spend a small amount of money, and treat

7、 everyone to dinner at the office to encourage employees to stay late. In this way the company might meet the deadline, preserve quality, and keep employee morale high.Finally, the most important quality that a good boss must possess is flexibility. While needing to set serious, strict rules, he/she

8、 must also recognize that at times the rules need to be bent or broken. For instance, a boss should strictly enforce attendance policies in the workplace. But if an employee with an excellent attendance record needs to take a day off for personal reasons, the boss should let him/her do it. In this w

9、ay employees loyalty to the company will be strengthened, and they will be more happy and productive in the workplace.托福写作方法分享第一，在外语学习五项能力听、说、读、写、译的训练方面，学生从中学到大学在听、说、读三项能力方面得到的训练比较多?写句训练都是靠做选择项的形式来完成的，很少有真正动手写的机会;因而很多学生在做语法题或改错时有敏锐的辩别力，能够找出很复杂的语法错误，可是一旦自己真正动笔写，却错误多得不得了，而且很多都是最简单最基本的语法错误。所以，平时写的少，练的少

10、，是构成写作困难的主要原因。第二，不少学生缺乏对写作知识和写作技巧的了解和学习。他们一写作文，就感到脑子空空，不知如何下笔，写起来也是想到哪儿，写到哪儿，有时还东拼西凑，因而写作文时，常常是低水平上的重复，提高不快。如果能了解和学习一些英语写作知识，加上适当的指导和训练，写作水平会很快得到提高。考生要根据所给题目、素材、写作提纲、规定情景或图表等在40分钟内写出不少于150词的短文。要求内容切题，表达清楚，意义连贯，语言比较规范。根据大纲的要求，考生要想在短文写作中取得高分，首先要具备两方面的英语基本功：一是较强的句子表达水平，句子要写正确、表达准确到位，要有一定的英语修辞知识。二要具备英语语

11、篇写作知识，这样才能适应不同类型的命题，主动灵活有条理地运用自己的语言知识和能力写好短文。此外，考生还应对作文考题有一定的了解，知己知彼才能稳操胜券。托福独立写作的大招数第一、熟悉托福独立写作常考话题托福独立写作要求考生利用30分时间写作出300词左右的*。在托福独立写作中，有十类常考的话题，以下是话题分类和相关题目举例。1. 全球化影响There is a disagreement on the impact of increased business and culture contact between countries on a countrys identity. What is

12、your opinion?2. 政府投资People should keep all the money they earn and should not pay taxes to the state. Do you agree or disagree?3. 科技影响Many employees may work at home with modern technol.y. Some people claim that it benefits only workers, but not employers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?4.

13、文化类It is more important for a building to serve its purposes than to look beautiful. Architects do not need to worry about whether it is a real work of art. Do you agree or disagree?5. 生活工作Some people think that changing jobs periodically is good. What is your opinion?6. 传媒类Some people suggest that

14、there should be restrictions on a detailed description of crimes in the newspapers and on television. To what extent do you agree or disagree?7. 广告类There are many advertisements directed at children. Parents argue that children are misled, while advertisers consider advertising a source of useful in

15、formation. What is your opinion?8. 环境类It is said that the best way to solve the worlds environmental problems is to increase the price of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree?9. 动物类Far too little has been done to prevent animals and plants from dying out, although people have noticed this p

16、roblem for a long time. Why have people failed to improve this situation? What are your suggestions?10. 教育类Some people believe that educating children alt.ether will benefit them. Others think intelligent children should be taught separately and given special courses. Discuss both views and give you

17、r own opinion.第二、了解托福独立写作的常用写法“五段论”托福独立写作最经典的写法就是 “五段论”。五段论实质上就是利用“总分总”结构来写。英文逻辑下写作，首段讲究开门见山，在开头的最后一句话结束前一定要有表达自己观点的句子出现。在具体的写作内容上，建议首先用简洁明了的句子对原题目的意思进行同义替换，然后提出自己的观点。要保证开头没有任何的语法错误。在正文的部分，三段是要保证的。也就是三个分论点。这里注意一个原则：可以“一点多段”，但不可“一段多点”。也就是在一个论点写完前不要引入新的论点。如果结束了就换段，保证一段的中心只有一个。如果对于一个点的论述很长，可以分成两段。这里建议有

18、三个论点是因为一般情况下两个论点太少，需要用足够的论述或是例子才能使*字数达到要求，而四个论点又太多，没有足够的时间来充实每一个论点造成因为“论点发展不完全”扣分。最后是起总结作用的结尾。建议写作时只要再次提到全文主观点，但决不能照抄开头表达立场的句子，而应该以不同的方式讲同一个话题。第三、避免托福独立写作误区考生在托福独立写作中常见的误区有三个：1.刻意选择使用复杂词汇许多考生在写作中可以选择难度词汇，期待“一鸣惊人”的奇效。但是其实用复杂的词汇一方面会容易出现拼写错误造成失分，;另一方面，对难度词汇很多考生把握不到位，对它们的用法不清晰，使用会不恰当。2.生搬硬套复杂句子结构许多考生在托福

19、独立写作备考时准备了多个句型，定语从句，状语从句，名词性从句，在考场上千方百计把句型套用上去，希望可以得到语言运用、句式多样性上的高分。但是托福写作不是考语法，而是考察语言应用。一篇好的*应该水道渠成，自然流畅。并不是好句式就一定能得到高分，读上去顺畅、长句短句结合才是王道。3.论证中忽视例子作用很多考生在写作议论文时，总会出现一个问题：纯理论探讨。在托福独立写作中，考官希望看到考生对自己的每一个论点都充分论证，在论证中加入例子来充实*。但是很多考生往往对一个论点以不同的写法重复，只有纯理论展示，但是却没有例子作为论据。这会成为托福独立写作的一大扣分点。托福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析：好老板具备的特质