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1、托福写作高分句式语料素材之论证展开优质句型介绍 托福写作高分句式语料素材汇总分享, 论证展开优质句型介绍。今天给大家带来了托福写作高分句式语料素材汇总分享，希望能够给帮助到大家，下面就和大家分享，来欣赏一下吧。托福写作高分句式语料素材汇总分享 论证展开优质句型介绍托福写作满分句式推荐：展开论证类原文材料：If politicians dither over bank rescues, if countries that can stimulate safely do not do enough, and if fearful investors shy away from emerging m

2、arkets, the odds of a lasting recovery of the global economy seem slim.推荐句型：If., if, and if, the odds of seem slim.推荐理由：“如果 , 如果, 如果, 机会将会变得渺茫” 排比句在论证展开的时候是非常好用的：既能保证篇幅字数，也具备通顺的逻辑结构，同时还有很强的可读性。在强调某个主体的重要性时，就可以写出类似如果你不重视我，你想要高飞的机会将会变得很渺茫之类的内容。原创例句：1. If politicians dither overenvironmental protection

3、, if private high-tech enterprises that can contribute positively do not make enough efforts, and if consumers shy away from expensive green products, the odds of a healthy and sustainable mode of development seem slim.2. If students dither over after school art training, if schools that are suppose

4、d to be a propagator of knowledge do not do enough, and if parents shy away from the soaring cost of art courses, the odds of improving childrens competitiveness in this changing world seem slim.学以致用：1. Most of the environmental issues are too complex to be handled by individuals.这个题目在写的时候我们完全可以先承认环

5、境问题的复杂性，可能需要政府的参与才能解决，然而我们也不能忽略个人的努力的重要性，所以这个问题是需要多方合作的，任何一方的作用都不能被忽视;2. Younger school children (aged five to ten) should be required to study art and music in addition to math, language, science and history.现在的孩子该不该学习艺术一直是家长老师和学校关注纠结的一点。然而，在竞争激烈的社会，如果不重视孩子的全面发展的话，很有可能孩子就会变得没有竞争力，想要鹤立鸡群的机会也会变得渺茫。新东

6、方托福写作语料库：远程办公优越于办公室办公?Do you agree or disagree with: Working at home is better than working in the office?是否同意远程办公优越于办公室办公?主题观点：办公室办公优越于远程办公布局图：首段：背景介绍 +争议焦点+作家立场反驳段：谈及办公室办公的利好让步段：谈及远程办公的利好+加以反驳尾段：再次亮明观点+总结理由薛鹏思路拓展：支持办公室办公：1. 比之家庭办公，来自于办公室的限制和来自同事的压力能刺激员工更加努力地工作。2. 办公室办公才能培养健康的人际关系以及带来更多的工作乐趣。3. 对比远

7、程办公，办公室办公效率更高，因为出现问题，职员可以有效地沟通，及时地处理危机。支持以及反驳远程办公：1. 远程办公对于老板有利好，因为他可以节省经济成本，因为不用租用办公室以及支付坐班工资。2. 远程办公对于职员有利好，具体而言，他们不必往返，工作时间灵活，也许幸福感更强，因为远程办公有效地克服了地理的障碍以及节省了时间成本。3. 但是其弊端不可忽视，没有交流的对象，人会孤独，在社交方面力不从心，更没有办法建立良好的人脉网，而这些对于人的职员生涯的发展恰恰是有意义的。薛鹏原创语料库：1. telecommuting = tele-work n远程办公2. work at home = work

8、 form home v远程工作3. play the role of tele-commuters 扮演远程工作者的角色点评：telecommuting workers = telecommuters n远程办公者4. superior = business leader n 老板5. business owners = enterprisers n企业家6. could enhance the efficiency of working v提高工作效率(重点背诵)7. provide sb with more flexible mode of working v给某人提供了更加灵活的工作方

9、式8. A flexible work life is beneficial to ones health because home workers can relax for a while without the supervision of business owners if they are fed up with work. 弹性工作模式有益于身体健康， 因为没有企业主的监督，工作者可以在疲惫的时候休息下。9. Long-termed telecommuting might contribute to poor working performance，laziness and ev

10、en detrimental health condition. 长期的远程办公会导致工作懈怠，懒惰和不良的健康状况.10. Working at home minimize the opportunity of face-to-face communication. 远程办公减少了面对面交流点评：minimize = diminish = reduce v 减少11. Tele-working exerts a baneful influence on maintenance of the close relationship among the colleagues or the cult

11、ivation of good teamwork spirit 远程办公不利于维持同事间的友谊以及培养良好的团队合作精神。点评：the cultivation of good teamwork spirit团队精神的培养12. On the side of employers, with many of the employees telecommuting, they no longer need to invest large sums of money renting spacious offices or paying office salary. 对于老板来说，如果很多的员工远程办公

12、，他们就不用花钱来租宽敞的办公室以及支付坐班工资。13. As for plenteous employees, they no longer take the trouble to commute between their homes and offices every day. 对于员工来说，他们不再用费力地每天在家和办公室之间往返了.点评：as for = on the side of = on the part of 对于来说14. Tele-commuters could have more free time at their own disposal 远程办公者有更多的时间可以

13、自己支配。点评：细节展开，远程办公者可以做自己喜欢的事情，陪伴家人，锻炼身体，发展个人爱好。15. The constraints in offices and pressure from colleagues can motivate the employees to work harder办公室的限制和来自同事的压力能刺激员工更加努力地工作.点评：对比反证，写办公室办公的利好。词汇: strain n.过度的紧张constrain vt.抑制，拘束constraint n.抑制，拘束16. Home workers may fail to associate and communicate

14、 with people around them effectively 家庭办公者也许不能和周围人的有效地交往和交流。17. Telecommuters, to large extent, tend to become socially inadequate 远程办工者在很大程度上会在社交方面变得力不从心(重点背诵)18. Working from home requires good self-discipline and time-managing capacity 远程办公需要自律性和时间管理能力19. In comparison with , enjoys more glaring

15、merits. v对比， 优势更加明显20. tele-commutating cannot surpass office working 远程办公无法超越办公室办公拓展：Office working is superior to tele-commutating 办公室办公优越于远程办公新东方托福写作语料库：广告是人们不健康饮食的根源?托福写作语料库：广告类：Do you agree or disagree: the advertising is the main cause of unhealthy eating habits? 广告是人们不健康饮食的根源?相关提问：Do you agre

16、e or disagree? Nowadays it is easier to maintain good health than in the past. 是否同意，现在比过去更加容易保持健康?注意审题：不健康饮食不等于不健康写作思路：让步反驳写法：(三分让步，七分反驳)主题观点：广告是人们不健康饮食的根源之一，但是，不是唯一的主要的原因：薛鹏思路拓展：让步段：广告为何是人们不健康饮食的根源：1. 快餐食品广告会导致人们的不健康饮食。具体而言，现代人，生活节奏快，竞争激励，忙于事业，因此，为节省时间，很多人依赖快餐，但是，过度的糖分，脂肪，热量的摄入必然是有害健康。 因此，快餐广告是人们不健

17、康饮食的根源之一。反驳段：除了广告，不健康饮食的更加重要的原因有哪些：1. 不健康的饮食习惯， 例如过度节食，很多年轻女孩喜欢追求苗条身体，很多人认为节食是最好的方法，但是，美丽的代价就是营养不良。2. 不健康的饮食习惯， 例如暴饮暴食，很多人为了满足食欲，饮食无度， 过度营养物的摄入(例如海鲜类食品)必然是有害健康。薛鹏原创语料库：1. Alarmingly, many modern people, especially youngsters, have been suffering from unwholesome eating habits. 令人担忧的是，很多现代人，尤其是年轻人，一直

18、受到不健康饮食的困扰。2. Conflicting ideas clash in whether or not the advertisement is the root cause of peoples unhealthy dietary habits关于广告是不是人们不健康饮食的根源，人们的观点是矛盾的。点评：unhealthy dietary habit = unwholesome eating habit n不健康的饮食习惯;3. In addition to the subtle influence of ads， there are still many other reasons

19、 that contribute to peoples undesirable eating habits.除了广告的微妙影响，还有很多的原因导致了人们的不良饮食习惯。点评：contribute to = give rise to = lead to v 导致4. So fierce is the competition and so fast is the tempo of modern life that the vast majority of people nearly have no time available to do the home meal 现代社会，竞争激励，生活节奏快

20、，现代人几乎没有时间回家做饭。点评：fierce competition n 激励的竞争5. Eating too much fast food is health-threatening, for fast food contains too much fat, sugar and calorie. 吃了太多的快餐有害健康，因为不少的快餐含有太多的脂肪，糖分和热量。点评：too much intake of fast food = eat too much fast food v 吃太多的快餐食品6. To be more precise = more precisely adv具体来讲7.

21、 a rich variety of = various kinds of = manifold adj各种各样的8. carbonated beverage = carbonated drinks n 碳酸饮料点评：carbon n碳;beverage n饮料9. is physically detrimental = is health-threatening = undermine ones health v 有害身体健康(经典三剑客)10. obesity or over-nutrition n肥胖或者营养过剩点评：obese adj肥胖的over-nutritious adj营养过剩

22、的nutrient n营养品11. exert a subtle influence on 对于有微妙的影响(推荐背诵;广告必用)12. is inevitably health- threatening 是不可避免地威胁健康13. food preference or engorgement are still contributing factors of peoples sub-health 偏食和暴饮暴食同样是人们亚健康的原因词汇：engorge vt. 狼吞虎咽14. fail to maintain well-balanced diet v不能保持均衡的饮食15. A great many young ladies are pursing slender figure nowadays, many of them tend to believe that cutting food intake is the best method. Unfortunately, the cost of beautiful look is the mal-nutrition. 很多年轻女孩喜欢追求苗条身材，很多人认为节食是最后的方法，但是，美丽的代价就是营养不良。