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1、最新雅思图表小作文范文品读 最新雅思图表小作文范文品读，今天就给大家带来了最新雅思图表小作文范文品读，希望能够帮助到大家，下面就和大家分享，来欣赏一下吧。最新雅思图表小作文范文品读 混合图之成人教育现状The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education shoul

2、d be shared.Write a report for a university lecturer, describing the information shown above.Write at least 150 Words.图表展示的是成人继续接受教育培训的理由，以及它的费用该由谁来承担的调查统计。请为大学讲座写一篇150字以上的报告。雅思图表小作文混合图(线图+饼图)9分范文：The summary of a survey on adult education is presented in the 2 charts. The bar chart summarizes the f

3、actors that caused adults to continue their education, while the pie chart shows the public opinion regarding the funding of adult education.(简要概括导入)According to the bar chart, 40% of the respondents mentioned “interest in the subject” as the reason they decided to go back to school. This factor was

4、 followed closely by the aim to gain qualification at 38%. On the other hand, only 9% of the survey participants said that they went to school in order to meet more people. This is the least popular reason among the 7 given.(细节段1，分析图表1)Among all the people surveyed regarding the funding, 40% of them

5、 felt that this adult education should be the responsibility of the individual. Although 35% of them thought that the employers should lend the helping hand, only 25% agreed that the taxpayers should share the burden.(细节段2，分析图表2)In summary, the survey showed a mixed opinion regarding the reasons and

6、 the funding for adults education.(简要总结)附雅思小作文simon考官推荐套路For the task 1 report, I aim for 9 sentences.这是他所擅长的图表作文4段9句大法，具体结构如下：1.Introduction: 1 sentence，Introduction段落，1句话介绍图表大意足矣2.Overview (summary): 2 sentences，Overview段，用2句话做图表信息的摘要3.First details paragraph: 3 sentences4.Second details paragraph

7、: 3 sentences。三、四段为细节段，每段3句做详细的特征或规律的描述。当然，Simon同学不忘补充，这只是他个人在写作时的偏好结构，好文无定法，大家也不需要拘泥于9句，只要内容表达的需要，8句，10句都是没问题的。注意：simon考官主张雅思小作文无须总结!大家可留心这一点。当然小作文是否需要写总结段，雅思届尚无定论。最新9分雅思图表写作范文之混合图 英国移民变化The chart below shows long-term international migration in UK.Write at least 150 Words.图表展示1999-20XX年的10年间英国移民数量

8、的变化情况。请写一篇150字以上的报告。雅思图表小作文混合图(线图+饼图)9分范文：The chart gives information about UK immigration, emigration and net migration between 1999 and 20XX.(1句做介绍导入)Both immigration and emigration rates rose over the period shown, but the figures for immigration were significantly higher. Net migration peaked in

9、 2004 and 20XX.(2句做图表概述)In 1999, over 450,000 people came to live in the UK, while the number of people who emigrated stood at just under 300,000. The figure for net migration was around 160,000, and it remained at a similar level until 2003. From 1999 to 2004, the immigration rate rose by nearly 15

10、0,000 people, but there was a much smaller rise in emigration. Net migration peaked at almost 250,000 people in 2004.(3句的细节段1)After 2004, the rate of immigration remained high, but the number of people emigrating fluctuated. Emigration fell suddenly in 20XX, before peaking at about 420,000 people in

11、 20XX. As a result, the net migration figure rose to around 240,000 in 20XX, but fell back to around 160,000 in 20XX.(3句的细节段2)(159)附雅思小作文simon考官推荐套路For the task 1 report, I aim for 9 sentences.这是他所擅长的图表作文4段9句大法，具体结构如下：1.Introduction: 1 sentence，Introduction段落，1句话介绍图表大意足矣2.Overview (summary): 2 sente

12、nces，Overview段，用2句话做图表信息的摘要3.First details paragraph: 3 sentences4.Second details paragraph: 3 sentences。三、四段为细节段，每段3句做详细的特征或规律的描述。当然，Simon同学不忘补充，这只是他个人在写作时的偏好结构，好文无定法，大家也不需要拘泥于9句，只要内容表达的需要，8句，10句都是没问题的。PS：simon考官主张雅思小作文无须总结!大家可留心这一点。当然小作文是否需要写总结段，雅思届尚无定论。雅思图表小作文混合图范文分享 世界用水雅思图表小作文混合图(线图+表格)9分范文：The

13、 charts compare the amount of water used for agriculture, industry and homes around the world, and water use in Brazil and the Democratic Republic of Congo.It is clear that global water needs rose significantly between 1900 and 2000, and that agriculture accounted for the largest proportion of water

14、 used. We can also see that water consumption was considerably higher in Brazil than in the Congo.In 1900, around 500km? of water was used by the agriculture sector worldwide. The figures for industrial and domestic water consumption stood at around one fifth of that amount. By 2000, global water us

15、e for agriculture had increased to around 3000km?, industrial water use had risen to just under half that amount, and domestic consumption had reached approximately 500km?.In the year 2000, the populations of Brazil and the Congo were 176 million and 5.2 million respectively. Water consumption per p

16、erson in Brazil, at 359m?, was much higher than that in the Congo, at only 8m?, and this could be explained by the fact that Brazil had 265 times more irrigated land.(184 words, band 9)附雅思小作文simon考官推荐套路For the task 1 report, I aim for 9 sentences.这是他所擅长的图表作文4段9句大法，具体结构如下：1.Introduction: 1 sentence，I

17、ntroduction段落，1句话介绍图表大意足矣2.Overview (summary): 2 sentences，Overview段，用2句话做图表信息的摘要3.First details paragraph: 3 sentences4.Second details paragraph: 3 sentences。三、四段为细节段，每段3句做详细的特征或规律的描述。当然，Simon同学不忘补充，这只是他个人在写作时的偏好结构，好文无定法，大家也不需要拘泥于9句，只要内容表达的需要，8句，10句都是没问题的。PS：simon考官主张雅思小作文无须总结!大家可留心这一点。当然小作文是否需要写总结

18、段，雅思届尚无定论。必备雅思写作连接词分享 起承转合一气呵成雅思写作连接词之起：First/firstly/first of all/ to begin with/to start with/ in the first place,First and foremost;For one thing( for another);On the one hand(on the other)雅思写作连接词之承：Second/secondly;Third/thirdly;Besides/in addition/ in addition to;Furthermore/what is more/moreove

19、r;Namely/ in other words;In the same way/similarly/likewise;Afterwards/ after that/ after a while;Consequently/as a consequence/as a result雅思写作连接词之转：But/yet;However/Nonetheless/Nevertheless;On the contrary/conversely;Though/although/even though/even if;Unlike. ,A;Different from , A.;In fact/ as a ma

20、tter of fact,雅思写作连接词之合：Finally/eventually/in the final analysis;In conclusion/to conclude;In short/In brief;In summary/ to sum up/in sum;As I have said/as has been noted;Given the fact that., we can come to the conclusion that另附雅思大作文考官范文示例In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alon

21、e nowadays than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?构思过程：独居，也就是一个人生活，显然有利有弊，如果选择一边倒观点显然都站不住脚，很难论证，需要分开讨论平均用力。主体段一段写好处，一段写坏处。抽象类话题往往在寻找观点上比较困难或者没有方向，建议大家按照文波雅思教授的方法分类提取观点。本篇考官分别从个人和经济的角度出发，层次分明论证清晰，值得大家学习。Introduction1)背景导入，说尤其在发达国家的大城市，最近几年独居变得更为常见。In recent years it

22、 has become far more normal for people to live alone,particularly in large cities in the developed world.(句型结构：It adj. for sb. to do sth. 后置状语补充，注意完成时has become;注意particularly的用法，举特例方便直接，类似especially但语气更强; in the developed world比in developed countries更地道;far more修饰normal代入感强)2)观点句，我认为这个趋势的影响好坏各半。In

23、my opinion, this trend could have both positive and negative consequences in equal measure.(句型结构：简单句 后置状语;虚拟语气could have;consequences高分词;in equal measure高分搭配)Main Paragraphs 11)段首概括，一个人住在个人和宏观经济上都有好处。The rise in one-person households can be seen as positive for both personal and broader economic rea

24、sons.(句型结构：被动 后置状语并列;主语the rise in one-person households替换more people choose to live alone，地道高分搭配准确;seen as语法得分点;personal broader economic词汇得分点)2)分论点1：个人层面上，独居的人可能变得比和家人一起住的人更独立自强(常见观点)On an individual level, people who choose to live alone may become more independent and self-reliant than those who

25、 live with family members.(句型结构：前置状语 主语who从句 谓语比较级 宾语who从句，高分复合句;self-reliant高分词，展示词汇量)3)举例论证 线性推理展开：独居年轻人需要学做饭，做家务，付账单，管账等重要的生活技能;这样的人增加了就是种正面的发展A young adult who lives alone, for example, will need to learn to cook, clean, pay bills and manage his or her budget, all of which are valuable life skil

26、ls; an increase in the number of such individuals can certainly be seen as a positive development.(句型结构：主语从句 插入语 不定式并列 宾语all of which从句;简单分句 被动;valuable得分词;an increase语法得分点;such individuals指代准确，语法和词汇得分点)4)分论点2：经济角度上看，独居的趋势会导致住房需求增加(加分观点)From an economic perspective, the trend towards living alone wi

27、ll result ingreater demand for housing.(句型结构：前置状语 后置定语 简单句;trend towards living搭配准确，词汇和语法得分点;result in学术搭配，词汇得分点;demand for housing词汇得分点)5) 举例说明展开：这样会让建筑公司，房产中介和其它依赖业主购买产品的公司获益。This is likely to benefit the construction industry, estate agents and a whole host of other companies that rely on homeown

28、ers to buy their products or services.(句型结构：简单句 宾语并列 宾语that从句;likely to benefit学术搭配，词汇得分点;construction industry estate agents展示词汇量;rely on homeowners词汇得分点)Main Paragraph 21)段首概括：上述个人和经济的论点可以反向考虑;(简介易懂，挂钩前文暗含对比，CC满分技巧)However, the personal and economic arguments given above can be considered from the

29、 opposite angle.(句型结构：转折 简单句被动;given above非谓语修饰，语法得分点;be considered from学术搭配，词汇语法得分点;the opposite angle词汇得分点)2)分论点1：和独立的好处相比，独居的人会感觉孤独、隔离和不安(常见观点)Firstly, rather than the positive feeling of increased independence, people who live alone may experience feelings of loneliness, isolation and worry.(句型结

30、构：前置状语 主语从句 宾语并列;rather than无痕迹对比，语法和CC得分点;loneliness isolation高分词)3)举例对比 论证展开：他们错过了家人或室友提供的对话和支持，还要承担过重的家庭账单和职责;这样来说，这个趋势就是负面的They miss out on the emotional support and daily conversation that family or flatmates can provide, and they must bear the weight of all household bills and responsibilities

31、; in this sense, perhaps the trend towards living alone is a negative one.(句型结构：简单句并列 宾语从句 简单分句;miss out on地道搭配;emotional support, daily conversation flatmates词汇加分点;bear the weight of高分搭配，词汇得分点;a negative one指代准确避免重复，语法得分点)4)分论点2：从经济角度来说，住房需求增加会推高房价和租金(加分观点)Secondly, from the financial point of view

32、, a rise in demand for housing is likely to push up property prices and rents.(句式结构:前置状语 简单句;the financial point of view替换an economic perspective;likely to push up学术搭配;property prices rents词汇得分点)5)对比论证 说明展开：虽然让企业获益，但大众包括独居的人都要面临更高的居住成本While this may benefit some businesses, the general population, i

33、ncluding those who live alone, will be faced with rising living costs.(句式结构：让步句 插入语补充 被动;be faced with地道搭配;rising living costs词汇得分点)Conclusion1)一句话总结：独居增加对个人和经济影响有好有坏In conclusion, the increase in one-person households will have both beneficial and detrimental effects on individuals and on the econo

34、my.(句式结构：总结 简单句 宾补;detrimental不利的，高分词，beneficial detrimental替换positive negative;两个on介词短语并列，语法得分点)雅思大作文评分TR: 两面观点完整回答问题，分论点详实有深度，首尾段观点总结到位，9分CC: 全篇结构清晰，整齐，行文连接通顺，易于理解，没有明显模板痕迹，9分LR: 词汇非常多样，同义替换到位，搭配地道准确，9分GA: 句型多变，复合句实用灵活，没有语法错误，9分(13 sentences, 306 words, band 9)考官经典的雅思大作文4段13句模板，大家可以模仿哦，注意，这里所谓的模板，是指他所熟悉和擅长的一种行文结构，而并非具体的模板句型。