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1、雅思写作如何提高 雅思写作如何从5到7?你还缺这份高分经验，今天就给大家带来了雅思写作如何从5到7，希望能够帮助到大家，下面就和大家分享，来欣赏一下吧。雅思写作如何从5到7?你还缺这份高分经验我看过很多5.5分的作文，大词连篇，模版生搬硬套(如moreover不是递进关系，是谈论另一个方面)似乎写一个词就意淫着考官的瞠目结舌，wow!同学厉害!这样的景象。实际上，抛开夸张的词组，花哨的连接，这些同学的语法，都有或多或少的问题。这就是为什么他们考了多次还是卡在5.5分的原因。只有通过学习语法，认清楚每个词在句子的角色，合理安排。(如1.不是每个名词都能跟同位语从句，一般是较抽象的词才行。2.du

2、e to后面不能直接接完整的句子。)当你能够分析出每个单词在句子的正确成分，语法也算基本过关，注意写完检查即可)保证了这个和基本的逻辑，也就保证了6分。在较少的语法错误的情况下，做到以下四点即有可能冲击7分。1.句子的之间的连贯性。2.论述的逻辑性，非跳跃性思维。3.四五组高水平高准确度的词组(collocation)。 4.全方位扣题(fully address)我的雅思写作高分经验之连贯，凝聚。*之所以不同于单个的句子，就是因为其整体上是连贯的，而这种连贯达到后，阅读者会感到很顺畅(flow)，这也是雅思写作的四大要求之一。从以下四个方面可以提升你写作的连贯性。(1).明连接。通过正确使用

3、however,moreover,another reason is that等词来达到*表面的连接。(2).光有表面的连接是不够的，文字内在的连接也是很重要的。正确地使用代词。在指带明确的情况下，上一句子从出现了people，下一句话可以出现they，these people，甚至直接换词individuals。上个句子出现了一种现象，如人们工作太长时间(people work extremely long hours)，这个现象在下一句中即可用this/it代替，如 People who live in big cities have to work long and unsocial h

4、ours due to the increasingly stiff competition,and this can give rise to their mental health problems 另外，值得注意的是，高水平雅思作文以及考官都很喜欢使用such这个词。这个词也能高强度连接两个句子。(3).关键词的重复和推敲。一段话中，几个句子中各自的关键词的呼应，也能起到提升整体连贯性的作用。如，*问教育问题，*可能会出现的higher education,education equality等词，也能起来一种逻辑上和读感上的连接性。我的雅思写作高分经验之逻辑论述的逻辑这点既是提升*流畅

5、度的第四点，也是独立的重要得分点。为了最优最快达到这点，在这里我推荐顾家北老师的ABC方法。A是一件事件，一个动作(action) B是事情的结果(result) C是这个结果所造成的结果(end result)(1).当题目提出了一个事件，问这件事情的影响?就是确定了A(2).当题目提问：什么造成了一个结果(此结果已被题目论述)，那就是确定了C举个例子：题目：Some people believe that only students with best academic results should be rewarded while other people believe it is

6、more important to reward students with improvements.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.这个题目就是确定了A (双边)边1的A最好的学生被奖励(已被确定) 因此需要写B和C。 B这些学生(high achievers)因此受到鼓励和支持，保持学术优异 C他们全面开发了自己的天赋和智力，为社会做出更多的贡献(这个ABC想得不太好，但是雅思主要考察语言能力，大家看看就好)边2的A不管是否是最好的学生，有进步的学生就该被奖励(已被while other people后面的论述确定) B努力的学生

7、得到精神和物质支持，开始建立自信并开始进步 C差生们(low performers)认识到进步比名次重要，也开始开发自己的潜力(achieve academic potential)ABC中需要有各种各样的拓展方式(举生活例子，讲背景，特定化)我的雅思写作高分经验之词组良好的词组搭配，1.能够节省大量的时间(常常两三个词就能说清楚低水平英语学习者需要一句话的事情)，2.能够提升*的整体质量，真正做到惊艳考官，而不是用各种高频词以外，自己都不怎么会的词来烦考官。3.当词组的数量积累到一定数量，口语里也可以自然使用，这也是一种不错的突破口语的方式。下面我列举一些我最近收集并使用的词组。注意：词组大

8、多数都不包含大词，全是简单词组成，但是却有大能量。看很多考官范文，其中不少基本不出现难词，用的全是简单词，三两词合起来却颇有四两拨千斤的意味。1.energy-starved. eg. India is perennially energy-starved.2.embrace renewable energy. eg.Another big area where India can advance more quickly than the rest of the world is in embracing renewable energy.3.lack of access/basic hum

9、an needs/more of a first order problem/draw attention/lions shareeg.Poverty and general lack of access to basic human needs is more of a first order problem,and one that draws lions share of attention from government,business and people.4.over-consumption. eg.Over-consumption of natural resources ma

10、y give rise to environmental issues.5.place a high value on sth. eg.The government used to place a high value on the big initiatives to promote better healthcare.6.work long hours. eg.A decent life can be earned,if people work long hours.7.cast a shadow on sth eg.The accident cast a long shadow on t

11、he safety of the metro system.8.put strain on sth. eg.The rapidly rising health problems among the vulnerable groups due to the poor air quality has put strain on the national healthcare system.积累雅思词组的方式有很多。(1).阅读BBC除新闻的各个板块，或者guardian的各个讲环境，污染，生活，健康的板块。第一遍训练阅读能力，达到整体理解，基础差点的可以把看不懂的句子一步步用语法分解(break

12、down)，找到主谓宾等结构。第二遍找到可以学习的词组，自己记下来，并自己造句(这点很重要)。PS：学英语几年最讨厌的就是看新闻，以前常逼自己看，实则很累.收获小于痛苦。(2).购买小姨的十天，里面有很多不错的好词。关注顾家北的微信，他每天会推送各种各样的材料，把词组点亮，并附有解析，非常有帮助。学习simon的官网，百度搜simon ielts里面也有很多好用的词汇，上次学到一个the graying of the population(老龄化)我的雅思写作高分经验之任务的完成度(task response)(1).扣题。这是最好拿分的一项，尤其对那些基础不太好的学生。其考察的不是语言能力，

13、而是一种答题思路。题目问什么，就好好的答什么，别因为想到词或词组，非要用出来吓考官，结果扯到天上去。注意：记得用各种例子和手法提供论点的支撑。(2).结构。 结构不等同于模板，只需要用最常用的结构答题即可。论述和观点类开头段(简单介绍下背景【hook】 引出双方论点，讲出自己观点)论述段(2-3段即可)(body part)先写中心句。然后拓展下，然后举例子，不够字数可以用without sth(sth是段落叙述的那个核心)，sth bad will happen结尾(总结下观点的重点，However之类的词引出自己论述的观点核心。结束)问题和解决方案类 根本跟上面两类一致，中心段 一段写这个

14、事件带来的问题(注：题目也有可能问是什么造成了这个问题)一段写怎么解决。5.小tip：由于雅思考察的是学术英语，要求的写作风格自然也是formal writing，所以不能出现dont cant这种写法。dont改写为do not. cant改写需要合一起，也就是cannot.2018年4月7日雅思大小作文范文汇总雅思写作小作文解析：该地图属于改造和变迁类。地点常发生在museum，gallery, school 或者 town。描述的通常是过去时，现在时或者对将来的预测。应对此类题目，先找出前后哪些地方发生了变化，再依次描述。范文全篇8句话。雅思写作大作文解析：本题为社会生活类话题。题目问题

15、是同意还是不同意变得富有最重要的事是帮助他人。考生在审题时，要注意“the most important”这个形容词最高级的限定作用。思考论点时建议多往disagree的方面展开。雅思大作文版本1：小站原创版雅思写作范文节选：Admittedly, it is the moral obligation for the rich groups to provide financial support to people who live in poor and disadvantageous situations. As is reported, over a billion people ar

16、e still living in object poverty and each year over six million children die as a result of malnutrition. However, the cost of a dinner in a luxury restaurant for the millionaires may be equal to several years living expense for the poor. Therefore, it seems reasonable and sensible for them to donat

17、e money and goods to charity.雅思大作文版本2：雅思哥版雅思写作范文节选：In this age of globalization, people and nations are more closely bonded than ever before and to help those in great needs is a reflection of moral obligation. People who are desperate in need of assistance are usually the most deprived in least dev

18、eloped places, and they can barely face up to the harsh reality only with the support from within. Therefore, the idea of reaching out for a way out is quite essential.雅思大作文版本3：唐老雅版雅思写作范文节选：Generally, those who are happiest are those who give the most to others, according to ancient wisdom and new r

19、esearch. It makes conventional sense that helping other people in need is a path to everlasting happiness. As the Chinese saying goes: “If you want happiness for an hour, take a nap. If you want happiness for a lifetime, help somebody.” Scientific experiments also show that altruism, or selfless con

20、cern for the well-being of others, is hard-wired in the brain, and it is pleasurable. In view of all this information, helping others may be just the secret to living a life that is both happy and meaningful.根据古老的智慧和新的研究，最幸福的人通常是那些给予别人最多的人。帮助其他需要帮助的人是让人通往永恒幸福的道路，这在传统上是有道理的。正如中国谚语所说：“如果你想要一个小时的幸福，就小睡

21、一会儿。如果你想要一辈子的幸福，那就帮助别人吧。”科学实验也表明利他主义，即对他人幸福的无私关怀，是根植于我们大脑中的，而且是令人愉快的。考虑到所有这些信息，帮助他人也许就是度过幸福而且有意义的一生的秘诀所在。雅思小作文：小站原创雅思写作范文节选：Four years later, great changes had occurred with the number of rooms almost doubling. It is striking to note that the entrance had transformed into an entrance hall where tour

22、ists can take a rest under the sunshade while the previous gallery was equipped with a cloak room and also on its north a restaurant was erected. The stairs on the eastern side was upgraded into a lift shared by more enlarged public zones like an exhibition room, a self-service cafe, and children ar

23、ea.2018年3月24日雅思写作大小作文真题范文汇总雅思小作文真题：小站原创雅思写作范文节选：As can be reflected from the first graph, starting from 20%, the number of late trains climbed to roughly one third before dropping considerably by the end of October when trains performed the best as merely 1% of them were late. Subsequently, the situ

24、ation turned worse especially in the second week of November as more than half of the trains could not set out on time. After that, the figure declined, ending up with approximately 40%.雅思大作文范文：小站原创版雅思写作范文节选：Less time-efficient and cost-efficient, newspaper is no longer preferable in todays world. F

25、or one thing, the newspaper fails to change its role in spreading news in a world where every individual puts great emphasis on the effectiveness over time. This is mainly because producing newspaper is also man-made process of editing, printing news onto paper and finally distributing it to readers

26、, which is quite time-consuming. When the news reaches the readers, it may be out of date. For another, the distribution of newspapers is also labor-intensive and thus money-consuming. For example, this needs workers to print, transport and sell the newspapers to readers, so that employees have to p

27、ay for more salaries, a contribution that every employer seems to be reluctant to make.雅思大作文范文：雅思哥版雅思写作范文节选：Since the invention of TV, it has become a common way for people to get informed of the latest news and compared with reading articles, sounds and moving images on TV can better convey the inf

28、ormation. In recent years, with the universal access to the Internet, more people turn to reading on the web. Online reading saves the time of printing and distribution and more importantly, most of information on the web is free. Another advantage of new media is their less impact on the environmen

29、t. The paper-making industry associated with printing newspapers is a heavy polluter and large consumer of wood resources.雅思大作文范文：唐老雅版Statistically, it can be said that the print news audiences are dwindling, which means newspaper readership is getting eclipsed by other ways of learning about news.

30、It is a long, slow and painful downward spiral to the point that the newspaper, like vinyl records and film cameras, is a relic for collectors. According to research reports on the news industry, local television is the number one source of news for the majority of people, with digital news coming i

31、n second, followed by the radio, and then by the newspaper. One possible explanation why the newspaper is being left far behind is that many people do not see the point in buying a print newspaper if they believe they can get all the news they need elsewhere for free.从统计上说，印刷新闻的受众正在减少，这意味着报纸的读者群正在被其他的新闻获取方式所蚕食。这是一个漫长、缓慢和痛苦下降螺旋线，最后报纸会像乙烯基唱片和胶卷相机一样，成为收藏家的古物。根据新闻业的研究报告，本地电视台是大多数人的第一新闻渠道，数字化新闻排在第二位，其次是电台，最后是报纸。报纸被远远抛在后面的一个可能的解释是，如果人们相信可以从其他地方免费获取新闻，那么花钱买报纸是没有意义的。雅思写作如何提高