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SectionIVWriting一一诗歌评论.写作任务假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Andy将要参加中文诗歌朗诵比赛(recitationcontest),发邮件向你询问下面这首诗歌的含义。请你回复邮件，介绍该诗的主要内容、表达的思想感情和写作手法。游子吟(唐)孟郊慈母手中线，游子身上衣。临行密密缝，意恐迟迟归。谁言寸草心，报得三春晖。注意：(1)词数80左右；(2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearAndy,Yours,1.iHua2 .写作思路(一审、二定、三明确、四分段)(1)一审：确定写作体裁和主题体裁：应用文一书信主题：就诗歌游子吟的主要内容等进行介绍(2)二定：确定时态和人称时态：以一般现在时态为主人称：以第三人称为主(3)三明确：明确写作要点介绍写作背景一英国朋友Andy将要参加中文诗歌朗诵比赛，引出主题；介绍唐诗游子吟的主要内容、表达的思想感情和写作手法；希望能得到对方的回复。(4)四分段结合要点分为三个段落。3 .素材整理(I)关键词语参加中文诗歌朗诵比赛唐朝描写一个场景做衣服母亲对孩子深深的爱使从事于；使忙碌于集中精力于；全神贯注于在某种程度上盼望，期待(2)完成句子听说你要参加中文诗歌朗诵比赛，因此我写信给你提供一些关于这首诗的信息。a. Iknowthatyouaregoingto,somwritingtoaboutthepoemtobepresented.(so弓I导因果关系的并列句)b. youaregoingtotakepartinaChinesepoetryrecitationcontest,mwritingtoofferyousomeinformationaboutthepoemtobePreSented.(现在分词短语作状语)这首诗是唐代著名诗人孟郊写的，主要描述了一个场景，母亲正全身心忙着为她即将离开家的孩子做衣服。(beoccupiedin)intheTangDynasty,MengJiao>thispoemmainlydescribesascenemakingclothesforherchildwhoisabouttoleavehome.(过去分词短语作状语；定语从句)通过对这一特定时刻的关注，作者将母亲的爱比作温暖无私的太阳，生动地表达了母亲对孩子深深的爱。(concentrateon;showdeeplovefor),theauthorvividlyimpliesamother'sdeeploveforherchildbycomparingittothewarmandselflesssun.(by+动名词短语作状语)以上就是我对这首广为流传的经典作品的了解，希望对你有所帮助。(knowabout;inaway)Alltheaboveis，which1hopewillhelpyouinaWay.(表语从句；定语从句)4 .满分作文(连句成篇)请将以上句子连成一篇语言流畅、用词准确、要点全面的短文。参考范文：DearAndy,KnowingthatyouaregoingtotakepartinaChinesepoetryrecitationcontest,I'mwritingtoofferyousomeinformationaboutthepoemtobepresented.WrittenbyafamouspoetintheTangDynasty,MengJiao,thispoemmainlydescribesascenewhereamotherisfullyoccupiedinmakingclothesforherchildwhoisabouttoleavehome.Byconcentratingonthisspecificmoment,theauthorvividlyimpliesamother,sdeeploveforherchildbycomparingittothewarmandselflesssun.AlltheaboveiswhatIknowaboutthewidely-readclassic,whichIhopewillhelpyouinaway.Lookingforwardtoyourgdnews!Yours,1.iHua5 .佳作背诵(1)佳作一假定你是李华，给你的美国笔友Paul写一封电子邮件，请他介绍有关英语诗歌方面的知识、写作技巧，尤其是有关韵律(rhythm)和诗歌朗读方面的注意事项。并请他帮忙修改附件(attachment)中你自己写的英文诗歌。注意：词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)；可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearPaul,Yours,1.iHua(2)佳作二假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter计划来北京大学学习中文。他对中国古代诗歌特别感兴趣，发电子邮件向你询问中国古代诗歌的特点。请你写一篇80词左右的邮件，向他介绍一下中国古代诗歌的特点。内容要点：特别注意诗情画意；擅长色彩和色调的搭配；善于创造情景交融的意境；善于处理动与静、形与神、小与大的对立关系。参考词汇：poeticandpictorialSPIendor诗情画意；harmoniousmood情景交融的意境；dynamicandstatic动与静DearPeter,mgladtohearthatyouwillcometoChinaforfurtherstudyinPekingUniversity.Yours,1.iHua3.(l)takepartinaChinesepoetryrecitationcontest(3)TangDynasty©describeascenemakeclothesamother'sdeeploveforherchild©beoccupiedin©concentrateoninawayIOokforwardto(2)a.takepartinaChinesepoetryrecitationcontestofferyousomeinformationb.Knowingthat©WrittenbyafamouspoetwhereamotherisfullyoccupiedinByconcentratingonthisspecificmomentwhatIknowaboutthewidely-readclassic5.(1)参考范文：DearPauhHowareyou?mwritingtoaskyouforhelp.RecentlyinmyEnglishclass,velearnedsomeEnglishpoems.Theyinterestmesomuchthatneagertoknowmoreaboutthem.CouldyouintroducemesomemoreformsofEnglishpoetry?Doyouhavesomereadingandwritingtechniquesforbeginnerslikeme?Inparticular,IwanttoknowsomethingabouttherhythmofEnglishpoetryandwhatIshouldpayattentiontowhenreadingaloud.TheattachmentisaboutsomepoemsIwrote.Couldyoupleasehelpmepolishthem?Iwillbeverygratefulforyourhelp.Yours>1.iHua(2)参考范文：DearPeter,mgladtohearthatyouwillcometoChinaforfurtherstudyinPekingUniversity.WhenitcomestoancientChinesepoetry,whatdliketosayisthattherearesomanycharacteristicsinit.It'sclearthatpoeticandpictorialsplendorisespeciallypaidattentiontoinancientChinesepoetry.Ancientpoetsweregoodatcreatingaharmoniousmoodandmatchingcolourandtone.Inaddition,theywereskillfullygoodatdealingwiththeoppositerelationshipsbetweendynamicandstatic,shapeandspirit,thesmallandthelarge,whichattractmanyareadertothepoetry'sbeauty.OnlybypersonalexperiencescanwemasterthespiritofancientChinesepoetry.Yourst1.iHua