正式信件与非正式信件.ppt
A formal letter to a newspaper,your address/the date newspapers name and addressGreetingParagraph 1 Give your reason for writingParagraph 2 Write about one part of the problem.Paragraph 3 Write about another part of the problemParagraph 4 Write some suggestions for actionFormal ending Your signature,你是一名巢湖学院附中的学生，名叫xxx。你对部分同学上网吧玩网络游的现象很着急，想students club 编辑部写了一封信，阐述了玩网络游戏的害处。要点如下：1.网络游戏在学生中很流行，有些同学一有时间，就进网吧，作业不做，上课睡觉，有的甚至逃学（play truant）2.上网吧玩游戏花很多钱，有的同学不停的向父母要钱。有的像同学借钱，的甚至偷同学的钱。3.店主获益，对学生的身心健康有害。4.希望这封信被刊登出去以便能 引起社会的关注。写信日期：2013年9月25日Students club 地址：北京市海淀区83-063信箱,Key points,巢湖学院附中邮箱海淀区网络游戏,The middle school affilicated chaohu college P.O.83-063Haidian DistrictOnlinegames/network games/net games,Key points,网络游戏在学生间很流行做作业向要向借偷店主,Network games are very popular among the students.Do homeworkAsk sb forBorrow formGet into stealingshopkeeper,Key points,一就,hardly.when,as soon as,no sooner.than这三个短语都可表示“一就”。其区别是：as soon as可转化为no sooner.than或hardly.when结构。例如:As soon as I heard the knock I opened the door.No sooner had I heard the knock than I opened the door.Hardly had I heard the knock when I opened the door.当我听到敲门声,我马上就开门了。as soon as通常用于一般时态,no hardly.than和hardly.when通常用于过去完成时。例如:As soon as you finish your job,let me know.你一完成工作就告诉我一声。No sooner had the doctor arrived than he began treating the sick.医生一到马上就抢救病人。I had hardly started when it began to rain.我刚动身就下起雨来了。,The middle school affiliated Chaohu college 25th september,2013,Students clubP.O.83-063Haidian DistrictBeijingDear Editor.Im writing to tell you that Im worried about some students who play online games too much.Now,some online games are very popular among middle school students.Some students are glued to them.They go to the net bar whenever they are free,leaving their homework unfinished and sleeping in class.Some even play truant.Money is a problem for those who play online games.So they have to ask their parents for having more money,or borrow from their classmates.Whats worse,some even get into stealing.Its clear that playing online games is harmful to the students study as well as to their health.We must do something to stop them.I really hope my letter will be published so that it can attract the attention of the society.Yours faithfully,XXX,An informal letter,GreetingIntroduction:say hello,ask a few personal questions and/or make a few chatty comments.Paragraph 1 state your main reason for writingParagraph 2 finish the letter with an excuse to stop writing.Signing off:say goodbye and sign your name,写一封非正式信件,假如你的Lucy/Jack,你的同学Lily过生日，邀请你星期日晚上去参加她的晚会；你因为要准备第二天的开始而不能前往。请你写信向她解释一下，说一下这次考试对你很重要，你必须认真准备，并向她道歉，同时托Mike 给她带去一件生日礼物，希望她喜欢。写信日期2013年10月23日要求：词数100左右。上下文连贯。,Homework,请对这份书面表达列出大纲。要求写出关键词，词组，句子。要学会找到连接上下文的词句。运用已学过的短语或单词。并增添自己的语言，对文章进行充实。,
