立竿见影的提分句式.ppt
,立竿见影的提分句式,1.非谓语结构岛名：钓鱼岛 地理位置：中国东海 归属为中国固有领土信息量不足的表达方式：(1)Diaoyu island is located in the East China Sea.(2)Diaoyu island has always been the inherent territory of China.优化：Diaoyu island,located in the East China Sea,has always been the inherent territory of China.,2.“with”结构语种：汉语 历史：超过三千年现状：约1/5 世界人口在使用信息量不足的表达方式：(1)Chinese has a history of more than three thousands years.(2)Chinese is used by approximately one fifth of the world population.优化：With a history of more than three thousands years,Chinese is used by approximately one fifth of the world population.,3.同位语结构 人物：杜老师 职业：英语老师 描述：可爱，经常用甜美的声音和我们说话信息量不足的表达方式：(1)Mrs.Du is a very lovely English teacher.(2)Mrs.Du always talks to us in her sweet voice.优化：Mrs.Du,a very lovely English teacher,always talks to us in her sweet voice.,4.倒装结构 1:否定前置+部分倒装权利：免费参加外籍教师的周末英语讲座；暑假参加学校组织的学生赴英访问团。Reporters can attend the weekend English lecture given by the foreign teachers,and visit England with the students visiting team during summer vacation.not only.but also,Not only can reporters attend the weekend English lecture given by the foreign teachers,but also visit England with the students visiting team during summer vacation.Faced with difficulties,never do they give up but try their best to overcome them.,4.倒装结构 2:only+状语，部分倒装Only when you lost it,could you realize how precious it is.Only by studying well,can you realize your dream.4.倒装结构 3:adj+as/though sb is,他虽然很累，依然帮助了我Tired as he was,he still helped me.,5.定语从句中国吸烟人数：约3.5亿分布：男性占3/4(1)There are approximately 350 million smokers in China(2)Three fourths of them are males.优化：There are approximately 350 million smokers in China,three fourths of whom are males.,第一个学位：1936年获得第二个学位：医学博士He gained his first degree in 1936 and years later,he received another degree as a medical doctor优化：He gained his first degree in 1936,after which,he received another degree as a medical doctor,6.被动语态 be done我们应该立刻想办法解决水资源短缺问题We should immediately take some measures to solve the problem of water-shortage.优化：It is high time that some immediate measures should be taken to tackle this problem.,
