四级英语写作课件.ppt

大学英语四级考试,大学英语新四级考试,大学英语新四级考试题型和分数计算大学英语新四级考试作题顺序和时间安排,9：00-9：10发答题纸和试题册。9：10-9：55做答题纸一上的作文和快速阅读 9：10-9：40做作文，9：40-9：55做快速阅读部分 9：55-10：00收答题纸一。10：00-11：20做答题纸二上的听力、仔细阅读、完形填空和翻译 10：00-10：35做听力 听力35分钟，10：35-11：00做仔细阅读，11：00-11：15做完形填空，11：15-11：20做翻译。11：20收答题纸二及试题册。,大学英语四级-写作篇,1.写作的技巧与方法2.写作范文3.写作模板,出题的形式和写作体裁和内容,出题形式:提纲式,图表式,情景式写作体裁议论文,记叙文,说明文和应用文写作内容热点话题,经验感受,大学生活(05,7),怎么样才算一篇好作文,评分标准:切题,突出重点表达清楚,思路连贯语法正确,亮点偶尔闪现 注意格式(三段式)足够字数,勿交白卷卷面整洁,如何写好一篇作文,1.审题2.收集材料3.列出提纲(6)4.扩展成文(20)5.检修(3-5)6.定稿,1.字迹。2.字数。150字最佳。3.段落分布。一般写三段,第一段大概写23句;第二段写5句左右;第三段如果有重点内容则同样写45句，如果是总结性段落写3句即可。,4.动手写个提纲，把主题句写出即可，理清自己的思路。第一段要写好，尤其是第一句话，一定不能出现语法错误。尽量使用事先准备好的套话，并学会随机应变，针对不同的题目要求来替换。5.留出23分钟检查。有没有错词或病句;标点符号是否齐全、准确;每一句话是否符合英语的思维习惯，避免语法错误。另外，修改时要注意卷面整洁。,Due Attention Should Be Given To Spelling(2010年6月CET-4)1.如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写，2.出现这种现象的原因是3.为了改变这种状况，我认为.,构思,1.描述现象：如今青少年学生不重视英语学习中拼写的现象（attach less importance to spelling,misspellings)。2.说明原因：电子产品的普及，如电子词典、电脑等/学生方面（spelling exercise),教师方面（neglect)3.提出解决方案：提出具体的解决方法。教师应该.pay attention to/学生应该.stop complaining,realize the importance),fewer and fewer students pay attention to their word-spellingII.There are some causes for it1.fewer and fewer students need to write English essays2.the goal of most students to learn English is to speak it and pass the examination3.the wide use of electronic devices such as e-dictionaries and computers.,III.Measures should be taken to solve the problem1.We need to attach great importance to word-spelling.2.We should write English as much as we can3.The dictations should be reinforced in the class,修改润色,1.应该做语篇结构上的检查。这主要是检查文章的主题是否明确，篇章层次是否明显，段落衔接是否连贯，内容是否切题等。2.具体检查每个段落。这一步主要检查段落是否完善，中心是否突出，段内各句是否衔接紧凑等。3.作语法上的检查，包括用词是否恰当，标点是否正确，句子结构是否完整，语句是否通顺等。,Due Attention Should Be Given To Spelling,Nowadays,students attach less importance to the spelling of words in the process of English study.This phenomenon greatly influences students writing and brings on worries among teachers.,There are possibly three reasons contributing to this phenomenon.First,exam-oriented education makes the students pay less attention to spelling.Second,some teachers should also be responsible for it because they dont emphasize the importance of spelling during teaching.Last but not least,some students are too lazy to recite words.,Since spelling is one of the most important factors in English study,due attention should be given to it.As for me,I think,first,exams should be modified to add some factors into it,which would help students pay more attention to spelling.Then,schools should also set effective mechanisms to help teachers as well as the students to realize the importance.Finally,for students themselves,they can,through other ways,make them be interested in word spelling.Only by these can we surly realize the importance of spelling and make improvement.,写作模板-开头,问题解决（描述现象）(2010年6月-due attention should be given to spelling)1.Recently the rise in problem of/(phenomenon of).has cause/aroused public/popular/wide/worldwide concern.最近上升的问题/(现象).已造成/引起公众/流行/宽/举世关注2.Recently the issue of the problem of/the phenomenon of.has been brought into focus.最近，问题的问题/.的现象已成为注意的焦点。3.Inflation/Corruption/Social inequality.is yet another of the new and bitter truth we have to learn to face now/constantly.通货膨胀/贪污/社会不平等.又是新的和痛苦的真理，我们必须学会面对的/不断另一个。,有争议性的主题-开头,2008年6月 recreational activities1.When asked about.,the vast/overwhelming majority of people say that.But I think/view a bit differently.2.When it comes to.,some people believe that.Others argue/claim that the opposite/reverse is true.There is probably some truth in both arguments/statements,but(I tend to the previous/latter),3.Now,it is commonly/generally/widely believed/held/acknowledged that.They claim/believe/argue that.But I wonder/doubt whether.Should/What.?Options of.vary greatly,some.,others.But in my opinion,.应/什么.?的选项.差别很大，有些.，有的.但我认为，.。,观点法-开头,2009年12月 Creating a Green Campus1.Nowhere in the world/China has the issue/idea of.be more visible/popular than.2.Now people in growing/significant numbers are beginning/coming to realize/accept/(be aware)that.现在越来越多的人/大量开始/来实现/接受/(知道)的.,3.Now there is a growing awareness/recognition ot the necessity to.Now people become increasingly aware/conscious of the importance of.现在，人们日益认识/认识到有必要逾.现在，人们越来越认识到/的重要性的认识.4.Perhaps it is time to have a fresh look at the attitude/idea that.也许现在是有一个重新审视的态度/想法.5.Knowledge is power.such is the remark made by Bacon.This remark has been shared by more and more people.,中间段-比较法写作1.The advantages gained from A are much greater than the advantages we gain from B.2.Indeed,A carries much weight when compared with B.事实上，A与B进行比较时，A的比重大3.There is no doubt that it has its negative effects as well as positive effects.毫无疑问，它有它的消极影响以及积极的作用。,中间段-展示原因写法,The answer to this problem involves many factors.For one thing.For another.Still another.对这个问题的答案涉及很多因素。一件事.另.还有一个A number of factors,both physical and psychological affect.attribute to.许多因素，包括身体和心理的影响.导致.,Another important factor is.另一个重要因素是.is also responsible for the change/problem.还负责更改/问题 Certainly,the.is not the sole reason for.当然，.是不是唯一的理由.,列举原因可能用到的一些连词,to begin with,in addition,besides,lastly.for one thing,for another,finally.first,second,third,moreover.,其他连词和短语,表示结果的常用词和短语有 therefore,as a result,accordingly,consequently,contribute to,for this reason,lead to,result in 等。表示原因的常用词和短语有 due to,because of,owing to,because,since,as,on account of,result from 等。,结尾段,先总结上段的观点+From what has been discussed above,we may safely draw the conclusion that.从什么上面已经讨论过，我们可以有把握地得出这样的结论.In summary/In a word,it is more valuable.总之/总之，这是更有价值.,后果性-问题若不解决,将产生的严重后果2008年12月Limiting the use of disposable plastic bags,1.We must call for an immediate method,because the current phenomenon of.,if allowed to proceed,will surely lead to the heavy cost of.我们必须呼吁立即方法，因为目前的现象.如果允许进行，必将导致沉重代价.2.Obviously,if we ignore/are blind to the problem,.will be put in danger.显然，如果我们忽略/是盲目的问题，但每一个机会.将处于危险境地。,建议性-对所讨论的问题提出建议性的意见,包括建议和具体的解决问题的方法.,1.While it cannot be solved immediately,still there are ways.The most popular is.Another method is.Still another one is.虽然不能一下子解决，但仍然有一些方法。最流行的是.另一种方法是.还有另外一个是.2.Awareness/Recognition of the problem is the first step toward the situation.意识/问题的认识是对局面的第一步。,模拟题,On income up1.有人认为收入差距的存在是合理的2.有人认为收入差距的存在是不合理的3.收入差距对社会的影响,方法,浏览网站，阅读美文背诵15分钟复述法,