四级写作常见严重错误.ppt

四、六级写作常见严重错误,Serious Mistakes Common in CET-4&6,一、修饰方面I.Modification,1.Having carried out economic reforms in our country,peoples living standard has greatly improved.,一、修饰方面I.Modification,1.Having carried out economic reforms in our country,peoples living standard has greatly improved.Since economic reforms have been carried out in our country,peoples living standard has been greatly improved.,一、修饰方面I.Modification,2.To improve ones writing skill,regular practice is essential.,一、修饰方面I.Modification,2.To improve ones writing skill,regular practice is essential.To improve ones writing skill,one must make a regular practice.,二、一致方面II.Coherence,1.Whether one enjoys or resents advertisements,we are actually bombarded with it every hour of the day.Whether we enjoy or resent,二、一致方面II.Coherence,2.The eating habit of Chinese people have changed dramatically in the past decade.Have:has,二、一致方面II.Coherence,3.One serious problem human beings are faced with are how to use our natural resources economically.Are:is,二、一致方面II.Coherence,4.Study hard now so that we can cope with the changes and challenges of the twenty-first century.We:you,三、平行III.Parallelism,1.While we reduce the number of vehicles,the speed of traffic can be increased.While the number of vehicles is reduces,三、平行III.Parallelism,2.The price of milk isnt higher than grain.Than grain:than that of grain,四、语法IV.Grammar,1.The pace of our modern life is getting more faster and faster.2.Green trees can protect our air from polluting(being polluted).3.Comparing(Compared)with other countries,China,四、语法IV.Grammar,4.The amount(number)of bicycles will decline in dozens of years.5.In 1990 the consumption of grain has decreased(decreased)by 20%.6.By comparison,nuclear power has some distinct advantages.Such as(For example,)it is clean and cheap.,五、连词V.Conjunction,1.One should improve his English,one should overcome difficulties in studies.If one wants to improve his English,he should overcome difficulties in studies.,五、连词V.Conjunction,2.When people try to attain high speed by using cars and buses,and this creates new problems.When people try to attain high speed by using cars and buses,new problems arise.,六、搭配VI.Collocation,1.crowded traffic heavy traffic2.fast(quick,slow)speed high(low,good,surprising)speed3.expensive(cheap)price high(low,original,reduced)price,六、搭配VI.Collocation,4.study(learn)knowledge acquire(pursue,pick up,deepen)knowledge5.economical(节约的)issues economic(经济的)issues6.every day(每天)activities everyday(日常的)activities,