书面表达系列讲练议论.ppt

Welcome to Our English Class,书面表达系列讲练议论文,书面表达（满分30分）某天，你班贴出了一张通知，请根据通知、内容要点和要求写一篇英文发言稿。内容要点：1、你对“周五读报活动”的看法；2、陈述你的理由（可举例说明）；3、你的具体建议。要求：1、短文须写在答题卡的指定区域；2、短文词数不少于80（不含已写好的部分）；3、内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯；4、书写须清晰、工整。Dear fellow students,Our monitor suggests that we have“Friday New Hour”.I think that_ _,an,Dear fellow students,Our monitor suggests that we have“Friday New Hour”.I think that it is a good idea.Everyone knows that we are busy all day.Seldom do we know what is happening both at home and abroad,let alone what we can do for our country.By reading newspapers we can get more information about the outside world.So I think“Friday New Hour”can broaden our mind and enrich our school life.Whats more,it will help us improve our reading skills.As for my suggestion,I think its better to have it twice a week.And we should make a choice about what well read.I am sure everyone will benefit a lot from this activity,步骤,Dear fellow students,Our monitor suggests that we have“Friday New Hour”.I think that it is a good idea,Paragraph 1.,你对周五读报的看法,Paragraph 2.陈述你的理由（可举例说明）Everyone knows that we are busy all day.Seldom do we know what is happening both at home and abroad,let alone what we can do for our country.So I think“Friday New Hour”can broaden our mind and enrich our school life.Whats more,it will help us improve our reading skills.,Paragraph 3.你的具体建议。As for my suggestion,I think its better to have it twice a week.And we should make a choice about what well read.I am sure everyone will benefit a lot from this activity.,给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象,整体三部分,Heading（论点）点题；一两个句子；概括性；暗示性2.Body（论据)中心记述部分；层次分明3.Ending(再现论点）小结；呼应主题）,范文,书面表达如何写？,1、审题,题材、人称、时态、要点,2、以词及点：用一两个单词或短语写出每句 话的细节要点。,3、联词成句：用联词成句的方法将上述要点 的词语扩展成句子。,4 联句成文：,主语和谓语,背景（适当增加时间、地点条件等）,逻辑关系,开头与结尾语篇衔接,5、检查修改，规范抄写,五个步骤,词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。,运用得当的句子结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉。,使用恰当连接词，对写一篇有“英语味”的文章很重要，能使文章上下衔接自然、紧凑。,增强书面表达效果的技巧,Practice 书面表达（满分30分）高三年级是高中生活的最后一年，在这一年中，学生们面临着沉重的升学压力。因此，很多学生课间也坐在教室里用功，但学习效率和成绩并不理想。由此你想告诉他们：适当的休息很有必要。现在就请你以“A Ten-minute Break”为题，按下列要点写一篇短文，让这些同学从中有所启发。短文的要点如下：1十分钟的课间休息很有必要；2要注意适当的休息方式；3你是怎样利用这十分钟的。注意：开头已经给出，不计入总词数；词数100左右。,提纲,范文,A Ten-minute Break As a Senior Three student,time seems much limited._,Para.1.it is necessary to take a ten-minute break between classes.（必要的原因，从正反面论述）,.审题：确定体裁，时态,.列要点，提纲,Para.2.During the ten-minute break,we do something to get rid of tiredness（从正反面论述）,Para3.do some simple exercise or have a chat with classmates,or take a walk outside.（课间休息的方式）,Group work Task 1,Task 2 根据下列提示点，找出要用到的词汇，短语，句型,1.众所周知（我们有太多的考试和作业，使得我们尽量充分利用时间）,课间十分钟非常必要。否则，.,2.课间十分钟，我们会做些消除疲劳的事，不要做使我们更疲劳的事。,3.课间十分钟，我是如何做的。,题目,.要用到的词汇，短语，句型,1.We all know that It is well-know to all thatAs is known to all,2.说明理由及结果时常用：,As a result of that,because of,in consequence,as a matter of fact,therefore,thus,otherwise.,3.表示对照的过渡词：,But,still,yet,however,on the other hand,on the contrary,in spite of,even though,while,4.陈述个人观点、想法及做法的常用句型,Personally.I prefer,For me,I would rather,as regards me,I tend to do,My own experience tells me that,As far as I am concerned,I often,返回,A Ten-minute Break As a Senior Three student,time seems much limited It is known to all that we have a lot of tests and exercises.As a result,more and more students try to study from early morning till late afternoon,even during the ten-minute break In my opinion,it is necessary to take a ten-minute break between classes Otherwise we will feel tired both physically and mentally,During the ten-minute break,we do something to get rid of tiredness What we need is to have a real rest,instead of getting more tired So doing nothing tiring in that period is really good for us My ten-minute break is always pleasing Sometimes I do some simple exercise Sometimes I have a free chat with my classmates or just take a walk outside When the next class begins,I feel fresh again,for your listening!,Thank you,