[人教版九年级全册]人教版新目标初三书面表达.ppt

初三英语复习课-书面表达,一份耕耘，一分收获 If you plant a good seed,you have a good harvest.,spring,autumn,1.全班分为四个farms，2.共三轮比赛:第一轮:spring,二.summer,三.autumn3.Who are the best farmers?Who are the laziest farmers?,学习如农耕，我们如农夫,一篇作文由句子组成,一个句子由单词组成,词,句子,作文,Is writing hard?,先热身一下吧！,1.Key word:关键动词,2.Tense(时态):,造句：,now,sing,现在进行时,Miss QQ is singing now.,Model,Miss QQ,1.Key word:sing,yesterday,2.Tense(时态):,造句：,一般过去时,She sang yesterday.,1.Key word:sing,2.Tense(时态):,tomorrow,造句：,一般将来时,She will sing tomorrow.,Model:,now,1.Key word:,2.Tense(时态):,造句：,run,现在进行时,She is running now.,Spring,1.Key word:,2.Tense(时态):,造句：,run,every day,一般现在时,Miss.QQ/She runs every day.,1.Key word:run,2.Tense(时态):,造句：,造句：,Last Sunday,一般过去时,Mr.QQ ran last Sunday.He ran last Sunday.,Last Sunday,Miss QQ ran last Sunday.She ran last Sunday.,Mr.QQ,sometimes,1.Key word:run,2.Tense:,一般现在时,造句：,Mr.QQ and Miss QQ run sometimes.They run sometimes.,1.Key word:,2.Tense:,造句：,1.Key word:,2.Tense:,造句：,next evening,at eight last night,dance,过去进行时,He was dancing at eight last night.,cook,一般将来时,He will cook next evening.,1.Key word:,2.Tense:,造句：,at this moment,eat/have,现在进行时,The girl is eating/having a meal at this moment.,1.Key word:,swim,2.Tense?,根据提示写英文日记：1、4月1日天气晴朗2、跟同学们骑车去海边3、一个老人在海里游泳4、虽然有点冷，但玩得很开心,2.Tense:,画线部分造句：,一般过去时,An old man swam in the sea.,1.Key word(画线部分):,swim,2.Tense:,假如你是班长，班里要举行一次活动 请根据提示写一份英语通知,一般将来时,画线部分造句:,We are going to/will swim in the sea.,We will go swimming in the sea.,1.Key word(画线部分):swim,根据以下有关Tom个人情况，写一篇介绍他的短文。,姓名：Tom 年龄：16国籍：英国 职业：学生经常做的运动：游泳理想：当一个作家,2.Tense:,Tom often swims.He often goes swimming.,一般现在时,画线部分造句：,1.Key word:swim,Step 1:,Step 2:,Summary(总结):How to begin writing?,Look carefully and findthe key words仔细审题，找出关键动词,Decide which tense to use确定时态、人称,Lets move to Step 3!,Yesterday,Jim and Lucy were on their way home.,2,Key words:,Tense:,造句:,They talked happily.,An old woman walked in front of them.,She carried a basket of apples.,Task(任务):讨论余下每幅画的关键动词并造句，四个同学一组，准备：2 minutes,Model:,talk,walk,carry,一般过去时,yesterday,summer,Key words:,造句：,fall down,Key words:,造句：,helpto stand up,pick up,Key words:,造句：,help carry,go home,say,请将四幅画连贯起来，形成一篇 作文来讲述：可选方式：A.一人独立讲述四幅图画内容 B.小组两人或两人以上合作讲述 你只有1 minute 准备,Step3:We need an outline(提纲):,1.老人拎一篮苹果,2.老人摔倒，苹果掉地,3.帮忙捡水果，扶老人,4.送老人回家,talk/carry2.fall down3.help.stand up/pick up4.help/go,参考作文：,Yesterday,Jim and Lucy were on their way home.They talked happily.An old woman walked in front of them.She carried a basket of apples.Suddenly,the old woman fell down and the applesran everywhere.Jim helped her to stand up and Lucy picked the apples up.Then they helped the old woman to go home.She was very thankful.,Step 1:Look carefully and find out the key words 仔细审题，找关键动词Step 2:Decide which tense to use 确定时态、人称,Step 3:Make an outline 列提纲，以免遗漏要点,Step 4:Check and correct mistakes 检查订正,邮递员的一天,根据汉语提示，记叙一个邮递员Mr.Smith的一天：7:30 起床 刷牙洗脸 8:15 跟家人告别 公交车没赶上 一天的辛苦工作 4:00 回家,autumn,7:30 起床 刷牙洗脸 8:15 跟家人告别 公交车没赶上 一天的辛苦工作 4:00 回家,Key words:,get up,say goodbye,not catch/miss,work hard,go home/return home,brush/wash,邮递员的一天,How many mistakes can youfind in this composition?,改错！,In a Monday morning.Mr.Smith got upat seven thirty and put up the clothes.He wished face and tooth.It was a quertar past eight.He said goodbyeto his wife.He didnt catch the bus,because there were many peoplesat on the bus.He ran to work,he gave the letters to the people whichwaited for them.He goes home at four.He were tired,but he was happy.,It was seven thirty yesterday morning.Mr.Smith got up.He washed his face and brushed his teeth.At eight fifteen,he said goodbye to his family.Then he went to the bus stop.But when he gotthere,the bus had gone.So he had to walk to the post office.He worked very hard.At four,he came back home.,简洁明了型：,Mr.Smith got up at half past seven on a Monday morning.After the breakfast,he said goodbye to his family and left home.Unluckily,by the time he arrived at the bus stop,the bus had already gone.So he had to walk to the post office and got letters which he should send.In the daytime,he was busy sending letters and newspapers from house to house.He didnt return home until four oclock.He was tired but happy.,难度较大：,在早上/下午/晚上the morning/afternoon/evening,在1991年,in 1991,在四月份,in April,在春天,in spring,在四月十三号,on April 13th,在周六,on Saturday,in a Monday morning,wrong,on a Monday morning,扩展：in or on?,in,归纳：1.早上、下午、晚上前加 年、月、季节前加,2.具体某一天前用,on,注意：有形容词修饰的早上、下午、晚上前加,on,在一个寒冷的早晨,on a cold morning,在四月的一个夜晚,on an evening in April,试试看：,in,in,词组搭配要牢记,put on,穿上,put up,张贴,put away,收拾,put off,推迟,Tips:细心，仔细辨别哦,put up 改为,put on,Do you know the meanings?,标点,标点书写规范：英文的句号是实心点“.”逗号与中文一致“,”,注意：当介词短语，状语从句放在句首或句中时，它们后面应用逗号,如：她到校时，课已经开始了。,When she got to school the classhad begun.,.改为,易混淆词：,1.药:A.medichine B.machine C.medicine,2.买(过去时):A.brought B.bought C.boght,3.骄傲的:A.proud B.pround C.pound,wished-,washed,C,B,A,4.疲劳的:A.tried B.tired C.tied,5.天气:A.whether B.wheather C.weather,Tips:平时记单词要精确，勿大意,B,C,名词变复数的特殊形式:,tooth-,teeth,foot-,feet,woman-,women,sheep-,sheep,child-,children,冠词勿忘,Tips:一般情况下，一个单数的普通名词前都要有冠词或物主代词，指示代词。,如：,苹果在桌上。,An apple is on the desk.,Apple is on desk.,wrong,face前加his,难词简化：,a quarter,fifteen minutes,例：他是一个邮递员,He is a postman.,如果忘记了postman怎么写，换种方式:,His job is to send letters and newspapers.,quertar改成quarter,连词，及句子的连贯性,连接简单句表示并列或递进,连接的并列句表示转折,表示因果,注意：两个并列的单句之间一定要有连词,如so,and,but等。,改为：He ran to work and he gave the letters,and,but,so,天黑了，她回了家。,It was dark,she went home.,wrong,It was dark,so/and she went home.,which-,who,如果没有把握用复合句，就难句化简，尽量用简单句。先求准确，再求文采。,例：Jim给了我一本他在上海买的书。,Jim gave me a book which he bought in Shanghai.,Jim gave me a book.He bought it in Shanghai.,化简后：,Tips:慎用there be 句型,例：很少有人懂英语。,There are few people know English.,wrong,改为：1.There are few peopleknowing English.,2.Few people know English.,把sat去掉,造句：在回家的路上，他发生了事故。,On his way home,he happenedan accident.,1.On his way home,he had an accident,wrong,Chinglish(中国英语),Tips:用自己熟练的地道表达方式，不要生硬编造。,2.On his way home,an accident happened to him.,时态一致,例：He read a book and takessome notes.,分析：read-一般过去时 takes-一般现在时,改为：He read a book and took some notes.,He goes home.-,He went home.,主谓一致：,He were tired.-,He was tired.,易错点:,Tom with his friends footballevery day.(play),plays,Tips:区分真正的主语,英文写作四步(中文表述)：,仔细审题，找出关键动词,确定基调：时态、人称等,列提纲,认真检查,Step 1:,Step 2:,Step 3:,Step 4:,1.多用简单句，注意时态语态,2.化难为易，化繁为简,3.此路不通，绕道迂回,4.字迹工整，留好印象,5.卷面整洁,Gold tips:,要求：1.根据图画所提供的语境，写短文。2.字数要求：不少于70词。,homework,Thanks for listening!,Nice to see you all!,